Modern Dance- "BREATHE"

[2bluetrue2]

Girl go ahead and do yo thing! Dance is a form of expression and thats what your doing :) Love the song :)

[MaryPlaysGuitar]

WTF ???...sorry but everything else would't make sense

[WADancing]

Moving to music is a wonderful way to express yourself. If you don't have anything nice to say, say nothing.

[cocute2000]

u make urself look bad

[ccoleactress]

i was starting to get down on myself for my dancing. I like how this completely sucks, but it brings us back to why we dance, to portray emotion, and she does that :)

[agwkq]

ich bin um eineiges jünger und tanz auch um einiges besser :P keine hobbys oder? :D

[memetci3]

*curtains fall*

[PnnaOla]

in that case... i used to be a dancer too :D

[MrsChipzy]

lol what the fuck???

[0369zephyr]

yer sooo hot



[neonunicorns1]

ummmmm ever consider dance lessons..... just saying

[gulf18]

wow !!

God help your boygriend

[bonnieiskewl2]

i lol'd,...but i think modern dance is kind of everyone's own interpretation. so to each its own.

[15legit15]

can you show more boobs :D?

[8228Erica]

ur a sorry excuse for a modern dancer u deserved to be punched in the arm

[BrainInSkull]

Hey this is fantastic Don't let anyone say otherwise.

[neonmangos1]

ur fat

[jahcolo]

@neonmangos1 very fat

[nahamee12]

wow

[molly8565]

ok the dance moves goes with the music but u need lessens 2 inprove them.

[Ryah456]

Oh goodness! Have you ever had dance lessons? What were you doing at 1:23? The part at 2:00 actually scared me. Why did you keep rubbing your face? HAHA, the hip thing totally made me laugh...

[tocekristine]

LOL!!!



[WynniePoohLove]

i guess if you want to learn how dance without expression then this is the video for ya! Nice try sweetheart but this is not good its looks like you were trying to hard. and just looks like a bunch of exercise moves bunched too one song.. sorry!

[EMJAY10210]

i really hope this was like a parody of something you watched... otherwise ur really insulting

[jacobmadonia]

You actually suck. I'm thinking either you took dance at a shity place when you were five, or you lied. Sorry, it's just so terrible it's funny.

[bambutt123]

wtf



[cindergirl900]

Did you dance with out the music at first & then add music to it ? b/c it jumps a lot and the movements don't go together, but some of your movements were "creative" for the small amount of space.

[PolishCutie93]

i thought it was beautiful!

[Nellyfair2]

The idea of the vid is good, and I am sure you have put alot of work in this. But for the next time: Try to make more dynamic and fluent moves.

Maybe you should have chosen a quicker song ?

:)

[TheSirena97]

°_°

[SacGrl92]

this is horrible; she can't even stretch out her leg in attitude 0:35

[MrsFakedSmile]

höh?! Why do you call it modern DANCE?

Sry...

[diadiadia123]

Who is the artist for this song?

[dancerchic33]

i'm sorry this is not good at all. take some more dance classes, please

[GraceOliviaFarnham]

every time i watch this it gets funnier.

[BR3NNAMAY1604]

Uhmm. Is it just me or is this sort of , uhh, bad?

[Kashmirr2327]

if someone kills themslf because of what another person said about them are amazingly stupid & sensitive & deserve everything they get. So the good ppl dont actually die, only the useless ones.

& yes what ARE you doing??? o_O

[kyliebuttersqurt]

dont ever tell anyone they should kill there self thats why some do and good plp die because of stupid comments other people make think before you say something------ fnf2000a3....

[jjjkkk330]

@fnf2000a3 your an ass hole

seriously, not cool.

[fnf2000a3]

@jjjkkk330 no dont get me wrong your really really pretty... but you should really really kill yourself too.

[TheJamzee]

this pose is wrong 0:8

[Sexpancake]

" I was high and wanted to make a video"

[lythia013]

used to be a dancer yeah right wht do you call that kind of dancin anyway

[TheKathrynVine]

@lythia013 I believe that would be the "I-think-im-a-hot-dancer-but-i­m-really-not" style of dancing, also known as the pseudo-deep-and-talented dance

[pierrehassan]

what aare yu doing?

[Geasse5425]

very sexy

[blakrag310]

hahahaha 0:03 to 0:05 TRAMP STAMP!!!!

[HelloImAileen]

THIS IS NOT MODERN DANCE..

THERE ARE NO MOVES FROM MODERN DANCE.

DON'T CALL IT MODERN.

[Koliada]

With this video you seem to say "I havent had sex for a long time"

[rachaeLPPACS]

@Koliada I KNOW!

[dancingbrdr7]

but the song is cool, it could have a pretty dance to it, if you like knew how to do so

[dancingbrdr7]

Where did you USE to dance because they forgot to teach you like EVERYTHING about dancing

[MsRedheaddancer]

Good thing I am really stoned right now because what in God's name did I just watch?! haha

[MegaGSUN]

This isn't dancing .

[WuTanGKiLLaZ]

wehn dose he girl get naked in dis vid i cant find it

[matijaeh09]

This, isn't modern dance. This is just you moving around trying to be elegant while wrapping yourself in sheets and curtains. I'm not sure why you posted this.

[EnaBug2913]

Uhhhmmm.... I'll save you the humility in what I WAS going to say. One thing that I must say though is you look like a pittiful, depressed little fuck.

[GraceOliviaFarnham]

is this a joke? bless you...dear god.

[kkkymy]

retarted



[BigAndTall666]

Cute, looks like your having fun too! :-)

[ThrashAbaddon]

STUPID BITCH!!!!!

[BigAndTall666]

@ThrashAbaddon IDIOT!

[ThrashAbaddon]

@BigAndTall666 i hope you will find someday huge happiness in your life and than find out it was for the wrong reasons

[zippyzee]

I want to scream "BOOOO" in your face.

[BigAndTall666]

@zippyzee Open wide cause i feel like taking a dump in your mouth!

[zippyzee]

@BigAndTall666 you want to take a dump in my mouth? what kind of sick fuck are you?

[MungJuice123]

@zippyzee this was funny..... but forreal, your a dick

[AsiianWonder]

ewwwww.

[LindaOoful]

it's like watching u doing weird gymnastics to awful music...

[VerrahJohanna]

you´re beautiful but i´m sorry, this was just not good!

[tovahtovahtovah]

used to be? why "used" ..... dancing is good for the soul, body and mind.... do continue.

[sylia103]

dancer as in exotic dancer??

[iswallowedmyfish]

this is awful...sorry

[Jonasbros4everxoxo]

wow! that is like.....not even close to being modern...even if it is supposed to be a spoof!

[boycrazie1234]

HAHA! I was crackin up the whole time!

[FucktheLovee]

What the title of this song?

[TheTexasGurl13]

What in the world! that does not even look like dancing!

[MaL0LAsdXD]

fail

[gumbionics]

You people disgust me. This girl decided to be brave and post her dancing on the internet without fear and if she had fear she got over it. What is cowardly and shameful is how you are all hating on her for no good reason except to not feel so insecure about your own dancing. 2 years on the web, and she hasn't taken it down because she enjoys her dancing just like you guys do, so why the hate? I dance. I am glad she does too despite you all.

[coramunroe]

@gumbionics Excellent comment =)

[starfish999]

Maybe in a strip club?

[MrHihihihihi234]

Okay soooooooo that's not really dancing. You have the music and you know how it makes you feel, but expressing it through dance is hard. Your movments don't make sense with the song.(although I don't think that made sense either so)

[kukis951753]

W T F?>

[RPBFF97]

No offense, but his isnt dancing...... it's just moving your body awkwardly...... but great editing.

[lolap0ok]

i'm srry sweet heart this isnt dancing ... however this is a great video.

[TipsBeGw3n]

YOU FUCKIN SUCK~BOOOOOoo~

WTF?WOULD POSSES YOU TO DO SOME DUMB SHIT LIKE THIS,

dont ever try this again.

you look idiotic.

hehe!but besides that thanks for the laughs!

[starstruk91]

Hey dont listen to the mean people out there as long as u can feel the music in ur heart your good =) dont let no one keep you down

[smalq]

@starstruk91

That's right!! do not listen them!!!

[lexxisnicole11]

are yu f-ing serious?? LMFBOO

Girl, 65,000+ ppl seen yu act a FOOL on YouTube

Take dis shit off !!

LMFBOOOO !!

[kmilo2006]

aprende a bailar ...... como teni perso para mostrar esa wea

[turquoise287]

bad

[Dux23SuSPecT]

make a crew girl not alone u are so stupid alone

[jaroszka212]

You are not stretched at all and you know nothing about dancing ;D. but you have good ideas, so take classes!!!

[nonchalantress]

Gobo, you keep on speaking! Don't listen to the naysayers!! It takes courage and confidence to create dance in any form. Piece had nice modulations in shape, mood, shading...life is short, life is good, go head on and LIVE Gobo, and keep dancing, the world needs more dancing and less hate~

[dhballerina86]

this is so fucking weird. i mean save it for yourself, seriously.

[2muchmamboproduction]

AWFUL!!

[MegPotPie]

lol this is fucking weird.

i think it's the random dramatic shots of your face...

and the whole playing in the curtains...?

otherwise.. it'd be a little less weird.

[MsPiscesMoon9]

It's all about expression and her title of this video clearly states that she felt INSPIRED to do some movements and I applaud her for sharing. For those being negative if you do not have nothing nice to say do not say anything at all. We have to stop tearing down others to make ourselves look better. Stop it.

[kmilo2006]

very very bad...sorry...

[cherrycreampie12]

umm iam srry but it sucks but i liked it when u held ur leg in the air but the rest just looked like u were having a stroke srry :(

[itshouldberaining]

was this supposed to be funny? i had a good laugh. take a class. please.

[Bluebell101774]

bad improvising....

[lambkabobs]

You had a great concept. Modern isn't just different, its different, but still takes lots of skill. Keep trying, and try not to make your entire routine on the floor. A little floor is good, but there was too much in this dance. Most dancers just have skill and no emotion. You have great emotions, just work on skill! You can be terrific if you set your mind to it!

[TheBeeeebs]

how can you compare this to Merce Cunningham? that is a joke surley! Cunningham was a genius and his technique is extreamly complex and he trained with Marthan Graham one of the pioneers of contempoary dance. this is a joke. this girl looks like a hussy.

[RaspberryRIP101]

Everyone commenting this claiming they are a dancer then calling this bad obviously has no idea what dance is. This is beautiful - even if you had no Dance background, dance doesn't mean you have to do a sequence of leaps, whip out some fouettes, triple pirouettes or even have any idea of technique. as she said, she wanted to do some movements to this song. Dance is about expressing yourself and your idea of dance may differ completely from someone elses. Check out some Merce Cunningham videos.

[cherrycreampie12]

@RaspberryRIP101 honey the title says modern dance with in my experience is not this i have takin classes and modern is a complex series of ballet and jazz moves and no iam not talkin jazz as jazz music but if shes insisting that the dance she was doing was modern as in this day and age then i agree tht the dance is her version of modern dancing now

[OMGITSMOBYDICK]

wow that was terrabou want to be a dance le. if you wanna be a dancer PRACTICE. IM 13 AND AM WAY BETTER THAN U

[libbeingcool]

ugh disgusting. that's not dance. what a disgrace

[wiiiebkEx3]

No feelings, no expression.. you must learn to feel the music and practice your skills. This is not really good

[meganlaurenforever]

wow you suck...i'm beter than that and i am 13...go back to danceng before you try anything else...and don't hurt yourselff

[Artedance]

What is this? omg! really bad!

[KayyFizzle]

too much hips.

it's embarrasing.

[esquides]

Nice bobs!!!

[pilouface32]

It's a joke, right ?

Come on ! You can be a dancer with practice ! But don't do that anymore ! I'm sure, you can become a good dancer and make good choregraphy ! Respect yourself and like says "dje273" : dance for yourself.

(excuse my english if it's doesn't correct, I'm french)

[mingosan2006]

lol at all the comments, she was makin a music video (maybe?)

[fbuchanan22]

She says clearly that she wanted to do some movements to this song...because she doesn't whip out any fouettes doesn't mean it's not "dance". This is what she felt and how she wanted to express her movements to the song. That's fine if your way would be different. Post your own video.

[yourcool8370]

im 18 and have been dancing for 16 years & this is PATHETIC.

[lenaluna1]

embarrassing

[balletexpert101]

this looked like you were trying out your exotic dancer moves, not your trained modern skills. I'm a 13 year old dancer and I could improvise better. This is insulting any dancer out there

[kyleandbecca]

used to be a dancer? really? i couldnt tell? doesnt look like this performance contained any past dance experience! thats for sure! wow! this sucks! like hard! disgusting! this is trash, please throw it in the garbage!

[girlongirlonme]

the people that trash this video dont know shit about dancing. it's not supposed to be a series of organised steps and dictated moves. this is based off inspiration. if she was doing the salsa, yeah, this is nothing close; bt this is how she felt, not what she was told. THIS is how dancing originated.

[dje273]

So; I do not like the piece, but here is why. Though her movements suggest a flow, it is very choppy in many places. Her focus while dancing is always toward the camera, a choice I don't agree with for this piece, and her energy is very weak. This is a sad piece but weak does not equal sad; weak equals poor quality. By all means, go on dancing, but you don't need the attention of putting it on youtube. Dance because you love to dance. Dance for yourself.

[3Full2Grace]

just one word:

awful

[bboyone63558]

wow, don't ever do this again. there's real dancers that try hard and for you to make dance just a joke is just rude.

[SHANICEPIES]

you rape the song

[diana10199]

Ummmm... i'm 11 and i'm a modern dancer u call this dancing? you are freaking kidding me. I understand you USED to be a dancer. I wonder why u quit... That was painful to watch. Mayb, instead of used to be a modern dancer, sure u didnt get that mixed up with an 'exotic' dancer (i think u kno wat i mean by that)?

[xmascarabeautyx]

:S I agree with @Emplia. Even I could improvise better, and Im 13. :O

[esaLatina23]

this sucks no lie... i get your idea but seriously that was not dancing

[LienaCraziness]

Oh my word...i am a modern dancer...that was a bit painful to watch! You had a nice idea in your head, i can see that, but........

Better luck next time!

[migdalarece]

ci ii si cu handikapata asta :)):))..nici podu nu stie sa-l faca .....io spalat masa perdelele??

[lilniglet7]

wow im embaressed... enough said

[Iziilii]

wtf :D

do you call this dancing?!

it is the worst thing i´ve ever seen!

what bet did you lose?

[3mmyWhemmy]

wow.

I expected a lot more.

wow.

[ranitalovesyou]

i think your idea was absolutely great and the technique i noticed but as a dancer i think you could have done more... and once a dancer always a dancer :D great job honey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!!!!!!!!!!

[Emplia]

ftw i could improvise better :S

[sierrrra14]

ahhh the good old swim move and backstroke....classic modern dance move....and not so much. the curtains were interesting....maybe try burlesque? if we were in the 20's and 30's.....trying to keep this positive. now the chair....B+ for effort. go take some classes and then get back to us. =]

[Hmari99]

omg you are so great

[takenBYhim20]

umm i think it was creative im just starting to dance soo i really have no room to judge keep doing you chica =)!

[ahmed45s]

lol..nagpasipug i indah mu!

[51mcsbc]

lol

[ilovemytoecold]

are you kidding?

[tefis84]

i think most of the comments are nusty,she says in the info that sje used to be a dancer...so is natural that she's not dancing THAT well!!,she just felt like dancing! and the song is wonderful! really nice!...if you like to dance you should take some classes,but that's it,enaugh of nusty comments!!!!!!!!

[MsRoulou]

wtf !!!!??????

[Sk8erXGirly]

No comment...

[cibomatto47]

Sweetie, take some dance lessons.

[Mariemayo1]

lol her and those curtains

[Ssaaaraa]

haha 'to the floor' boem!

[hhsdance94]

god i hate when people think acting like a stripper is dancing

[Moderndancer16]

ive been a dance since i was 4.. this isnt dancing..u looked like a burnt out old stripper who has no rythmn

[LouDogSS]

what is the name of this song????????

[TheSpicyTomato]

The beginning music sounds like something you hear in Foamy the Squirrel's videos.

Nice Vid very artistic and you're pretty. Don't let the haters bring you down

[johdanortbra]

ke marika tan desokupada

[the1withtheHair]

Good gracious, you all are so mean. Talent has nothing to do with anything.

Dance is about passion, especially modern dance. Martha Graham (one of the mothers of modern dance)said "Nobody cares if you can't dance well. Just get up and dance. Great dancers are not great because of their technique, they are great because of their passion. "

I think you're a beautiful girl. If you're really passionate about dance keep doing it.

[RazorbladeNightmare]

I agree! Dance is how one pictures it, weather if it has talent or not. One shouldn't ridicule someone for their perspective in art.

[purplesheepify]

yes, dance is an art, and like visual art, it isn't always good. It is the way someone pictures the song or whatever, but it has to be portrayed in a way that flows and is clear. This is kinda lame

[jadedjunglist44]

i thought she was hilARIOUS THE WAY SHE wraps herself up in the curtain.....clearly she isnyt saying that she a pro but that modern dance is just silly

[JUNOac]

i have to agree just some movements like u said..

I only dance for 1 month now and I believe I can do better then u with ease..

[forestskog]

Belgium LOL. No offense but what a shithole

[kristyrick13]

umm wow interesting.....i've been in dance since i was a little girl. and i have danced modern for years with many other dance forms. and cleary you know nothing about dance. and i agree with everyone the dance sux. but i admire your bravey for posting this. and after this i really think that no one thinks you were ever a "dancer". im embrassed for you.

[iCaLLuMBoB]

u r crap

no afence

[just1SCHATJE]

Um. How long did you take dance classes for? Because I am a modern dancer and that just looks wierd. But nice try though.

[kotykuty]

u dnt honestly call that dance ?

[EMMAandMEunlimited]

i agree with MaxQc2009:

THAT WAS REALLY BAD!

how old are you? im only 12 and can dance better. crap!

[kjerstenstafne225]

emo music, your tits and ass are flopping all over the place, and it looks like shit. Im sorry but have you ever taken a dance class?

[NanDoRulz]

:) u dont have nothing to do eh XD xaxax

[ELIINEE94]

you're just trying.......... not good

[treponema63]

tas gorda

[kala5h]

lol.... u 5uck.... its not modern dance... xD xD xD

[ahsuknat]

nice tits

[LilBoome]

Very beautiful... Kudos to you for doing this, that's awesome! :D the choreography is very cool.. good use of levels and shapes.. I like the backbend scene. My only critiques would be that the arms seemed to loose emotion towards the end and a little more body control to add strength to the poses. I really enjoyed watching you! The arms pulling in toward the heart made me feel tingly. Oh, and I like the face shots, added depth and story to it as well as enhanced those gorgeous blue eyessss <3

[MaxQc2009]

fail

[mustloveme30]

WHAT THE HECK.

[ttistan98]

oh and also DAYUMM girl you gots mad skill like some yoga shit up in there nice i wish i could do that you knoww dayumm all these peeps up in here hating FO WHAT damn.....dont get me twisted girls ill fight you wheres MAh vaseline i be takin off my earring like its nothing igggght

PSHHT anyway it was really pretty :)

[ttistan98]

youu know what all these whites up in here.....shooooot they just jealous i mean damn coooome on she got style

[Emmy1417]

i'm sorry but...no...just no...if you're going to call it a modern dance, have it be actual modern and not you hugging yourself around curtains and on chair...if you're going for extensions, do it without help, especially in a piece...not like this is one, sorry...

[almalexia99]

I like her...she`s honest.

And brave.

Now: start taking classes! (not critisism; encouragement.)

[LozzaDorris]

Whhaaaaat Theee Fuurkk?

[lyricslover113]

wait...are you serious right now?

what the hell kind of a dancer were you...

[gizadocden]

i like her.