8. The trills in the third page. Careful! Put all your weight in the first note, and naturally play the two others.
I won't say anything else :p
I might post a video response showing you these points closely. I don't want you to think i didn't like it. I did, and I gave you 4/5. Merry Christmas Kevin!
Ups, I wrote in much more... i guess it just lost it way :p
Here is the rest:
6. Right after number 5, the downwards arpegio, NO PEDAL! Play it as smoothly, cleanly and precisely as you can.
7. Right at the end of the second page, the part where you go A-B flat, Eflat-D, repeating while going down... play the left hand softer, and give all the weight in the first note of the two (in the right hand)
5. You got the dynamics wrong! In the second page, the part where the left hand plays C all the time is softer than when it get's to play D, Eb, F, G, Ab, F#, where you should do a big big crescendo.
Oh, and btw, great job when you got lost. You didn't loose your concentration and you found a way out. Bravo.
wahidarif 5 years ago
8. The trills in the third page. Careful! Put all your weight in the first note, and naturally play the two others.
I won't say anything else :p
I might post a video response showing you these points closely. I don't want you to think i didn't like it. I did, and I gave you 4/5. Merry Christmas Kevin!
wahidarif 5 years ago
Ups, I wrote in much more... i guess it just lost it way :p
Here is the rest:
6. Right after number 5, the downwards arpegio, NO PEDAL! Play it as smoothly, cleanly and precisely as you can.
7. Right at the end of the second page, the part where you go A-B flat, Eflat-D, repeating while going down... play the left hand softer, and give all the weight in the first note of the two (in the right hand)
wahidarif 5 years ago
4. The Adagio e con brio part is much faster!
5. You got the dynamics wrong! In the second page, the part where the left hand plays C all the time is softer than when it get's to play D, Eb, F, G, Ab, F#, where you should do a big big crescendo.
wahidarif 5 years ago
Good, but you need to stay focused. Your tempo wasn't as precise as it's supposed to be... some things you need to work out ;):
1. The beggining (first page) was a bit too quick.
2. You speed up at the middle-end of the first page.
3. The chromatic scale has to be much much faster and smoother.
wahidarif 5 years ago