the ending is not good. i get the point, you drove the biker to his house and because of looking back at him you didn't notice the red light. but you know, it's a huge cliche and just.. i don't know. the ending didn't fit for me, but you seem to be a fine director and to fit the screen yourself as well. good job, but could be better.
I liked it, up until the end. Maybe it's just me, but the end didn't seem to fit. Were you trying to imply that it was the bikers fault that the driver, played by you :), ran a red light, and was involved in a collision?
i can really hear ur canadian accent haha
matbiondi 1 year ago
i hate it when people talk way too much before they show a video
Kronos3182 2 years ago
i love this video so much!
mikeysworldview 3 years ago
wow great acting skill
mishmishthe1 3 years ago
Hey dan! i thought that video was pretty good. cliche can be nice too!=D
CaleeDANCEalot 4 years ago
i though that was awesome
StrokeMyPie 4 years ago
I thought that was great!! Who cares about cliche- it was beautifully done. Nice job! (Isn't it nice to make videos for class?!)
anemotionalweek 4 years ago
That was a great video! It looked like the biking scene was filmed out in the country, near G's house.
teenager17 4 years ago
the ending is not good. i get the point, you drove the biker to his house and because of looking back at him you didn't notice the red light. but you know, it's a huge cliche and just.. i don't know. the ending didn't fit for me, but you seem to be a fine director and to fit the screen yourself as well. good job, but could be better.
watercolour17 4 years ago
i kenw many of you would probably bring that up. afterwards i wanst as fond of the ending as i was before. it IS cliche...thanks for you comment :)
stotan88 4 years ago
it's okay. anyways if you wanted to get this short film rated by someone, you can always change the end by refilming it or something.
my pleasure. take care :D
watercolour17 4 years ago
Impressive stuff. The filming was great as was the idea.
BansheeNC 4 years ago
wow good stuff :) loved it!
thekingsofrandom 4 years ago
I liked it, up until the end. Maybe it's just me, but the end didn't seem to fit. Were you trying to imply that it was the bikers fault that the driver, played by you :), ran a red light, and was involved in a collision?
dchristina82 4 years ago
That was actually really good. Keep posting the school projects!
T3ply 4 years ago