secret place

[GContelli]

Nice one again !! :)

[dashpoet]

@GContelli ... appreciate your comment, thanks again!

[SuperNutty23]

glad we became friends and subbd mate.Ivebeen spending a bit time over here on ur channel...theres a poem 4 every occasion........thanks

[dashpoet]

That's fantastic! I'm so glad you found yourself here, this is about one of my favourite places. Cheers for now, Mark.

[andrewnorris1]

Thank you so much for sending me this delightful work. It is so visual and the intriguing last line makes me wonder whether you are a descendant of the author(s) of the Exeter book of Anglo-saxon riddles!

[dashpoet]

Not a descendant, in the tradition perhaps. (You would need to know me as Mark, to find the answer. Or ask!) Thanks Andrew.

[andrewnorris1]

I am tempted to ask you for the answer, Mark, but I don't want to give up so easily. Perhaps another clue?

[dashpoet]

It really is a mixed up mall shark...

[personalimagery]

great place... I love the sounds and silences of this beautiful poem. wish you a wonderful weekend.

[dashpoet]

A lovely comment to receive, thank you. (The w/e has been good so far, and now off to watch the new Star Trek movie ...)

[SenaDaVinci]

nice!

[dashpoet]

lovely!

[MarasVeil]

I love the flow and the reverberating sounds whilst dipping my toes in the chilly waters. Fat goldfish and sticklebacks... what a life.

Excellent and streamlined.

[dashpoet]

These are the moments I live for, really. The simple pleasures. You should see the goldfish, I have never come across any as big as these! Sticklebacks used to be a common fresh-water fish here, now much less so, delicate indeed.

[PulsarPoet]

I like this one; cold water, movement, life . . .

[dashpoet]

... dip, flick

[janeczka]

Very refreshing. Great reading too!

[dashpoet]

Thank you. We have spent such carefree times there, that it is a joy to record and share them.

[Brazdolph]

dart dip

you´re awesome!

[dashpoet]

What a lovely message to receive - thank you so much, Brazdolph

[AntaresInScorpius]

i really like this one. It is different. You have a cool accent. So is this a riddle?? the clue being in your name??

[dashpoet]

Thank you. I'm lucky if my accent helps makes my poetry easy to listen to. I guess this is a riddle of sorts, although I didn't set out to write one. It does have an answer, though, if you would care to discover our secret place for yourself. Best wishes, Mark.

[clayLavl]

dip

flick

[dashpoet]

.. you've got it. Welcome whenever you can make it!

[MEOSHABEAN1]

wow love it

[dashpoet]

I'm glad. It's a lovely place to be.

[ninapoetry]

I love how the tone of your voice becomes softer with the "dip.. flick" parts.

[tinySpectacle]

So nicely read and such great images lead us through this poem.

[kel2corkey]

Your poems a very visual if that makes sense.

Nice poem,i liked it.

[dashpoet]

something to do with the shape of the sound? I'm not sure. I do feel I see things clearly in my mind; if that comes across in the poems then I am delighted.

Thanks again for comments.

[tastetherainbow89]

very nice i like this poem. =]

[twohawksfucking]

This has an amazing patience at its heart.

Great stuff, no secret there.

[liz1060]

Lovely images and I had to look up "stickleback" to know ... It sounds like a heavenly secret place, just perfect for toe dipping.

[Kabuki0009]

Very nice poem, nicely read too ^.^ *****stars;)