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  • I was just watching this weird man in a blue room going, yeah aliens whatever, then BOOM that bloody hand made me jump out of my SKIN!

  • THAT BLOODY HAND - I JUMPED OUT OF MY OWN SKIN

  • i think it was really good!

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  • nice shoes

  • I actually love your short film and yeah you're right it's the simplest narratives that make it look amazing.

    Anyhow were doing a similar genre to this and since you guys got an A, can you send me a link to your blog?

  • 3:54 I couldn't help but start laughing when everyone started screaming... dont know why that would be funny :)

  • Hey, I'm doing my GCSE in media this year and we're filming for our trailers soon, I was wondering if you could give me some ideas of what to film? my group have barely come up with anything so far but the storyline we have so far is : It's a post-apocalyptic britain (no zombies just empty) there are 5 survivors who are trying to find out what happened to them, why they are immune and what has happened, into the film they find out one of them has gone mad and is trying to kill the rest.

  • @jacko3396

    Hey! I really like the idea of a post-apocalyptic future, I recently directed a short with a similar theme and we shot the entire film between 3-7am over three days! If you do decide to go with that idea, I'd recommend a similar time to shoot. The obvious reason being everywhere should be pretty much deserted and the colours you can capture shooting at dawn can be phenomenal. The advise I give to most people is to write about something you know. I've seen so many people...

  • @jacko3396

    Ive seen so many people try and be really ambitious with their ideas and in all honesty, the best work I've ever seen has been the simple stuff. You have to work within your resources remember! Story is key though man, you nail that and the rest will follow! Good luck and keep me updated!

  • Wow :) I like this a lot- sparked up and idea or two!! Check out my film- also based around school/college and I have used no dialogue almost like yours! Mine is called ''LAST HOUR'' and based on a group of students celebrating their last hour before leaving! Check it out guys!!! x

  • amazing video pal really well done, im going to have to make a media film 5 minutes etc but it can't be a thriller or horror and my group is struggling to come up with ideas and wondered if you had any, any ideas would be great thanks!

  • @ScottTaylorFs

    hey buddy, how's your film coming along? the key to doing something well is always remember to go for an idea that's possible to your resources. use your surroundings for inspiration. has there ever been an article in a newspaper or a bulletin on the news that has stuck in your mind? how about a particular moment in your life that you remember for whatever reason? write about what you know :). Keep me updated!!!

  • This is amazing, you could certainly go far.

  • Awesome!

  • Great video! please check out my Coursework, I posted it as a responce :)

  • wow the hand made me JUMP!!!!!!! os fantastic

    can u watch mine? plzzzzzzzzzzzzz.....

  • Hey man, I was wondering if you could tell me if you were assigned to produce the trailer as a team? Or did you do it yourself? So did you get your friends to act in the trailer, and submit it as your own? Or did you work with a team of people, who also got a grade "A"? Thanks.

  • This is really good:) How did you get the industry logo at the begining?

  • no sleep for me... please check my videos :)

  • WOW some amazing stuff there. Check out mine on my page

  • I'm going to put my first edit on in a bit, if I link it up will you mind giving me some feedback? x

  • Why is it that when he goes into the room you use the sound affects of a pump action shotgun, but he walks into the room with a crappy little pea shooter?

  • Hey can someone check out my coursework please :D?

  • This is SO DARK! I love it!

    Please feel free to check my own A level work out on my channel!

  • Heyyy :) Im starting my coursework very soon, just finished our prelim task. Did you use copyright free music, if so where id you get it from? :) I've been finding it hard to get some good music for my coursework. Thankyou :)

  • I am doing this right now aswell.. looking at this .. its great... A grade deffinately , really nice idea and use of variety of shots !

  • we have to do a opening crammend in two minutes! will be hard, any advice? and was that music copywritted?

  • This is good!

    i really like the out of focus part from 4:05 onwards.

    how did you get the sound to be like that, and the picture blurred?

    thanks!

  • liked the start! it was good!

  • i'm going to be doing media studies for A level, can someone tell me exactuly what you do in it? :)

  • once again, really appreciate all your comments! if anybody is doing their AS media this year, please feel free to ask for any advise or tips etc! I'll be more than happy to help! :)

  • @jackdmillar hello, just wanted to say a congrats on your grade. I'm currently in the production phase of my AS coursework. Though our brief is a trailer for a new series for the adolescent viewers. Yours was so well thoughtout and the editing is amazing, well done! definately deserved. Any advice you'd give me? oh the ending of yours was seriously good, got me scared!

  • @jackdmillar its changed now, we now have a maximum of 3 minutes which i feel might be more difficult. How much stuff did you have to write for the planning?

  • @jackdmillar I'm just starting the pre-producation on my coursewrk and just wodnering if you have any ideas on hoe to make a peice appeal 'to more than just the mainstream 16-25 aged audience'

    Im doing a trailer but the principle is still the same and I'm a bit stuck on ideas to make sure my text does this.

    great job by the way!I would SO pay to watch this film :D

  • What was the brief for this project?

  • @TheUKFilmCouncil

    Our brief was to write, direct and produce an opening to a thriller film with a max duration of 5 mins!

  • @jackdmillar If I'm honest, I have to say it seems more like a short film than an opening to a feature film.

  • @TheUKFilmCouncil

    I know what you mean, we were actually going to submit it as a short film as the 'directors cut' was just under 10 mins in length but our teachers wanted it to be an opening sequence instead. If it were an actual feature, the rest of the movie would then have continued 12 months previous and we would have found out why he did what he did.

  • @jackdmillar Ah, that's why it says '12 months earlier'. Thank you for your explanation.

  • @jackdmillar Does media studies involve meeting to a set brief for the whole class or can you decide if your final piece is a trailer, music video, advert etc (next year), thanks.

  • Oh wow, bravo! This is fantastic! I'm making a trailer for my Media. This is really inspiring.

  • this is seriously good !! what camera did you use because its good quality :D x

  • I have a doctorate in media and i wouldn't give it an A. I wouldn't even crap on it.

  • @stanleygibbsons For someone with a 'doctorate in media', you don't have much idea of what is feasible for group of 16 year olds with a budget of about £5, who are also using school equipment. Please do share which institution your doctorate is from.

  • you probably misread the grade. This film is a fucking joke. However I did rate you thumbs up!

  • That was fantastic!

  • you are amazing!!!

  • Is it suppost to be a short film or a trailer ???

  • Mate look at how crappy my "A Grade/Top Band" A level film cw (on my channel) was I can't believe I got an A with it

  • sounds like a shotgun lol

  • Im in this videooooo woo =)

  • how did you get an A for that, it deserves a low B at most

  • this is so amazing!!

  • Brilliant video :D loads of talent

    check mine out :) ill post it as a video response

  • Yea man this is good

    Check out mine

    watch?v=CJZ4SSgwpmo

  • Nice, this is good man :)

    Take a look at mine

    /watch?v=CJZ4SSgwpmo

  • I just finished mine, i don;t know if it's good or not but we'll see. :)

    x

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  • DAT WAS TOTALLY WIKED the song at the end was called no guns just roses by Naz-T Kiddos

  • luv the first bit made me jump!

  • Great camera angles and colour/lighting/sound effects and storyline, but it sort of drags on a bit, examples being with showing him walking for ages and the sign of the school shows for way too long. Also, the music was a bit unrelated I think to the story, it seemed a bit too cheerful and reminded me of Harry Potter which made me find it funny which it shouldn't do.

    Just a bit of constructive criticism- good stuff otherwise though. :)

  • cool check mine out

    watch?v=YkojIx1rXWQ

  • if anybody wants help with their work, please feel free to ask!

  • @jackdmillar

    Hey help me please if you can. PM me. I ll let you know. Thanks

  • @jackdmillar Was this a short film or trailer?

    It's very good well done. Just wondering. Comment on my trailer please, thanks.

  • @jackdmillar hiii, okay right, im doing my GCSE media horror film and i have to do everything you've done.. any ideas? :)

  • I like the camera work, the music

    please can you help me aswell.

  • i thought this opening sequence is really good. some shots were great like the CCTV, but some things like the gun in the back pocket were its on show walking through the canteen. im doing As myself and i really like wah you did

  • Ohmy that was amazing !!!

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  • it was good but a bit slow

  • @HaNnAm134 i agree

  • It seems like you were trying to hard with everything.

    Less is more.

  • Thats awesome . . . im doing AS media now and we're about to do our main task and i have a question, how did you edit the film between 1.06-1.08 to look so seamless??

  • kinda abit like the film elephant

  • This is almost the same as what I did in my AS a year before you..Had pretty much the same beginning and similar ending..and I used the same song (Usual Suspects)

  • lol not copyright infringement at all haha MGM

  • this is really scary...i like it pretty much:)

  • That's actually pretty good :) what college do you go to?

  • ooh i see

  • Awesome! check ours out too! We got an A, but we haven't experimented nearly as much as you guys with stuff.

  • Nice video!

    What classical song is that?

  • was ok, found it quite boring at times tbh nothing to draw the audeicne in, iv seen better As work but keep it up =D

    4 stars

  • 4 and a half stars :)

  • I like the CCTV shot very good! and the shot with the medium shot of the boy walking towards the camera. Good idea overall. Camera work could have been better but overall very good!

  • I thought it was good, although there are a lot of things in it that could be improved - the camera work, mainly. And everything from 2:28 - 2:40 was kinda shit. Overall though, I liked it.

  • Kind of like 19 minutes by Jodie Picolout. Or whatever her name is. The book, kind of got the same theme. Pretty good though. :) x

  • i liked the effect you used when they were all dead, the echo.

  • this is gd check my viseo out

  • Thats Awesome!

    watch our trailer pleasee.. we worked really hard on it (:

    EducatedRetard

    Thanks guys we appreiciate it

  • Hey fonzi0was0cool! Get a life and suck my hairy scrotum!

  • is this grade A stuff ???

    its absolute crap !!!

    i remember when i was at college 10 years ago, i produced a documentary for my coursework far far superior than this crap, and i only got grade c..........its ridiculous how things change with time and how crap stuff can now be regarded as grade A stuff. this video would not have even get a grade E in my college days. its a sign of the times and what society has become today. if crap is everywhere, then crap becomes acceptable.

    very poor.

  • STOP SLAGGIN EVERYONE OFF, go get a life. Dont you have anything better to do in your life?

  • jesus.. u dont half talk a lot of shuyt. i dont do media.. i wouldnt say this is A grade material. lots of my friends do media and there video's are far better. but; 'its a sign of the times and what society has become today. if crap is everywhere, then crap becomes acceptable'

    .. c'mon wats tha point. go live sum where else if u think our 'society' is pants. a bit of ecouragement may do you good.

  • why should i go and live somewhere else little smelly boy ?

  • just saying you are superior makes you sound like a complete bastard .. this film was really good && it's your fault for making a stupid documentary .. a grade E ?? you must have gone to a really shitty college .. .

  • No Offence, but this is actually shit.

  • Deefo Worth Grade A Its Wikid ;) well Dun U Deserve it no inmprovments needed.

  • really good

    watch as media film trailer-redemption...tis good

  • :O!!!!!

    wow i acctually got goose pimples watching that :P

    that shower scene was reallllyyyy goood (Y)

    please watch mine :) this is living teaser trailer - on my homepage, thanks

  • Thanks so much guys!

    Of course, I'll check anyone's out if they want me too!

    xxx

  • @jackdmillar can you check out mine its on my page

    its called operation llove making

  • masterpiece, i really enjoyed that. rate mine?

  • Thats so good! freaky but good XD

  • usual suspects soundtrack-classic, i used it in my short as well!! i've uploaded it!

  • this is an amazing piece of work

    ive done gcse media and taking ti for alevel

    i hope i can achieve a piece like this

    well done!

    btw very good choice of music to go with your filming x

  • haha the shower part made me jump!!!

    great work :) check out my opening to a thriller film on my page, u might like it too :)

  • good try

  • yeah well done, really good camera work, some great shots in there and really good editing.

    The only criticism in the music whenever the antagonist is in the shots. Its a little contrapuntal and bizarre. But getting an A was a pretty good effort!

  • very well done :D

    its pretty smart actully..i like the part where he takes off his robe as the camera goes up then comes down and he is changed. its very well edited and the camera stays still.

    though takes a while to get to the main point of it.

    I've just finished mine and we do not know what we got for it..though hopeing for a grade like yours.

  • Yeah its very good, I made a documentry for mine. You used a range of shots, but more importantly you knew your concept. With a budget that could be a film, its so like the Hollywood rubbish that they spend millions on.

  • wow thats so good! im doing a level media now making a music video, but when i was in year 12 i did a thriller opening trailer, yours is awesome! x

  • well we know the settings, we have the cast and the camera weve done our dvd covers so our after half term we start shooting :)

    im like one of the main characters so im a bit worried lol..

    how long did it take for you to shoot the whole trailer?

    xx

  • were doing our horror film trailers

    and had to looks ones up for research

    this one is the best ive seen

    well done

    great camera shots :D

    xx

  • thank you very much :)

    good luck with your own!

    how is it coming along so far?

    xxx

  • some nice stuff, well done

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  • That was really good,

    i nearly crapped myself when the gun went off lmao

  • Haha! Thanks!

    :D

  • well done

    should check out my 3 minute wonder.

  • that was a good one =D

  • that was really good lol :D

  • thank you :D

  • oh my gosh.

    i totally loved that.

    gt relle into.

    best media coursework i've seen by far.

    Well Done.

    LOVE.X

  • Wow, thank you so much!

    Really appreciate it :D

  • nice

    well done

    check my media AS out. Also got A grade :)

  • Whoa, for your first ever time of doing this that was amazing!!

  • thank you so so much! :D

  • well played guys

    u dont get better than this

    xxx

  • Oh my god, i thought i was watching i real film, Top job guys, A grade for sure. :D Spilberg eat your heart out xx

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