Cupcakes Reading Part 1 / 2 (MLP fan-fiction)

[Jmike3543]

Aww hell naw fuck this

[bdodd796]

a little roofies in he cupcakes?lol

[B1rdzOfF1re]

I have a fanfic too.

Search "Treason and Deception" on fimfiction. net

Give it a chance.

[goodcheese9]

Now I know why my friend is afraid of cupcakes now! I feel for you Souphie

[Hemerawr]

Can i have the link to it?

[RagnarokiaNG]

@Hemerawr To the story? It is in the description.

[EvilCookeh404]

I listen to this on a loop while going to sleep, I have an urge to crucify someone while harvesting their innards... Am I gonna be a murderer?

[starfox991]

@poliv67 not even the joker laughed? I REALLY AM INSANE!! HELP ME!!! SEND ME TO THE ASYLUM!!! I NEED HELP!!!!

[starfox991]

edit: 9:07

[starfox991]

19:14 somepony is not glad to be a earth pony.

[UrgoFkelstnme]

Your accent makes it even more brillient.

[RagnarokiaNG]

@UrgoFkelstnme Glad you like it :)

[xX8DeathKitten8Xx]

PARTY HATS MADE OF THEIR OWN FLESH, OH YEAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[roclee1011]

Sergeant Sprinkles is no doubt a great author. This is truly a great story. But Rainbow Dash is my favorite pony and now everytime I hear her name I almost cry because of this story D:

[RagnarokiaNG]

@roclee1011 Do like I do and keep these characters and events separate from the canon ones, then you can enjoy both :)

[Bladenavor]

@roclee1011 Pinkie Pie was my favorite think how I feel! ;_; And I read/listened to it right after reading/listening to My Little Dashie 3:

[RagnarokiaNG]

@Bladenavor Both good stories, but not the best stories to read in a row for sure.

[Bladenavor]

@RagnarokiaNG Took me about 6 episodes of MLP watching to love pinkie pie again. XD

[RagnarokiaNG]

@Bladenavor She just bounces right back! And forward! And sideways!

[TheCoolmanwow]

wow

[cadeervin]

You may of though this was rainbow rash....NOPE...chuck testa

[finalmasterlink]

I actually recorded a video of me reading cupcakes, but i had my fucking mic off, so no video....probably a good thing.

[RagnarokiaNG]

@finalmasterlink Recorded silence like a boss.

[zuzoscorner]

pinkie pass that cupcake momo me: wahts in it. PInkie : rainbow dash Me: hmm not bad mawhwhwhwwhwhwhwa

[poliv67]

@RagnarokiaNG D'awwwww

[poliv67]

@RagnarokiaNG Well, bottom line, just try and imagine how pinkie pie would react from reading that fanfic... Like I said, it puts the character in perspective, how guilty she would feel that anyone could think THAT of her, being all apologetic to Rainbow Dash for no apparent reason, crying and crying, it made me like her even more...

[RagnarokiaNG]

@poliv67 There is some drawings of such things, one I loved was Pinkie reading cupcakes then suddenly throwing herself around Rainbow Dash in tears saying she was sorry, it was sweet.

[poliv67]

@RagnarokiaNG (stupid ipod) So I imagined pinkie pie's reaction to the fanfic, her reactions consisted of guilt, sadness, lonelyness, feelings of betrayal and trauma. This made me go from being scared of Pinkie, to feeoing terrible for ever doubting her, I almost cried!

[poliv67]

@RagnarokiaNG Yes, but it doesn't fit the character and her ideologies! I actually found a way to "untraumatize" myself from this fanfic. At first, like everyone, I got scared and tried to rationnalise, but it onpy made Pinkie seem more scary; so I imagine Pind

[poliv67]

@zuzoscorner Even the joker isn't that messed up! Literally, you'd tell a story like that and he'd be like: "Why in equestria would she do that?" The Joker had a reason to do what he did, he wanted to present the weakness of society trough chaos, help make it better (in his own way). Pinkie Pie goring her friends in her basement is stupid and pointless...

[RagnarokiaNG]

@poliv67 It may seem stupid and pointless to some, but to Pinkie she sees it as her job, nay even her life to do what she does, and comments how she has to do it. To her, she truly believes in what she is doing as others believe in other things.

[Badchoicesmade]

I actually thought of giggle at the ghostie when the story started getting creepy.

[RagnarokiaNG]

@Badchoicesmade Indeed, especially if playing Luna Games as well.

[chargrilledawesome]

I'm not even a brony but I found this messed up at first. But then realised it's actually well written and interesting.

[RagnarokiaNG]

@chargrilledawesome It was the thing that first pushed me to make my stories, knowing that even behind a really messed up thing the basis and style etc. can still be seen and known. Very interesting.

[Velox415]

Still a better romance story than Twilight.

[RagnarokiaNG]

@Velox415 So true, so true. Which is good considering there is little romance.

[RavenFreak69]

Finally, someone that reads a fanfic without inserting their words.

[RagnarokiaNG]

@RavenFreak69 On purpose? That would be very lame of the reader to knowingly change the story while reading it.

[RavenFreak69]

@RagnarokiaNG I think it was some lameass intro, which I tend to hate anything more than 30 seconds, combined with something else but I didn't like it.

[RagnarokiaNG]

@RavenFreak69 Ah, well the only additions I give to my readings are the writers name etc. like I did with this, but in this case the introduction was a part of the writing itself since Edinpony added that disclaimer to it so I didn't need to add in anything. But otherwise I wouldn't add in more than needed to allow people to find the story themselves.

[zuzoscorner]

YEAH YOU KILLED GILDA!!! why am i happy about that.

[zuzoscorner]

this story is so out of character that thier now ay i could think differtnly of pinkie, cycodic and insane at this level is not even possilbe for pinkie she may be waky and crazy to people but not mentally insane, she is no joker, and thus I will try to listen to this and hope i don't die from gorey details. wish me luck.

[novatotubaboy]

so far, not so bad

[flameringstudios]

I was just about to eat some cupcakes.. :c

[MorginTheHedgehog]

Is it ok if im eating a velvet cupcake withblue icing and rainbow sprinkles

[TieDyeDog1]

@MorginTheHedgehog ITS DASHIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

[Esplode3313]

Honeydew?

[drvonkitty]

If somebody offers me a cupcake... I won't eat it.... I think I'll just puke.

[GiggleAtTheGoatse]

Is it weird that I got a boner? Should I seek professional help?

Upon further investigation it may just be that accent.

[TurbinationE]

@pyroTHEboy Hipster brony. ^_^

[TheKittywilson]

Im sorry i had to listen to it again!

[keem025]

I listened to this while doing my homework....my teacher wondered why it said "DIE PINKIE!" on the back -_-

[warriorcatspoolfur]

I find this amusing.

[MrAntefjant]

Nice acent. =>

[Bronytron5000]

My little killer: friendship is tragic.

[yomom208]

SLEEP. WHAT SLEEP?

[InuMS]

A video that perfectly explains cupcakes.

watch?v=8ILdlj_Wtnw

[ultrayoshi49]

Dear god. Well, I'm not sleeping tonight, I won't even try.

[RagnarokiaNG]

@ultrayoshi49 Neither shall I, but mine is due to insomnia rather than the story :(

[woodlefoof2]

12:25 bu dum tss

[Physicalchimera]

Sleeping is overrated anyways

[pianogirl613]

It's hard to take this serious when it's about killer ponies; but what makes it good ;D

[RagnarokiaNG]

@pianogirl613 This did take many tries recording, but I was adamant about not laughing (unless doing Pinkie Pie's voice where it's needed) as most readings do. :)

[WarpSpeedProductions]

Ugh...I thought Sacrifice of the Lambs was dark, but this...dear God, help me sleep at night again.

[pinkbelly7123]

nvm ill just read it lol

[RagnarokiaNG]

@pinkbelly7123 :(

[ZenkiAzure]

I still love you Pinkie... :c

[HentaiSweetie]

Before I started listening to this knowing it was going to be gory I didn't take it too seriously thinking "Oh I'm used to seeing gory/creepy stuff. I hung out on /x/ and watched the entirety of Elfin Leid among other things". I even went to get some tea to drink while I listened. Towards the end of part one I snapped back to reality and realized I was staring at my screen, mouth hanging open, glass in hand, for about several minutes. =_o

[RagnarokiaNG]

@HentaiSweetie Even the most seasoned creepypasta appreciators occasionally find themselves stunned :)

[MrAntefjant]

@HentaiSweetie

HentaiSweetie...The name says all... T.T

[Drago55577]

But you used your voice for the talking....not there's....someone make better voice simulation tech please. No offense

[RagnarokiaNG]

@Drago55577 Ask the voice actors of Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash if that's what you want. But by the laws of their contracts you won't get much of a response.

[woodlefoof2]

@Drago55577 what? a british guy didnt sound like two female ponies?

:D your nostalgia critics #1 fan arent you?

[Drago55577]

It's not animated? Why did I read cupcakes then...poor rainbow dash. YOUR VOICE IS SCARING ME STOP TALKING!! D:

[kickiwi]

This is like a horror movie but more gruesome

[DNIGHTLORD14]

jesus how the fuck could somepony write that i gonna be sick i'm dizzy i can't see straight i got to 12:03 but now oh God (vomiting) you sick fucks and people liked it what the hell ahhh (eyes start watering) My fanfic is better and it involves demons and it was never ever writen down (starts balling) oh God why did i watch this (gasp then stops balling) ok *gasp* im ok peace is dead have you all no shame!!!

[McCbobbish]

I AM GONNA TRAVEL TO THIS UNIVERSE, BEAT EVIL PINKIE TO DEATH WITH MY BASEBALL BAT, AND THEN MAKE HER INTO SOME SORT OF HORSE STEAK!

[AnimePrincess448]

@McCbobbish NOOOOO dont do that! ((O >.< O))

[McCbobbish]

What do you have to lose dash? only all your organs!

[PerilocutionAZ09]

Oh Pinkie, you are so random...

[lanadollar400]

your british and that makes the story more scary

awsome reading dude

[RagnarokiaNG]

@lanadollar400 Because we make the best evil villain voices? :)

[7XxmisunderstoodxX7]

Oh my god. Your voice. I love your voice.

[RagnarokiaNG]

@7XxmisunderstoodxX7 I thank you mam.

[SexyMevy16]

turn on teanscribe audio lol @ 3:00 "i think he was pissed what's up?"

[SexyMevy16]

holy shit i love your voice :D

[HaloZombie298]

I'm a... I'm going to go throw up and, uhh... then kill myself.

[hugs4gir]

Dang.

I <3 the story, hate who's doin' it.

I'mma go kill Rainbow Dash's BF NOW :D

[Nathan99911]

boring

[Jayjangle]

The UK accent makes me say 'screw it' to all the other Cupcakes readings :D

[RagnarokiaNG]

@Jayjangle I am glad you like a good British accent Sir.

[shadowdemons117]

NOT ENOUGH BLAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[ThatOneKidNoOneKnows]

I'm gonna back away slowly...and come back when there's less weird shit.

[chipettegirl987]

Bloody. Hell.

[raindowdasher99]

i was reading this and that night i could not go to sleep i kept thinking Pinkie Pie would come in and make cupcakes out of me and i still say that Pinkie Pie is out for me and i got a lot more of my friends thinking she is out for them and they are not bronies i will never listen to the song cupcakes AGAIN!

[bobwhiskey]

i want this on tape read by betty white

[thealexgher]

this is a gore one?

if this is gore then i'm oging to need to murder someone for entertainment

[monkyyy0]

i think i may have issues, after all im listening to this after reading this story twice

[guesswhostalkin]

WHAT

[guesswhostalkin]

THE

[guesswhostalkin]

FUCK

[spanglishman1234]

@RagnorokiaNG epic cupkake time NG I'm pretty sure they were voiced over though maybe snippets.

[WritersBlah]

Not a bad job, but how long will it take until we get a fandub with character voices?!

[RagnarokiaNG]

@WritersBlah I guess until someone who can do a really good Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash voice gives it a go.

[RetardGamingHD]

Erm, there's a difference between Eating OUT a pony and EATING the pony x_x

Pinkie just got confused 8D

[sango4ever12]

i still love pinkie pie no one can change that ;) shes my bloody valentine~

[VellaCRaptor]

The reason why this fanfic is good: Pinkie Pie is actually in character the entire time.

[RagnarokiaNG]

@VellaCRaptor I agree, this is something other grimdark stories tend to miss doing.

[NavalDestroyer1]

@NavalDestroyer1 outube won't let me post link to it so go here for the link :

youtube[.]com/user/NavalDestro­yer1?feature=mhee

[Fenexs]

I'm not a brony, and after hearing this i don't think i ever will be........

[MuslimViking]

*applauds* Bravo! Bravo! Now do a reading for the "Sweet Apple Massacre"!

(I actually rather hate MLP...but this here fanfic...this actually makes me not hate it so much. I don't know why. Is is screwed up that I think the fanfic is cute?)

[RagnarokiaNG]

@MuslimViking I haven't read that one, and don't really plan to. It seems to just be a 'let's make it as bad as possible rather than actually have style' sort of read.

[ParaFan19901]

@RagnarokiaNG You have no idea.

[TheFlyingracoon22]

*watches till 6:29* HOLY FUCK I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE!

[RagnarokiaNG]

@TheFlyingracoon22 Before all the good stuff.

[TheFlyingracoon22]

@RagnarokiaNG I came back to it. Left at 9:20

[Fenexs]

@TheFlyingracoon22 yep, im not a brony but im prity sure cried and laughed at the same time

[BoltTheSuperDog1999]

tried listenin to this with no lights on and home alone... i almost died

[RagnarokiaNG]

@BoltTheSuperDog1999 My voice just is that romantically evil I guess.

[98shahn]

rated, grimdark as fuck

[TheRealKittycaty]

Omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg

[icansmellcolors]

FacePunch Anyone ???

[QPRlover1]

Death toll: 2

[HunterLee1204]

im eating a muffin right now and watching this

blegh

[Zuifan]

I couldn't handle the demented 'Hush Now' I'm sure as hell gonna power my way through a little crazy Pinky Pie dagnabbit!

-///- Fluttershy for President -\\\-

[RagnarokiaNG]

@Zuifan Fluttershy is cute.

[Zuifan]

@RagnarokiaNG except when she has eldritch meat balls for eyes and sings in a creepy echo effect.

[PhineasAddict]

Why does everyone stress over this fanfiction and think Pinkie is such a bad thing now? I mean, I LOVE this fanfiction. Its so interesting and descriptive. Its just a fanfiction... I mean, there ARE tons of hints in the show. The hot sauce on the cupcake? "Its good!" The apple she ate threatening Twilight? "Mmm, juicy!" There's so many hints, I can't possibly name them all. I'm hoping for more in Season 2, I love them. This fanfiction is awesome, it made me love MLP even more... :'3

[RagnarokiaNG]

@PhineasAddict I love the this fanfiction myself, it was the first MLP fanfiction I read and it eventually lead me into writing my own which I am currently still doing. I dothink its well written and good etc myself to, and is a very much worth it fiction to read and listen to.

Hinting wise on the show? Pinkie is just that type of character, they aren't hinting to this in the show as they are very seperate things, its just that if you watch the show after reading this it makes you think they are

[PhineasAddict]

@RagnarokiaNG First MLP fic I read too. I've been thinking about writing some my own that have references to Cupcakes.

I know that they don't hint, and that they'd never think of that. X3 But its fun to point out things that remind you of it. ^^

[RagnarokiaNG]

@PhineasAddict If you are wanting to make a grim dark fiction if possible try to avoid cupcakes, not that it's bad or anything. But there is seriously so many fanmade versions of it already that it's sort of overdone. If you have a good idea to add to it then it could be good, but if its just a similar cupcakes thing then by all means make it, but it isn't as interesting as new ideas.

[PhineasAddict]

@RagnarokiaNG Yeah, I know. I'll probably just put a few references to it in it.

[Wolfykinz]

Ima get in my kitchen.

Then grab a giant butcher knife.

And pinkie pie will never be seen again.

And i will open a shop with PINK CUPCAKES :D

-eats one then finds an eyeball in it-

Oh well ^-^

-eats the eyeball-

Yummm.

[EclipseXBaller26]

Noooooooooo!!!!!!!!!

[mrsfantage1]

you sound like harry potter.

[RagnarokiaNG]

@mrsfantage1 Ironically I also used to look like him. Without the glasses.

[6love15]

I micspammed this on TF2 and everybody got mad at me.

[RagnarokiaNG]

@6love15 *brohoof*

[6love15]

@RagnarokiaNG Fuckyeah. *Brohoof*

[Thiefenz]

@6love15 I... Need.... to do this!!!

[6love15]

@Thiefenz DO IT. <3

[afrowigzombz360]

*crying* why....why why dashhhh

[RagnarokiaNG]

@afrowigzombz360 It's ok, she will be with us forever. Forever.

[SpartanMJO12]

this made me jizz. in my pants. everywhere. on the walls, on the ceiling.

[BRENDEBREN]

I thought of this at school...

[RagnarokiaNG]

@BRENDEBREN Disregard Education. Mutilate Ponies.

[idan111]

I came.

[RagnarokiaNG]

@idan111 You taste good.

[idan111]

@RagnarokiaNG

You know, we actually played this and the other part in a GMod server called GMod theater in a room with over 20 brony haters.

The rage was lulzy.

[RagnarokiaNG]

@idan111 Glad I could help with that :)

[LucyoftheSky]

I....I'm going to go cry in a corner now...

[Thiefenz]

@LucyoftheSky I'm gonna bake some CUUUPCAAAAKES!!! 8D

[TheBozoBrothers]

why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why

[RagnarokiaNG]

@TheBozoBrothers I'm sorry Dashie, but I don't make the rules.

[rainbowcrash27]

@TheBozoBrothers Because, cupcakes.

[cowinswitzerland]

-FANBOY SQUEE- my dream room and decoration!!!!!

[popolynn2]

I like the ending where Celestia is all a part of the plan.

[RagnarokiaNG]

@popolynn2 I thought of that being the case myself also. She is tyrannical like that.

[nomnomman89]

thumbs up if your eating a cupcake while watching this

[edinpony]

Will I ever get tired of hearing my work read aloud? Nope!

Anyway, this is definitely the best "Cupcakes" reading I've heard yet!

[RagnarokiaNG]

@edinpony Thank you edinpony, it was a very enjoyable story and was a pleasure to do the reading.

[edinpony]

@RagnarokiaNG Well, its not exactly my story, Sergeant Sprinkles gets all the credit for imagining and writing it. I just polished it a bit. Still, I'd like to hope I heightened the experience of the story for those who read my version, and I enjoy seeing it used for projects like this.

[RagnarokiaNG]

@edinpony You helped with it, and since Sergent Sprinkles isn't commenting this is the best comment I have gotten for it, and I am sure you did help it feel better to read.

[mrvideogamevideos]

@edinpony YOU MADE IT?!?! YOU SCARRED ME!!!

[edinpony]

@mrvideogamevideos I only made the edited version. Sergeant Sprinkles is the original author.

[mrvideogamevideos]

@edinpony Oh well, it's written good, but it... *sniff sniff* IT WAS SO SAD!

[haloreachmon]

@edinpony f*ck you... just... i'm gonna go look at a rainbow dask montage.

[xXREapERCHiLDXx]

@edinpony What is WRONG with you? D8 WHY would you write this!??! D8>