Hi, I'm one of the guys who made this, and I wanted to just explain what it was we were doing. This video was done as an assignment in a course on narrative in mass media. The idea was to use one of the films or shows that we had watched and re-edit it to try to tell a new story. We had to use only what was in the original, and we were limited to 5 minutes. What was available in the pilot meant we had some rough transitions, but hopefully the concept (Ned as a necrophiliac) still comes through.
The story could have been longer. It was very shortened at times, as if in a hurry to finish the task. What was in that case? Did the lady in green say she wanted to be raped? Why did these two guys show up at their door? There are too many loose ends. The acting was good & the girls were pretty. Thanks for sharing.
Hi, I'm one of the guys who made this, and I wanted to just explain what it was we were doing. This video was done as an assignment in a course on narrative in mass media. The idea was to use one of the films or shows that we had watched and re-edit it to try to tell a new story. We had to use only what was in the original, and we were limited to 5 minutes. What was available in the pilot meant we had some rough transitions, but hopefully the concept (Ned as a necrophiliac) still comes through.
alpha5099 10 months ago
The story could have been longer. It was very shortened at times, as if in a hurry to finish the task. What was in that case? Did the lady in green say she wanted to be raped? Why did these two guys show up at their door? There are too many loose ends. The acting was good & the girls were pretty. Thanks for sharing.
spitgalore 3 years ago
interesting. =) good editing
laughwithme 3 years ago