Loved it!!! It was great!!! Brain is such an ass and i hate him. Y can't u just accept the fact that Nan does not love u and leave her alone. I hope Nan could save Erik in time.
omfg can he plz jus not die:( i luv this series and i hate james for tryin to break up zanessa and tht is alot commin from me cos i hate zanessa but in this series there so cute together.
hahah i love the comments people wrote.but its true..hahha..james is a jerk.but erik was sorta a jerk too....and now nans being all weird too...oh well,its amazing...next please!
they are 18 years old, and Erik's job was protecting people with abilities, but he did that when he was called on.. and now they basically dropped out of school so..
Oh no! But I have a feeling James isn't the killer for some reason.. That would make it seem too planned, right? Or maybe, that's what you want us to think! Maybe you want us to think it's James because of everything he's done so far, but it's really someone else. :o I need to think about this. xD
Great job, as usual, by the way. It's so suspensful! (:
OMFG !!!!!!!!! A-M-A-Z-I-N-G except please pretty please qith cherry on top *lolz random* but please dont make him die :( its would be too sad and Go away James god i hate him so much !!! cant wait till the next one :):)
OMG!! she should've come right away after that vision!! what if it would happen the next day!!!
YamanakaInoHanon 2 years ago
omg dont die erik!!!!!
your too HOT to die
4wierdo98 2 years ago
ugh. that's bad :( don't want this to happen to him!
Maddie08209 2 years ago
what is james real name?
DontStopTheMusix 2 years ago
@DontStopTheMusix Chace Crawford
100kanisha100 10 months ago
wow
smiey8689 3 years ago
i loved it and damn that picture of zac was so SEXY!
UltimatePrizeFilms 3 years ago
o..m..g loved it!
Twilighter329 3 years ago
nana believes anything james tells her and then everything gets fixed at the end of the episode.
ZanessaIsInLove 3 years ago
OMG, nan & erik are sooo cute together!
that James guy is only complicating things, urgh hate him!
- can't wait for the next one!
letmegettoit 3 years ago
oh my goodness! amazing episode!! cant wait for the next one! :D
jowettey 3 years ago
awesome, why do you have to be so good like that? I love every single episode of your story? Love Nan and Erik together so much
gabbybabyV 3 years ago
LOVED IT!!:D
ZacVanessarock 3 years ago
loved it!! n is this story gonna end bad like erik or nan gonna die?!?! just want to noe! lol
ZandVforever03 3 years ago
AWESOME!
cant wait 4 next episode!
ZanessaloveinHeaven 3 years ago
loved it!!! cant wait for the next one!!
mcollins3p 3 years ago
Loved it!!! It was great!!! Brain is such an ass and i hate him. Y can't u just accept the fact that Nan does not love u and leave her alone. I hope Nan could save Erik in time.
tinabelle98 3 years ago
His Name Is James
Lol x
pwettypwincessx 3 years ago
My bad, i got him confused with his character from another series.
tinabelle98 3 years ago
loved it cannot wait 4 the nex 1 2 come out!!
zacsgirl1993 3 years ago
i love it but ii really hate james he need 2 leave and get a life.
MYREE300 3 years ago
112!it was good
zanessarulez4eva 3 years ago
omg! i'd be scared to death if i had a vision like that! i love this story
splitster7 3 years ago
AWESOMENESS!!! cant wait until the next one!!!
101smartypants101 3 years ago
omg!! amazinggg
twilightbabexo1001 3 years ago
i can't wait till next one!!!!!
uruguanhottie09 3 years ago
OMG ...
what will happen next?! I really wanna know ... Loooooved it!
xx
hexenkind 3 years ago
omg can't wait awosme!
zanessarocks4e2g 3 years ago
God damn, ur such an amazing writer wow! cant wait for the next.
IceWolf882 3 years ago
oh wow...
can u say "Freaking amazing??"
I CAN!
great job, Lauren!
<3
MrsJoshhutcherson1 3 years ago
Awesome.
cant wait 4 da next 1.
iEuropean 3 years ago
so amzing. hope he isnt hurt
Loveistneasy 3 years ago
ahhhhh i hope he doesnt die.
xoalwaysn4ever92 3 years ago
cant wait till the next one
SaveTheUnicorns12 3 years ago
AMAZING!
zanessa14lover 3 years ago
That waas so good. I am worried that Erik will be dead when she goes home next. lol. LOVED IT!!!!!!! Also can you watch my vids please!!! : )
famousalliecat 3 years ago
love it!!!!
can't wait for the next one!!!
xTwilightLover26x 3 years ago
Pls can someone tell me what's the song in the opening credits.
VanessaCrazyFan 3 years ago
luved it xoxo
princessuhoo 3 years ago
great ep well done... i hope erik isnt hurt x
hiapeople 3 years ago
loved it
HSMforeverHSM 3 years ago
damn James!!!!!!!
I hope Erik doesnt die
Great Episode!
xredxheadedxfreakx 3 years ago
OMG! erik cant die..
i really hope james leaves he gives me the hepegepes lol
hsm3fan13 3 years ago
Oh gosh.
Wow.Grr James need to leave her alone!
xD Cant wait till the next one.
AznLoserxx 3 years ago
great episode. :]
MusicRox818 3 years ago
omg amazing ! i hope nothing bad happens to erik !!
To0oTaZzZ 3 years ago
anazing!!!
SOSLuver12 3 years ago
amazed. :D
x3LoveBug 3 years ago
I love it
murisons 3 years ago
OKAY THAT WAS GOOD AND I SSOOOOOOOO HATE JAMES HE IS A FUCKHEAD LOL but really he is
xxbrooklynchickxx 3 years ago
Awesome!!!!
lovex3xo 3 years ago
ohhhhhh !!!!! I HATE JAMES!!!!!...get him outta here lol
i cant believe he neally broke them up by just sayin that lil thing 2 her :)
I dont want erik to die pleaseee dont make him die..i would cry seriously lol !
nan n erik are soo cute together..sorry i just had 2 say that lol
cant wait till the next 1
Stacey <3 x
xBaybeexStaceex 3 years ago
that was a godd episode.. man im startin 2 really not lik dis james guy. an i hope erickd deosn't die
toowierd2get 3 years ago
love it
please dont lrt erick die
xozanessa411xo 3 years ago
YAY!!! Incubus!! ^^ lol
zaceferon14 3 years ago
the video was one of the best ive seen
22onetreehill22 3 years ago
amazing
22onetreehill22 3 years ago
i loooved it [:
ohHix3you 3 years ago
aw poor eirk i hope hes alright
ZanessaCrazy92 3 years ago
awesome episode.can't wait for the next one.i hope erik won't die :)
haydenpanettiere14 3 years ago
omgggg that sad at the ending i hope nothing happens to him
XxXHudgenzFanXxX 3 years ago
Omg! loved it...
ToBeMeChri 3 years ago
wow, that was so intensee!! It was amazing great job lauren!
CourtxFLO 3 years ago
i love it please upddate soon & i cant wait to see what happeneds
xozanessaluverox 3 years ago
i loved it i heat james
viriviri2012 3 years ago
I love it!!
stashhjonas 3 years ago
please hurry! it's confusing but it's really good
zanessaisforever 3 years ago
Omg!! the end is so sad!! I hate James!!! poor nan....she have a lot of problems!!
loved It!!!!
inlove4everwithzac 3 years ago
i luv them together
please dont let them seperate
please
nor dont let erik die
Zanessa4eva2gether 3 years ago
this iss really good
TheHeartbreaker08 3 years ago
i love it soooooooooooo much i wonder who shot erick booooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo james
SnuffleBucket 3 years ago
Wow I so loved it.
xMetskix 3 years ago
loooved it:)
zacandvanessaluvya 3 years ago
OMG! amazing!! love it!!
Anettemoreau 3 years ago
omg stupid james!and poor nan...
Meezy11211 3 years ago
=O OH MY GOOOOSH!!!
aaah!
poor erik..
nd oooh gosh james is an asshole!
;]
loved ot
XxlaladyproductionxX 3 years ago
Loved it.I hope you won't make Erik die =)
Jessouchoupinette 3 years ago
oh my freaking god!
that was awesome!!!
LOVED IT!!!
ZanessaKissa 3 years ago
Love it
xlilibxzanessax 3 years ago
Plz make Erik ok!Pleeeeeeeeeese!
xxx
zAnEsSa4EvA1012 3 years ago
omfg can he plz jus not die:( i luv this series and i hate james for tryin to break up zanessa and tht is alot commin from me cos i hate zanessa but in this series there so cute together.
andronikki 3 years ago
loved it
loutje555 3 years ago
arggg! its so like :o
:D amazing<333
XxelliebobxX 3 years ago
omg!! can james just kill himself for hurting them?!
loved it!!
honeylein93 3 years ago
OMG THAT WAS AMAZING!
Poor Erik and Nan!
highschoolm4ever 3 years ago
dattt wuz soo awsum
i av 2 wtch morr
i bet u james shoots him
plz dnt make him die
plz plz
plz
gr8 eps doee
reliii awsum der fabbulous
xXx
aZANESSAlife 3 years ago
loved it as usual. People HAVE to comment or I'll die!!! lol (overdramatic much?) ok, great job! :]
ChurkyBird3 3 years ago
amazing! i loved it :)
LoveeBabyV 3 years ago
I loved it like always :D
bLacKXSweeTXMausiX07 3 years ago
Amazing.. Just like always. (:
xOcaoimheOx 3 years ago
the was so awsome!!!!!!!!!
i hope erik is ok!
i hate james!!!
cant wait for the next one!!
x
xXxZanessa13xXx 3 years ago
lovd it
k31969 3 years ago
Oh my gosh, what's happening with Erik??? Hopefully he is not hurt..
It was just awesome and i can't wait for the next one...
Valschgal 3 years ago
OMG, pls don't kill erik. I really want him to be the father. Let her go back to him. Anyway amazing ep. and can't wait for the next one!
VanessaCrazyFan 3 years ago
If you let him be deat I will kill you...honestly!!!!
Sellena132 3 years ago
it's awesome!
nessajelly 3 years ago
loved it
googlefriend111 3 years ago
Why The Fuck (Sorry For My French) Does James Have To Be SOO ANNOYING Cant Like Nan Have A Vision That HE Dies
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz x
Love It Though <333
pwettypwincessx 3 years ago
god james is so so so annoying!!!!! great episode!!!!
ramy200 3 years ago
*Gasp Erik bettah not die!! n watch i bet she all sick cause she get one baby in her tummy :P nah nah idk :P
NaniGurl4Lyf 3 years ago
OMG!!!i bloody HATE james.....if someone deserves to die its him NOT erik...nan needs to get over her feelings for james..
nessaalways 3 years ago
hahah i love the comments people wrote.but its true..hahha..james is a jerk.but erik was sorta a jerk too....and now nans being all weird too...oh well,its amazing...next please!
summerluver413 3 years ago
nooo plzz don't let erik die !
I don't want james to be the father
NessquickGlamour 3 years ago
ugh!! james!!! i hate him!!! make nan have a vision of HIM getting shoot!
get nan pregnant fast so maybe he can go cry in a cave in........... Alaska!!! yep Alaska!!!!
lmao
cant wait til the next one =]]
qtpiecupcake101 3 years ago
soo good!
i cant wait for the next one!
you are so amazing!
ashleyfan4eva 3 years ago
omg i loved it
disneygo2gurl 3 years ago
I'm a little confusing, Erik was high school student. How could he become a psychics-protector
pollypunht 3 years ago
they are 18 years old, and Erik's job was protecting people with abilities, but he did that when he was called on.. and now they basically dropped out of school so..
ha
lassylauren 3 years ago
loved it but pz plz plz pl z do not kill erik. nan needs to go back to erik and protect their future together let james get killed instead of erik.
rigger0 3 years ago
she has to save him!!! he cant die!!! erik cant die!! nan get out of bed and save him!!! loved it cant wait till the next one!!!
bojelly12 3 years ago
Oh no! But I have a feeling James isn't the killer for some reason.. That would make it seem too planned, right? Or maybe, that's what you want us to think! Maybe you want us to think it's James because of everything he's done so far, but it's really someone else. :o I need to think about this. xD
Great job, as usual, by the way. It's so suspensful! (:
teddybearlovexo 3 years ago
I wanna... i jusst.... ERG! KILL JAMES AT ALL COSTS!
SingingLuv2 3 years ago
stupid james!!
haha
that was flipping amazing!!
juicyrockstar12 3 years ago
no erik cant die!! :(
RoxyParis002 3 years ago
OMFG !!!!!!!!! A-M-A-Z-I-N-G except please pretty please qith cherry on top *lolz random* but please dont make him die :( its would be too sad and Go away James god i hate him so much !!! cant wait till the next one :):)
Girliciousfan44 3 years ago
Great! I loved it! I hate james he's so stupid! Please don't let them get together and if Erik ever dies it will ruin the whole thing!
Presentingbonita 3 years ago
amazing
impress57me 3 years ago
aw, stupid james. honestly, will
he ever give it a rest? o_O
i hope nan's vision doesn't really
happen..that she can stop it, or
something..
but great job :)
musicalgirl18 3 years ago
AWSOME!!! plz let her save him!! cant wait!
autumnb822 3 years ago
James really needs to go away hes getting on my last nerve
and I hope Eric doesn't die
Great Job BTW =)
lc4lif3vid3o 3 years ago
I seriously want to punch James in the face right now . But first , he seriously HAS TO GO !
forsexyluv 3 years ago
wow this was intense
i cant wait till the next one!!
hopefully erik doesnt die!
i want james to die though!!!!
dramateen9295 3 years ago
another great episode
loveee it & oh i hope Erik doesn't get shot :/ or worst killled anyways i lovee it!
:]
PiNKL0VER123 3 years ago
loved it :)
i hope erick doesnt die. that will be so sad
obsessionxx2 3 years ago
omg.. i can't wait for the next episode..
that was so intense..
plz don't let erik die and make JAMES GO FAR AWAY!!. lol..
HsmZanessaFansite 3 years ago
ooo this is getting good!!!
sftbllbabe815 3 years ago
ugh im craving for more now! James needs to GO!
fasionashley 3 years ago
Great Job
Mollie091 3 years ago
love it
pokey5470 3 years ago
Awsome!
lenita5 3 years ago
your a really good writer (:
love this epi :P
x.
sweetcookiees14 3 years ago
yay! first comment! i love it! continue please! hurry with the next!
BritneyQuOfficial2 3 years ago
amazing;
as always(:
i hope erick doesnt die tho ):
ZanessaLove17 3 years ago
great ep :]
first comment!
hookitupx 3 years ago