you should put a thing of fur around the neck of the head so if you are fursuiting no one can see your neck or hair im makeing my first fursuit right now and i hope its as good as yours
Let's start with the head. The follow me eye technique can be done well, or not so well. The eyes are set way to deep into the head, and the white that they are mounted in is poking out. Don't set the eyes so far back, you should go look at some other heads with that style, maybe Beastcub's work. She likes to use that eye style.
Next is the jaw. Why is it not attacked to the head? It looks very unnatural and weird when it moves. (Continue)
(Continue) Matrices has a very good tutorial on how to make a moving jaw on plastic canvas heads.
I see a lot of your seams. You need to get better fur so the seams are easier to hid. I'm guessing you got that stuff at JoAnns of something?
My last comment about the head is the neck. You need some kind of fabric on the neck so yours doesn't show. You can easily sew a neck flap onto that head and it'll look way better. (Continue)
I can't really tell what's going on here... Are you in like, a furry shirt and a separate pair of furry pants? It looks kind of weird. It's good to get a jumpsuit pattern and make your body suit out of that.
The arms are kinda weird too. Your hand paws fit snugly on your arms, but the sleeves on the body are very baggy.
Your feet paws need some work, but those are really hard so just practice carving and those will get better. (Continue)
(Continue) Your muzzle looks a bit crooked, and you'll want to shorten the lower jaw.
And when you open your mouth, I can see green foam. You'll want to paint or somehow color that black.
Thats about it. You're on the right track. I can see how this suit could come together if you worked on it some. I'd suggest better quality fur. It helps hide the seams and just looks better over all.
better fur cost a lot of money and im 13 where can i get that? my stepmom pays for that fur. and its like my first full fursuit so dont jump on me. now, its a one peice zip-up. and its niot a moveable jaw. and this was like my first time making those eyes... and i wasn't even done with this suit...
Take it easy skippy. I never said you had to do what I'm telling you. It's just criticism. So many people in this world can't take CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. It's ridicules. As for getting better fur, just look for it when you go to JoAnns (Or wherever) They have good stuff sometimes. You just have to look. Now, I never said I was the best fursuiter, but I know some of the best, and I learned a lot of stuff from them. (Continue)
I talk to Luskwood on AIM all the time. I'm not the best, but I know what I'm doing. I'm not trying to attack you, or be mean. If it came off that way I'm sorry, that was not my intention. So take it easy and just ignore me if you don't want my opinion. And what's not finished about that suit? Looks pretty done to me.
omg your 13! same! and im making a fursuit, me 126hige and wolflionfire09. were making 2. ill be sure to upload vids n stuff.
126Hige 1 year ago
you should put a thing of fur around the neck of the head so if you are fursuiting no one can see your neck or hair im makeing my first fursuit right now and i hope its as good as yours
mike282272262252 1 year ago
u should prob put your hair in a net but other then that it's good! :D
theBitterSweetBand 2 years ago
you did good
well you got loads more comments than i did on my first fursuit if you ever wanna look its called Tyler and the orange.
graffitiwithlycans 2 years ago
you look gangster
recka1990 3 years ago
cool fursuit... is it yer fursona?
TuluzSrebrov 3 years ago
Time for the HONSET Fursuit critique!
Let's start with the head. The follow me eye technique can be done well, or not so well. The eyes are set way to deep into the head, and the white that they are mounted in is poking out. Don't set the eyes so far back, you should go look at some other heads with that style, maybe Beastcub's work. She likes to use that eye style.
Next is the jaw. Why is it not attacked to the head? It looks very unnatural and weird when it moves. (Continue)
sunshinexbuddy 3 years ago 2
(Continue) Matrices has a very good tutorial on how to make a moving jaw on plastic canvas heads.
I see a lot of your seams. You need to get better fur so the seams are easier to hid. I'm guessing you got that stuff at JoAnns of something?
My last comment about the head is the neck. You need some kind of fabric on the neck so yours doesn't show. You can easily sew a neck flap onto that head and it'll look way better. (Continue)
sunshinexbuddy 3 years ago 3
(Continue) On to the body.
I can't really tell what's going on here... Are you in like, a furry shirt and a separate pair of furry pants? It looks kind of weird. It's good to get a jumpsuit pattern and make your body suit out of that.
The arms are kinda weird too. Your hand paws fit snugly on your arms, but the sleeves on the body are very baggy.
Your feet paws need some work, but those are really hard so just practice carving and those will get better. (Continue)
sunshinexbuddy 3 years ago 3
(Continue) Your muzzle looks a bit crooked, and you'll want to shorten the lower jaw.
And when you open your mouth, I can see green foam. You'll want to paint or somehow color that black.
Thats about it. You're on the right track. I can see how this suit could come together if you worked on it some. I'd suggest better quality fur. It helps hide the seams and just looks better over all.
(Fin)
sunshinexbuddy 3 years ago 4
better fur cost a lot of money and im 13 where can i get that? my stepmom pays for that fur. and its like my first full fursuit so dont jump on me. now, its a one peice zip-up. and its niot a moveable jaw. and this was like my first time making those eyes... and i wasn't even done with this suit...
Hallow4ngel 3 years ago
your 13 too?
Aw great more young furs ^-^
Great for your first time hun (:
But maybe shorten the lower jaw and make the arms less baggy? then it will look great :D
96AF 2 years ago 2
@Hallow4ngel She (or he) was just giving you advice, not jumping on you.
animepyroqueen 1 year ago
Get off our backs. We'll do what we want.
FurryDino 3 years ago
Take it easy skippy. I never said you had to do what I'm telling you. It's just criticism. So many people in this world can't take CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. It's ridicules. As for getting better fur, just look for it when you go to JoAnns (Or wherever) They have good stuff sometimes. You just have to look. Now, I never said I was the best fursuiter, but I know some of the best, and I learned a lot of stuff from them. (Continue)
sunshinexbuddy 3 years ago 3
I talk to Luskwood on AIM all the time. I'm not the best, but I know what I'm doing. I'm not trying to attack you, or be mean. If it came off that way I'm sorry, that was not my intention. So take it easy and just ignore me if you don't want my opinion. And what's not finished about that suit? Looks pretty done to me.
sunshinexbuddy 3 years ago 2
you should be proud of it ^^
Stinfrey 3 years ago
Is that a German shepard?
JessifyYourGames 3 years ago
you made that sweet
SUPERMAD2012 3 years ago
not bad! Not bad at all :D
Great that you're starting the building young
Treemeadow 3 years ago