What an interesting body for a poem. I like how the small, fast jabs of rhyming really accent the poem throughout. It definitely keeps the listener captivated during the ride. I don't think you give yourself enough credit as a reader or a writer. I sure hope you post more of your original work. As a poet myself, I enjoy what you're doing.
Really good. Glad to have found your channel.
NoAffidavit 1 year ago
man. dude. man. awesome.
matteriffic 3 years ago
holy shit, im pretty much obsessed with you after listening to that.
stace0626 3 years ago
What an interesting body for a poem. I like how the small, fast jabs of rhyming really accent the poem throughout. It definitely keeps the listener captivated during the ride. I don't think you give yourself enough credit as a reader or a writer. I sure hope you post more of your original work. As a poet myself, I enjoy what you're doing.
genmaximus110 3 years ago
"doesn't teach me to count the eyelashes of a lover/doesn't teach me how to communicate with my mother..."
there are some lovely things here. keep up, chin up, heart high, clear-eyed, don't let the bitter eatcha.
CSECooney 3 years ago