Tell You This (Original Song) By Pete Monaghan

[angelofdarkness49]

i have watched alot of your videos now - you have me ama zed you are really good it makes me think if you don't have some kind of songwriting deal/album i might aswell give up :p by the way you look like a young dave gilmour of pink floyd lol peace

[linkincleka]

guys im trying to find a song that goes:i can tell you how i feel,hooohooo

can u understand teh song i mean?

[ROBADON21]

i know the song your talking about its the eagles

[starfireII]

not bad (that translates to pretty good)

Cheers SW aka Pete M

Enjoyed it, thanks :)

[paisleypower30]

Love the mood of the song, very nice !

(albeit the buzz was a tad distracting)

[PearlHx]

Plz check out my own song! x

[DudeDiggler01]

Very cool man, love how you change the tempo in mid-song... great trick, and done very well. Good sing-along song, and catchy, like all your stuff I've heard so far. \m/

[yamdizzle]

It sounds like an acoustic guitar :O. Is that how telecasters sound or did you use an effect or something?

[smokewilliams]

I recorded the acoustic guitar later and adding it on top.

Peace,

Pete

[PurplePenguins82]

Good Job

[smokewilliams]

Thanks Orie, I am glad you liked it.

Peace,

Pete

[Thupore]

this is fuc**** aweeeeeesoooooooome :-)

[smokewilliams]

Thanks Taizy. I don't mind if you curse.

Peace,

Pete

[Thupore]

i feel bad to curse in public XD

[cinnamontwistt]

Youtube finally lets me respond tonite! Woohooo I like it Pete : )))

[smokewilliams]

Thanks so much for saying that. Youtube does seem to have it's act together.

Peace,

Pete

[sonikalkemy]

KeWl man! Peace

[smokewilliams]

Thanks for saying that.

Peace,

Pete

[Alishamoly]

Hope this song is not directed at your wife Smoke? Would you mind if I posted an interprtation of this musically? Any old how I liked it very much, keep entertainin' us you tubers, thanx and peace man! POKERTIME! C U, Al.

[smokewilliams]

This has nothing to do with my wife. It is about betrayal, and doesn't always mean a girlfriend. Feel free to post something. That would be great. Thanks for watching.

Peace,

Pete

[Bhobbs1985]

Nice! Ive been waitin for another song that I liked as much as, "I dont wanna die". This has done it.

[smokewilliams]

Wow, I am glad you liked this one that much.

Peace,

Pete

[Alishamoly]

I'm off 2 play poker Pete give me a call in Old Nova Scotia!

[smokewilliams]

Enjoy your poker.

Peace,

Pete

[Alishamoly]

Hey Pete is your surname Irish or Scottish? I like your music but...... It could improve and I could help, but Montreal or Vancoover i aint, I'm a Scottish producer n i like it! However I can't advise you on this platform, it's far to public! Contact me at 12 n 1 jock time on 44 01475 718232

[smokewilliams]

Thanks for the offer! There is no way my wife will let me call a youTuber in Scotland. My last name is Irish. There is a county Monaghan. I know I have to improve, thanks for the input. You could send me a message and let me know what you think, that isn't private.

Peace,

Pete

[PetrucciFever]

Hey Pete! Finally had some time to give it some listens! This is really different to your two Nr.1 songs;) But I really like the structure and the lyrics!! There are some disadvantages: The guitar is out of tune, the noise in the background is a bit annoying and the audio quality of this one is not as good as on your last vids. You know me: constructive criticism. Despite that, you´re awesome and I´m one of your biggest fans!! Cheerz, Julian

[smokewilliams]

Thanks Julian. I agree with all you said. I was fighting this song and my guitar was strung incorrectly. Will be better next time, first try. Thanks for all you support man, and I see you are doing well too.

Peace dude,

Pete

[coldshotjason]

music sounds like another song already out there cant think of the name at the moment other than that sounds great gotta bitch id like to sing that 2

[smokewilliams]

Thanks Jason. I would love to know the song you are thinking of.

Peace,

Pete

[chudnovsky]

Hey Pete,

Great to see the tune on video and to read the lyrics.. keep em coming bro!!:)

Cheers,

Alex

[smokewilliams]

Hey Alex! You are finally able to post a comment to my vid. It seems like it has been a while since that happened. I think some maintenance they did recently fixed some of the issues. Thanks for checking it out man.

Peace bro,

Pete

[gillies1991]

Good song once again, but unnecessary swearing.

[smokewilliams]

Thanks for checking it out. Sorry about the cursing. Those are the words that I came up with so I don't feel they are unnecessary.

Peace,

Pete

[Drecoolio]

Cool dude

Electric sounds a bit messy

but i like it

Dre

[smokewilliams]

Thanks bro.

Love you man,

Peace,

Pete

[Billduffy]

really cool electric sounds wierd but wierd isnt neccesarily bad keep it up man!

[smokewilliams]

Thanks Bill.  Yes, it does sound a little bad.

Thanks man,

Peace,

Pete

[yogal17]

Trippy sounds from the electric- I actually dig it. This is a pretty darn good recording.

[smokewilliams]

Thanks! It is better than the camera alone can do.

Peace,

Pete

[Anjafa]

deep song man, I liked it. I'm gonna have to try bouncin the vocal and sync'n it to the vid..were really pushin the envelope here with technology..:)

[smokewilliams]

Thanks Andrew. It is amazing what we can do. You have all the gear.

Peace,

Pete

[damagon50]

Sweet smokey

[smokewilliams]

Thanks so much! I see you have favorited it. I am glad you enjoy it.

Peace,

Pete

[damagon50]

My bro, I soooo relate to this song its scaring. I would love to play it to my ex girlfriend!!! Wouldn't mind an accoustic version

[smokewilliams]

Wow, that is interesting, but I think most people can relate to something like that. I do play it acoustically. If I get enough of a response I would do another version.

Peace,

Pete

[chunjae23]

pretty good, the electric sounds kind of bad though!

[smokewilliams]

Yeah, I know. I think it might be off a little, or just not tuned the same as my acoustic. Thanks.

Peace,

Pete

[TDiddy1973]

Lame

[smokewilliams]

Thanks!

[natasrecords]

Hey man, Halifax, great town, I am originally from Saskatchewan, I was in Halifax with the Stones last year at the Commons, great show and great people. Thanks again, love the video.

[smokewilliams]

Wow, awesome Zack. Thanks for the nice words. I am from Corner Brook, NFLD actually. But this is where I call home now.

Peace,

Pete

[austindp2343]

i really like this song man

really easy to relate with with

great lyrics they really fit it well

[smokewilliams]

Thanks Austin. I am glad you like it. I think most of us can relate to a betrayal. Take care.

Peace,

Pete

[natasrecords]

Hey man, fantastic, I love the basement vibe you got going on there, great vibes down there for sure. Where are you recording from? This song is really great man, thanks for the heads up and for letting us know about the new song and video!

[smokewilliams]

Thanks so much for saying that. Love to hear it. The basement is where I go so I don't bother my wife. Are you wondering where I am located? Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada. I really appreciate your taking the time to watch and tell me what you think. A great feeling.

Peace,

Pete

[smouge]

good stuff lad ,the video you see on my site is me Steve whelan i hope you like it i have a album out out to , here's hoping someone likes it , all the best my man let me no what you think ,,,,,,Steve

[smokewilliams]

Thanks for watching Steve.

Peace,

Pete

[seeksthetruth7]

sweet tune east coast..you rock dude.

[smokewilliams]

Thought I replied. Thanks Central.

Peace,

Pete

[seeksthetruth7]

My hometown is thunderbay but I am in B.C. You can call me West Coast.

[smokewilliams]

Ah, ok. Sounds good man. Later West Coast.

Peace,

Pete

[hurtstone]

Pete, I love this version. Electric was the way to go on this song. I have to say a am a real subscriber and not a fake. Can't wait for the new one!

[smokewilliams]

Thanks man. The newest one is always the best for me. Thanks for listening.

Peace dude,

Pete

[RjThisper]

This is a good enough song to get by with a cleaner sound, dude. I felt a little imposed on by the overdrive; Enjoyed the contrasting tempos. Because of the first line, I wondered if the "we've" in the last verse was a "we all" or a more personal "you and I" kind of "we"....

[smokewilliams]

Hey Ryan. I think the mixing of the guitars sucks and I didn't work hard enough on it. I have been trying to get this song out for a few weeks, and I wasn't making any progress, so I gave up with what I had.

The second we've is you and I kind of we. This is a song about being upset with someone's betrayal.

Peace,

Pete

[RjThisper]

Thanks for your reply! My first impression was the Personal Betrayal theme...but then someone suggested a political undertone. And don't be so hard on yourself - just look at some of MY crap!

[smokewilliams]

Ryan, thank you for replying to my reply. I am always hard on myself. See, now you are doing it too.

Peace,

Pete

[BeforeMonday]

Google for this for starters: "BasicMixingMethod.html". It ain't easy. One thing is that you definitely have to get that buzzing noise out of there for sure. Plus YouTube is always tough since they don't play music in stereo. Don't give up on it, man.

[smokewilliams]

Thanks for saying that. This was just my first try, so I am sure I will get better at it.

Peace,

Pete

[OMGitsAlix]

i love your guitar. great song! i love it! you really should make a cd. great work =]

alix

[smokewilliams]

Thanks Alix. I do love that guitar. My tunes usually fit the acoustic better, but I could plug this right in.

Peace,

Pete

[prattzila]

Great song

[smokewilliams]

Thanks man, those are good words to hear.

Peace,

Pete

[getmered]

Nice song again Pete, 5* from me. Chantelle xxx

[smokewilliams]

Thanks Chantelle. I am glad you liked it.

Peace,

Pete

[Drecoolio]

Two voices are good

[smokewilliams]

Sometimes there are three. Four guitars.

[ParadiseEarth1]

Kewl!!! :-)

[smokewilliams]

Thanks!

Peace,

Pete

[Drecoolio]

Killer tune Bro.

Drew

[smokewilliams]

Double submit?

[Drecoolio]

Killer tune bro.

Dre

[smokewilliams]

Thanks bro.

Peace and love,

Pete

[FanvanMel]

HI, thanks for sending this vid. Great.

Hope you get the honor for most discussed musician...(if thats all you want ;-)

[smokewilliams]

Thanks for saying that. That is not all I want, but seems to be all I can get.

Peace,

Pete

[DukeRightious]

Oh, yeah, Pete-baby! This is FINE! Great job!

Your friend,

Duke

[smokewilliams]

Wow Duke, thanks for that. It means a lot coming from one as talented as you. Take care man.

Peace,

Pete

[dreaminglad]

i like it rock on

[smokewilliams]

Thanks so much. I will continue to rock on.

Peace,

Pete

[totallytacoma]

very nice man..I liked it, more raw and edgy then the acoustic. Complex lyrics that can be read on many levels too! Keep up the good work!

[smokewilliams]

You are so deep man! Thanks for telling me what you think. Talk to you soon dude.

Peace,

Pete

[MissHolloway]

I sing with you :) beautiful song dude..

[smokewilliams]

Thanks Naomi. I am glad you like to sing along.

Peace,

Pete

[lordewan10]

hey!!! beautiful song!!! love the chorus maan, you're just awesome. another great song by a gifted man(:

from Singapore with love,m.sheep

[smokewilliams]

Thanks so much for saying that! You are far too kind.

Peace,

Pete