The verse "It won't be the same / You're too far away / There's no one to blame / There's nothing we can say" is also a little strange, because the first three lines have the same pitches yet the guitar stays the same. It's similar to what I said about the rising pitch at the end of the pre-chorus -- the vocals make me expect that the guitar will change, but it stays exactly the same.
Anyway, I enjoyed this song. I hope you keep writing!
This song is very poppy, which I like. It feels like something's missing from the second line of your pre-chorus ("I only end up thinking that") -- your pitch rises as you hold the last note, and because you're holding it I think part of me expects your beat to speed up in response. Like the beat is saying, "This is why I'm holding this note! Pay attention!"
haylea told me to listen to this last night. and i love it. anna you're honestly one of the best musicians i've ever met. and you inspire me more than you know. i love you hun (:
and we need to hang out and jam to paramore and reel big fish and that crappy dont date jake band :p
u r..... incredible,amazing,wonderful...... u almost make me cry... i think i'm in love i'm u r fan now ....by the way there's a song just great for u the song is.... duvet and is singed by BOA please sing that song just one time please
really good, and don't be afraid to poste your other songs too, because i'm 100000% sure that they are great, only a bit more confidence. hope you'll have succes in life:)
チョコっとだけ苦いカモねっ!
ItsumoKokoroniTaiyou 8 months ago
カフェオーレ飲もうよ!一緒にどうぞ!
ItsumoKokoroniTaiyou 8 months ago
I reeeeally want this song on my iPod..omfg it's amazing
JasmynHailey 2 years ago
love this song
liberty6521 2 years ago
The verse "It won't be the same / You're too far away / There's no one to blame / There's nothing we can say" is also a little strange, because the first three lines have the same pitches yet the guitar stays the same. It's similar to what I said about the rising pitch at the end of the pre-chorus -- the vocals make me expect that the guitar will change, but it stays exactly the same.
Anyway, I enjoyed this song. I hope you keep writing!
szomething 2 years ago
This song is very poppy, which I like. It feels like something's missing from the second line of your pre-chorus ("I only end up thinking that") -- your pitch rises as you hold the last note, and because you're holding it I think part of me expects your beat to speed up in response. Like the beat is saying, "This is why I'm holding this note! Pay attention!"
szomething 2 years ago
haylea told me to listen to this last night. and i love it. anna you're honestly one of the best musicians i've ever met. and you inspire me more than you know. i love you hun (:
and we need to hang out and jam to paramore and reel big fish and that crappy dont date jake band :p
haha love ya!
BreannaMichelleWhite 2 years ago
its beautiful ^^ 5 star!
zeeksex77 2 years ago
Wow... It's so beautiful...
Sugoi, subarashii, wonderful ♥
I love the way you are .
Please continue =)
LightandLight 2 years ago
I listen this song 100 times xDDD...101 xDDDD ^^ is... is...SUGOI!!! xDDDDD
Auron255 2 years ago 2
i can see you like Yui so much.
i love her as well, she inspired me to play guitar.
you'll make a good singer, keep it up!
jukaishou 2 years ago 2
u r..... incredible,amazing,wonderful...... u almost make me cry... i think i'm in love i'm u r fan now ....by the way there's a song just great for u the song is.... duvet and is singed by BOA please sing that song just one time please
aleistercrowley2 2 years ago 2
素晴らしいです!!
yuimyfriend11 2 years ago
really good, and don't be afraid to poste your other songs too, because i'm 100000% sure that they are great, only a bit more confidence. hope you'll have succes in life:)
palbiroors 2 years ago
im such a fan ^_^
もっと歌って!
potheadmaiko 3 years ago
so nice song
boogiies 3 years ago
sugoi!!!
u're great...
keep up the good work!
ziqajuzaili 3 years ago
Wow,it's REALLY good!!
And I love the way you sing the chorus!!
がんばってよ
♥
oXVeraXo 3 years ago
niceeeee!
jimena51 3 years ago
wow your a composer too just like YUI. your song is beautiful. :)
phenidone 3 years ago
サビ前からサビへのつなぎ方が好きな音で気に入りました♪
YLTK 3 years ago
がんばって
RU8MI7 3 years ago
Excellent song. I think with increased control over your voice, you could have a very bright future in music. :)
torroxceles 3 years ago 2
thanks so much!
yeah I agree that voice control is the one thing I still need a little work on.
lol, I'm gonna keep doing my best! :D
SHINJITSUnoRAVEN 3 years ago
lOving yOu vOice girl ^^
kiaritaprincess 3 years ago
you're talented :)
amirahlee 3 years ago
can i download this song? lol pleassseeeee! ive fallen in love with it :)
greenpurple7 3 years ago
there's a download available on my Soundclick site.. the link is in my profile!
SHINJITSUnoRAVEN 3 years ago
Very nice song.
This made me want to listen to your other songs too.
takanorius 3 years ago
よく動画をYOUTYBEで目にします。
作曲したらしいですが、なかなかの出来具合いだと思います。
今度私も動画をアップロードしたいと思います。
何か参考になることがあればわたしのところに書き込んでください。o(≧▽≦)o
yoshiokayui34 3 years ago
is anyone else confused by this? it just makes my eyes go blurry :s
greenpurple7 3 years ago
Still poignant.
1080Peter 3 years ago
this is really good!!
phoebe315 3 years ago
Always a pleasure to watch! Keep up the good work!
mrvsniper 3 years ago
Always a pleasure to watch! Keep up the good work!
mrvsniper 3 years ago
Sometimes shocking...sometimes disturbing...but always entertaining...haha, keep it up!
mrvsniper 3 years ago