Greetings Mr.Paese Hope this day finds you at Peace. Hope this night finds you with the ones you love. If not I hope you . cope. and your fate is not as those who hate. Leave them behind and you will find peace of mind.
Even one year later, this one stills my favorite of all your songs. "Awake", this song is "talking" to me. I'II told you a secret: I wish I had written a song like that.
Hmm, I may have to diagree with one of these comments.. It think One guitar, and your voice is quite enough. I enjoy the feeling and soul you put into your songs.
"get sick but finally have an in tune soul" what a great line. How true.
Hmm, I may have to diagree with one of these comments.. It think One guitar, and your voice is quite enough. I enjoy the feeling and soul you put into your songs.
"get sick but finally have an in tune soul" what a great line. How true.
nice one again. but try adding a little atmospherics to it. it might be better. i know u composed this in a stripped-down simple form so that the gravity falls on your (interesting) lyrics... but a little atmospherics on the tune... say, a violin or a second guitar... might help spice things up a bit, while still keeping the attention on the lyrics. sorry for all the technical stuff but i'm a musician too and i'm pretty much a technical guru. :-)
Hey, man. beautiful. to be old, to finally have an in tune soul? brilliant. I've often wondered. but not me, this is you. I really like your songs, man. they're great. No matter where you are in life, i hope it gives you peace in mind to know that you've touched people. That's something to remember.
I also like led zeppelin and bob dylan and neil young and the beatles, my favorite song is "that's the way" (zeppelin). I'm really curious, do you like any of those?
The lyrics are terrifying. It makes you appreciate how fortunate you are just to be able to talk & communicate. Sounds like a paraplegic to me. To be a living mind trapped in a paralyzed body must be like being the worst prison on the face of the Earth--your own body.
wow...you have some really insightful..and thought provoking melody here...sounds like LG disease..unfortunately it cannot be fixed..not yet anyway.....sure is realilty...in its rarest form.......your songs just keep getting better and better....a fan ....katlin
I like!!! Very poignant - not a "polished" performance, but the feelings really come through, and the words and the meaning are crystal - clear. Love that line: "He's a Truth Seeker, cut the Truth let him down."
Osvaldo, thanks for inviting me to listen to your songs.
Awake, is an interesting song and has good potential. One suggestion; alternate your musical phrasing, especially in the last verse. You know, upper register and lower. This would make it more interesting and bring out the emotional value of the song. God Bless. Ray
Okay sooo you have a great voice i think that i'll consider buying the cd maybe i'm not sure yet but your really talented have you tried going onto american idol or something!
Just your raw and honest guitar playing sometimes gives me the goosebumps. But your vocal tone and use of voice and breathing has certainly become even better? Are you self trained these days or do you study any musical stuff officially?
Haven't even finished listening to this song and I think it is great..I put it on my face book and I'll share it with others! How do you think of these good lyrics...I wish I something good would come out me,,I admit it I feel envy just in case we ever meet and you sense I feel envy or jealousy please know it is positive.! I hope you received some of the videos i've shared Wish you the best and keep up the good honest music and expression!
Great song, but looks like your missing some criticism, I'll fix that. Oh and sorry for responding so late to your email, and you will understand that I'll post that criticism here, and now, for everyone else to read.
2:14 - "But he still better company than most everyone else", Sounds a bit compact. I believe if you take out "most"; - "But he's still better company than everyone else", this will be a hit (at least in youtube).
New original song from Oz, it is a good day :o) I think it is one of your very best too. Every line shook me, especially "is this what its like to be old? Get sick but finally have an in tune soul?" Great work, Oz. -Ron
This song breaks my heart. I get such a clear picture of what you are saying here and the helplessness we feel when someone we love is faced with something this enormous. You make me feel so much when I listen to you sing and play this song, Os. The tenderness that is deep inside your heart is ever so present in this song.
Im not being offensive or anything but why do most of your songs have to do with time?
WhoAr3You 1 year ago
Greetings Mr.Paese Hope this day finds you at Peace. Hope this night finds you with the ones you love. If not I hope you . cope. and your fate is not as those who hate. Leave them behind and you will find peace of mind.
oldasmold 1 year ago
Love it man love it. THank you!
AbsintheColour 1 year ago
Even one year later, this one stills my favorite of all your songs. "Awake", this song is "talking" to me. I'II told you a secret: I wish I had written a song like that.
pierrelacroix 1 year ago
This is good. I listen to it in my headphones and play drums along to it every so often.
AveryDanger 1 year ago
I love your lyrics and think you have a huge new fan
Hardtack444 1 year ago
Do you ever listen to Wilco ?
trollfinger 1 year ago
Good pitty soundqualitiy very good song good voice thanks
renekamakura 1 year ago
Hmm, I may have to diagree with one of these comments.. It think One guitar, and your voice is quite enough. I enjoy the feeling and soul you put into your songs.
"get sick but finally have an in tune soul" what a great line. How true.
Thanks sir, enjoyed it much.
carrkelli 1 year ago
Hmm, I may have to diagree with one of these comments.. It think One guitar, and your voice is quite enough. I enjoy the feeling and soul you put into your songs.
"get sick but finally have an in tune soul" what a great line. How true.
Thanks sir, enjoyed it much.
carrkelli 1 year ago
nice one again. but try adding a little atmospherics to it. it might be better. i know u composed this in a stripped-down simple form so that the gravity falls on your (interesting) lyrics... but a little atmospherics on the tune... say, a violin or a second guitar... might help spice things up a bit, while still keeping the attention on the lyrics. sorry for all the technical stuff but i'm a musician too and i'm pretty much a technical guru. :-)
5oulPower 1 year ago
Quite Dylanesque in performance, in delivery and composing style but still uniquely individual.
penrhyndeundraeth 1 year ago
good song dude
martinyeomans8 1 year ago
like your style in this song
ShowmetheBlues 1 year ago
Hey i really like the lyrics of this song, i guess in time you'll do better stuff but for now this is pretty damn good. Where can i get your album?
dmarkp29 1 year ago
nice music you should keep your mustache shaved man looks better that way.
afterthefact15 1 year ago
this is sweet
jefftheparty 1 year ago
yep I think so :)
great guitar part btw
schokobaer90 1 year ago
That is a DAMN-GOOD performance! I think you might have a new fan! Are these songs all available on your album?
PokrPro21 1 year ago
most of them are.
OsvaldoPaese 1 year ago
Very cool, I can feel you Osvaldo. Keep them coming.Peace.
tripfunkmonster 1 year ago
very nice
bujintao1 2 years ago
I truly enjoy your music.
You are very talented and are a wonderful performer.
myfutureisnow 2 years ago
very great
KarmaKidz100 2 years ago
Hey, man. beautiful. to be old, to finally have an in tune soul? brilliant. I've often wondered. but not me, this is you. I really like your songs, man. they're great. No matter where you are in life, i hope it gives you peace in mind to know that you've touched people. That's something to remember.
I also like led zeppelin and bob dylan and neil young and the beatles, my favorite song is "that's the way" (zeppelin). I'm really curious, do you like any of those?
bray12do 2 years ago
mello shit mate awesome
TheUnDeRGRouNDHoBo 2 years ago
it's reminds me a bit of Syd Barett
exellent piece and you're an exellent guitarist too
grungeera 2 years ago
Diggin' this. Your vocal style reminds me a little bit of some Pink Floyd.
BestCoolGuy22 2 years ago
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BestCoolGuy22 2 years ago
Wonderful soooo beautiful i enjoy it and love it keep going!!!
pritygirl79 2 years ago
Much talent & beauty here...I know almost all art comes from within, but this felt very deep (and not that shallow-deep of mass philosophy 8D)
DNAdamsEdict 2 years ago
Wow, I am impressed. This is really good, great lyrics and performance! *****
Favour
barbettemroe 2 years ago
shouldn't make comparisons do you like Bob Dylan ma man ?
ukandoittowithkandoo 2 years ago
Great video/Song 5 stars for you Great Job! Thank You Osvaldo for the Great share, pam.
aspire62 2 years ago
Great job, Osvaldo, you have something of the Bob Dylan about you. Loved the guitar for the ending :] 5*****
stufish4040 2 years ago
very nice ....!!! thanks for sending to me ...elsmarie
warrenst1955 2 years ago
Very lovely song. A lot emotion and talent put into this. Keep it up, man!
azcitizenbrain 2 years ago
a 5*and PL :]
allertonoff2 2 years ago
Very beautiful song...so is your voice, guitar playing, and your humanity.
blaziermissy 2 years ago
Nice song man !!
gogoelastic 2 years ago
Good stuff bro.
canadianbacon007 2 years ago
Hi Osvald I listened to Awake by you and liked it very much especialy the guitar playing.
Thankyou for posting.
iadore70s 2 years ago
Very moving song, atmosphere and singing... And the excellent guitar part from 2'50 on is like "the cherry on the cake" like we say in France!! ;)
p0nette 2 years ago
great feeling emoted here....
thanks
catgumart 2 years ago
very nice...awesome vocal
C00ZZY 2 years ago
lovley!!
rimind1 2 years ago
That's pretty cool Osvaldo, keep up the good work :o)
Eagleray99 2 years ago
Your vocal style seems to be evolving. Great song.
RadialSkid 2 years ago
Beautiful song man!
DrGoreHound 2 years ago
Cool composition - awesome work. Definitely 5/5.
MusicDoLove 2 years ago
The lyrics are terrifying. It makes you appreciate how fortunate you are just to be able to talk & communicate. Sounds like a paraplegic to me. To be a living mind trapped in a paralyzed body must be like being the worst prison on the face of the Earth--your own body.
RandolfeWicker 2 years ago
Very nice, very nice! 5/5!!! You're a star in the making!
henry46619 2 years ago
I like it man, tells a story. Nice job.
Circusmnkee 2 years ago
Who is "him"?
metalridley388 2 years ago
yea man im likeing it. real good. peace
JOHNZIM1 2 years ago
wow...you have some really insightful..and thought provoking melody here...sounds like LG disease..unfortunately it cannot be fixed..not yet anyway.....sure is realilty...in its rarest form.......your songs just keep getting better and better....a fan ....katlin
KATLINRIMER08 2 years ago
hey that was a very pretty song, thanks for sharing it
WonderfullyAweful 2 years ago
Great lyrics my friend, love this one.
Enjoy your summer too and keep writing beautiful stuff.
Greetings from The Netherlands,
Jacques
jacquesmees 2 years ago
of all the fancy videos before the simple one is worth much more. 5 stars
CatFlashBlue 2 years ago
Osvaldo,
Thank you for inviting me to listen to your music..........Are you talking about anyone in particular in your song here?
loveroftruth7 2 years ago
I like!!! Very poignant - not a "polished" performance, but the feelings really come through, and the words and the meaning are crystal - clear. Love that line: "He's a Truth Seeker, cut the Truth let him down."
HolyMotherofGrid 2 years ago
good job
HonneybunnyFratz 2 years ago
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Danman917 2 years ago
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Danman917 2 years ago
well done mate
knappydanny 2 years ago
Good Tune, words make you think, Very good . Thanks for posting.
teendude16 2 years ago
Osvaldo, thanks for inviting me to listen to your songs.
Awake, is an interesting song and has good potential. One suggestion; alternate your musical phrasing, especially in the last verse. You know, upper register and lower. This would make it more interesting and bring out the emotional value of the song. God Bless. Ray
RnDEntertainment 2 years ago
This song is really nice!!
taralome 2 years ago
omg this is so moving my friend.I have seen this before ...thought i commented...sorry if it didnt go through ...you r amazing ..xxxx
alexandraxxxxxx 2 years ago
Okay sooo you have a great voice i think that i'll consider buying the cd maybe i'm not sure yet but your really talented have you tried going onto american idol or something!
Goteamsunshine 2 years ago
You are a very talented songwriter my friend *****
Rocket
Ottawarocket 2 years ago
I've always dug your music!
Just your raw and honest guitar playing sometimes gives me the goosebumps. But your vocal tone and use of voice and breathing has certainly become even better? Are you self trained these days or do you study any musical stuff officially?
Peace! :)
PolarBeamz 2 years ago
Oh... this is such a good song. You found very good words for this theme.
All the best for you!
Anette
TanteA 2 years ago
subtley subversive, soulful :] 5*
allertonoff2 2 years ago
Very good song, love your lyrics.
DeanMeredithMusic 2 years ago
Another great one, my friend! :)
jimmysly8 2 years ago
Nice song.. :) You're very talented.
5 stars.
ACOFan19 2 years ago
Beautiful, Osvaldo. Reminds me of visiting my grandma long ago. Still better company than most everyone else.
barbh1 2 years ago
I enjoyed!! 5 ++ I will twitter!
ladyblue614 2 years ago
Haven't even finished listening to this song and I think it is great..I put it on my face book and I'll share it with others! How do you think of these good lyrics...I wish I something good would come out me,,I admit it I feel envy just in case we ever meet and you sense I feel envy or jealousy please know it is positive.! I hope you received some of the videos i've shared Wish you the best and keep up the good honest music and expression!
catgumart 2 years ago
Some very good lines in here, Osvaldo! I really lie this one a lot!
~NAncy
nllleonard 2 years ago
Its a real great song Oz. Its easy to get lost in the lyrics (in a good way)
5*
tayejay18 2 years ago
Great song, but looks like your missing some criticism, I'll fix that. Oh and sorry for responding so late to your email, and you will understand that I'll post that criticism here, and now, for everyone else to read.
2:14 - "But he still better company than most everyone else", Sounds a bit compact. I believe if you take out "most"; - "But he's still better company than everyone else", this will be a hit (at least in youtube).
Or you can take out "But" but one has to go.
Great job.
notrandom2 2 years ago
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notrandom2 2 years ago
great song, man...couldn't be any better
bangaroodong 2 years ago
Soulful and melancholy. Five stars.
RadialSkid 2 years ago
one word can describe your music and lyrics...REAL. good stuff brother
bermizer 2 years ago
New original song from Oz, it is a good day :o) I think it is one of your very best too. Every line shook me, especially "is this what its like to be old? Get sick but finally have an in tune soul?" Great work, Oz. -Ron
rhopen 2 years ago
Great song.
sinawava42 2 years ago
Oh wow this is you best one yet! You just keep getting better and better! I think you are an old soul in a young body. I really do.
Peace, Faith
bigfaith 2 years ago
Great stuff. Proves one doesn't have to scream to get a message across. Very heartfelt.
janeczka 2 years ago
this is very Dylanesque. very atmospheric song and performance. great story.
Paul
psychospeakempire 2 years ago
"reality let 'em down."
Another song written by one of my favorite song writers! yeah..
jbearden 2 years ago
Nice Song!.*****!.Thanks For Share!.Tadek59!.
mariuszevo 2 years ago
nice. good song! ♩ ♪♫ ♩ ♪♫ ♬ .
JohnnyTrotz 2 years ago
really soulful keep them coming more peace
oiooioo000 2 years ago
Fantastic performance and great voice and excellent song !
Bravo !
5*****
Great job !
Tadek59 2 years ago
Beautiful. Sung with real feeling, guitar playing likewise. "Is this what its like to be old?
Get sick but finally have an in tune soul?'
5* fav
dashpoet 2 years ago
oh babe, its beautiful, the words are so powerful and the bluesy sound is fabulous.. i am in awe of your raw talent, i always am
funnychicky 2 years ago
Wonderful! I have tears in my eyes. So many good lines. in-tune soul, truth seeker/truth let him down got me the most Thank you.
twinnumber3 2 years ago
Fantastic stuff. True artist, my friend, and true artistry.
bennydreadful 2 years ago
Bless You, Osvaldo....I can hear the Osvaldo Blues....
I always admire your creative mind and the way you put your music and lyrics together...Beautiful sadness and i fixed you plenty of Stars*****
Mariekesone 2 years ago
This song breaks my heart. I get such a clear picture of what you are saying here and the helplessness we feel when someone we love is faced with something this enormous. You make me feel so much when I listen to you sing and play this song, Os. The tenderness that is deep inside your heart is ever so present in this song.
faved
playlisted
Robby
robby63 2 years ago