Silly Words (a poem)

[kwkcardinal]

your slavery, your curse, is our emancipation and our blessing.

thank you for your thoughts and feelings.

[bfgholycrap]

How would one do that? Tap dance for Christ?

[bfgholycrap]

I like it Shan. Think, Think...

[thinkmorepink]

Thanks Dan!

I'm glad you listened to it. Trying to please you and AZ is like trying to tapdance for Christ.

<3

[CousinoMacul]

Think think think,

Think more pink!

<3

[thinkmorepink]

I once told a boy I loved him by pushing him off the swing.

...I was eight :)

[Loreleila]

The flow or the flood

The draught or the drought

Keep pouring your wording

Emoting may keep me afloat. :)

[thinkmorepink]

Why are you even wasting your time? If you don't actually like my videos, why do you watch them?

You're so sweet to come back though, It's great to have loyal ShanFans! <3

You should really think about making some videos! With such a great sense of humor, I'm sure you'd be a hit!

Think about it!

[grenangle]

My eye is glued for more, your starting to keep me awake wondering whats next.

[thinkmorepink]

Wow gren, thank you!!!!!

[Boucrate]

Haaa1 The fear of.. writing. But slave of meaning, of thought, like million sunshines jamming our heads.. until it start's to rain.. and then we lay down on our page.

[thinkmorepink]

*sigh* That made me happy inside.

[thinkmorepink]

Ahh thank you dear.

<3 I wish it would rain here.

[thinkmorepink]

gah, I was accidentally logged into my coworker's account

[rozeboosje]

Great, I love the sense of urgency in this one.

[thinkmorepink]

Wow thank you Roze! You're one of my YT favs, so it's great to see you here responding.

<3 Shan

[achampag]

the last 2 paragraphs remind me of being lost in philosophy

i liked this

the rain effect was nice too =)

[thinkmorepink]

It fit perfectly with exactly what kind of message I was trying to relay.

Thank you so very much.

[StevenErnest]

This is really good!

The rain may smear your ink, not to mention the pixels on your screen. The trick is to swim and not drown, let the words keep you afloat.

[thinkmorepink]

Wow, thank you steven!!!!

[randyhelzerman]

I've had moods which this poem -exactly- describes...... too much thinking. (BTW, I think that youtube's commenting system sucks!!! I posted a response here 3 hours ago and its gon....oh well.)

[thinkmorepink]

It's a frustrating feeling not knowing what to feel or write..

thank you.

[scoutie111]

My heavens - wonderful shan! Your talent continues to surprise and amaze me!

[thinkmorepink]

Ahh thank you SO much. I was hoping you'd watch this. You are SO wise, and to hear that from you is an honor. <3

[thinkmorepink]

Thank you for listening :)

[thinkmorepink]

I thought for a long time on how to fill in the blank spaces....

rain seemed only fitting.

[lirpa69]

I'm going to take a wild guess: Water is the words flowing over you.

[thinkmorepink]

<3 intoxicating, these words. I'm glad you listened.

[lirpa69]

You have great talent. GREAT STUFF!

[thinkmorepink]

Wow, thank you so much!

[Barklord]

Nice work Shan! I like how you read.

"Let the ink run...until I've come undone."

Great line!

[thinkmorepink]

Ahh thank you!

[bubonicnate]

slippery sounding!

[thinkmorepink]

Nate, you-so-seely

[thequestionmarkofGod]

How often I find myself feeling that way. : )

You write and recite beautifully my dear.

[thinkmorepink]

Wow, thank you so much!