hahah aye this is 1 of my raps im workin on any 1 think the can help me out? lol
people may think my rap is wack but i would never turn my back on a dream that i would never dream before kause all i do is turn my wheel on anotha deal that i may never feel so jump of em fancy heels kause its time for me to heal uhh yea they might call me the real steeel but i might not know how it feels to feel
call me a criminal the damage I intend to do is minimal
he rhymes three syllables know that it's subliminal its comical how the costs are astronomical buy a monicle so you can read my chronicle cos Imma soldier I told ya I fire a supersonic mortar go inside and drink tonic water too scary for most it seems like demonic slaughter
Games my key to stardom what does it take to be a beholder?
As I approach my peek the weather only gets colder
My flare is everlasting what's a cold shoulder to a spark leading to heights higher then a roller coaster
Lost like anew born ninja turtle looking for my mastersplinter Trying to stay away from the pack of haters cuz they're far more evil then the likes of shredder
They're lost in a dark world and will forever remain drifters
With one sip of hateraid they become abusive drinkers
já som kár a som sám jen teba já mám a uz sa neovládám jen teba já ojebávám
tvoju piču smradlavu si ke snídani kazdý děn dávám a proto ta tak ojebávám smylsně ta využívám a proto som tak sám a buděm v duchu tvojej lásky sám ked prides knám na těba sa pozeram a věš že nějsom žádný buzerant ty si kunda kterou jebat chcem jen tvá píča je můj ciganský sen a ty ma ojebáváš jen o penáze jen kvůli těba já sa hlásim do práce nemám ani na chleba ani na vodu a proto ti povedam že ta vihazujem z domu
maybe u were right and our feeling did start to change but u werent always there ,so im not the 1 to blame its just so insane the way u changin ur ways ur not..actin the same maybe i should leave or explain why ur doin this to me, im tryin be myself or whoever u want me to be but it gets kinda crazy wen i look in ur eyes nd i see a new person comin from inside its jus not how it used to be nd i hear u plead beggin me to leave so i put the gun to my head nd say... this wasnt destiny
is it ok in your beat if you only have one baseline? you see i make my own beats and i have made like 20 beats and most of them are just one baseline but there like 8 or 10 that have 2,3and4 baselines.
@die421 You've got to feel the flow of the beat then assert those parts of the song into the end of each bar. It helps me too listen to the beat on a loop and say the verses in my head as the beat goes on. That way I know how its going to come out on the mic. I'm certainly not the best yet, but I'm getting the hang of it.
Pick An Idol.... Pick A Message.... Freestyle Airday haha, but seriously youll start to mix your experiences and b4 you know it youll be decent and go from there....
my advice would be make your lyrics short and sweet. explain everything thats happened 2 u or someone else or 4 what ever subject u want 2 rap about. thats what i learned.
@TheLukiieBoii now u know what u right this guy dont suck he be givin good advice but dont be hattin on lil wayne im only 14 n im sure u older but im a girl n love lil wayne
Ayo, if you really wanna know how to rap, just get the book "How to Rap: The Art & Science of the Hip-Hop MC", it's got interviews with over 100 famous rappers
Hey West Side.. Im Thirteen, An I'd Go With My Mind So Dont TalkS hit about mY Age Group, Maybe Other people Go Wit Da Flow. But I Bet I Could Spit Better Than Yu An Anyone Who Challenges Me
@jaycunic well before you go "spitting" better then everyone else at the young age of thirteen, you might want to go back to doing your homework and clean up that audacious grammer and punctuation.
@hockey91ninjawarrior actually, I was talking like that to save time. I'm perfectly proper with my words. But there's no point to be when your just talking.
@jaycunic By "talking" I assume your are refering to typing. I don't see how capitalizing the first letter of every word would save time. But i guess whatever works for you buddy.
hey man good job, Look I need some help i really need it cause i got some rhymes and I need a beat, but I don't know how to do it and neither want to learn it, cause if u do some u have to to it straight one and good
If u got some free time man hit me up on my MSN levani-ipod@hotmail.com don't sent email cause i got hundreds of it and i might miss that out aight I'm outta here be glad as hell if u help me out man peace out
@TheLukiieBoii lol a lot of the videos dont actually teach anything so people hate on him, but thats because theyre too stupid to realise the problem isnt the guy in the video.....its the fact that some things cant actually be explained!!
like on a video about whether lyrics or melody should come first and the woman said theres no answer to that so people were moaning about it not being helpful.
its like they think watching a video will write a song for them lol fooooooools
im trying to look for a rap beat for my song but i have no equipment at all and even if i did have equipment i wouldnt know how to use it ,does anyone have any suggestions .please help me ,im trying to save up for time in a recording studio but knowone calls me back because they dont take me seriously.please,please.help,if u have any suggestions can you please let me know.thnk u
I see rap as an extra lead instrument. It needs to be part of the song not a beat with rap on top. That's how most producers do it though, i really dislike it. it's better to have a whole song then the 1000st mc on the 50.0000.000st beat.
make the 4th line rhyme with the 2nd line, then it'll sound better. My opinion. But rapping is all about personality. Your style, your rhythm and rhyme, your choise.
I gotta say u hand ur hand in helping me. Thanx. But u do think 50 cent is some trash...I mean sure hes sold his copys but he has no substance. Check my video respond comment.
this is a advice. but people treat this somekinda a beat to comment or sumthin. instead of listenin the good advice, people keep trash talk the vid here.
Dude...are you fucking retarded? That dude is one of the SICKEST freestylers and rappers on EARTH...He's already got like 4 CD's out and been on TONS of other shit.
check the name Jellyroll. Dude is one of the CWB Originals!
he might not be that good of whatever you claim hes not good at ( i dont know, i never heard him speak anything but in this video) but he speaks the truth.
nice work.its hard to find talent on youtube cuz everybody wants to be famous and it fucks it up for people wit skills.come check out my monster beat.
pick beat first i used to do it other way and in the end it dont flow so pick a beat and write to it so u can flow but always write down ur spare rhymes like when on the bus or sumthing cuz it might fit to a beat or with a lil editing to the sentence it might fit and u dont want to loose all those rhymes good luck godspeed
@PeligrosaPrincesa I listen to a beat while riting lyrics... it give me more ideas... and after i will get a melody in a way that the lyrics will flow .. than ill choose a beat that somehow close to the melody i got..
@PeligrosaPrincesa I listen to a beat while riting lyrics... it gives me more ideas... and after i will get a melody in a way that the lyrics will flow .. than ill choose a beat that somehow close to the melody i got..
i got a diss up to glaspig,thats real hiphop what he makes is triphop with downloaded midi loops,hahah eh didnt even make those melodys of his beats,he download loops and put them 2ghether saying he made it lolol
ahah adude call me fat in my face cause you and i both know i aint fat you dumb fuck ,i go everyday to the gym,i dont think even have the money for that you poser,so get real with ya casio keyboard and ya wack garbage band music,cause its ultra wack meIllSkilz always better then glasspig,and btw dude im in cali now,yuo live there too right?wanne meet up so we can get shit popping off?u stoopid goon
that "diss" vid u made helped me gain msg's and even a sprout a few quick subscribers, because clearly, i'm real, and not a fake-ass-musician like you.
u just extend your fatass index finger and peck at one key, out of like three notes altogether.
thats why im labeld you fucking idiot ahaham,nobody cares about you,i trew a diss beat up for you,trust me michel
i fuck you up,in beats and real life,you talk alottt off talk but walk 10% of the walk,so get real pussy,i aint even reading your dumb comments,cause like ur music they make no sense,get real pussy,ur beats stink and always be,my beats crush yuor beats easely,plus btw you a triphop beatmaker ,we can all hear that cause you have no soul in beats,ahahaha
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TheZbestplayer1 2 days ago
By how high he looked throughout this video, il take any of his advice.
Check out my vids. More commin soon :)
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suckathing 3 weeks ago
jelly roll?
Dominic09131996 1 month ago
Beat this;
Internet gangsters are always wack,
same as poor fellows that be doin crack,
My words keep blasting quite a smack,
See when i fall down, i always come back.
ProductionHazard 1 month ago
yo is this Jellyroll? sounds and looks just like him
ConkerzBadFurDay 2 months ago
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MissCracker14 3 months ago
hahah aye this is 1 of my raps im workin on any 1 think the can help me out? lol
people may think my rap is wack but i would never turn my back on a dream that i would never dream before kause all i do is turn my wheel on anotha deal that i may never feel so jump of em fancy heels kause its time for me to heal uhh yea they might call me the real steeel but i might not know how it feels to feel
bryan559100 4 months ago
@bryan559100 ?
TheProshooter 2 months ago
@bryan559100 not bad man, it need to have a better rhyme to it.
good luck
TysFilms 2 months ago
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Beat the pig or Eat the Pig! ;-D
KOmaSHOOTER 4 months ago
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KOmaSHOOTER 4 months ago
WTF?
xCruzSageZ 5 months ago
yo straight up, who wanna battle?
stdelcambre 6 months ago
Yo Lets lets go son ! you start it of then niggah
HennessyDyer 6 months ago
call me a criminal the damage I intend to do is minimal
he rhymes three syllables know that it's subliminal its comical how the costs are astronomical buy a monicle so you can read my chronicle cos Imma soldier I told ya I fire a supersonic mortar go inside and drink tonic water too scary for most it seems like demonic slaughter
Mangled2011 6 months ago
@Mangled2011 shit yeah nice!
bournelach 5 months ago
why is he acting black
mrmryumy 7 months ago
how can I get in contact with this guy?
Eyespychica 7 months ago
I just started my rap career. I have one song so far. Lemme know if its any good, or if I should just quit. Honest feedback appreciated. Thanks.
JiggaSmo 7 months ago
when u first start writing a rap song do u pick a beat first and then rap or what
DaneFizzle 7 months ago
Games my key to stardom what does it take to be a beholder?
As I approach my peek the weather only gets colder
My flare is everlasting what's a cold shoulder to a spark leading to heights higher then a roller coaster
Lost like anew born ninja turtle looking for my mastersplinter Trying to stay away from the pack of haters cuz they're far more evil then the likes of shredder
They're lost in a dark world and will forever remain drifters
With one sip of hateraid they become abusive drinkers
BusTwisted 8 months ago
catch 22..... not cast 22.... just sayin...
herrtucker 8 months ago
is that fl6 ?
divinebeats315 9 months ago
Question ! ...How Can I Find Beats Or Make Em If I Dont Have Equipment Like Tht Guy ?!
xxViiPerzxx 9 months ago
man that beat was class...!!!
onkarshirsekar 10 months ago
Where do you find a beat???
JasperPearson 10 months ago
já som kár a som sám jen teba já mám a uz sa neovládám jen teba já ojebávám
tvoju piču smradlavu si ke snídani kazdý děn dávám a proto ta tak ojebávám smylsně ta využívám a proto som tak sám a buděm v duchu tvojej lásky sám ked prides knám na těba sa pozeram a věš že nějsom žádný buzerant ty si kunda kterou jebat chcem jen tvá píča je můj ciganský sen a ty ma ojebáváš jen o penáze jen kvůli těba já sa hlásim do práce nemám ani na chleba ani na vodu a proto ti povedam že ta vihazujem z domu
Patrik5583 10 months ago
check this out...
To get in to the game gotta perform miracles,
But people who think they can rap are comical,
They cant put together a rhyme with more than two syllables,
So shut your mouth and the damage will be minimal,
concordlmao 11 months ago 19
@concordlmao Wack ass rhymes...
mayhoo22 10 months ago
@mayhoo22 thanks dude :P
concordlmao 10 months ago
@concordlmao that sounds really good, im sure its gonna be a part of something good. (:
fitteowns27 8 months ago
@fitteowns27 thanks :) and im trying to get one of my raps on youtube :)
concordlmao 8 months ago
@concordlmao could be very nice, just pm when you do, you got yourself a subscriber here i tell you. (;
fitteowns27 8 months ago
@concordlmao
I confirm, I concere, I agree
In this over populated industry we must unleash
A beast the size of Galactus' hat and King Kong's testicles
Those who can't perform are "'Sing-A-Long" spectacles
TruthSayerLieSlayer 7 months ago
@concordlmao
I mean concur not concere. Lol
TruthSayerLieSlayer 7 months ago
@concordlmao
***To get in the game, gotta perform miracles
Most reppin for fame, but you gotta conform lyrical
They never heard of rhyming, more than two syllables
In every verse my timing, and flow is too visual
supah4xor 7 months ago
@M0thernatureson Nah that was dope, dont listen to what that faggot says
BTW dude, nice video and thanks
margritama 11 months ago
I'm a maniac, goin' in on any track
Everyone be knowin' that I'm givin' bitches cardiac
Arrest, I'm the best on the beat just trust it.
I keep doin' me and I motha fuckin' love it.
My first attempt at a rap, it's weak as hell I know but I guess it's a start.
Deadlyphase 11 months ago
ayyy that beat tiight
YoungxAc3 1 year ago
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you tell me nothing
emmie2931 1 year ago
whats is this guys name??
skeam56 1 year ago
misterperson331 1 year ago
@misterperson331 that was so gay and mediocre, way to suck you pathetic idiot
M0thernatureson 1 year ago
@M0thernatureson why u on my dick huh??? u must be the gay one
misterperson331 1 year ago 10
@misterperson331 nah ur just hurt cos ur lame ass rap sucks
M0thernatureson 1 year ago
i would have you if i could...u sexy mother fucker
lorenzo3961 1 year ago
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i would have you if i could...
lorenzo3961 1 year ago
is it ok in your beat if you only have one baseline? you see i make my own beats and i have made like 20 beats and most of them are just one baseline but there like 8 or 10 that have 2,3and4 baselines.
coolstermurph 1 year ago
@TheLukiieBoii shut up u punk
TheKhyl 1 year ago
@TheLukiieBoii shut up u punk
befor i nock u out
TheKhyl 1 year ago
@TheKhyl maybe you should learn how to spell before you threaten people through the internet....
boywonder1993 1 year ago
@TheLukiieBoii shut up u punk
TheKhyl 1 year ago
YOU GOTTA FEED THE STREETS!!!LOL Stop feeding yourself!!!
korina95 1 year ago
this guys cool thx 4 evrythin XD
jackandlego 1 year ago
this guys cool thx 4 evrythin
jackandlego 1 year ago
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dude if you want to hear some real rap go to my channel..
But that beat in the end of this video sounds more like a justin bieber baby beat
perker180 1 year ago
i wrote a rap song but how do i get the beat of the instruments in the song and put them togather
die421 1 year ago
@die421 You've got to feel the flow of the beat then assert those parts of the song into the end of each bar. It helps me too listen to the beat on a loop and say the verses in my head as the beat goes on. That way I know how its going to come out on the mic. I'm certainly not the best yet, but I'm getting the hang of it.
TheSnypist 1 year ago
you look like butter bean ?
signalex1 1 year ago
Pick An Idol.... Pick A Message.... Freestyle Airday haha, but seriously youll start to mix your experiences and b4 you know it youll be decent and go from there....
Dont Bite Style, Stay True....
IcePac7 1 year ago
kill the beat....dont make the beat kill you...
buduwax 1 year ago
@TheLukiieBoii Word!
shnuugg 1 year ago
what the heck does he know about rap?
perker180 1 year ago
@perker180 alot more then you if you're asking.
Theshow540 1 year ago 2
@Theshow540
well.. good for him :p
perker180 1 year ago
love when he says make the beat. best example of that is juicy by biggie smalls. he took a shitty ass beat and made that fire.
DenverBroncosChannel 1 year ago
@DenverBroncosChannel
ur ri my man
jardirugby 1 year ago
@TheLukiieBoii agreed
mikeandsam99 1 year ago
lol this vid helps alot....
mikeandsam99 1 year ago
my advice would be make your lyrics short and sweet. explain everything thats happened 2 u or someone else or 4 what ever subject u want 2 rap about. thats what i learned.
152jonster015 1 year ago
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tatzthetruth 1 year ago
@TheLukiieBoii hey, i agree with u about the haters, but dude, lil wayne is legit. He raps from the soul.
TheAnakin999999999 1 year ago
this the great JellyRoll...../watch?v=Pw36WUxwXWU
fazebesnappin 1 year ago
@TheLukiieBoii now u know what u right this guy dont suck he be givin good advice but dont be hattin on lil wayne im only 14 n im sure u older but im a girl n love lil wayne
1lov3ny 1 year ago
@TheLukiieBoii right!
qthemediaman 1 year ago
Aerose - dreaming of you... great song. low quality... but good song. thats how you write lyrics... tell stories about whats going on.
zkorn17 1 year ago
Pause at 0:09 lmfaoo
mw2king89 1 year ago
@mw2king89 it 0:10 lol
qthemediaman 1 year ago
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bay751 1 year ago
venez découvrir le son de MC Hoppers
soisic93 1 year ago
Check out littlemanny619 young rapper trying to get heard..
littlemanny619 1 year ago
@TheLukiieBoii lil wayne can suck my dick
kharlos84 1 year ago
@kharlos84 lil wayne; good rapper with BAD BEATS!
shaddorry 1 year ago
@shaddorry i think your confusing "good" with "garbage" common mistake.
hockey91ninjawarrior 1 year ago
can u make this beat i want to download
it
EasternEpicBmxer 1 year ago
were do you get that beat from? or download?
dielawnz 1 year ago
Ayo, if you really wanna know how to rap, just get the book "How to Rap: The Art & Science of the Hip-Hop MC", it's got interviews with over 100 famous rappers
LloydDanny1978 1 year ago
Hey West Side.. Im Thirteen, An I'd Go With My Mind So Dont TalkS hit about mY Age Group, Maybe Other people Go Wit Da Flow. But I Bet I Could Spit Better Than Yu An Anyone Who Challenges Me
jaycunic 1 year ago
@jaycunic well before you go "spitting" better then everyone else at the young age of thirteen, you might want to go back to doing your homework and clean up that audacious grammer and punctuation.
hockey91ninjawarrior 1 year ago
@hockey91ninjawarrior actually, I was talking like that to save time. I'm perfectly proper with my words. But there's no point to be when your just talking.
jaycunic 1 year ago
@jaycunic By "talking" I assume your are refering to typing. I don't see how capitalizing the first letter of every word would save time. But i guess whatever works for you buddy.
hockey91ninjawarrior 1 year ago
@hockey91ninjawarrior lol we're fighting over typin
jaycunic 1 year ago
@jaycunic ah right you are my man, my apalogies
hockey91ninjawarrior 1 year ago
@hockey91ninjawarrior
A: You have pretty good grammar yourself.
B: Learn what the word audacious means. Do you mean atrocious?
googenshlagen 1 year ago
@googenshlagen indeed i did, i was rather blazed when i left that comment.
hockey91ninjawarrior 1 year ago
whats the song name at the end ?
WestSideConnection5 1 year ago
not to much on lil wayne
marcuz19941 1 year ago
fuck all the hatin ass muthafuckas of the world!yall just mad cus ya slow playin catchup to a game havin mf ya dig do ya thing pimpin!
bigtyrece801 1 year ago
good upload
kingmula2 1 year ago
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swaggais1 1 year ago
if you want a beat come by my page ill hook you up cheap.
just identify what genre/mood you want it and ill get it to ya only 25$.
go from real hip hop to crunk to rnb to anythin.
Pieperson277 1 year ago
Like the beat
Mrman24x1221 1 year ago
sick beat
MrScrappyG 1 year ago
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hey man good job, Look I need some help i really need it cause i got some rhymes and I need a beat, but I don't know how to do it and neither want to learn it, cause if u do some u have to to it straight one and good
If u got some free time man hit me up on my MSN levani-ipod@hotmail.com don't sent email cause i got hundreds of it and i might miss that out aight I'm outta here be glad as hell if u help me out man peace out
theinavel7 1 year ago
his fatness makes me want to hug him
lilbeatch 1 year ago
@TheLukiieBoii lol a lot of the videos dont actually teach anything so people hate on him, but thats because theyre too stupid to realise the problem isnt the guy in the video.....its the fact that some things cant actually be explained!!
like on a video about whether lyrics or melody should come first and the woman said theres no answer to that so people were moaning about it not being helpful.
its like they think watching a video will write a song for them lol fooooooools
lilbeatch 1 year ago
sickest rap in the world- noones gonna listen if the beats shit,
sad truth
liakias1 1 year ago
BOOM SHAKALAKA BOOM SHAKALAKA BOOM
jeff561964 1 year ago
im trying to look for a rap beat for my song but i have no equipment at all and even if i did have equipment i wouldnt know how to use it ,does anyone have any suggestions .please help me ,im trying to save up for time in a recording studio but knowone calls me back because they dont take me seriously.please,please.help,if u have any suggestions can you please let me know.thnk u
ashgod23 1 year ago
@ashgod23
get a mic, an interface, a recording program like "cubase" or "logics", connect that shit and start to spit, get it?
big0giant 1 year ago
GREAT TIPS- jelous people go to hell
123nori123 1 year ago
@TheLukiieBoii i bet he's your dad
njzxshim2c 1 year ago
Yo real hip hop knows how to hip hop...
Elusive25 1 year ago
What the beat called or who made it.
JrichSwag21 1 year ago
Whats The Beat Called????
Apollo539 1 year ago
bad choice of beat
1963impalass409 2 years ago
people be wanting me to pick a faster beat, i can't rap fast so im doing my own thing
AZtrueflow18 2 years ago
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you are rapper then check out my beats on my channel!!!peace
DaimRaw 2 years ago
I see rap as an extra lead instrument. It needs to be part of the song not a beat with rap on top. That's how most producers do it though, i really dislike it. it's better to have a whole song then the 1000st mc on the 50.0000.000st beat.
poast 2 years ago
you got the key to my heart but i got to make a fresh start
i tried to make our love stronger but i cant wait any longer
i know what i have to do and baby i cant be with you
so stop obsession with me i got to be who i want to be.
:D its my first rap song
mehthekitteh 2 years ago 11
remove the last be on your 4th line so it rhymes with your 3rd one ;).
and by the way , I like it
quentinrichard 2 years ago
make the 4th line rhyme with the 2nd line, then it'll sound better. My opinion. But rapping is all about personality. Your style, your rhythm and rhyme, your choise.
Keep it up 'n' you'll do fine!
BigVinno 2 years ago
@mehthekitteh thats not rap thats hip hop
mikeandsam99 1 year ago
@mehthekitteh thats really good mate honestly for a first rap
prototype499 1 year ago
yo check my rap song out
need sme feedback
safee
CHECK IT
rossoneroedoboi 2 years ago
Just get the beat you think sounds right, as simple as that. No need for some bull shit.
gatler05 2 years ago
I gotta say u hand ur hand in helping me. Thanx. But u do think 50 cent is some trash...I mean sure hes sold his copys but he has no substance. Check my video respond comment.
EmceeDraco 2 years ago
50s ight man
he has his moments
but now hes gone comercial
all for money bro
all for money
abacvanin 2 years ago
This guy knows what he's saying. You gotta pick a beat tht's good, but not own you, u should own it
Bedazzler16 2 years ago
damm picking a beat takes me the longest out of everything, peep some tracks if your interested
filosophy42 2 years ago
man juss learn dont hate dam
locogrande213 2 years ago
i totally agree with u, this guys a genius
Richinho13 2 years ago
Yeahh thanxx mann .
TheLukiieBoii 2 years ago
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BobtheEgg 2 years ago
wow, love the beat at the end..
think you could hook me up with it?
BobtheEgg 2 years ago
this is a advice. but people treat this somekinda a beat to comment or sumthin. instead of listenin the good advice, people keep trash talk the vid here.
ytxcg 2 years ago 2
ass-tranomical
ImDino 2 years ago
fat ass-tronomical
frustumist 2 years ago
dude ur probs the shitest rapper int ehf cuking world
get some balls
and make ur own vid
smartass
abacvanin 2 years ago
Dude...are you fucking retarded? That dude is one of the SICKEST freestylers and rappers on EARTH...He's already got like 4 CD's out and been on TONS of other shit.
check the name Jellyroll. Dude is one of the CWB Originals!
Karmaggedon 2 years ago
wats his name?
zipmouth619 2 years ago
@zipmouth619 His Name Is JellyRoll, Freestyle Battle Rap Champion And Accomplished Artist.
DopeSoundProductions 2 years ago
he might not be that good of whatever you claim hes not good at ( i dont know, i never heard him speak anything but in this video) but he speaks the truth.
FrolicEpidemic 2 years ago
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to see what this guy has. he ain that good.
YAH116 2 years ago
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ha rly? i mean if u need help rightin rhymes, u don belong in this industry!
YAH116 2 years ago
why are you watching this then
enter1na 2 years ago 3
Mmmmmkay!.BE!
alphabest1 2 years ago
horrible beat. thats t picking a beat. but your head seems to be on ur shoulders,so atleast you got that
cblunt001 2 years ago
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cblunt001 2 years ago
"You wanna make the beat, the beat don't make you"
TRUE SHIT.
ConcaCon 2 years ago 2
horrible beat selecting
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ZoOtEdFrEsH93 2 years ago
nice work.its hard to find talent on youtube cuz everybody wants to be famous and it fucks it up for people wit skills.come check out my monster beat.
Shineboie 2 years ago 3
i feel u wit dat im an upcomming rapper who spits truth
JIGSAW4LIFE 2 years ago
Thanks for saying absolutely nothing helpful.
brittlebrit187 2 years ago 4
@brittlebrit187 dude fuck off i guarantee you he is better than you ur just mad because he is real and not a Mainstream Money Obsessed bitch
FenderSratocaster 1 year ago
do you pick the beat first or write the lyrics,
because i write lyrics all the time, but i have a hard time making them into a song, and fidning beats to go with them.
i like writing poems and freestyles, but i wanna turn them into songs that sell, can anyone help me?
PeligrosaPrincesa 2 years ago 8
pick beat first i used to do it other way and in the end it dont flow so pick a beat and write to it so u can flow but always write down ur spare rhymes like when on the bus or sumthing cuz it might fit to a beat or with a lil editing to the sentence it might fit and u dont want to loose all those rhymes good luck godspeed
JIGSAW4LIFE 2 years ago
Poems and freestyles don't sell. Songs do. Do you want to make art or money?
tsacnaes 2 years ago
look just listen to the beat and try to make some good shit with it
8Bonaman8 2 years ago
its a little more than that but ull learn
cblunt001 2 years ago
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zkorn17 1 year ago
@PeligrosaPrincesa yes get at me and ill explain how i can help
qthemediaman 1 year ago
@PeligrosaPrincesa I listen to a beat while riting lyrics... it give me more ideas... and after i will get a melody in a way that the lyrics will flow .. than ill choose a beat that somehow close to the melody i got..
kylkiller44 1 year ago
@PeligrosaPrincesa I listen to a beat while riting lyrics... it gives me more ideas... and after i will get a melody in a way that the lyrics will flow .. than ill choose a beat that somehow close to the melody i got..
kylkiller44 1 year ago
shit i need to work on lyrics...but in the mean time CHECK OUT OUR BEATS AND LET US KNOW WHATCHU' ALL HONESTLY THINK!!!!!!"
coldphonic 2 years ago
i got a diss up to glaspig,thats real hiphop what he makes is triphop with downloaded midi loops,hahah eh didnt even make those melodys of his beats,he download loops and put them 2ghether saying he made it lolol
BeatsNRhyms 2 years ago
and to be honest the beat he was playing i feel 10000 more then all glasspig beats lolol
BeatsNRhyms 2 years ago 2
and really tho
all my views/plays/subs are actually from real human beings
all of yours are computer generated plays,
and like the 4 comments you have are from yourself from the fake profiles you create. so fuckin pethetic.
i cant believe i'm talking down on some loser who is like twice my age
you are like in your 35 and pissed off because nobody likes your stuff.
so go create another fake profile to feel better about yourself.
heres YOUR rebuttle comment:
"glasspig is ugly"
fag,
glasspig 2 years ago
ahah adude call me fat in my face cause you and i both know i aint fat you dumb fuck ,i go everyday to the gym,i dont think even have the money for that you poser,so get real with ya casio keyboard and ya wack garbage band music,cause its ultra wack meIllSkilz always better then glasspig,and btw dude im in cali now,yuo live there too right?wanne meet up so we can get shit popping off?u stoopid goon
BeatsNRhyms 2 years ago
oh and btw
that "diss" vid u made helped me gain msg's and even a sprout a few quick subscribers, because clearly, i'm real, and not a fake-ass-musician like you.
u just extend your fatass index finger and peck at one key, out of like three notes altogether.
so please, make more "diss" vids,
because they really help me out,
thanks,
;)
glasspig 2 years ago
thats why im labeld you fucking idiot ahaham,nobody cares about you,i trew a diss beat up for you,trust me michel
i fuck you up,in beats and real life,you talk alottt off talk but walk 10% of the walk,so get real pussy,i aint even reading your dumb comments,cause like ur music they make no sense,get real pussy,ur beats stink and always be,my beats crush yuor beats easely,plus btw you a triphop beatmaker ,we can all hear that cause you have no soul in beats,ahahaha
BeatsNRhyms 2 years ago