@shigamurenana We are but sadly our editor left for personal reasons so we have been learning to edit in a hope for the next episode to come out as well as the first one did. But I assure you we are working hard on the next episode.
im hoping to see more from you all a diamond in the rough but i can see potental in this keep up the work revise you script before you air and test some of your jokes ouit with you collages its would help out alot
Very good voicing, decent editing though the jump from the scene with Luffy and Koby in one room into another was awkward. But the pace could use some work and in all honesty I didn't laugh at anything. Punch things up, flanderize the characters more and take time to give them personality. Swearing loudly is not joke much less a funny one in of itself. And yeah... wasn't feel'n the butter thing. Maybe spend more time on the script in the future that'll probably help.
Special thanks to me? D'awww. The lip syncs were excellent and in general the editing was good. Watch the levels on the audio. They were all over the place (some stuff was way louder than others). The audience should never have to adjust their volume. Jokes fell flat, but I know you guys are good writers, so work real hard on the next one. Peace out, guys. :)
Not a bad start, but a few problems. First, you should keep some of the sound effects from the show, or at least add your own. Even with that lovely music montage, we should still be able to hear Luffy smashing through a ship full of pirates. Second, some of the jokes were kinda stale. The rubber joke for instance, but it definitely made me laugh and I'll keep looking for new episodes.
If you need more voice actors, I'm a decent one myself. Keep up the good work.
@DreadLycan WE do still use some of the show sound effects, but they are usually harder to find raw. Yes we should but for this instance it was really more about the music awkwardly fitting. Yes we have gottne comments about the jokes, and we are sorry, we are working on them. And every so often we will use a silly/stupid joke, they can't all be jewels.
Thank you for your comment and we don't need any VA's right now but if anything comes up we may take you up on that.
@Qupples That was done on purpose in effort to make sure the episode wouldn't be taken down. Didn't really work out. So yeah, might as well put them in anyway. Thanks for reminding us!
@mikkelishot We use Vegas, and we have new voice actors but remember this is our start we are just getting the hang of these voice, TeamFourStar wasn't made in a day.
@jeremycards I have to disagree I don't feel my writing is anywhere near TeamFourStar's writing style and by no measn did i attempt to emulate there style, we are both comedy styles so of course there will be similarities but I write for what I think is funny, and my sense of humor is twisted.
I understand your view point I am just telling you it's wrong.
I hope Luke isn't mad I was much kinder than I usually would have been. ^^
Whu...what just happened? What did I just see? Damnit, now I'll never be able to forget what I just saw. I must subscribe to find out what the hell happens next. O_O
forward to what you do with Zoro and Axe-hand Morgan... epecially Helmeppo. Glad to see someone has started one with effort and look forward to future episodes.
jokes. Maybe some inside jokes on the characters. Also it felt somewhat awkward not hearing any sound effects at times (steps punches stuff like that). Lastly I think it would be best if just left it in 4:3 rather than just letterboxing it.
The Good.
Great video editing and matching the lip flap was spot on. The intro was well put together. Luffy voice is a good choice as well a Coby's.
So far it looks like you're onto a decent start.... sorry if my comments sounded harsh.... I'm looking
Shows good promise and seems to have actual effort put into unlike other abridge series.
Start with the bad
I think the voice acting needs a little more effort put into it it seemed that the only ones that actually tried were Sabien and Mukluk The Avenger when doing Luffy and Coby (not "K"oby you guys have a typo in the credits lol). Also I think you need a more variety of voices is seemed too noticeable as a lot sounded alike. I also think you need more jokes.. maybe some 4kids treatment
Where to start.... Not a bad editing job fellas, but I saw that there was some SFX a little out of place, and I felt that the humor was too predictable and that you were trying too hard hard to be funny, although I did laugh at the part where Koby dropped his balls! And I realize this is a parody but it wouldn't hurt to get more actors for the extras, it kinda ruined it for me when I could tell like 7 people were voiced by the same guy, (cont....)
Ok, first the bad news: you need to work on the sound of the music and the sound of the voice acting. I think I missed a couple of jokes because of the sound problems. However, I really liked the jokes I did hear, and I think that this will soon be a very successful Abridged series. Reach me on skype if you guys need help choosing music, the fight song was... bleh.
This showed promise. Work on the audio levels and don't bother trying to make it in widescreen, and you'll have yourself a pretty decent One Piece Abridged!
I'm on that side of youtube again...
Where pirates are epic and ninjas are plain bad-ass and above all else, female pirate have boobs.
I.. I... I.. ♥ you boobies! Erm... I mean I.. I... I... ♥ want more deeply. ~.-
yimi167 1 month ago
I personally enjoyed this about 1000 more times than i enjoyed None piece. xP
ScatManJudd 2 months ago in playlist More videos from TeamNakama
personally i like it. a few more effects could make this awesome. like some hit sounds. and a bit more comedy and we got something awesome.
deadlyjojo 4 months ago in playlist More videos from TeamNakama
Walking on Sunshine... nice touch :D
GuzTheChocolateMoose 6 months ago
not funny sorry none piece much more funnier than this
SouLWarfare42 6 months ago
lack of card games on motorcycles
suyangsong 7 months ago
Gotta say, it wasn't exactly that good. But I'll hope you guys get better as you go along.
feildmaster 7 months ago
Why don't they make more of these? I hate when good series never continue :(
shigamurenana 7 months ago 2
@shigamurenana We are but sadly our editor left for personal reasons so we have been learning to edit in a hope for the next episode to come out as well as the first one did. But I assure you we are working hard on the next episode.
But thank you for your support and concern!
TeamNakama 7 months ago 4
This is so good :DDDDD I can't tell if you guys are .. like.. beginners or something, but if so: very well done!
BananerLaner 7 months ago
I lol'd at the failblog.org
1337sir 7 months ago
im hoping to see more from you all a diamond in the rough but i can see potental in this keep up the work revise you script before you air and test some of your jokes ouit with you collages its would help out alot
Solius1986 7 months ago
none peice better... dont sue me just cause i said that
lemonandlimewithsalt 7 months ago
@lemonandlimewithsalt None Pice Was Sadly Taken Down By Jerktube
It Will take Awhile For any new episodes to come out
AoiPanteraEspada44 7 months ago
Kinda lame, left after about 1 min good try tho
KillaSmit20789 8 months ago
could use a bit more writing but all in all it was funny and entertaining
theforgottenking16 8 months ago
good theme dont know if its from the real show or not.
vaughnd222 8 months ago
@vaughnd222 Our current theme is actually from the One Piece movie 10 Strong world
TeamNakama 8 months ago
i love how the luffy guy said fuck you xD perfect abridged voice for him!
RodGamer35 9 months ago
luffy sound like goku to me :S
greader01 9 months ago
uraby210 makes fun of you guys often, just saying! :D
Jspsychuout 9 months ago
quick question r you gonna make another episode?
Jspsychuout 10 months ago
Luffy*to Alvida*: I am rubber, you are glue, now I must bid you adieu!
HeavyMetalBeliever 10 months ago
Some of the voices weren't very good and the script REALLY needs some work. But overall.... not bad.
Ondrix 10 months ago
Very good voicing, decent editing though the jump from the scene with Luffy and Koby in one room into another was awkward. But the pace could use some work and in all honesty I didn't laugh at anything. Punch things up, flanderize the characters more and take time to give them personality. Swearing loudly is not joke much less a funny one in of itself. And yeah... wasn't feel'n the butter thing. Maybe spend more time on the script in the future that'll probably help.
SketchDub 10 months ago
" i wanna be a marine"
"Well i'm gonna be king of the pirates so FUCK YOU!!!"
hahahahahahahaha XD
mocaboybestunnin 10 months ago
6:32 - Koby grew some balls
XD
Douloug 10 months ago
i love song that starts at 00.25 minutes
OanimePoB99 11 months ago
Love the music and the sound effects, needs a little help with the script, but otherwise it was epic.
16demondog 11 months ago
are these the guys who did dbz abrideged? did they make a one piece?
foxhound1911 11 months ago
were the last few seconds a reference to something?
rpgricky 1 year ago
.....what is up with the butter?.......OO why is it so Special?
VideoAqua1 1 year ago
butter is bad for her
thenarutoguy100 1 year ago
Koby grew some balls!
Budogenkai 1 year ago
Yeah this is by far the best one piece abridge i have seen.
darkguru88 1 year ago
@darkguru88 You obviously never saw mine, then.
Uraby210Incorporated 1 year ago
This is surprisingly well done.
FatFilms89 1 year ago
You guys do way better dubbing then 4kids. Dang it thats no really a compliment..
Lol nice abridge!
Kike832 1 year ago
Nice abridge btw I wonder how does luffy sounds in english
gokk777 1 year ago
@gokk777 HORRIBLE! If you don't believe me just look for one of the 4kids dubs.
FatFilms89 1 year ago
@gokk777 Like a boy. *points to FUNimation's version*
Xyrsk 1 year ago
i love how everyon thinks they are reall critics haha
DigiPuddle13 1 year ago
lmao!!!! This is great this totally made my day!!!
GothicsChocolate 1 year ago
Special thanks to me? D'awww. The lip syncs were excellent and in general the editing was good. Watch the levels on the audio. They were all over the place (some stuff was way louder than others). The audience should never have to adjust their volume. Jokes fell flat, but I know you guys are good writers, so work real hard on the next one. Peace out, guys. :)
AirrestVA 1 year ago
Not a bad start, but a few problems. First, you should keep some of the sound effects from the show, or at least add your own. Even with that lovely music montage, we should still be able to hear Luffy smashing through a ship full of pirates. Second, some of the jokes were kinda stale. The rubber joke for instance, but it definitely made me laugh and I'll keep looking for new episodes.
If you need more voice actors, I'm a decent one myself. Keep up the good work.
DreadLycan 1 year ago
@DreadLycan WE do still use some of the show sound effects, but they are usually harder to find raw. Yes we should but for this instance it was really more about the music awkwardly fitting. Yes we have gottne comments about the jokes, and we are sorry, we are working on them. And every so often we will use a silly/stupid joke, they can't all be jewels.
Thank you for your comment and we don't need any VA's right now but if anything comes up we may take you up on that.
TeamNakama 1 year ago
failblog.arg
mattrock2233 1 year ago
One thing. Change the tags. Many ppl will look or good one piece abridged series but none of the tags say "one piece" which isn't good.
Qupples 1 year ago
@Qupples That was done on purpose in effort to make sure the episode wouldn't be taken down. Didn't really work out. So yeah, might as well put them in anyway. Thanks for reminding us!
TeamNakama 1 year ago
ok, if u learn to use adobe well enough and get more voice actors then this will go from good to great
mikkelishot 1 year ago
@mikkelishot We use Vegas, and we have new voice actors but remember this is our start we are just getting the hang of these voice, TeamFourStar wasn't made in a day.
TeamNakama 1 year ago 3
@TeamNakama This is fun to watch. I hope to see more from you guys soon. All of you are doing well so far.
Mr111989 1 year ago
@TeamNakama littlekuriboh was lol
redeyedtiger 1 year ago
@TeamNakama yes it was.
Uraby210Incorporated 1 year ago
lol this is prettey good
Get me some water
Get it yourself
Im tied to a fucking ~cross
pichu216 1 year ago
i think this just tries too hard to be like dragon ball z abridged =/
jeremycards 1 year ago
@jeremycards I have to disagree I don't feel my writing is anywhere near TeamFourStar's writing style and by no measn did i attempt to emulate there style, we are both comedy styles so of course there will be similarities but I write for what I think is funny, and my sense of humor is twisted.
I understand your view point I am just telling you it's wrong.
I hope Luke isn't mad I was much kinder than I usually would have been. ^^
Zombifaction 1 year ago
i dont know y but that song fit in. y?
cardtrader15 1 year ago
i want to be a marine well im gonna be kng of the pirates so fuck you
Gshady50 1 year ago
Whu...what just happened? What did I just see? Damnit, now I'll never be able to forget what I just saw. I must subscribe to find out what the hell happens next. O_O
fredthefrowner 1 year ago
that was very well made! 5 stars!
vivaforether 1 year ago
this'll be good- you just need to get some more free sound effects and free backround music so it's like Team4Star's stuff
can't wait for chopper- that should be hilarious
1x93cm 1 year ago
forward to what you do with Zoro and Axe-hand Morgan... epecially Helmeppo. Glad to see someone has started one with effort and look forward to future episodes.
MasamuneChad 1 year ago
jokes. Maybe some inside jokes on the characters. Also it felt somewhat awkward not hearing any sound effects at times (steps punches stuff like that). Lastly I think it would be best if just left it in 4:3 rather than just letterboxing it.
The Good.
Great video editing and matching the lip flap was spot on. The intro was well put together. Luffy voice is a good choice as well a Coby's.
So far it looks like you're onto a decent start.... sorry if my comments sounded harsh.... I'm looking
MasamuneChad 1 year ago
Shows good promise and seems to have actual effort put into unlike other abridge series.
Start with the bad
I think the voice acting needs a little more effort put into it it seemed that the only ones that actually tried were Sabien and Mukluk The Avenger when doing Luffy and Coby (not "K"oby you guys have a typo in the credits lol). Also I think you need a more variety of voices is seemed too noticeable as a lot sounded alike. I also think you need more jokes.. maybe some 4kids treatment
MasamuneChad 1 year ago
get meh my butta!
Alvida was awesome.
dachamp21 1 year ago
Here's hoping the random shoutout from RRF helped with views and subs a little.
DoctorChibi740 1 year ago
This is the best One Piece Abridged I have ever seen!
I can't wait for more!
Zombifaction 1 year ago
but if you can't find more actors then try to figure a way around not using so many of the extra characters.
Hope this Helps!
BreakTheAge227 1 year ago
Where to start.... Not a bad editing job fellas, but I saw that there was some SFX a little out of place, and I felt that the humor was too predictable and that you were trying too hard hard to be funny, although I did laugh at the part where Koby dropped his balls! And I realize this is a parody but it wouldn't hurt to get more actors for the extras, it kinda ruined it for me when I could tell like 7 people were voiced by the same guy, (cont....)
BreakTheAge227 1 year ago
lol "koby grew some BALLS!" awesome, this definitely shows some promise :)
McSmijens1 1 year ago
Ok, first the bad news: you need to work on the sound of the music and the sound of the voice acting. I think I missed a couple of jokes because of the sound problems. However, I really liked the jokes I did hear, and I think that this will soon be a very successful Abridged series. Reach me on skype if you guys need help choosing music, the fight song was... bleh.
xarkunshadow919 1 year ago
most unfitting music EVER! and epic FF shout out thing,lol
RakuCSP 1 year ago
Huzzah! She lives! Great episode guys! I'm glad you kept Near-Sighted Larry xD
RhapsodyDusk 1 year ago
FINAL VERDICT:
This showed promise. Work on the audio levels and don't bother trying to make it in widescreen, and you'll have yourself a pretty decent One Piece Abridged!
Uraby210Productions 1 year ago
NOT-QUITE-SO-GOOD POINTS:
Opening narration too quiet, can't hear over music.
Music on opening far too loud.
Black bars on all sides very distracting, as are wooden bits. there's nothing wrong with regular 4:3 ratio, you know.
Opening unneccesarily long, all the credits were in the video description anyway.
Music in episode sometimes too quiet and sometimes too loud. In fact, general audio levels all over the place.
Frame-jump at 4:22.
Uraby210Productions 1 year ago
GOOD POINTS:
Opening narration was pretty funny.
Good choice of music for opening.
Impressive sound & picture quality.
Good lip-sync.
In-vision text jokes quite funny.
I liked the barrel jokes.
Uraby210Productions 1 year ago