A Day in the Life of an ODST (Halo 3 Machinima)

[OriginalNex]

MY GOD THIS SUCKS DICK!

[ClicheMovies]

For a first machinma this was pretty damn good

[Somthincool19]

Wow this was funny.....

(I'm sick so I barely heard anything)

ODST: ............

*hits barrel*

ODST: SHIIIIT!!! Hope no1 heard that.

[MultiTalentedMe]

it wasnt bad :) heck its better than most of my attempts

[cheeseburger854]

cghk cvghlby hggyhgugucyugvghyuuh what

[connorforce01]

why a plasma pistol as a secondary weapon and not a shot gun or smg or even a pistol?, well it is your first.

[uknownestlord]

Pretty good, but don't add filler, thats for story's and books, also the comedy was interesting, but it seems like it didn't belong. Also add a few hidden enemies, it would have been more interesting. And for some reason your voice sounds familiar like an actor or a younger version of solid snake strangely enough.

[runecowman]

advice, 1 get more people. 2 get a better script. 3 stop being so monotone. other that that it was ok.

[tjjohnson5656]

well most odst from the books are worked really hard and grow no to have emotion, so it is kind of an up side the cold part.

[WPUrchezem]

dude im saying this sucks, wasted five minutes of my life. this title made it sounded ok, and you comment at the beginning about this not being good really doesnt give you the right to say i cant vote down this video. even tho this is your first machinama it could have been alot better!

[ProjectDorkStudios]

@WPUrchezem Love you too bro.

[WPUrchezem]

@ProjectDorkStudios Look im not saying your owful at making machinima its just you could have done the voice acting a bit better

[jeffreycoley]

@ProjectDorkStudios i actually liked it...bring on the e-hate

[connor1940]

@WPUrchezem you didnt have to watch the whole thing

[ChainsawTrout]

His voice sounds a little like Solid Snake. XD was awesome.

[TudorPangal]

According the description Jacob King is an Orbital Drop Shock Trooper Soldier. Sounds a bit........... grammatically incorrect.

[GLORYIMURDER]

i like the way he flicks into position at 2:17

[Buffonare]

3:59 wtf????

1:25 just boring......

but the other was funny:)

[rossimj90]

I just wasted like five minutes of my life on this video. Wtf?

[xboxkid298]

Very boring no emotion at all

[VuneAlpha12345]

It was okay but there was no emotion and you voice was plaine the whole video.

[182182TheBlink182182]

ure talking 2 quiet and it sounds like uve just recorded ureself whispering

[JZUS25]

I was hoping this video would be funny :(

[THERAGNAROK777VII]

that hole is gonna cost more than 200$ bucks XD

[Gueritoag]

you fucking suck

[Crannigy]

@Gueritoag Dude, it was his first machinima.

[TR3NT3ST]

@Gueritoag

If he sucks why do you bother commenting?

[ege117]

this video is so freacken gay

[KaggyFilms]

Um... you people do realize its his first. And its an interior monologue.

[ryakoasakora]

Nice voice acting, but maybe if you could do something with the voice clip so we can differentiate from you monologue and your actual dialoge

[ANK1396]

@3:40= umm... an AA cannon?

[R3DISF0RAW3S0ME]

fake yelling= no good. sorry. just the truth.

[ODSTOTTER]

I DONT GET IT WHY ARE YOU TALKING TO YOURSELF ?

[DeathsNaughtyList]

pretty gay

[PvtParlor]

lol your fake yelling made me laugh its so lame, no offence but nice vid

[quila001]

for a first attempt, this is actually great! nice work.

[2tsf9]

God this is gunna bug the hel outa me LOL

[sokkaizcool]

Why would an ODST (enlisted) be a Lt.JG( Officer)?

Why would he be deployed with enemy weapons?

[993wab]

the blue visor affect is going to be so usefull for an odst in a machinima.

[2fools1camera]

@993wab silver you mean

[AllStarNaryan]

this is not halo3 O.D.S.T fuckterd

[117reconkiller]

@jazz29224 its halo 3 how do you not know that :0

[Slimshadow457]

This is really good for your first machinima! Heck I can't even make any, so you're better off than I am. May I suggest you use the Recon Armor's chestplate for the full ODST look (if you ever choose to go for recon).

[JacobyJenkins]

this is what I do in my spare time run around maps aimlessly pretending to be doing somthing important! xD but really you did a pretty good job at this for someone with only one actor!

[Irishman644]

giant hole in the wall??? why not

[Killery96]

I'm sorry I'm 13 and I can do better voice acting. But good try! Good cam work.

[waterdragon1908]

@Killery96 you would sound like a chickmunk which would make it 10x worse

[H2Johnston]

Lol if you are gonna yell just yell silently cause that sounds fucking retarded.

[gasmaskhalo3]

sounds emo!!

[megamacchris]

who knew that a short was 5 minutes long..?

[ProjectDorkStudios]

@megamacchris could you nitpick about something else? How about how he gets easily tired out. I'm used to that one XD

[megamacchris]

@ProjectDorkStudios haha, sorry..

just a question :P

[ProjectDorkStudios]

@megamacchris I'm sorry as well, I was near exhausted when I wrote that comment, so, needless to say, I was a bit cranky, lol

[geek17171]

@megamacchris ive seen a 15 minit long short

[zakakay]

METAL GEAR...

[Ike1727]

heh...good attempt i'll give you that but the last part was actually funny! my comment to that ODST is "Better start swimmin'!" haha! I'll subscribe!

[xxPunkoftheUSAxx]

Im sure Barrels like those dont shatter -_- 3:04

[spartonB13]

if ur guy had the scout body then he would more like an odst solder

[ProjectDorkStudios]

@spartonB13 I gave him the CQB body because of the knife. Buck had a knife in H3:ODST, so I just went from there.

[Europeroks]

@ProjectDorkStudios know where he got the knife idea? reach haha

[Crannigy]

@Europeroks Reach wasn't out yet.

[Europeroks]

@Crannigy im talking about buck. he didnt have a knife in the reach campaign, but he gets the knife idea from the spartans on reach.

[theking199012]

awesome make more

[trackisthebest]

not bad for a first try

[shadowflame141]

@kingdunn038 he's a odst he probably got droped in a pod

[tHeMaRcUs505]

speak up damn

[MunkeiGUN]

@JustNeed4Subs

Seriously? So... Simon needs a singing career in order to be a judge? You have no idea what you just said.. do you. So i was mean 7 months ago! Plus.. I just happen to know bad screen writing and thrown together junk when I see it. Why don't YOU grow some balls and take a double dose of SHUT UP.

[kingdunn038]

wait if the base is on the side of the bay, then howd he get there in the first place

[Pressure353]

lol XD

awesome

[lordgluzman]

It was ok...But keep it up. (:

[BlackAssassinBlade]

This was pretty good I thought "I knew that taking those classes at the Warner Brothers school for Matrix immitations would come in handy at some point, and my wife said that it was a waste of a year's salary, hah." epic lol

[WrongWay6909]

this video fucking sucks dick ahahahaha

[tyleraaronshow]

lol great vid

[lordgluzman]

ПОЖАЙЛУСТА НЕ ЧИТАЙТЕ ЭТО! Вас будут целовать в ближайщую пятницу. И ваша жизнь станет счастливой. Однако, есле вы не передадите этот коментарий к 17 видео, то вы умрете через 2 дня

[BlackAssassinBlade]

@lordgluzman DO NOT READ THIS: They will kiss you on Friday and your life will become happy but if you don't copy this to 17 other videos then you will die in 2 days (translation)

[cooljade2004]

boy this guy has issues. what a homo

[blade3337]

im not really one to say rude things about a macinima but that was one of the worst pieces of crap i've ever seen!!!

[CrAZymOnKEy9100]

ʎɹɐuıpɹo ǝɥʇ ɟo ʇno ʎןןɐʇoʇ pɹıǝʍ sɐʍ ʇɐɥʇ uɐɯ ןןǝɥ ǝɥʇ ʇɐʍ

[0Ismax]

''is at the other side of the ba...... !FUCK¡

[ImmortalHDFilms]

I hope this was a joke lol

[JETSTREAM221]

G@Y

[RNproducktions]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA EMO DST

[snak1592010]

is that a hole in the wall

$199.99

[SharpMarksMan]

this is going to bug the hell out of me

[OneWing96]

dude why does this ODST sound like an EMO DST

[hellopeople70]

that was stupid

[C0mmander117]

It was sorta funny, but most of the time, that guy needs to SHUT THE HELL UP! Seriously, he doesn't need to keep talking to his fuckin' self

[Gamer887]

"i really really hope no one was here to hear that" <-- lol!

[Stmaster90]

"Now to get back 2 the base, which is at the other side of the bay......FUCK i love that lol

[Fudgybible]

The sticking out isn't a thumb it's the bolt notice how when you reload it goes back and you push it up

[theMRteenageprodigy]

what have odst's come to, they pant like a dog at a short jog

[redconfuser]

Lol look at when its first person view, I noticed this in ALL halo games and im monitered it from all angles with my cam...The thing thats sticking out is a thumb thats glitched.When you reload you can actualy see the othere side of the hand that part of the thumb is missing!!!

[Mrhappy508]

2:10 scared me!

[watchmyvideos315]

LOL!!!!!!!!!!

[DarkMonkeyFilms]

@teothedemon lol no his balls dropped. soudns weird maybe but at least they dropped rofl, unliek you!

[Codemonkey0001]

Nyeeheeeheeeheeheee!

[teothedemon]

he sounds tired when he speaks!

[ProjectDorkStudios]

My VA was sick when he happened to record that day.

[teothedemon]

oh ok...no offense or anything just happened to notice it! good job anyways.

[ProjectDorkStudios]

You're fine, I didn't think it was offensive.

[09anthonyG]

its cool how you can get all those camera angles in.

the trick to machinimas is camera angles.

[MilkyTheKid]

i dont wanna be "that guy" but i learned from digitalph33r (i think) that when you do a yelling part its much better if you accually yell but its unfortunate that ur VA was sick you might wanna see if he'll do it again and re-upload it

[Rezzifan]

was that forge :)

[InfinityPicture]

lmao i thought it was a serious mahcinima then a giant wall for 199 lmao

[MrJustin0000000]

not bad I just hated the fact that the guy was always talking to himself and for an ODST he is kinda stupid lol

[iknowwhereulive11]

well lets see ur so awsome michinimas OH thats wright u dont have any

[MunkeiGUN]

I agree, this is about as bad as watching 10 seconds of LEGENDARYBADASS rant about how beautiful he is and listen to him tell his " followers " that he is better than they are. Granted this was your first video, but seriously; matrix imitations at the warner bros studio? That was sad -- I cringed. Next time either find a writer, or try something else. The only time I laughed was when the jokes were so bad that it wouldn't even seem possible for someone to think it was funny.

[ProjectDorkStudios]

Well, thank you for the constructive criticism.

[tony38727]

you need more recorded sound.

[ProjectDorkStudios]

such as?

[DIGITALPH33RFAN123]

windy sounds and wave noises sloshing for the sewer pipe

[mugser3]

not bad, but not as much talking more meat

[KillerElmoInco]

AWESOME! lol

[KillerBunnyProdution]

That was pretty funny...great graphics, and great use of dialoge...check out some of my vids...its a series...

[UKwildcatTV]

Very good for your first Machinima! Keep up the good work!

[Spartan117776]

stupidest pos ive ever seen... imo

[monkeyfang34]

lol last part is pretty funny..... which is at the other side of the bay....FUCK lol

[XxJoshiiboiixX]

Which is at the other side of the.....bay fuck! xD

[jakeyk09]

woo my name jake king

[ProjectDorkStudios]

Seriously?

[jakeyk09]

yep jake ian foxley king thts my full name

[ricfitter2]

Rofl ending :D

[alemance]

Wth is with the star fox music in the start

[ProjectDorkStudios]

Just to build up a bit of suspense.

[ChoclatexLesbians]

that sounded like the intro for live an learn by crush 40 at the beginning

[ProjectDorkStudios]

That's because it was :D

[GunmetalBreon]

lol when he runs across the entrence the sound he makes!!

[onetime1212123]

When i wathc your video, it sounds like you making your voice lower for some reason. A suggestion is to talk normaly. A low voice just muffles the talking.

[NorthHuffman]

Just to let you know the ODST use that one chest armor with the knife on it also why doesnt he have a team? There never alone unless they where split up by something like what happened in ODST

[ProjectDorkStudios]

Um.....he got demoted from Lieutenant Sr. Grade to Jr. Grade, so he lost his knife? And as for his team, maybe they all died and he volunteered for this mission to get his mind off it? Who knows? XP

[Trailhammer]

RE: onetime1212123

The only time ODSTs are split up is in the campaign of Halo 3 ODST when you play as the Rook in the game

[carley4life]

no they can be seperated if they get scattered or all their teammates die

[wescomark65]

make more

[ProjectDorkStudios]

I am working on one at the moment, and, if all goes according to plan (which it more than likely won't) I'll get it up within the next month or so.

[tracerzx]

it would be alot better if there were guards in the high ground fortress

[ProjectDorkStudios]

Yeah, every Machinima is better if there's more than just one person involved, but Latrommi74 didn't have anybody to work with, and he also didn't have any extra controllers for his 360.

[rageman117]

ok machinima but the voice acting ruined it 3/5

[Air5wolf]

hey i was sick when i had to record

[pudiaisabitch]

lol that was good

[XanderCrewsDE]

ha ha I like that its good but the lag is the uh editors fail of editing out the time from were he started the camera angle to were he was wanting to pan. It's all good It's funny so fuck it forget I said any thing lololol

[kkoser]

A bit strange, but still pretty funny. I give it a 4.

[murphy341]

nice one dude works well!

[Air5wolf]

That was good. nice music too.