ur okay but hey u got heart man keep doin what you love small tip try and get better sound Quality if ur thinking of making this a CareeR good job tho
there such a thing called delievery and you dont sell those lyrics atall. not to mention when you write rap you have to do sylbol counts. also u need to work on your voice, as many other people said its rather off putting. just trying to give u some pointers. the lyrics didnt fit with the beat atall. keep working.
You can rap but I have a similar problem, my voice blows, consider taking vocal lessons, I take them at school and when I rap I have to change my voice so it sounds good, it's completely different from my speaking voice because of my voice is an odd tone to rap with.
are you serious? why is he looking at the screen are u retarded? maybe cuz that's what any normal person would do , what is he supposed 2o do? turn his back?
Because yvon123321. I'm new to this uplading vids on YouTube so I look at my self while I record....tell you what....next vid is for you and I'm shutting off my monitor
ur okay but hey u got heart man keep doin what you love small tip try and get better sound Quality if ur thinking of making this a CareeR good job tho
TrueShytOnTheBeat 1 year ago
there such a thing called delievery and you dont sell those lyrics atall. not to mention when you write rap you have to do sylbol counts. also u need to work on your voice, as many other people said its rather off putting. just trying to give u some pointers. the lyrics didnt fit with the beat atall. keep working.
KillahBSCS 1 year ago
youre fucking garb!
timtheMC187 1 year ago
Lyrics are too simple ... you sound like you have an island accent, might want to use that more.
Meta4wzrd 1 year ago
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Heyy guys check out my remix to bedrock...it's not dat great I juzz want sum feedbak...thanks yu can find it in ma channel or look me up
LovvinnherrShestha1 1 year ago
aye bruh im makin a remix to this song wanna get on it
BflojoP 1 year ago
You can rap but I have a similar problem, my voice blows, consider taking vocal lessons, I take them at school and when I rap I have to change my voice so it sounds good, it's completely different from my speaking voice because of my voice is an odd tone to rap with.
Just a suggestion
-PrezTyler
PrezTyler 1 year ago
nice remix bruh
quietstormbeatz 1 year ago
what was the size of that blunt?
zOMBIExECUTION 2 years ago
it wus igh check out my bedrock
BashfulTheDramaKid 2 years ago
are you serious? why is he looking at the screen are u retarded? maybe cuz that's what any normal person would do , what is he supposed 2o do? turn his back?
ShamRocofficial 2 years ago
A HE STOLE HIS SOME RAPS
micmike16 2 years ago
@micmike16 ....may i ask you....where did i steal my lyrics from?.....
-Justice
OfficialJusticeBeats 2 years ago
lol did you try to do your own special effect when you closed off the rap with "bedrock"?
It was alright. I think you could have done better
I have a verse to this too. Check it out.
305JaiiTika 2 years ago
that a.b.c as rap
88parker 2 years ago
Because yvon123321. I'm new to this uplading vids on YouTube so I look at my self while I record....tell you what....next vid is for you and I'm shutting off my monitor
-Justice
OfficialJusticeBeats 2 years ago
broo u can rapp butt yo voice is annoyin lollx
SwazziRated 2 years ago 5
your style kinda like jayz =]
xxsokkastrikaxx 2 years ago
@xxsokkastrikaxx hi kinda do n dont
Dr3amzFuCkiNgbb 2 years ago
this is nice check out me and my boyz version ill put it as a video response
Darepa17 2 years ago
Mad props man
5/5
Luso137 2 years ago
son that was hot
YubgQue94 2 years ago
very nice, adds a new twist to the song
deangelorock 2 years ago
nicee ha
n is tht a gold mic or a pimp cane?
lmaoo!
20Ajizzle20 2 years ago
lol Gold mic bruh lol....i put down that pimp cane a long time ago
-Justice
OfficialJusticeBeats 2 years ago
A GAZA MI SEH... YOur gonna do big things homie
bigwnlc 2 years ago