i love this like a grew u around prostitutes and my mom is a madam/pimp and i simply love this poem..... i gives me chills and your voice and how u carry it like omgaaaaaa lols its awsome dude like no lie keep writting !!! you have gift use it
Hmm..I'll say this: This poem was very deep. I actually enjoyed it. However, when I learned about poetry slams in high school, the teacher always said to avoid laguage like that was found in this at all costs. There were aspect of this that I didn't like at all, but I thought it was really thought and planned out.
Damn, this shit is tight. I remember her from highschool, she read a poem about haters that was pretty tight too. This girls got talent yo and she's hot ^_^ .
OPINION..FREE WILL...SOUL..thinking...Pondering...deep thought...A play of words that can be metaphorically correct but just cannot process to a mind that is not yours..Ignorant?? no..just realistic. The sheer measure of spoken words has no limit; vocabulary. My Vocabulary. My Voice .My Pen and Pad..Writing what i see and seeing what i write.find it within.search like a miner; ambitious like a freedom fighter.choose wisely and be cautious...not those who u know, but the one's w/ the silver spoon
tobin333...Poetry or spoken word is like any other passion sum1 may have just like music, painting, dance, fashion, food, even sex, etc... its how people xpress themselves and how they feel... u write it when you get the motivation inspiration or watever and you preform it whenever sum1s willing to hear... And ol girl rite here has mad talent and skills and passion and if she sees this will u b goin 2 Brave New Voices this yr n DC? if so, c u there
It actually serves alot of purpose. She could have just helped someone put their feelings and emotions about the same situation into words. Thats like askin how did you find the time to watch this vid? or for what purpose does the comment you left serve? You just took the time to express your feelings about the vid. She just took the time to express her feelings about the situation...
But never wanting to mean it so you feel it Oxygen filling up lungs and Carbon dioxide lightly rolling over tongues Cuz you don't wanna be that one picture hung (in her IP) just like she Really don't wanna be passed around like (L's in the cipher) Cheap but do her job like a fifty cent lighter (Turn chicks like pen and teller) Quick and ready to serve like a TV dinner She just wanna be that winner We all just wanna be that winner We just go about it different ways Thank you
So with rusty shovels she digs deep for pleasure that might still be left on her brown rice-colored skin, though
And never exists being her pale eyes so every night she paints on her disguise her game face and costume red pleather over laced and she grips the bat tight and swings
I didn't get everything she said...'newest client' was a little tough for me to make out. This is what I heard, maybe someone could make small corrections? The things in parenthesis I had no clue, so I Mad-Gabbed it =P
She may not sell seashells by the sea shore
But she be that poor that she sells self like Chef Boy R D on sale in grocery store shelves or else
Bread turns stale
And her baby's tummies is like empty garbage pails
Damn ` Cheap ; But do her Job , Like a 50 cent lighter
bradybray 5 months ago
this one of my favorite poems. <3
jcbutterfly95 7 months ago
i copied her name from the description, then pasted in in the youtube search box, and theres no other vids?, why not, as if shes not famous
AussieRaver1996 8 months ago
she is gifted. this is raw. great metaphors. i wish i could read/hear more from her.
breahnaniquel 10 months ago
That was off the chain I aint even hating.
ThePoetJoseph 10 months ago
Please, somebody tell me she won this competition!!!
Babyluvmusic 1 year ago 5
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This was really moving. Actually made my eyes water.
54spiritedwill54 1 year ago
i love this like a grew u around prostitutes and my mom is a madam/pimp and i simply love this poem..... i gives me chills and your voice and how u carry it like omgaaaaaa lols its awsome dude like no lie keep writting !!! you have gift use it
BirdyPoo95 2 years ago 2
my girl said bubble cum lipgloss, "MOTHERFUCKERS BE SUCKERS FOR PURCHASES WITH NO SALE TAX" that gets me so hype, i love it =)
cassieyasmin 2 years ago 33
shiiittttt, this girl is fuckn rockin this shit.
inspiringg.
xoxBaybeeDollxox 2 years ago 7
I <3 this poem
o1sweetpink 2 years ago
okay girl, you tell 'em. ♥
iamohsoeasy 2 years ago 2
Shes good
MsMisfit08 2 years ago
dank~~~~ woman
maljes86 2 years ago 2
absolutely wonderful. great performance!!!
but girl
let's be serious.
that ponytail is not doing you any favors
photogenicphotog 2 years ago
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DatGheexBallerBabiee 2 years ago
ok i hear u but but why ya voice sound like dat yo
sirbrwn7 2 years ago
DAMN GURL
i feel you
you keep doin yurh thing!!
audr33yy 2 years ago
terrible
Hicks88U 2 years ago
OKAY!!!!
BeeNaturalMe 2 years ago
She bad
MajorDork101perfect 2 years ago
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man I would thro a cheese cake on stage
HipHop101Tv 2 years ago
Hmm..I'll say this: This poem was very deep. I actually enjoyed it. However, when I learned about poetry slams in high school, the teacher always said to avoid laguage like that was found in this at all costs. There were aspect of this that I didn't like at all, but I thought it was really thought and planned out.
chldofice 2 years ago
word but how can you aoivd language when poetry comes from the soul and what you're feeling and from the way you talk
monkeysrull 2 years ago 6
amazinq
ishallbemysquishy 2 years ago
Beautifully spoken...
KayMay1224 2 years ago
i lovelovelove this poem, i got it memorizedd
xoxBaybeeDollxox 2 years ago 2
she did her thing
deidremorgan09 2 years ago
2:05 haha thas wassuppp !
headknockinhoney 3 years ago 3
Damn, this shit is tight. I remember her from highschool, she read a poem about haters that was pretty tight too. This girls got talent yo and she's hot ^_^ .
ATMX17 3 years ago 2
Yo my cousin is the shit!
SLIMnKRAZY 3 years ago
i loved the poem but sometimes u get lost u dnt know wat shes tlkn about so u have to watch it like 3 more times lol
smiflatrice 3 years ago
a beautiful poem with a human's touch upon the struggles that women put themselves through.
rooothiesmoothie 3 years ago 4
shit that was damn good
housecry 3 years ago
does anyone know where to find the words written to this?
darkhinatakun 3 years ago
She Nice "passed around like Ls In a cypher" Cool line
MsMisfit08 3 years ago 3
she kilt it! n she is 2 dam sexi 2!
sum1plzcall911 3 years ago
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dis is sum dum $h**
eternallife2 3 years ago
Damn She can Spit.. Al The metaphors WOW
Partnerguru 3 years ago 47
OPINION..FREE WILL...SOUL..thinking...Pondering...deep thought...A play of words that can be metaphorically correct but just cannot process to a mind that is not yours..Ignorant?? no..just realistic. The sheer measure of spoken words has no limit; vocabulary. My Vocabulary. My Voice .My Pen and Pad..Writing what i see and seeing what i write.find it within.search like a miner; ambitious like a freedom fighter.choose wisely and be cautious...not those who u know, but the one's w/ the silver spoon
kre8shon 3 years ago 3
I love the way this girl is doing this. Listen and listen good.
Meneetalents 3 years ago 3
WoW dat was really gud
fobheaven 3 years ago
tobin333...Poetry or spoken word is like any other passion sum1 may have just like music, painting, dance, fashion, food, even sex, etc... its how people xpress themselves and how they feel... u write it when you get the motivation inspiration or watever and you preform it whenever sum1s willing to hear... And ol girl rite here has mad talent and skills and passion and if she sees this will u b goin 2 Brave New Voices this yr n DC? if so, c u there
~Lyrical Graffiti~
carmeldiva89 3 years ago 4
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WTF how do u find the time to do this
and for what purpose does it serve
tobin333 3 years ago
It actually serves alot of purpose. She could have just helped someone put their feelings and emotions about the same situation into words. Thats like askin how did you find the time to watch this vid? or for what purpose does the comment you left serve? You just took the time to express your feelings about the vid. She just took the time to express her feelings about the situation...
urinfatuation 3 years ago 8
oprahlovesme 3 years ago 3
So she pray that money will trickle down like cum from lips to chin down her way
And she kneels, stands, sits, lays in whatever position he paid for
Cuz she be that whore who's just trying to stay alive just
Trying to stay alive like
Maple leaves come winter time like
Sperm cells trying to fertilize like
Natives for the love their land shed blood the color of her pride
Like little girls and little boys who's barren bellies belt out broken cries like
The words goodbye
oprahlovesme 3 years ago 3
But she sells for the same exact reason he sell
Car insurance, water, land, mother earth, a woman's
A woman's worth, famous faces, as be Nikkeis with fat tongues and laces
Etymons cookies and cakes, designer labels on Canal Street; fake she
May not sell seashells by the seashore
But she be damn sure that she be getting business cuz
There will always be
And have always been
Men who will pay for pussy with no strings attached
Motherf*ckers be suckers for a purchase with no sales tax
oprahlovesme 3 years ago 3
Not caring if it burns, itches or stings cause she sing a hustler's lullaby the type that will make a motherf*cker cry game slicker
Game slicker than middle eastern (all you can?) quicker than she can put a bottle of milk to boil
She go from tongue
Gliding across bubble cum pink lip gloss
To around her boney ankles
To around her boney ankles licorice g-string like dental floss look
See how her pride gets tall
Lost within this space between her body and her newest client
oprahlovesme 3 years ago 5
So with rusty shovels she digs deep for pleasure that might still be left on her brown rice-colored skin, though
And never exists being her pale eyes so every night she paints on her disguise her game face and costume red pleather over laced and she grips the bat tight and swings
oprahlovesme 3 years ago 3
I didn't get everything she said...'newest client' was a little tough for me to make out. This is what I heard, maybe someone could make small corrections? The things in parenthesis I had no clue, so I Mad-Gabbed it =P
She may not sell seashells by the sea shore
But she be that poor that she sells self like Chef Boy R D on sale in grocery store shelves or else
Bread turns stale
And her baby's tummies is like empty garbage pails
oprahlovesme 3 years ago
damn
mcnuggetssmcnuggetss 3 years ago
whoa!!!
she was real
martaajoku1 3 years ago 2
This was really moving. Actually made my eyes water. Beautiful.
sarahbamf 3 years ago
i luv her outfit and hair!
she got skills
i am not brave of enough to do that
ITZoMEoCC 3 years ago 4
YEA WE ALL NO THAT.
queenbchantizzle 3 years ago
yo! thats messed up!
ershlaywho 3 years ago
does anyone know if/where i can get lyrics for all of the urban poetry slam poems?? any help would be great! thanks
HappyHacker2022 4 years ago
they sell books, i bought one at Washington Irving HS, thats where the last Urban Slam was, I dont know if you live in NYC or not
Mariah203 3 years ago
shes like zora except zora is much stronger and Jayleen is just as strong as Zora
halliezmandy 4 years ago
this gurl is soooooo crunk!
msm3t0o 4 years ago 5
Her topic wasnt one u would see alot but she made it beautiful. Hope she keep doin it wellz
silentthunda35 4 years ago 7
this was really nice. i liked her energy a lot.
soverdadero 4 years ago 3
this poem is tight and her topic wasnt ur average topic but she made it work and sound powerful.
starr131 4 years ago
she gwed
tkzondo13 4 years ago
Wow! I love her poem,her topic was beautifully done...wow!
alphiomega 4 years ago 4
her outfit is bomb! and so is that poem man she got major skills she should be famous
sharesha89 4 years ago
HOT!
ellamaple 4 years ago
I WENT TO SKOOL WIT HER WOOT WOOT
COOKiiEiiLLZ 4 years ago
pretty theatrical
bigavsha 4 years ago
wow. this gave me chills.
barnapkinpoet 4 years ago
she was awesome ... i like her look and her way of speaking
kekoaT 4 years ago
i'd likie to see more of her
FloeticSoulSista 4 years ago
GREAT ;)
browniegirl189 4 years ago
I love her style. That is true talent.
ChocolateNeeNee 5 years ago