i give a 96 for content and an 83 for presentation. the idea was good, but the music was in no way pertaining to your subject and actually over powered the narration causing mass confusion.
i see what you did there it was a movie based loosely on the Odysey of Ulysses. You made a clear presentation of the similarities by poiinting out the 7 motifs.. Nice Job and i would give you a 97 % becausue you didnt give a shit... lol
no ofense but i think you got the grade you did because either it was the best out of all them or teach took pitty because of the smartass comments and credits...(my sides now hurt from laughing) Great job!!!!
@Rin900 the main character's middle name is Everett his first name is Ulysses he just doesn't like his name or something. Plus the lotus eaters are the christians who were getting baptised, Reason for them being is because pete and the other guy are brainwashed into thinking they are saved and dont wish to go and get the stolen treasure.compared to the odyssey means they lost motivation for completing their journey. like the lotus eaters kept them from getting home.
Figured should let you know the three woman represent the Sirens AND the lotus eaters. Sirens cuz they attract the guys towards the rocks and lotus eaters because they drug them which is a direct comparison to Homer's Odyssey.
This movie is about the depression, you should have used only music from the wovie or the era, not hip hop pop or whatever you opened with. And it was too loud. From what I could make out, your comments are good and worthy of the good grade.
This was a very well done project! I would have like the music turned down to hear the explanations better, and the explanations to be a bit slower. Your analogies comparing the movie with the epic poem were excellent! Thanks! I will share this with other English teachers for ideas.
Dang people, just comment on the project wouldja? They and mostly Fatima, did a great job on it and got an A. Congratulate her and them and let the rest go. She didn't write the original book, or the movie. If you don't like the book, blame Homer, no, not Simpson, and if it's the movie you have a problem with, Tell the Cohen brothers. Only, they don't care what you think. So, Fatima and helpers, great job. Oh, and childkiller1500, get a life.
Well done Fatima and others. You certainly caused some reactions (some from people who took what you did a bit out of context!!!!!) I don't think the film is meant to be a faithful retelling of the Odessy seems to loosely follow it.
The guitarist at the crossroads must be a reference to Robert Johnson by the way.
Better yet, how can the Teacher or professor possibly grade this when the sound of the persons voice and music drown each other, making Nixon seem coherant.
I thought this was very poor and for an english project not once did you try to outline the meaning of the film and the music was not suited at all which destroyed the whole thing you have no idea how to create the right atmosphere when talking about this film with tha noise you used as the background it would not surprise me if you failed your english project.
why dont you turn off that nigger music so i can under sand you...fucking dumasses these days and the second one that talks sounds like he has a dick in his mouth.
your and idoit nigger music you somewhere along the lines a white man was involved in producing that and mixing it we need real nigger music run some muddy waters over that
A peanut gallery is an audience that heckles the performer. The term originated in the days of vaudeville as a nickname for the cheapest (and therefore rowdiest) seats in the theater; the cheapest snack served at the theater would often be peanuts, which the patrons would sometimes throw at the performers on stage to show their disapproval.
can i have a list of all the songs please??? good presentation helped me understand the connections between the odyssey and brother where are thou which we are talking about during my english class
Your spelling/grammar is the most garbage thing I've ever seen. Unless you're in like, fifth grade, you've DEFINITELY FAILED at trying to make a point.
If ur only way of attemting to prove me wrong is by pointing out that i didnt use proper grammer then im assuming you DID fail and ur just angry im right.
MisuzuthePilot: You have been found guilty of misleading and perverting the young with this offensive excuse for a project. I decree that you be hung by your underdeveloped testicles until dead.
P.S. For accepting this classless piece of garbage, your school should be burned to the ground.
Nice effort, but next time I suggest putting less emphasis on the background song and more emphasis on your presentation. You talking over lyrics just muddies up all the audio witch is just sloppy.
i gave you a 5 but that first one, the music was to loud, not saying she did bad cause she didn't, the music was a tad to loud, and the second guy i couldn't understand what he was saying
You would have done better if you had stuck with the original soundtrack and spoke a little more clearly and not read from a script. Sounds too canned.
Has anyone mentioned that you forgot the blind seer? Tiresius,(the old guy on the hand cart) Odysseus met him when he went to the underworld and the seer told him about the quest/journey he was about to take as well as some advise.
Good job guys. Did you notice that Tommy, the guitar player, was met down at the crossroads? Where he sold his soul to the devil so he could master the guitar? Nothing to do with Homer here, more like Robert Johnson and Eric Clapton...
Ok. I was referring to Cream's cover of the song "Crossroads" featuring Eric Clapton which is how a whole generation of listeners, including me, came to know the song.
Compared to most 9th grade projects, this was good. It gets a solid B to maybe a B+ from me. It would have been nice to see the actual 'motif' explained more, instead of just the direct parellels. But other than that you are dead on. Also John Goodman was obviously a cyclops because of the stupid eye patch, lol. I would have mentioned it.
Geez. Most of you idiots probably don't even know what book this movie is based on. Do some freakin' homework before you berate the homework of a fifteen year old girl.
Nice effort, and yes like the other comments the music is too high. If you use Vegas 6.0 editing program you can edit the volume of the music among alot of other things. Some of the voices talks to fast and the mic is quite bad which only makes blubby sound. If you do the same thing again i would advice to be sure the mic is good and record better :) Practice more and it'll be flawless! I'll give it a 3 out of 5. Don't give up!
First off I don't know where you got I was a guy from, I'm a girl. And second, there's five narrators, three of them are guys and two of us are girls.
why put this on youtube?
gabruiz43 1 year ago
i give a 96 for content and an 83 for presentation. the idea was good, but the music was in no way pertaining to your subject and actually over powered the narration causing mass confusion.
steveandhutchinc 1 year ago
@steveandhutchinc your a doushe
doggod281 1 year ago
@doggod281 you misspelled douche. thats minus another point. brings you down to a 95.
steveandhutchinc 1 year ago
Awesome presentation. But it would help if everyone could read better.
chromelemon 1 year ago
this fuckin sucks
rayray14100 1 year ago
i see what you did there it was a movie based loosely on the Odysey of Ulysses. You made a clear presentation of the similarities by poiinting out the 7 motifs.. Nice Job and i would give you a 97 % becausue you didnt give a shit... lol
clamfinger 1 year ago
horrible trash!!
keithwarch09 1 year ago
no ofense but i think you got the grade you did because either it was the best out of all them or teach took pitty because of the smartass comments and credits...(my sides now hurt from laughing) Great job!!!!
trumagk 1 year ago
haha the guy takin when they r jumpin on the train sounds like bevis and butthead..lmao!!!
stringplayer07 1 year ago
Huh huh huh huh huh huh huh
ibgrimme 1 year ago
your video nice,but mixig music as background zero,it is to loud vs your voice,your voice been drown
iwanttoseeeverything 2 years ago
this a worth 100?
wow.
flamingalien 2 years ago
@Rin900 the main character's middle name is Everett his first name is Ulysses he just doesn't like his name or something. Plus the lotus eaters are the christians who were getting baptised, Reason for them being is because pete and the other guy are brainwashed into thinking they are saved and dont wish to go and get the stolen treasure.compared to the odyssey means they lost motivation for completing their journey. like the lotus eaters kept them from getting home.
nerfen95 2 years ago
Euro trash.
stratotanker518 2 years ago 2
in the very beginning of the movie it says it was based off of Homer's Odyssey
AltairEmu 2 years ago
LIFE IS A HIGHWAY I WANT TO RIDE IT ALL NIGHT LONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i think this was pretty good
animefan1294 2 years ago
mayb she is like 10
it would be A work for a 3rd grader, right?
gratefulDeadHead1234 2 years ago
Figured should let you know the three woman represent the Sirens AND the lotus eaters. Sirens cuz they attract the guys towards the rocks and lotus eaters because they drug them which is a direct comparison to Homer's Odyssey.
Rin900 2 years ago
I coudnt hear a fukin word of that ta be quite honest wit ye....
Emmetl43 2 years ago
yeah,... the first was decent but after that it wasnt too clear... not sure how you managed 100 on this but it could use some improvement
rolyatgjg16tay 2 years ago
I also think its weird that you didn't mention that THE MAIN CHARACTERS NAME IS EFFING ULYSSES as one of the noted references to the oddyssey
sunset261 2 years ago
@sunset261 No, main character's MIDDLE name is Ulysses. Which is latin for Odeseous which is the main character in Homer's Odyssey.
Rin900 2 years ago
This movie is about the depression, you should have used only music from the wovie or the era, not hip hop pop or whatever you opened with. And it was too loud. From what I could make out, your comments are good and worthy of the good grade.
Production C-.
Keep working on it! 8-)
dwcdaid 2 years ago
i make perfect sense i also saw a that this movie was somehow related to the odyssey
tonyparati 2 years ago
wow, you ruined a good movie with awful music.
BillyChaka 2 years ago 9
pure shit
ponchopenguins 2 years ago 2
what the name of song at 1:40 pls
mercedes722 2 years ago
The Devil Went Down to Georgia - Charlie Daniels
MisuzuthePilot 2 years ago
THIS DON"T MAKE NOOOOO SENSE!!!!!!!
infiniteanswers 2 years ago
Neither does your paragraph. You don't say ''THIS DON'T MAKE NOOO SENSE!!!!!!!'' You say ''This doesn't make any sense''.
NoobyNoobyNoo 2 years ago
Nooby, you stupid kid you. It was a joke. Watch the movie dumbass
infiniteanswers 2 years ago
I fucking did you stupid nigger.
NoobyNoobyNoo 2 years ago
This was a very well done project! I would have like the music turned down to hear the explanations better, and the explanations to be a bit slower. Your analogies comparing the movie with the epic poem were excellent! Thanks! I will share this with other English teachers for ideas.
space1zebra 2 years ago
Why would you add this shit to a good movie?
Wirelessbum 2 years ago 5
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dont add shit pop music to a truly awesome movie please.
randomnumber81 2 years ago
dont add shit pop music to a good movie.
randomnumber81 2 years ago 3
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you get a 0 from me.
randomnumber81 2 years ago
lol im the guy speakin on the second part. yes it really is me. i was just makin some strange voice. :)
REBELyell1215 2 years ago
Dang people, just comment on the project wouldja? They and mostly Fatima, did a great job on it and got an A. Congratulate her and them and let the rest go. She didn't write the original book, or the movie. If you don't like the book, blame Homer, no, not Simpson, and if it's the movie you have a problem with, Tell the Cohen brothers. Only, they don't care what you think. So, Fatima and helpers, great job. Oh, and childkiller1500, get a life.
rockinredneck57 2 years ago 2
Well done Fatima and others. You certainly caused some reactions (some from people who took what you did a bit out of context!!!!!) I don't think the film is meant to be a faithful retelling of the Odessy seems to loosely follow it.
The guitarist at the crossroads must be a reference to Robert Johnson by the way.
katherine232 2 years ago
Strange sounds in the Video ??? are they speaking Indian ???
rm04ever 2 years ago
HAHAHAHAA!!!
Way to go on trying to escape from being an idiot there.
but no it's not that simple. because you see i REALLY want to know what you think...truly i do.
and childkiller.......seriously.....what a twisted name.
i mean mine's weird but.....dude you're a fucking retard.
Bullring1 3 years ago
I'm white.
You're called childkiller1500.
That pretty much makes you completely useless.
Therefore you're not allowed to have an opinion.
Now shut your God damn mouth.
Bullring1 3 years ago
go take a jump or lump or dump
cci110 3 years ago
HNGGGG
LastDanStanding 3 years ago
No offense but... This was kinda on the bad side.
Very unprofessional for a school project.
People in my sophmore highschool class would have gotten an F for doing something like this.
ElectricEcstasy 3 years ago
wtf did you do.
This is a Great Movie. Leave at that. don't fuck it up
marktesiembra 3 years ago 3
this is total crap.
markors13 3 years ago
what is the first song?
olalalala71600 3 years ago
why would u want to know that? seriosly wtf
zippywaite 3 years ago
barf
thatswierdlol 3 years ago
WOW! No offense but you ruined the movie. The greatest movie ever made ruined in under6 minutes.
rowdyguitarist 3 years ago 2
what was the background song you used at the beginning?
RedneckHunter81 3 years ago
which one? all the songs are listed in the credits at the end.
lirifox 3 years ago
its okay, i found out what it was
RedneckHunter81 3 years ago
I give you a 100... A 100/1000
ArkusIIID 3 years ago
wow you are so unbelievably witty.
MisuzuthePilot 3 years ago
I know, right?
ArkusIIID 3 years ago
Oh Jesus voice over. Copyright music. Please shoot me.
deasm007 3 years ago
epic fail
megatron422 3 years ago
omg...
WHY?!
You butchers you !
*flips his fingers out from under his chin*
a cazzo di cane
sheeeesh1 3 years ago
How dare you put that stupid noise to this wonderfull film its the best thing ever shut up
Packers1411 3 years ago 3
Better yet, how can the Teacher or professor possibly grade this when the sound of the persons voice and music drown each other, making Nixon seem coherant.
GBPackerLuke6 3 years ago
dude lmfao the guy talkin on motif 2 sounds like super nerd, like that gay kid that hangs with butters in that one south park episode
BobT3hBuild0rz 3 years ago 3
haha thats dead on. he sounds like general disarray
Spartacus0715 3 years ago
crap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
elfuggo 3 years ago
i cant even understand you guys. you talk weird.
dontchaax3 3 years ago 4
I thought this was very poor and for an english project not once did you try to outline the meaning of the film and the music was not suited at all which destroyed the whole thing you have no idea how to create the right atmosphere when talking about this film with tha noise you used as the background it would not surprise me if you failed your english project.
BoltfromtheBlue82 3 years ago 5
epic fail... kinda like the grade i bet u got on it.
the88real 3 years ago
At least try reading the description before you attempt to diss a freshman english project, lmao.
MisuzuthePilot 3 years ago
ROFL!
unmasterlock12 3 years ago
misuzu, shut up. this is a piece of crap. what's with the changing music? epic fail much?
perthsessions 3 years ago
I hope you got an F for this
Kilowarning2 3 years ago 3
That noise should be fixed.
PaulSlipstream 3 years ago
why do you ruin this great scene with your bs music?
gadesmcp 3 years ago
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This shit SUCKS.
Spudkuddler 3 years ago 3
someone just flagged this as inaapropriate.. i guess the motif overall was a shitty report
i too give you a 100 ...and a flag
highalltimes 3 years ago
why is this black noise even on here
freakman99 3 years ago
why would u blare music and blare someones voice sounds awful atleast pick a more blues classic song so it fits maby even a robert johnson song
wateverman111 3 years ago
fuckin garbage
kamperlol 3 years ago
omfg i literaly stoped at 15 second 2. i fuking want the bak
sam78991 3 years ago 2
what the fuck i want my 15 secs back.
dbyrnerulz 3 years ago 4
why dont you turn off that nigger music so i can under sand you...fucking dumasses these days and the second one that talks sounds like he has a dick in his mouth.
splatmaster777 3 years ago 7
your and idoit nigger music you somewhere along the lines a white man was involved in producing that and mixing it we need real nigger music run some muddy waters over that
wateverman111 3 years ago
I don't understand. You mean they grade you on how bad you can ruin a masterpiece?
buddybleau 3 years ago 5
This is a mean video lol this is exactly what our class is doing for english
SamFlannery 3 years ago
what the fuck??? what the hell is this shit? like this dumb shit pissis me off that its on here
101swat101 3 years ago 2
A peanut gallery is an audience that heckles the performer. The term originated in the days of vaudeville as a nickname for the cheapest (and therefore rowdiest) seats in the theater; the cheapest snack served at the theater would often be peanuts, which the patrons would sometimes throw at the performers on stage to show their disapproval.
AshliToronto 3 years ago
Well, your video editing skills are still better than a lot of people.
But as for your cussin and goin' on about the Peanut gallery; You should either remove this video,
or at least DISABLE TEXT COMMENTS.
AshliToronto 3 years ago
no, no, no f*** no
SaltWaterFlush 3 years ago
everwhere u go you just cant get away from jungle bunny music
freakman99 3 years ago
what's this shit?
dirklonger 3 years ago 2
remove the vid!
fotbollsskon 3 years ago
So you committed video piracy for an English project?
viewbookimpact 3 years ago
i cant here the voice that is talking so it kind of messes with the whole thing but better luck next time but i did like devil whent down to ga.....
RichardF41230 3 years ago
Agreed, PikeyMutt.
Neur0ticism 3 years ago
God. Awful.
pikeymutt 3 years ago 3
can i have a list of all the songs please??? good presentation helped me understand the connections between the odyssey and brother where are thou which we are talking about during my english class
Supernova336 3 years ago
watch until the end of the video, it'll give you the credits.... just promise me you won't download "Life is a Highway".....
triplejk33 3 years ago
lol i already have that song :]
Supernova336 3 years ago
wow this is mabye the most garbage thing ive seen unless your in like 5th grade u DEFINETLY FAILED this project
tazan0 3 years ago 4
Haha, yeah fo sho.
0122325 3 years ago
Your spelling/grammar is the most garbage thing I've ever seen. Unless you're in like, fifth grade, you've DEFINITELY FAILED at trying to make a point.
MisuzuthePilot 3 years ago
If ur only way of attemting to prove me wrong is by pointing out that i didnt use proper grammer then im assuming you DID fail and ur just angry im right.
tazan0 3 years ago
MisuzuthePilot: You have been found guilty of misleading and perverting the young with this offensive excuse for a project. I decree that you be hung by your underdeveloped testicles until dead.
P.S. For accepting this classless piece of garbage, your school should be burned to the ground.
mtnman03 3 years ago 2
Sorry, I don't have testicles.
Guess your death sentence fails.
MisuzuthePilot 3 years ago
OK eventually you included the good music.
hawaiiandobroblues 3 years ago
Why do you have this crap music?
hawaiiandobroblues 3 years ago
well i think it is a good presentation
Rob from Germany
ozeangruen 3 years ago
it says that it was an ENGLISH PROJECT.
now quit your bitching and get a life.
goddamn.
omaeokorosu 3 years ago
amen. lmao.
MisuzuthePilot 3 years ago
Nice effort, but next time I suggest putting less emphasis on the background song and more emphasis on your presentation. You talking over lyrics just muddies up all the audio witch is just sloppy.
nummnuts 3 years ago 2
is nothing sacred?
why'd you put this on youtube anyway. are you proud of it?
ohSNAPitsBILLIE 3 years ago 2
I put it on youtube to show my class.
lmao.
MisuzuthePilot 3 years ago
Did you actually bother to deconstruct this story? fucking americans, fucking up everything, fuck you all
Zaven55 3 years ago 2
maybe later kid.
i only do appointments.
MisuzuthePilot 3 years ago
this sucks so bad u fucked up a great movie omg looooooooosers
deliciousdanni98 3 years ago 2
get a life you assholes fuck off and die
vale46no1 3 years ago 3
You guys fucking suck and you ruined a great movie by adding your demeted voices to it.
LiquidShizzles 3 years ago 3
you ruined a great world by existing.
MisuzuthePilot 3 years ago
GO SWALLOW A FORK!
FUCKINKAZZ 3 years ago 3
i gave you a 5 but that first one, the music was to loud, not saying she did bad cause she didn't, the music was a tad to loud, and the second guy i couldn't understand what he was saying
armand111 3 years ago
You would have done better if you had stuck with the original soundtrack and spoke a little more clearly and not read from a script. Sounds too canned.
gothbunny 3 years ago
stupid
stupaaa 3 years ago 3
omg omg tell me if u go to cherokee who ever made this project cuz i think i know one of the ppl who did this.
animekyo264 3 years ago
ummm nope.
MisuzuthePilot 3 years ago
couldn't watch... mic is too messed up... just sounded crazy on my speakers :/
Helldin665 3 years ago
Has anyone mentioned that you forgot the blind seer? Tiresius,(the old guy on the hand cart) Odysseus met him when he went to the underworld and the seer told him about the quest/journey he was about to take as well as some advise.
originalh8r 4 years ago 2
berbat
xBestShotx 4 years ago
the guy sounds like Jason, the fat kid, from "Home Movies"
evictorine 4 years ago
life is a highway tom petty??? dumbass ...lol but A GOOD VIDEO i want to steal dfor a class
354ml 4 years ago
Yes, who is the life is a highway you listen to by? Rascal Flatts? dumbass.
MisuzuthePilot 3 years ago
dude what you should have done is on the time line go to the song and right-click and go to volume and lower it some dude cuz its way too loud
Darthlongi 4 years ago
but other than that, pretty good job. what grade did you get on it?
Darthlongi 4 years ago
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crap crap crap crap!
glima2 4 years ago
that does sound like a retard
mystahleeboi 4 years ago
can any1 understand the second kid holy shit sounds like a retard
llTrilogyll 4 years ago
The Sarcasm isn't helping your grade at all. "our last one, thank god"
"tele telle -- tel -- whatever his name is"
If I were your teacher I'd fail you. And when you guys came to complain about your grades I'd just turn on my stereo with some ludacris at full blast.
ChiefReynolds 4 years ago 2
Good job guys. Did you notice that Tommy, the guitar player, was met down at the crossroads? Where he sold his soul to the devil so he could master the guitar? Nothing to do with Homer here, more like Robert Johnson and Eric Clapton...
intracoast 4 years ago
Eric Clapton didn't sell his soul to the devil, he just wishes he was Robert Johnson, the king of the blues.
FunkNasty 4 years ago
Ok. I was referring to Cream's cover of the song "Crossroads" featuring Eric Clapton which is how a whole generation of listeners, including me, came to know the song.
intracoast 4 years ago
Compared to most 9th grade projects, this was good. It gets a solid B to maybe a B+ from me. It would have been nice to see the actual 'motif' explained more, instead of just the direct parellels. But other than that you are dead on. Also John Goodman was obviously a cyclops because of the stupid eye patch, lol. I would have mentioned it.
demotheses 4 years ago
JESUS CHRIST TURN THE MUSIC OFF!
nomonis 4 years ago 5
AGREED!
LatinaLibra 4 years ago
the sirens aren't human women. Just FYI.
cosmotron2007 4 years ago
Just wanted to mention, now that I watched the credits, that at 15 you should never use comments like "you probably don't know what this is" etc.
ZoophPA 4 years ago
Geez. Most of you idiots probably don't even know what book this movie is based on. Do some freakin' homework before you berate the homework of a fifteen year old girl.
ZoophPA 4 years ago
Awfully presumptuous of you. the "Odyssey" is classic
reading. Not all of us are idiots!!
jodmackster 4 years ago
Youtube isn't good for porn, but its fucking great for spammers.
jackbrechin 4 years ago
this country is to black.we down here in coles county believe in the kkk if u dont like it get the hell out.
041255 4 years ago
music way to loud. it sucked
skyness766 4 years ago 2
Go Fatima! I liked the last lines of the credits lol
osun049 4 years ago
good try but it hard to hear what you are saying the music is way to loud
360xboxwiitoPS3 4 years ago
wow, u guys are cool, insulting a tenth grade english project
Mainyu 4 years ago
Actually, it's a ninth grade english project.
And that's alright I find it pretty amusing :]]
MisuzuthePilot 4 years ago
wow that really did suck
goose252 4 years ago
Nice effort, and yes like the other comments the music is too high. If you use Vegas 6.0 editing program you can edit the volume of the music among alot of other things. Some of the voices talks to fast and the mic is quite bad which only makes blubby sound. If you do the same thing again i would advice to be sure the mic is good and record better :) Practice more and it'll be flawless! I'll give it a 3 out of 5. Don't give up!
Akaitsuki85 4 years ago
the music is too loud, other than that its good for a english project, in fact just leave out the music next time
steele08 4 years ago
the second narrator is not even speaking english
artwarkam 5 years ago 2
I just think you were way off with everything you said about the film.
timopay 5 years ago 2
wat!?? ur a guy? dont tell me u r the narrator in this video? coz i thought it was a chick.
rozza89 5 years ago
First off I don't know where you got I was a guy from, I'm a girl. And second, there's five narrators, three of them are guys and two of us are girls.
MisuzuthePilot 5 years ago
probably the worst thing ever
rozza89 5 years ago 6
thank you for your incredibly mature comment. /:
Dude I'm a fifteen year old who's never done video editing and had 6 hours to make this.
So please get a life and post your immature comments elsewhere. =]
MisuzuthePilot 5 years ago
I must agree with rozza89, what a load of crap
jdunn58 4 years ago 3
I must disagree with you and rozza89, you're both fags.
osun049 4 years ago
hahahahah... way to piss her off
goose252 4 years ago 4