for a first try you did great! because i wish people would do this for me on my videos im going to do it for you.
Check List For Things You Could Fix:
1) Your Voice is in a Very Mono-toned Way, i know its not natural but thats the whole idea when you play a roll for a different character than yourself.
2) I know you were going for a Grim look for this but, its just depressing grim. Depressing isn't the best emotion you want evoked in your Audience.
ur jokes are actually rlly funny xD
TheMrAFK 2 weeks ago in playlist Uploaded videos
Nice :D
McShapeshiffter 1 month ago
for a first try you did great! because i wish people would do this for me on my videos im going to do it for you.
Check List For Things You Could Fix:
1) Your Voice is in a Very Mono-toned Way, i know its not natural but thats the whole idea when you play a roll for a different character than yourself.
2) I know you were going for a Grim look for this but, its just depressing grim. Depressing isn't the best emotion you want evoked in your Audience.
Good Luck in The Future this was a good start
QuerulousGaming 1 month ago in playlist Uploaded videos
@QuerulousGaming thanks man ill be making a new episode at weekend and i will definately change them things, great advice !!
OfficialMine 1 month ago in playlist Uploaded videos
Cool Video!
lewynuke1000 1 month ago
Nice One Mate!
TheGameNerdsSquadron 1 month ago
Orphans got you back :)
TheLifelikerug 1 month ago
@TheLifelikerug yeah they did !!
OfficialMine 1 month ago