The direction, camerawork, acting, and editing was dreadful. It seems like this entire film was written, shot, and edited in one day. I also noticed that some of the opening shots were reversed in post production. This completely threw me off and I immediately wanted to stop watching, but I gave your film a chance. I thought you were taking film classes... what are they teaching you over there at ASU? Stick to writing and hire people who know how to use a camera. =)
Andy is it? Alright, Andy. Stick to writing and stay away from actually making flicks. The story had a good concept, but the execution was sloppy. The random cutting between shots and music, color to black and white, and jumping around in the storyline didn't help get the message across at all. You attempted to squeeze a feature length story into a short. Keep it simple next time....
The direction, camerawork, acting, and editing was dreadful. It seems like this entire film was written, shot, and edited in one day. I also noticed that some of the opening shots were reversed in post production. This completely threw me off and I immediately wanted to stop watching, but I gave your film a chance. I thought you were taking film classes... what are they teaching you over there at ASU? Stick to writing and hire people who know how to use a camera. =)
J03hb 2 years ago
Andy is it? Alright, Andy. Stick to writing and stay away from actually making flicks. The story had a good concept, but the execution was sloppy. The random cutting between shots and music, color to black and white, and jumping around in the storyline didn't help get the message across at all. You attempted to squeeze a feature length story into a short. Keep it simple next time....
J03hb 2 years ago
who tha hell are you ta talk shit bout his movie? what tha hell do you do buddy?
silentheart90 1 year ago