Live my dream

[terrfyingtwinkie25]

were should i start; yoooo dawgg u neda be lettin thise homie be speakin his mind yall quite bein hattas aight yo leave him be i bet he tried very hard and dat aint fair yo aight right kyleskatesbaker3? right u stupid queer oh and trenn9 i hate you.

[RMorrison5]

More phrases

[RMorrison5]

There is something kind of sounding wierd maybe less full sentences

[kyleskatesbaker3]

Shit Let dis Kid do his shit mane Yall ova here talkin shit ova da comp dawg real talk let dis niqqa do his shit man If u dont like it Dont watch it den

[massholenph69]

U SUCKKKKKK

[Acgomez95]

You need to put more vids up plz(:

[MrInternetStud]

Put some more energy bro but you is sick keep it up.

[MegaDucky95]

Hey Trenn, I subscribed a couple months ago. How come there haven't been any new vids?

[redsoxr4mpage]

just keep at your nasty

[TheDCLAWZ]

nice this ones better then the other donald trump getting better keep it up

[th3cr4zykid1]

Inspire?

[MEGASAINTSFAN25]

You're pretty good, just change your flow and upgrade your swag a little bit.

[Lumpyhard90]

ur a wannabe mac miller dont post spam on his videos

[massholenph69]

@Lumpyhard90 i like this kids opinion ya trenn give it up

[DaKidCasper]

here is some criticism. i was in a studio and if you want people to have interest in you here are some tips. when you rhyme your just talking, you need a flow without a flow its just you rhyming. and another thing is you need interesting metaphors and similes for example 'deep as the ocean' is not only boring, it hurts your ears to hear something so simple.. be creative funny and different ex 'deep as a masterbater's love for lotion' or something odd that stands out. good luck, peace.

[FBvio]

@DaKidCasper Yeah when you talk on a track it sounds very amateurish, sorting your flow would be a good thing to focus on. And listen to more rap, for reference and inspiration. Research the field

[YaMaHaXprOdIGy]

Keep up the good work n youll go far!! Jus give it a bit more hype!

[666Flipsyde]

Tight Shit Ferreal!

[ShortRoundSideKick]

I -3 trenn

[Ar241995]

Shit goes hard keep workin don't change your style

[MrBrandonfierro]

Dont talk about what your doing try not to rap about yout life

[iluman23]

U remind me of mac miller

[TeamAmerica9]

bud, trust me u can make it. if u ever hear these BIG TIME RAPPERS out there without auto tune, ur 10x better......good luck wit ur dream!

[MiddleSchoolProdigy]

U sound good bro. But try saying ur words stronger. Try to say words stronger along with adding more bass is ur songs. But keep it up u have a good flow just try sum different things. Keep up the good work.

[GNN52]

I like the lyrics but maybe change the rythm and beat

[Tedeschi22]

Dont show yourself sitting their rapiing that made it boring go walk around or sonethibg at least. Also you need to make the beat blend it just sounds like a backround voice other than that pretty good

[spschiaroli]

U suck balls

[NoFear107]

Goodstuff keep up the great work and good luck man!

[JakoorzANDpaaansay]

Pretty good

[Drew0683]

Great song I hope u go far I know what your doing and I wish you the best of luck. Great attitude and potential. Nice lyrics but try adding a bit more music then it will b gold!

[BigL0koT92]

Lil iffy in some spots but that to be expected but over all I like it Bro get some deeper base and a lil more speed in some other songs and u may make it big

[Banggotem]

They ashy they need to get da lotion u just need to speed it up

[BLizZarDxMG9]

speed . it . up .

[MrTopKicks]

next beat you use try and get sumting with base. Im telling you wat catches ppl is a nice beat to go with dope rhymes 

[IReZinEz]

Pretty good, put more feeling into your rapping though

[greenboi111]

Yo, I transform the pen/ auto bot no decepticon or deception/ I am driven to spit like I'm revin engines/ and make it tense tighten In ya tendons/ spits are free but can it be I savagely/ murder beats for thoughts worth pennies/ rhyme tight with ease the lime light growin fond growin trees/ planting seeds skeletons in my closet like it's anthropology

No body stopping me I'm smarter than harvard elite no I'm not keeping shit brief ya hear my beats thump thumping my faces change like the carvins

[DeRouchey98]

Speed it up and one of the best songs ever

[ratulyoo]

I saw ur comment on Mac millers music video

[zebelecric]

U got the lyrics down, but try changin the beat and speedin it up

[92choochoo]

Yah I agree and put in some feeling in ur lyrics, they're dry

[R0B1E5]

hey ive heard both ur songs and im not tryna hate but, wheres the inspiration. i mean both your songs are about gettin to the top so what are u gunna right about once u reach it. i mean im 13 and ive wrote a few bars myself and i know its hard to find inspiration as a teen but if i could give u one tip from rapper to rapper its drama is your friend. u got skill bro, put it to good use. hope i helped.

[deegos14]

I know its a "sample" but the beat is a little dry for my taste homie, other than that your killing it bro! Keep it up and you'll get places.

[bestever41]

KEEP IT UP!!! KEEP WORKING HARD:) TRY DOING IT FASTER AND A LITTLE MOTE FEELING

[SmOKeTriCKsDeluXE]

Check out my boys hip hop saved my life

[DEUHDCEwh]

Wow this is great man. I remember seeing your comment like "oh check out my video" on another video and usually I don't click on those links, but damn am I completely grateful I followed your link. You're raps are amazing, they've actually got meaning, and the lyrics aren't corny. Thought the one lyric, "...your raps are ashy, time to get the lotion," was just a bit corny in the way Lil Wayne sometimes raps something like, "..want to hold you like a conversation," but otherwise, u've got talent.

[mxyz919]

Keep workin hard bro and u will get there take nothin for granted and make your own way.

[jm9300]

Nobody like inspirational rap, when u rap u can be who ever and do whatever "alter ego" and speed it up

[portnoyjr59]

I had really low expectations but that was actually good. Keep it up.

[CigarSmerker]

THIS FUCKING SUCKS! Now that i have your attention this kid is fucking DOPE!

KEEP IT UP!

[TheMobDog28]

That was pretty good tho

[kidbam96]

Thats Some Dope shit man (: IM ALSO A RAPPER AND IM 15 AND IM REALLY TRYiN TO MAKe it to the top (: Wish you luck Dude !!!!

[jamiepwnsyou]

Awesome man

[iphonebobby123]

Bro your gonna do good and I'm glad your already there I can't wait till you make it so that I can be like...... Oh fuck that lil nigga made yeah brah keep doing what you doing and tear them tracks up brah

[nikeBOY188]

R.E.S.P.E.C.T. Your gonna go far, You can live that dream. Hope you make it to the top!

[99jteam]

Dude you will live your dream you are grrreeeeeaaaaatt!!!

[LILbeastEMINEM]

I think u can go far, u got skill and with the pro equipment I think u can get a song on iTunes

[MrDaithi240]

That was class, and honest. Respect

[Bestrapperlilwaynewe]

good job bro! im 13 and i love to rap but i need more views and been rhyming since i was about 9. i feel like if more people see my work, the better ill do, and the farther ill go. please check out my stuff, and comment. your help will make a difference. thanks!

[lexkilla22]

That was dope and some true stuff

[xmisterlewis86x]

Ur humble bro...keep doin Ur thang...

[bigggylittle32]

Dude really

[slapy2001]

This is my second fav,

[slapy2001]

Keep it up homie

[LVHCGAMING]

Pretty dope dnt give up

[kaj34]

Damn trenn!! Hop on a track with me bro haha

[3L3M3NT023]

this shits fer real but u gotta add a lil more emotion to the rap. livin it up a lil bit

[W3RMYB0I]

SICK!!!!

[12boysclub]

Yo bro that was sick i love your rapping skills and i think your going to be a great rapper, keep it up

[msalicemariee]

This is the shit. Keep it up.

[krystlboy22]

Good stuff bro, keep it up . Yhu got tallent

[USFINEMMORPG]

Your gonna go somewhere kid!

[EthanMcCray]

Okay man, your like really good. You will make it far and I'll support you in any way I can! Keep goin, and live your dream! -Emc

[EthanMcCray]

Okay, make it far that's all I'm saying, and I'm pretty sure you will, I like your stuff man! -Emc

[ShortRoundSideKick]

Man you're awesome, and cute :)

[vTrickshots1]

That was sick man

[whatcanIsay28]

so its a sample ?

[SketchyGraffiti]

With the others u gonna get big soon :D

[sk8ride2897]

Killed it man

[AFlyyGuy]

This is really good man. I can tell you are going to get big soon.

[MegaDucky95]

You're sick bro, i have told my mates bout you and they seemed impressed too. Glad you're gettin in that studio.

[JoshManFilms]

Cool. Wat would make u be really good is if u could make storys out of ur songs. Not just storys about rapping. Thats wat makes j cole so good.

[humanslayer96]

Dude ur gonna be the next big thing for real, I like ur raps cuz you don't do it for the money, u do it cuz u like to rap

[Rabidbluejay1]

Freaking pro man! You need to get in that studio!

[illusionistpg13]

First comment! Haha your biggest fan

[Trenn9]

SKIPPP TO 2:26!!! UNLESS YOU WANNA HEAR ME TALK IN THE BEGINNING