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  • ur okay but hey u got heart man keep doin what you love small tip try and get better sound Quality if ur thinking of making this a CareeR good job tho

  • there such a thing called delievery and you dont sell those lyrics atall. not to mention when you write rap you have to do sylbol counts. also u need to work on your voice, as many other people said its rather off putting. just trying to give u some pointers. the lyrics didnt fit with the beat atall. keep working.

  • youre fucking garb!

  • Lyrics are too simple ... you sound like you have an island accent, might want to use that more.

  • aye bruh im makin a remix to this song wanna get on it

  • You can rap but I have a similar problem, my voice blows, consider taking vocal lessons, I take them at school and when I rap I have to change my voice so it sounds good, it's completely different from my speaking voice because of my voice is an odd tone to rap with.

    Just a suggestion

    -PrezTyler

  • nice remix bruh

  • what was the size of that blunt?

  • it wus igh check out my bedrock

  • are you serious? why is he looking at the screen are u retarded? maybe cuz that's what any normal person would do , what is he supposed 2o do? turn his back?

  • A HE STOLE HIS SOME RAPS

  • @micmike16 ....may i ask you....where did i steal my lyrics from?.....

    -Justice

  • lol did you try to do your own special effect when you closed off the rap with "bedrock"?

    It was alright. I think you could have done better

    I have a verse to this too. Check it out.

  • that a.b.c as rap

  • Because yvon123321. I'm new to this uplading vids on YouTube so I look at my self while I record....tell you what....next vid is for you and I'm shutting off my monitor

    -Justice

  • broo u can rapp butt yo voice is annoyin lollx

  • your style kinda like jayz =]

  • @xxsokkastrikaxx hi kinda do n dont

  • this is nice check out me and my boyz version ill put it as a video response

  • Mad props man

    5/5

  • son that was hot

  • very nice, adds a new twist to the song

  • nicee ha

    n is tht a gold mic or a pimp cane?

    lmaoo!

  • lol Gold mic bruh lol....i put down that pimp cane a long time ago

    -Justice

  • A GAZA MI SEH... YOur gonna do big things homie

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