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  • .....THE WICKER MAN! I love you!

  • The image of Brian Blessed totally made my night and compelled me to go watch some Black Adder after this.

    

  • why does a fanfic need footnotes, I mean a fanfic rides on the canon of the actual fiction. In fact people who are reading the fanfic would be familiar with the original canon. So there's no need. Seriously she added so many out of canon stuff it might as well be it's own book.

  • I just couldn't keep a straight face. xDD

  • She might as well have made her own story the way she rewrote the canon.

    These notes are all pretty redundant

  • THAT'S NOT A CHAKRAM! A chakram is a circular knife or steel ring with the outer edge sharpened and THROWN like a frisbee. Native to India and has nothing to do with the medieval pseudo-European setting of the Zelda games . There is a similar weapon called the Wind and Fire wheels used only in close combat, but it is only used by some Chinese martial arts and takes decades of training to use.

    *pantpantpant* Sorry. Historian here.

  • Gaia? Oh come on! I think The Mushroom World (The planet where the Lands in the Mario series truly ARE set!) would be a more appropriate planet, considering all the crossovers that DO exist between the two series. This writer not only breaks the rules of this series, but possibly the Mario series as well. Seriously, check out Mariowiki, and look at all the evidence!

  • Ugh. Why couldn't she have just wrote all this IN THE STORY? I mean, that wouldn't make it any BETTER, but at least it would have been an improvement over all the other stupid filler and repetitive crap she wrote on and on about. You know, attempt to have some kind of plot.

    Oh wait that's more like what someone who gives a shit about actual writing would do. Suethors need not apply such common sense.

    Head, meet desk. Again and again and again.

  • I think the point of this story was the "bonding ceremony" and everything else was an afterthought.

  • Waitaminute these are endnotes, not footnotes. Unless they were actually footnotes in the original format and it's just the way you organized it.

  • How does drinking your spouse's blood and urine prevent adultery? If anything, it would cause adultery.

  • I expected the footnotes to explain how and why drinking pee and the wearing of flashy jewelry prevents adultery, but no.

  • Is there ANYTHING in this...thing...that ISN'T covered in jewels and "precious minerals"?

  • Surely you don't mean "Gaea" ?

  • GARGATH

    I thought of Lady Gaga

  • @GoldenLanternStudios I'm very sorry. It wasn't intentional, I assure you.

  • .........Gaia? A shitty weeaboo website?

    That's it. I'm going to find this bitch and take a hatchet to her face. IT WILL LOOK SO GOOD ON HER, DON'T YOU THINK?

  • Only if the hatchet is made out of and/or improbably stuffed to the gills with precious gems and minerals.

  • @chibichao Funny how you use the word "weeaboo" when you have "chibi" in your user name.

  • @knightrebound I'm flattered. Have fun!

  • The Wickerman extract was funny as hell!

    Nice to see you're finishing off with the footnotes BTW.

  • oh good god, someone should put this lady down for good!

  • I'm realizing that on one hand, you could read the fic, but you could also read the footnotes and STILL get only a faint idea of what the hell happened the entire time. These footnotes are basically like a condensed version of the story.

  • Just wondering, are the footnote videos going to finish off this series for you? If so, is it okay if I could share with you and others what seems to be a parody/spinoff of this fic?

    It's not from Jenna but another author, "VeryEvilBoy", but it seems like it could fit in with all the craziness that is "My Inner Life".

    Just wondering if I should post the link here or PM it to you first.

    If not, I fully understand if you are tired of this "story".

  • @COWBOYSANDBEER Go on ahead. It sounds like fun.

  • @manwithoutabody Okay, I hope this works for you and anybody else feeling a bit curious: (w)ww fanfiction net/s/6139523/1/bMy_b_bInner_b­_bLife_b_The_Legend_of_Jenna

    Don't forget to put the . where it's needed.

  • ... oh! So those random numbers were footnotes?

    This is hardly the kind of worldbuilding exercise that requires footnotes.

  • The Dragons are carriers for the knights? So the knights can fly? Maybe they just do death dives.

  • To be fair neutral countries do get dragged into wars they don't want. Three cheers for little Belgium.

    The way the war ended was retarded though. Imagine if in 1917 a couple of German, Indian, Turkish and British deserters found Archduke Franz Ferdinand being kept prisoner in Afghanistan. Would the war be over within the week?

  • I like the way you pronounce "ocf."

  • You pretty much summed up my feelings on 14 with that clip. My god, these footnotes were so unnessecary.

  • I totally called the Pheonix circles as chakrams.

  • @Deathhawken You mean "Char-kams". Srsman geddit rite! D:

  • I was wondering about Sclyina...I tried looking her up to see if she was some obscure pagan-y deity I wasn't aware of. Obscure? Yes. Real? Not so much. Do we get any more elaboration on this OC goddess at all? Nope. Should there have been any at all? Most definitely. Was the author too entrenched by tiger sex to remember this goddess? Most definitely. I will also remember that drinking my husband's urine will prevent him from cheating on me, according to Jenna.

  • @maswellasm Well now you know

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