A Day Without You;; A Nile Two-shot |Part 2|

[MissMileyObsessed]

This was so good, but so sad :(

Why did he have to die?

And Btw, you got the idea from facebook didn't you? :P

[ZaInEbbbbx]

:O no....please ohh god!

[NileyLoverKelli]

I loved it but I can't stop crying now D:

[thiritun28]

sucha sad one shot

[LadiiPhresh2009]

OMG . You've got to be kidding me ! i thought the secret was that he has another gurl .

[NileyFan4eva118]

i totally cryin right now omg ur such a gud writer COL(cryin out loud)

[lemonade9001]

that teared me up :'(

[gracelynell14]

I figured that this was going to happen but i just didn't want to beleive it... I was bawling by the end.

[hugsandkisses2jonas]

I started freacking bawling at the you went a day without me what about the rest,oh my gosh.I miss you writing sooo flipen much.

[xXxsunshinexXx91]

love it! =) whats the name of that song`?

[BieberJonaslover123]

omg im crying , ur such a good writer

[Twlight369]

Ahh crap, Dana you made me cry >:(. Ahhhmaazzinngg storyyy. But so sad :(.

[yelyahhutchins]

yourmytwilight is back!

[nileyluver2010]

when thenotesaid '' you did it baby. can you do it everyday?'' i forgot about the deal and shit and im like what the fuc*?? and then im like 'O SHIT!!!!!' andi started to cry!!!!

[ahahahbumbum31]

DAMN I AM CRYING SO BAD!!! I NEVER CRY!!! I HATE YOU!(Kidding) but i'm really crying

[MultiParamorefan]

This was pretty good and I'm not trying to be mean or anything but I think this is a bit too predictable. But.... It's still great!

[iCookies123]

@MultiParamorefan really? I didn't. I did not see this coming whatsoever. I thought he was moving or something.

[streetcitylightsx]

Wow.

He died. I cried, I really did,. I usually don't cry over this kinds of things but, wow this was different, such a great job. It was sad. so baddd he died. Poor Miles though. AMAZING!

[zoeygirl11]

OMG THAT WAS SO SAD!!!

[mrstaylorlaunter223]

omg! i stared crying. you did a graet job.

[jessikaotten]

omg! you made me cry, im so glad nobody can see me - imma wreck , well done. this was amazing!

[tnebfreak]

this is sooo familiar!

my friends sent me a broadcaste for the same story :P

anyways i loved it!

[MLFeelings]

I saw this coming :( But I still teared up.

[xxmelodiezacloverxx]

OH MY GOD!! THAT WAS SO SAD!!! I miss you. ='[

[lylbabyprincess708]

i cried..omg amazing

[RailiJaklitch6]

omj that was amazing! but i balled my eyes out reading that!>3 ='(

[NileyJemi]

WOW!!! i nearly cried :(

AMAZING as usual!!

[guanaca4ever]

loved it

this was truly amazing

[actress4life116]

about your cousin (I didnt hear about the story but I have an idea of what happened) i hope shes ok and your a strong young woman (i dnt want to say girl because it might offend you haha)

[actress4life116]

omfg the part that killed me and hit a strong nerve was when it said "You did it baby. Can you do it everday?" That killed me....I was about to burst out in tears but my tears are no longer with me because I used them all this week haha..it wasnt crappy...this was the best one shot Ive seen now..youve just topped so many haha

[LNthelion]

this was so sad

[kierathekangaroo]

:( it is the same. aww so sad, so beautiful. amazing job.

[iiheartwriting123]

:O this was breath-taking. i don't even know what to say..

just...WOW. I actually cried. <3

[logzi2]

I dont know what to say...

this is amazing!

I cried :/

WOW!

[XxXzAnEsSaXxXAWWW]

Wow... This was AMAZING ...as usual :) I was expecting something bad... but not THAT bad. How the hell did he know he'd die on that exaxt day lol. Creepy. I love the way Miley describes his death, its true. When someone close to you dies, 'they're in a better place' doesn't even cross your mind, all you think is 'They're gone, I'll never see them again' over and over, like she did, just changing the words everytime :) you really are talented and it most definately did NOT suck ass!

[zacefronmaniaka]

this is saad!!

why does nick die in every story???

whyyy??

tell me why! why why!(does it hurt so bad :P)

[bridgetarkita818]

oh my god! he died ='( amazing job really

xoxo

[TheKatInside]

OMG this is so sad :((( but you did amazing job, as usual :)

[CullenNileyMiley]

aww )))):

i almost criiiiied

it did NOT suck -.- it was amazinng :D

[XxTildaaxX]

OMG! The best one shot ever, I cried when I read the last parts, and I rarely don't cry at this kind of things so yeah, it was really sad and good! Loved it, great job! Hope you can do more of these! :) <3

[xninaa123]

-Ah! This sucks ass.-

ARE YOU CRAZY! IT WAS AMAZING, AWEOMSE, KICK-ASS!

I love it, the ending especially! I hope you have another one-shot soon :)

[iluvjb4ever123]

I KNEW IT! When he challenged her... I knew he was going to die... ):< I cried & I rarely EVER cry, Dana. You have succeeded. LOL. <3 omg..

[kissmeb4theskyfalls]

aww :( dang Dana thanks for making me cry -.- hehe it was amazing

[PurplePandaBear100]

awesome part 2

[xoXxXkittyXxXox]

omfg i can't believe that happened D:

he died! he died.... he died :(

i'm so sad D: *crying*

&& WHY WOULD YOU DELETE YOUR TWITTER. now i will never get to talk to you.. :(

[2worldofchances]

i thot it was gunna be like he got another girl pregneant or soemthing buut then when they did it i was really confused && then that happened & i broke down in tears , soo sad:(

[untapie314]

i legit cried and i never cry reading these stories. that note just made me cry and idk why. hahh it was so good

[sweetygrl1234]

Oh my god i new it but yet it was still sad

[skibratz689]

oh my god.. that made me cry ):

that is soo depressing, but a fantastic job writing.. :)

[TwilightNiley123]

That's all :/ that was so sad...

great job tho

[bubblebear321]

So sad D: About to cry....

[iMileySelenaDemi]

i literally cried.t hats so sad.

i love your writingg..

[bella122894]

amazing!!!.and its sad.cant wait for the next one

[AMBAHGUUURL]

this. was. amazing. :) ohmygosh, i loved it!

what's the song the starts at like 3:48? it was sucha prettty song. and it sounds kinda like demi lovato. but im not entirely suuure ha.

[JoeJonas4everlove]

so sad..

but good story!

[katelynalexis]

I almost cried!!! That was soooo sad!!! :(

[daddysgirl31]

this was completely amazing.... if this is you writing with losing inpiration i cant even imagine what its like actually having it. wow this two shot was amazing and it made me cry. i cant believe nicks gone and if i was miley i dont know what id do.... this was great and keep up the good work you are an amazing writer

[mszkevinjonas]

awhhhhh that was soooo saddd :(

well written though :)

[richs101]

almost cried. didnt but was soo closee. so so so so so so so sadd. but good job.

[nileyforeveralways72]

Loved it

[nickyjluvers15]

well that was depresssinggg =/

haha but it was good

[Jyoti4Ever]

aww...thats was sad :(

[MrsJosephAJonas411]

omg this made me cry. I loved this sooo much. This was an amazing one-shot

[MissCutie0192]

Omg! You totally made me cry ;( Why?

[dancerbabe234]

loved it

[jonasluver4ever21]

OMG! im crying! my god! i feel so bad! for everyone !

[LovinTheNileyLoveX1]

crying so badly right now :'( this did no suck! it was absolutely amazing, and so sad :(

[apple19966]

AHH! D:,thats so sadd,poor miley,poor joe,poor nick,poor everybody

wow you still got it,lmao i lovelove your stories xD

cant wait till the next one-shot you make

:D

[OfficialYuanZuo]

Woah sweetie. U have to stop tearing yourself down. The only thing sucked about this is you saying it sucked. I personally thought it was AMAZING and so inspiring. I cried my eyes out.

[reviewmaster101]

Dang it, why so sad?! :( That was really good, though. Great job. I don't know why but I loved the "You did it baby, can you do it everyday?" line part. xD Soo sad.. Yet soo good! :D

[OfficialYuanZuo]

@reviewmaster101 I so agee w/you

[ToGoodToBeTruethful]

wow i seriously had tears in my eyes.

this so did not suck!

[DorsyJB]

omg that just thoroughly made me cry like real bad.....

[NaiveSide]

WHY!? :(

[natnat1633]

This was Amazing, What are u talking about? Ur an amazing writer and u inspire other Writers too :) <3

[getdownandgetoff]

That was so sad... :(