don't mean to come at you on a negative tip, you do have a nice flow that could get some heads bopping, but there a strange accent coming through only you know what that is. and like i say be real to yourself or no one will relate to you
develop your own style, be real to yourself, don't try to look rich you are only making yourself look poor, think about what you are rapping about, whats your message, how much have you put into your word play? and last;y don't idolize clowns because you will look worse then them.
my best advice is to take this video down before too many people see it and take my advice and start again listening t what I said
don't mean to come at you on a negative tip, you do have a nice flow that could get some heads bopping, but there a strange accent coming through only you know what that is. and like i say be real to yourself or no one will relate to you
famous789 11 months ago
constructive feedback:
develop your own style, be real to yourself, don't try to look rich you are only making yourself look poor, think about what you are rapping about, whats your message, how much have you put into your word play? and last;y don't idolize clowns because you will look worse then them.
my best advice is to take this video down before too many people see it and take my advice and start again listening t what I said
famous789 11 months ago
keep up young fly u knw hw we doit 3175
jmcnaka 2 years ago