Hate comparing a white man to em, but your scheme is similar. A lot of internals, and pronouncing words cylable by cylable for the sake of flow. It's nice. good shit.
ur shits so dope. i think if u slow down a lil bit ud get ur points n messages across a lil better cuz i gota listen to it like 3 times but if thats jus ur style its still sick.
Man I just heard some sick emcees on youtube recently. Your one of them. That was Sick man. Flow was off the hook... That was mind blowing at the end...
Had to come through, you know. You have a real tight flow. Both songs were ill. So keep it coming cuz I'm subscribed. If you like my stuff you can do the same. Keep killing it. Threes!
To be a real hip hop critic your flow is insane if those lyrics were really your life i'd feel it more. You know how to structure it and pick your words amazingly but your coming across as a want-to-be eminem with all the drug and gun references. If your comfortable with that fine but if you want to make it some where you need to find something right just for spook! but i'm sure you'll find the right spot for you and soon.
@youthinkyourcoolhu thanks bro. i know the gun/drug references seem typical but both the people in the song die from that so it's not like it's glorifying the drug/gun stuff, kinda the opposite.
But it does...even if they died from that if this was the last thing they did on camera then the last thing they talked about was guns and drugs so it gets glorified. I mean RIP to them both but as a spitter I would hate for that to be the last rap that came out my mind onto paper then turned into media ya dig? But to TheAsherRoth He's the only rapper that will go an entire song talking only on drugs/guns that is mainstream hence me making that reference
but no one who listens to this and gets the message is gonna take drugs. my message was kinda if you wanna go down this path, you'll end up like these people. may not be true for everyone who becomes an alcoholic or junkie, but it is true for alot who do become overly addicted
the put that in the description ya know. If there is a story behind something that's what that side box is for I get your message now but explain to the world..
I'm liking your flow, lyrics and structure of verses is dope too. the gun references kinda set off the "Wigger" thing but otherwise, you do have that Eminem sound to your shit haha
i wipe m tears wit the bottle all day
Thriced2286 1 month ago
anyone know where he got this beat?
fromlambstoalex 4 months ago
Nice Rap, and Video, even though video is kinda bad, it still is very nice.
omegacode77 9 months ago
this is fucking insane
AndyA722 10 months ago
you're good bro. imma keep listening to you see what else you do. dope rap.
kripazznigga211 10 months ago
This dude is so raw
Thriced2286 11 months ago
mannn your fuckin dope.. where you from?
joshhacker09 1 year ago
llook lad your mint ,, back to the lab is eminems trade mark tho :/ ,, but ur lyrics r sick as ,, keep at it ,, u need a producer n thats it ;)
lukerileyj 1 year ago
nice man i like the flip to the hook at the end
shadyassassin 1 year ago
spit that has a chainreaction to the next verse....makes me want hear more of your shit.
waynedewho 1 year ago
you need a mixtape. still one of the greatest rappers i've heard.
brandon1820 1 year ago 2
best remix ive ever herd cant stop listen to this i first herd this at the start of the year and i still cant enough
Adancerfrombayside 1 year ago
shit needs more views crazy good
ngoc54 1 year ago
is that eminem?
whatyouknowabouthat 1 year ago
@whatyouknowabouthat na its vanilla ice
theclockstickin 1 year ago 9
niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
simisav 1 year ago
dope lyrics bro
sbtaktikz 1 year ago
dope mayn
streetsofbrum1 1 year ago
of course wax fans rip it up
DJVisualBoy 1 year ago
Hate comparing a white man to em, but your scheme is similar. A lot of internals, and pronouncing words cylable by cylable for the sake of flow. It's nice. good shit.
JustACanadianRapper 1 year ago
yeah man your flow is nice. but like some people said, maybe slow it down a lil bit so we can fully catch what ya saying brah. keep it up *thumbs up*
lexserr 1 year ago
@lexserr i understand and im not american.. duh....
Karlito7teen 1 year ago
beast man love it!!!
brolicj 1 year ago
I don't see many good lyricists on youtube but this is sick.
PerceivetoSuffer 1 year ago
dude wicked flows!!!!
mcandros111 1 year ago
@theclockstickin why would u call urself a wigger for, did slim shady call himself a wigger no, hip hop comes with no color
ILUVJEZUZ94 1 year ago 3
nice bro
Deavanthedark 1 year ago
dude ur fuckin amazing..
ErcleeIsBoss 1 year ago
ur shits so dope. i think if u slow down a lil bit ud get ur points n messages across a lil better cuz i gota listen to it like 3 times but if thats jus ur style its still sick.
ARRIEN1 1 year ago
I want your autograph!!!
alma83e 1 year ago
every time i watch it ,gets more dope!! damn
Karlito7teen 1 year ago
SIck bro
KryptonianKing 1 year ago
got this in an mp3 download?
bigjohnjohn1 2 years ago
this is awesome your awesome!!!!
ernesto91291 2 years ago
Second verse<3
iTzSlaiTzZx 2 years ago
Subscribed.
Holy shit
xZDaveZx 2 years ago 6
holy shit.
you're good.
brandon1820 2 years ago
hella dope verses i subbed =]
xKrEaToRxBkBx 2 years ago 2
thats the shit!
tiesto818 2 years ago 2
This is what's up... i gotcha sub on the way ma son...
YoYo0oYoY 2 years ago 2
Fantastic.
PeterinairHK 2 years ago
Sick vid dude, you got some skills man dont give up on that.
JohnBlaizini 2 years ago
lol i like at the beginning when they call him a wigger. DOPE THO, BIG UPS!
jameshawkinson 2 years ago
dope as hell
coco35796 2 years ago 2
Fresh
Seen peeps talking shit on GM, ha!
AyHayTV 2 years ago 2
i like sweet
The1Houstongirl 2 years ago 2
i like that man its hot you got like an eminem typa vibe about you keep it up
TheKingbreezy 2 years ago 2
Nice
Supreme387 2 years ago 2
coool rhyme the matrix one!!
Karlito7teen 2 years ago 2
You Got Bars Homie, I See You Doin It Out Here!
TheGift716 2 years ago 2
1:09 nice..
ThePSound 2 years ago 3
love your flow homie
5*
and i'm down for collabs wheneverz so get at me
:-)
EvaRiveraFerrell 2 years ago 2
nice work....
MrWowzers45 2 years ago
nice work man i world pay to see u !! peace!
SlingshotRap 2 years ago
nice nice....
MrCrisRocksz 2 years ago
awesome 5 stars and subscire nic!!!!!!!
chelseaolivia1231 2 years ago
Dope shit, heard this on rap-royalty . com somehow
JohtheKing 2 years ago
Nice man. Honestly wasnt expecting much...I get these all the time from people who suck. 5 stars
joelaery 2 years ago
cant stop listening to this song man lol im loving it!!! 5*
DavidBorjaD 2 years ago
Yo ..This was Hella Tight Dog.
siestakeyboi 2 years ago
this is impressive brotha.
keep it up and i'll keep checkin out the vids.
pce!
TheHeartlessMC 2 years ago
damn man
blackfang45 2 years ago
nice work dude 5/5
alexsey00 2 years ago
that was dope
DesoCheese 2 years ago
this is very good....
clubwill3 2 years ago
dope shit bro
flamewizaru 2 years ago
5* cheers for the message! subbed,
ryanphelps12345 2 years ago 2
wow!!!, dat was great!!, i liked it, creepy beat, but gud, felt like a music video, lol
shortysfinest225 2 years ago 2
dope man
asiancaucasian43 2 years ago 2
yo this shit is seriously crack...everything was hot...
TNMSessionsTV 2 years ago 2
shit dope, the word u were lookin for is Prequel, not sequel.. but shits hot
DirtyDavius 2 years ago 2
I was pissed when I got the PM. I hate when people do that shit and the videos always suck.
But now I am no longer pissed. I liked it, nice flow man.
OneOutOfManyMore 2 years ago 2
Flow on point
Sick lyric's
Real REAL good man !i!
- YoungFoss
YoungFossMusic 2 years ago
Great flow...diggin the underground feel here...dope lyrics as well...sick all the way round...5*
xxlaceylacexx 2 years ago 2
i like it, good music-
mparriott007 2 years ago 2
you asked me to check this out yo this is real fire no lie, do u got a mic? i wanna collab wit u bro
DJPureLuck 2 years ago 2
Real fucking dope man, that protein vid is hilarious by the way. I subbed
dpg35000 2 years ago 2
this is dope yo
StrivfeJokerHipHop 2 years ago 2
Man I just heard some sick emcees on youtube recently. Your one of them. That was Sick man. Flow was off the hook... That was mind blowing at the end...
THEHRHOFTIME 2 years ago 2
that was mad nice!
JHan
JHan2011 2 years ago 2
Nice flow and lyrics main! Sound good!
dicemusicproductions 2 years ago
Sick man.. Excellent voice for rapping..;)
Kinda reminds me eminem at young age
menelainho14 2 years ago
Damn dude this shit is ill as hell! Ya vocab is def advanced! 5 stars on this right here!
siryssdakingofficial 2 years ago
Man this is crazy. You got my vote.
5dollacracka 2 years ago
props.
waynedewho 2 years ago
Had to come through, you know. You have a real tight flow. Both songs were ill. So keep it coming cuz I'm subscribed. If you like my stuff you can do the same. Keep killing it. Threes!
BlipMasta5 2 years ago
Good job guys. You guys keep it real and lyrics have content. Keep doing what you guys do!
klasSsickent 2 years ago
god dam the accapella at the end is fucking sick , keep that shit up
chelski000001 2 years ago
the acapella killed though!
leosiongco1 2 years ago
great multis n schemes bro; u could deliver better though IMO; seems a bit hasty, improve the breath control n you cool. stay fresh!
leosiongco1 2 years ago
Sick flow homie. Thanks for the FB link. Definitely will be putting this on favs. Keep grindin and doin work.
kryogenix 2 years ago 3
you're sick bro...great song.
definitely a potential.
Seatedmaggs 2 years ago 2
Great flow! I'm a freestyle rapper as well so I can relate!
lolgeed 2 years ago 2
omg... you're REALLY GOOD .....you and WAX are my personal favorite rappers right now....Keep up the good work ... :)
EagleSyncProduction 2 years ago 3
sick flow
tupac809 2 years ago 3
yeah dude i was skeptical when i read your message but you're the real deal man. love it.
unstoppable022 2 years ago 3
this is tight man 5 star and i subed
azzovdlc09 2 years ago 3
reminds me of em a ton
but still good shit, sick flow
905NOBODY 2 years ago 4
Fuckin nice dude, thanks for the invite, Ima go ahead and fav this
gfxlab 2 years ago 3
This is crazy, you have smoooth flow. Can tell Eminem is a big influence.
CharroN69 2 years ago 3
thanks man, means alot comin from you
theclockstickin 2 years ago
This is cool dude. You got a good flow man.
zfortyounce 2 years ago 4
damn this flow is amazing
EthioArsonist 2 years ago 4
Your lyrics are alrite man and your flow is just plain nuts I love it - just get some studio time and get a couple CDQ's out
Aj693 2 years ago 4
DAYUM!!
BallinLefty3 2 years ago 3
thats hot.... yeah...
NepentheZ 2 years ago 2
this is coolio man ya remind me of roth lol jus uppin these views for ya man
Rapdisup check my shyt too
rapdisup 2 years ago 3
very good shit Spook- Sick-Witted of L.A.
NastyMinded83 2 years ago 4
nice brah! lol
spidy05 2 years ago 5
To be a real hip hop critic your flow is insane if those lyrics were really your life i'd feel it more. You know how to structure it and pick your words amazingly but your coming across as a want-to-be eminem with all the drug and gun references. If your comfortable with that fine but if you want to make it some where you need to find something right just for spook! but i'm sure you'll find the right spot for you and soon.
youthinkyourcoolhuh 2 years ago 9
Eminem isn't the only rapper that mentions guns and drugs.
TheAsherRoth 2 years ago
@youthinkyourcoolhu thanks bro. i know the gun/drug references seem typical but both the people in the song die from that so it's not like it's glorifying the drug/gun stuff, kinda the opposite.
theclockstickin 2 years ago
But it does...even if they died from that if this was the last thing they did on camera then the last thing they talked about was guns and drugs so it gets glorified. I mean RIP to them both but as a spitter I would hate for that to be the last rap that came out my mind onto paper then turned into media ya dig? But to TheAsherRoth He's the only rapper that will go an entire song talking only on drugs/guns that is mainstream hence me making that reference
youthinkyourcoolhuh 2 years ago
but no one who listens to this and gets the message is gonna take drugs. my message was kinda if you wanna go down this path, you'll end up like these people. may not be true for everyone who becomes an alcoholic or junkie, but it is true for alot who do become overly addicted
theclockstickin 2 years ago
the put that in the description ya know. If there is a story behind something that's what that side box is for I get your message now but explain to the world..
youthinkyourcoolhuh 2 years ago
man you are the illest the realest the best
robertosixninesix 2 years ago 8
SiCK
ALICEandBRENDA 2 years ago 6
This shit is tight homie keep at it u got it!
eldeaquellas13 2 years ago 7
I'm liking your flow, lyrics and structure of verses is dope too. the gun references kinda set off the "Wigger" thing but otherwise, you do have that Eminem sound to your shit haha
CloudRedProductions 2 years ago 6
hope u get signed soon - panda
pandaonweed 2 years ago 7
Those are some damn good lyrics. Nice shirt brew. 5/5
siberianwinter57 2 years ago 5
btw this is really good. i think youre the next eminem.
MichiganJP3 2 years ago 5
absolutely not first
MichiganJP3 2 years ago 2