you get style points for this one, herb. i liked the feel of it. i thought there were some unnecessary shots thrown in there, but over all it had a good mood to it. I liked the music and the sound effects a lot.
p.s. you forgot to deinterlace, you can tell alot on the HD one.
You ought to turn this into a full-length sci-fi thing where a guy finds this strange black coat that gives him super powers everytime he puts the hood on.
Sorta' like combining two very strong elements of "Unbreakable." You could do a whole online thing where all your subscribers help you write it!
Why do you talk in the second and third person? Like you say He acted and such. Why not I?
I got what you were trying to do with the first couple shots, but they were jarring to me. didnt work. i did like when you slowed it down to walk off frame as you put the hood on. didnt get the video.
I know what your trying to do but it still sucks
TheGeorgestar 8 months ago
The Fuck Was This?
Its Like, He Tries To Make It Cinematic,
But In Reality He Drags It Out Way Too Long.
o0EPITOME0o 1 year ago
i didnt get it =/ was kinda boring
jaszetorres 2 years ago
Many Thanks!
remo2012 3 years ago
Boring.
carolan76 3 years ago
Many thanks!
remo2012 3 years ago
cool short. nice work
julinaydesouza 3 years ago 5
Thanks, I really like this one a lot too!
remo2012 3 years ago
I just watched this film again and enjoyed it immensely, favd it and hope everyone on YT gets to see it eventually!!!!
MrHollick 3 years ago
I thought I did Deinterlace!
remo2012 3 years ago
you get style points for this one, herb. i liked the feel of it. i thought there were some unnecessary shots thrown in there, but over all it had a good mood to it. I liked the music and the sound effects a lot.
p.s. you forgot to deinterlace, you can tell alot on the HD one.
topherking88 3 years ago
That is a cool idea, I'm going to have to think about that!
remo2012 3 years ago
You ought to turn this into a full-length sci-fi thing where a guy finds this strange black coat that gives him super powers everytime he puts the hood on.
Sorta' like combining two very strong elements of "Unbreakable." You could do a whole online thing where all your subscribers help you write it!
toddyro 3 years ago 3
Sounds like a remake of the Mask to me...
Justinskym51 3 years ago
Thanks!
remo2012 3 years ago
Very well constructed video. 5 stars.
blade75964 3 years ago 2
I love filmmaking.
Thanks!
remo2012 3 years ago
A very nicely done film, very powerful! Simply powerful!
Five stars for you!!!!
MrHollick 3 years ago
Makes sure you hit the HD Button, it looks better.
I'll post a Directory Commentary in a few days.
remo2012 3 years ago
That makes no sense at all.
airgordan1605 3 years ago 2
It sounds better that way in HD?
remo2012 3 years ago
Why do you talk in the second and third person? Like you say He acted and such. Why not I?
I got what you were trying to do with the first couple shots, but they were jarring to me. didnt work. i did like when you slowed it down to walk off frame as you put the hood on. didnt get the video.
airgordan1605 3 years ago