"Awake"
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From: OsvaldoPaese
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  • Im not being offensive or anything but why do most of your songs have to do with time?

  • Greetings Mr.Paese Hope this day finds you at Peace. Hope this night finds you with the ones you love. If not I hope you . cope. and your fate is not as those who hate. Leave them behind and you will find peace of mind.

  • Love it man love it. THank you!

  • Even one year later, this one stills my favorite of all your songs. "Awake", this song is "talking" to me. I'II told you a secret: I wish I had written a song like that.

  • This is good. I listen to it in my headphones and play drums along to it every so often.

  • I love your lyrics and think you have a huge new fan

  • Do you ever listen to Wilco ?

  • Good pitty soundqualitiy very good song good voice thanks

  • Hmm, I may have to diagree with one of these comments.. It think One guitar, and your voice is quite enough. I enjoy the feeling and soul you put into your songs.

    "get sick but finally have an in tune soul" what a great line. How true.

    Thanks sir, enjoyed it much.

  • Hmm, I may have to diagree with one of these comments.. It think One guitar, and your voice is quite enough. I enjoy the feeling and soul you put into your songs.

    "get sick but finally have an in tune soul" what a great line. How true.

    Thanks sir, enjoyed it much.

  • nice one again. but try adding a little atmospherics to it. it might be better. i know u composed this in a stripped-down simple form so that the gravity falls on your (interesting) lyrics... but a little atmospherics on the tune... say, a violin or a second guitar... might help spice things up a bit, while still keeping the attention on the lyrics. sorry for all the technical stuff but i'm a musician too and i'm pretty much a technical guru. :-)

  • Quite Dylanesque in performance, in delivery and composing style but still uniquely individual.

  • good song dude

  • like your style in this song

  • Hey i really like the lyrics of this song, i guess in time you'll do better stuff but for now this is pretty damn good. Where can i get your album?

  • nice music you should keep your mustache shaved man looks better that way.

  • this is sweet

  • yep I think so :)

    great guitar part btw

  • That is a DAMN-GOOD performance! I think you might have a new fan! Are these songs all available on your album?

  • most of them are.

  • Very cool, I can feel you Osvaldo. Keep them coming.Peace.

  • very nice

  • I truly enjoy your music.

    You are very talented and are a wonderful performer.

  • very great

  • Hey, man. beautiful. to be old, to finally have an in tune soul? brilliant. I've often wondered. but not me, this is you. I really like your songs, man. they're great. No matter where you are in life, i hope it gives you peace in mind to know that you've touched people. That's something to remember.

     I also like led zeppelin and bob dylan and neil young and the beatles, my favorite song is "that's the way" (zeppelin). I'm really curious, do you like any of those?

  • mello shit mate awesome

  • it's reminds me a bit of Syd Barett

    exellent piece and you're an exellent guitarist too

  • Diggin' this.  Your vocal style reminds me a little bit of some Pink Floyd.

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  • Wonderful soooo beautiful i enjoy it and love it keep going!!!

  • Much talent & beauty here...I know almost all art comes from within, but this felt very deep (and not that shallow-deep of mass philosophy 8D)

  • Wow, I am impressed. This is really good, great lyrics and performance! *****

    Favour

  • shouldn't make comparisons do you like Bob Dylan ma man ?

  • Great video/Song 5 stars for you Great Job! Thank You Osvaldo for the Great share, pam.

  • Great job, Osvaldo, you have something of the Bob Dylan about you. Loved the guitar for the ending :] 5*****

  • very nice ....!!! thanks for sending to me ...elsmarie

  • Very lovely song. A lot emotion and talent put into this. Keep it up, man!

  • a 5*and PL :]

  • Very beautiful song...so is your voice, guitar playing, and your humanity.

  • Nice song man !!

  • Good stuff bro.

  • Hi Osvald I listened to Awake by you and liked it very much especialy the guitar playing.

    Thankyou for posting.

  • Very moving song, atmosphere and singing... And the excellent guitar part from 2'50 on is like "the cherry on the cake" like we say in France!! ;)

  • great feeling emoted here....

    thanks

  • very nice...awesome vocal

  • lovley!!

  • That's pretty cool Osvaldo, keep up the good work :o)

  • Your vocal style seems to be evolving. Great song.

  • Beautiful song man!

  • Cool composition - awesome work. Definitely 5/5.

  • The lyrics are terrifying. It makes you appreciate how fortunate you are just to be able to talk & communicate. Sounds like a paraplegic to me. To be a living mind trapped in a paralyzed body must be like being the worst prison on the face of the Earth--your own body.

  • Very nice, very nice! 5/5!!! You're a star in the making!

  • I like it man, tells a story. Nice job.

  • Who is "him"?

  • yea man im likeing it. real good. peace

  • wow...you have some really insightful..and thought provoking melody here...sounds like LG disease..unfortunately it cannot be fixed..not yet anyway.....sure is realilty...in its rarest form.......your songs just keep getting better and better....a fan ....katlin

  • hey that was a very pretty song, thanks for sharing it

  • Great lyrics my friend, love this one.

    Enjoy your summer too and keep writing beautiful stuff.

    Greetings from The Netherlands,

    Jacques

  • of all the fancy videos before the simple one is worth much more. 5 stars

  • Osvaldo,

    Thank you for inviting me to listen to your music..........Are you talking about anyone in particular in your song here?

  • I like!!! Very poignant - not a "polished" performance, but the feelings really come through, and the words and the meaning are crystal - clear. Love that line: "He's a Truth Seeker, cut the Truth let him down."

  • good job

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  • well done mate

  • Good Tune, words make you think, Very good . Thanks for posting.

  • Osvaldo, thanks for inviting me to listen to your songs.

    Awake, is an interesting song and has good potential. One suggestion; alternate your musical phrasing, especially in the last verse. You know, upper register and lower. This would make it more interesting and bring out the emotional value of the song. God Bless. Ray

  • This song is really nice!!

  • omg this is so moving my friend.I have seen this before ...thought i commented...sorry if it didnt go through ...you r amazing ..xxxx

  • Okay sooo you have a great voice i think that i'll consider buying the cd maybe i'm not sure yet but your really talented have you tried going onto american idol or something!

  • You are a very talented songwriter my friend *****

    Rocket

  • I've always dug your music!

    Just your raw and honest guitar playing sometimes gives me the goosebumps. But your vocal tone and use of voice and breathing has certainly become even better? Are you self trained these days or do you study any musical stuff officially?

    Peace! :)

  • Oh... this is such a good song. You found very good words for this theme.

    All the best for you!

    Anette

  • subtley subversive, soulful :] 5*

  • Very good song, love your lyrics.

  • Another great one, my friend! :)

  • Nice song.. :) You're very talented.

    5 stars.

  • Beautiful, Osvaldo. Reminds me of visiting my grandma long ago. Still better company than most everyone else.

  • I enjoyed!! 5 ++ I will twitter!

  • Haven't even finished listening to this song and I think it is great..I put it on my face book and I'll share it with others! How do you think of these good lyrics...I wish I something good would come out me,,I admit it I feel envy just in case we ever meet and you sense I feel envy or jealousy please know it is positive.! I hope you received some of the videos i've shared Wish you the best and keep up the good honest music and expression!

  • Some very good lines in here, Osvaldo! I really lie this one a lot!

    ~NAncy

  • Its a real great song Oz. Its easy to get lost in the lyrics (in a good way)

    5*

  • Great song, but looks like your missing some criticism, I'll fix that. Oh and sorry for responding so late to your email, and you will understand that I'll post that criticism here, and now, for everyone else to read.

    2:14 - "But he still better company than most everyone else", Sounds a bit compact. I believe if you take out "most"; - "But he's still better company than everyone else", this will be a hit (at least in youtube).

    Or you can take out "But" but one has to go.

    Great job.

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  • great song, man...couldn't be any better

  • Soulful and melancholy. Five stars.

  • one word can describe your music and lyrics...REAL. good stuff brother

  • New original song from Oz, it is a good day :o) I think it is one of your very best too. Every line shook me, especially "is this what its like to be old? Get sick but finally have an in tune soul?" Great work, Oz. -Ron

  • Great song.

  • Oh wow this is you best one yet! You just keep getting better and better! I think you are an old soul in a young body. I really do.

    Peace, Faith

  • Great stuff. Proves one doesn't have to scream to get a message across. Very heartfelt.

  • this is very Dylanesque. very atmospheric song and performance. great story.

    Paul

  • "reality let 'em down."

    Another song written by one of my favorite song writers! yeah..

  • Nice Song!.*****!.Thanks For Share!.Tadek59!.

  • nice. good song! ♩ ♪♫ ♩ ♪♫ ♬ .

  • really soulful keep them coming more peace

  • Fantastic performance and great voice and excellent song !

    Bravo !

    5*****

    Great job !

  • Beautiful. Sung with real feeling, guitar playing likewise. "Is this what its like to be old?

    Get sick but finally have an in tune soul?'

    5* fav

  • oh babe, its beautiful, the words are so powerful and the bluesy sound is fabulous.. i am in awe of your raw talent, i always am

  • Wonderful! I have tears in my eyes. So many good lines. in-tune soul, truth seeker/truth let him down got me the most Thank you.

  • Fantastic stuff. True artist, my friend, and true artistry.

  • Bless You, Osvaldo....I can hear the Osvaldo Blues....

    I always admire your creative mind and the way you put your music and lyrics together...Beautiful sadness and i fixed you plenty of Stars*****

  • This song breaks my heart. I get such a clear picture of what you are saying here and the helplessness we feel when someone we love is faced with something this enormous. You make me feel so much when I listen to you sing and play this song, Os. The tenderness that is deep inside your heart is ever so present in this song.

    faved

    playlisted

    Robby

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