Thanks for this video, i love the colour of your voice and it was very nicely done. My teacher has just given me this song. I also like how your voice is very open sounding (no strangled sound) Thank you again.
Your tone is gorgeous. However you have some small dipthongs you insert in some syllables. Also, good job using your body for gesturing -- that feels more awkward than like it looks nice most of the time. :) Overall, nice work and well sung.
GREAT WORK :) You're a fantastic singer and the diction was right on. I am a fellow tenor and it's great to hear such a wonderful rendition of this piece. kudos!
I'm sure you've advanced considerably since making this video, but I feel it would help a lot if you could look a little more relaxed and into the mood of the song before you start. Your stand perfectly still stance doesn't prepare us to participate in your wonderful interepretation of the song. Beautiful voice and preparation. Keep singing!
One final thing, the sheet music places some syllables in odd places such as switching to the '-re' in 'core' on the second note of the word instead of the word. Naturally, this was changed when you did the piece. However, it wasn't changed in the second verse. 'Splende una face che l'almaccende' sounds very unnatural when performed the way the music directs it to. If you wanted to stick to the sheet music, that's fine, but you did modify some of the words, so I suggest modifying that verse.
@zamaramaaa Thank you for your critiques! However, this almost two years ago, and I haven't worked on this piece in a really long time, and don't plan to, unless I have to for some odd reason. My Italian has gotten a lot better, as I have had Italian diction as a class for this entire year, and I'm sure the coaches at my school would give more accurate advice in terms of syllable placement and emphasis. But again, I'm done with this piece, and it was a long time ago that this was recorded.
In my opinion, I think the stress on 'mia' should be emphasized i.e., the rhythm would sound more like a dotted eighth note and a sixteenth note. Also, working on lengthening the phrases, particularly in the first phrase of every verse. When I worked on this piece, 'Sento nel core certo dolore' was in one breath. Imploding the 't' more would give the sound a truer Italian pronunciation, this is really done well on the word 'turbando', but can be emphasized further.
ive got a vocal competition coming up nxt weekend and im singing this song 4 my solo. I need a lot of work on it still and this video helped out a lot. Thanks 4 uploading it and good luck wherever u end up in life. u definately have the potential 2 make it big!
Really Good! Incredibly smooth voice! I would just recommend not making it so breathy. Your phrases were a little short and not followed through in some places.. Overall I thought it was great though!
You are so good. I'm singing this (the higher version) for my federation soon. Btw you are very cute. How do you do the third verse where it changes rhythm??
@TheatreObsessed15 Thanks! I'm not sure what your talking about with the rhythm changes, but I know it's standard to ornament the second A, but you should consult your teacher what exactly you should do. Be creative! :)
Pretty good. I used to sing this song many years ago and your video makes me remember all the classes that i had all pretty good memories. Thank You and keep singing, hope to heard about u in the future.
What would be a good key to preform this piece in for a dramatic tenor? I have it in D,E, and F minor. I am currently learning it in E minor for private lessons, and will possibly preform this for either a student recital or my jury.
Hey its Israel :). It's ironic because during the time when i had to sing this for a performance at my school, i used your video for help, and now I just recently met you at Juilliard lol but awesome interpretation of the piece!
@Isreal94 HAHAHAHAHA! Izzy!!! Same thing happen to me hahahaha!!! I just saw that he was A J-yard pre-college student and immediately thought of you lol... Then I found this comment haha!!! BUT thanks for the vid. It helped alot. :-D!
Careful of your hands - use them once or twice, not during the whole piece. It's distracting and ultimately detracting from the performance. Tell the story with your voice and facial expression!!
Also watch your Italian pure vowels - great for your age
Gorgeous, but theres one big thing thats bothering me to death. When you start phrases (which you have great understanding of, dont get me wrong!) you tend to scoop. and its absolutely killing me, because its the only thing i see, but it sticks out like a sore thumb >.<
@AviatorEvans In chorus, I sang second tenor, but I don't think of myself as that. I guess so far I just think of myself as a young tenor, but I have no idea what I'll grow into. : )
Improve the expression on your face. When the aria starts you have a face that says nothing, don't you feel in your heart a certain sorrow disturbing your peace? Then show me, I have to see the sorrow on your eyes and brows (knit them)... Also try to watch your hands, they distract, it is better when someone moves them few times and keeping the line of the song (Try lay your hand on your heart when it says "sento nel core")... Lastly try to make your voice more elegant (less pop or open sound)
@Gianny214 Thank you, Gianny! Yeah, I definitely struggled with hand and face expression last October, but since then, I've gotten better. You should check out my newest video, Widmung. I think that's a better representation of my progress.
Excellent technique and a beautiful timbre. You have to stop doing that sort of pop phrasing. I know Italian is kinda harder for people whose native language is english. But is brilliant !!! Watch my video singing this aria, and don't forget to leave a comment :) Greetings, and excellent job.
@ClosedProductions , You have a different opinon but that is not an excuse to say things like "Are you smokinkg crack?" Learn how to discuss your point of views.
P.S.: My comment disappeared and I even don't remember what I wrote!
Have to sing it on Tuesday on my exam....:S But now I understood that male voice is so much better for that song... I'm going to libary now to change my piece. lol
you sound lovely. I would suggest trying to keep your hands at your side or one hand on the piano and using your face to express the emotion of the piece. Its just a little distracting.
im singing this song for solo & ensemble, are there any tips you can give me as far as the pronunciation at "splende una face"? i have problems at "una" for some reason, i dont know how its supposed to fit into the rhythm.
You're singing was fine. I have two other comments, though. First, try gesturing from the shoulder rather than from the elbow. Second, a few simple and fitting gestures used sparingly can be much more meaningful than filling a song with a, for lack of a better word, clichéd gesture. But again, very nice singing.
Dude, This sounds absolutely amazing. I've been trying to find someone doing this song to help me practice for my recital, and I think I found a good one :D
Try making your lips go WEE and then OO, over and over, the tendon lifting the cheeks up into the smile is the zygomatic tendon. (Also brighten your vowels more so the base of the tongue stays completely uninvolved.) Doing this while relaxing the body (activating those muscles I mentioned earlier), will give you the lift you need to get into that "mask" area. Find a teacher that will put you in the mask. If you are going to Julliard, Robert White a great teacher if you can get him.
You need to start using your facial muscles buddy. This is the reason why your voice gets tired so fast. You need to activate the lips,cheeks, including your zygomatics, occipitals and temporal muscles.
Thanks for this video, i love the colour of your voice and it was very nicely done. My teacher has just given me this song. I also like how your voice is very open sounding (no strangled sound) Thank you again.
bakerteen 1 hour ago
dare I add Groban-esk and that is intended as a huge compliment.
TheFOODYGUY 2 days ago
well I am about to start on this piece and I think you have wonderful poise, presence and voice!
TheFOODYGUY 2 days ago
I love love love love it, your singing and interpretation is great
wenarto 2 months ago
Your tone is gorgeous. However you have some small dipthongs you insert in some syllables. Also, good job using your body for gesturing -- that feels more awkward than like it looks nice most of the time. :) Overall, nice work and well sung.
peachnightingale 3 months ago
your voice is so beautiful :) really clear and emotional!
heartofagreengirl 4 months ago
Three people are jealous of this video.
GREAT WORK :) You're a fantastic singer and the diction was right on. I am a fellow tenor and it's great to hear such a wonderful rendition of this piece. kudos!
LambentBoleyn 7 months ago
I'm sure you've advanced considerably since making this video, but I feel it would help a lot if you could look a little more relaxed and into the mood of the song before you start. Your stand perfectly still stance doesn't prepare us to participate in your wonderful interepretation of the song. Beautiful voice and preparation. Keep singing!
riccardo50001 7 months ago
gj man !!! the best amateur singer that sings it in youtube !
figion 9 months ago
Other than that, the voice and tone is awesome! I really liked it!
zamaramaaa 9 months ago
One final thing, the sheet music places some syllables in odd places such as switching to the '-re' in 'core' on the second note of the word instead of the word. Naturally, this was changed when you did the piece. However, it wasn't changed in the second verse. 'Splende una face che l'almaccende' sounds very unnatural when performed the way the music directs it to. If you wanted to stick to the sheet music, that's fine, but you did modify some of the words, so I suggest modifying that verse.
zamaramaaa 9 months ago
@zamaramaaa Thank you for your critiques! However, this almost two years ago, and I haven't worked on this piece in a really long time, and don't plan to, unless I have to for some odd reason. My Italian has gotten a lot better, as I have had Italian diction as a class for this entire year, and I'm sure the coaches at my school would give more accurate advice in terms of syllable placement and emphasis. But again, I'm done with this piece, and it was a long time ago that this was recorded.
dulcicantor 9 months ago
In my opinion, I think the stress on 'mia' should be emphasized i.e., the rhythm would sound more like a dotted eighth note and a sixteenth note. Also, working on lengthening the phrases, particularly in the first phrase of every verse. When I worked on this piece, 'Sento nel core certo dolore' was in one breath. Imploding the 't' more would give the sound a truer Italian pronunciation, this is really done well on the word 'turbando', but can be emphasized further.
zamaramaaa 9 months ago
Your voice is very transparent. And, your voice is young and beautiful.
You are doing pop how to sing. It is your good part. However, I think that you should decrease the portamento.
s07030726 10 months ago
pessimo italiano ...mas mt musical e linda voz
phdfoux 11 months ago
@phdfoux Il mio italiano e' bene allora. :)
dulcicantor 11 months ago
Congratulation from chile, wonderful , linda voz, cálida limpia ,estupenda interpretacion
Bye
samu01021 11 months ago 2
@samu01021 Gracias!
dulcicantor 11 months ago
WOW you rock! i'm doing this piece for the districts music festival. thanks for an awesome example while i'm still learning it. good job!
kelseyluco12 11 months ago
I'm singing this song to try out for the Arizona all-state choir. You did a great job!
logo836 11 months ago
Splendid!
kastanietta1 1 year ago
Dude thanks for putting this up, I'm doing it for a solo and I needed to hear how to pronounce the words!
Ophileagoesforaswim 1 year ago
very good! I'm learning this for a solo and ensemble event, and was having trouble learning the melody. Thank you!
augustgurl17 1 year ago
This is what I am using to get ready for my audition! Thanks for the great voice!
MrPeik17 1 year ago
good dynamics, you're voice is wonderful and is soothing
Trancemaniac3000 1 year ago
ive got a vocal competition coming up nxt weekend and im singing this song 4 my solo. I need a lot of work on it still and this video helped out a lot. Thanks 4 uploading it and good luck wherever u end up in life. u definately have the potential 2 make it big!
kingsmanize27 1 year ago
I'm actualy learning this song. I think you did really well.
PyroLily 1 year ago
Really Good! Incredibly smooth voice! I would just recommend not making it so breathy. Your phrases were a little short and not followed through in some places.. Overall I thought it was great though!
LilAp2ForChrist 1 year ago
I've added this to my playlist. Thanks for posting!
neelsdp1 1 year ago
You're very welcome! Maybe if i'm brave enough i'll post my performance in Feb.
TheatreObsessed15 1 year ago
You're very welcome! Maybe if i'm brave enough i'll post my performance in Feb.
TheatreObsessed15 1 year ago
You are so good. I'm singing this (the higher version) for my federation soon. Btw you are very cute. How do you do the third verse where it changes rhythm??
TheatreObsessed15 1 year ago
@TheatreObsessed15 Thanks! I'm not sure what your talking about with the rhythm changes, but I know it's standard to ornament the second A, but you should consult your teacher what exactly you should do. Be creative! :)
dulcicantor 1 year ago
Pretty good. I used to sing this song many years ago and your video makes me remember all the classes that i had all pretty good memories. Thank You and keep singing, hope to heard about u in the future.
wiltorre 1 year ago
Me Gusta esta cancion... y tu interpretacion es muy buena... Que tipo de Tenor eres Lirico o Ligero??
Bombardinomaniaco 1 year ago
Wow, Justin Bieber has apparently had a huge growth spurt and changed his style. :O
No, I'm just kidding, sorry. :) Not meant to offend.
(Though there IS some likeness, isn't there?)
And _awesome_ voice. Very awesome - even though I rarely listen to music like this, this actually gave me the "awesomeness chills" down my spine :)
sarkasmi83 1 year ago
I wish I had this when I had to sing it for my vocal exam 4 years ago. Its a really nice recording for sure.
kooljapanese 1 year ago
Such a nice tenor voice!
kefaad 1 year ago
What would be a good key to preform this piece in for a dramatic tenor? I have it in D,E, and F minor. I am currently learning it in E minor for private lessons, and will possibly preform this for either a student recital or my jury.
palmettoboy1313 1 year ago
This is just wonderful. Thank you for sharing.
KelseyPageSongs 1 year ago
Hey its Israel :). It's ironic because during the time when i had to sing this for a performance at my school, i used your video for help, and now I just recently met you at Juilliard lol but awesome interpretation of the piece!
Isreal94 1 year ago 2
@Isreal94 Hahaha, oh my goodness, this is from so long ago! Thank you so much! Actually, your singing it brought back a lot of memories of last year.
dulcicantor 1 year ago
@Isreal94 HAHAHAHAHA! Izzy!!! Same thing happen to me hahahaha!!! I just saw that he was A J-yard pre-college student and immediately thought of you lol... Then I found this comment haha!!! BUT thanks for the vid. It helped alot. :-D!
BlazenSong 3 months ago
Awesome Job!! I'm doing this song in a competition next month!! You have such a beautiful voice!
DeeDrummajor 1 year ago
Careful of your hands - use them once or twice, not during the whole piece. It's distracting and ultimately detracting from the performance. Tell the story with your voice and facial expression!!
Also watch your Italian pure vowels - great for your age
mafiosogiacomo 1 year ago
Gorgeous, but theres one big thing thats bothering me to death. When you start phrases (which you have great understanding of, dont get me wrong!) you tend to scoop. and its absolutely killing me, because its the only thing i see, but it sticks out like a sore thumb >.<
Tomeres 1 year ago
@Tomeres Thanks, I've worked that out; this is from a year ago, so I've made a lot of improvements. Thanks though!
dulcicantor 1 year ago
I am learning this song for my applied voice class. Your rendition makes me feel almost inadequate. LOVE YOUR VOICE! you are definitely going places
lyndisamson 1 year ago 7
@lyndisamson Thanks! Good luck with the learning of it.
dulcicantor 1 year ago
You have an absolutely wonderful voice. I hope you continue to sing. What part do you sing? 1st Tenor? 2nd Tenor? Baritone?
AviatorEvans 1 year ago
@AviatorEvans In chorus, I sang second tenor, but I don't think of myself as that. I guess so far I just think of myself as a young tenor, but I have no idea what I'll grow into. : )
dulcicantor 1 year ago
@dulcicantor so true. so many singers make the mistake of labeling themselves far too early in their life.
Isreal94 1 year ago
great voice....got future!!!
Seven7Entertained 1 year ago
@Seven7Entertained Danke so viel!
dulcicantor 1 year ago
I really enjoyed this very well sung song, thanks for posting.
neelsdp1 1 year ago
Improve the expression on your face. When the aria starts you have a face that says nothing, don't you feel in your heart a certain sorrow disturbing your peace? Then show me, I have to see the sorrow on your eyes and brows (knit them)... Also try to watch your hands, they distract, it is better when someone moves them few times and keeping the line of the song (Try lay your hand on your heart when it says "sento nel core")... Lastly try to make your voice more elegant (less pop or open sound)
Gianny214 1 year ago
@Gianny214 Thank you, Gianny! Yeah, I definitely struggled with hand and face expression last October, but since then, I've gotten better. You should check out my newest video, Widmung. I think that's a better representation of my progress.
I really appreciate your constructive criticism.
dulcicantor 1 year ago
de todas las que vi, esta es la mejor versión
claudiae07 1 year ago 2
Excellent technique and a beautiful timbre. You have to stop doing that sort of pop phrasing. I know Italian is kinda harder for people whose native language is english. But is brilliant !!! Watch my video singing this aria, and don't forget to leave a comment :) Greetings, and excellent job.
kharlitoz 1 year ago
@Rubeus89 Are you smoking crack? It doesn't get much more classical then this? lol
ClosedProductions 1 year ago
@ClosedProductions , You have a different opinon but that is not an excuse to say things like "Are you smokinkg crack?" Learn how to discuss your point of views.
P.S.: My comment disappeared and I even don't remember what I wrote!
Rubeus89 1 year ago
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mdcam89 1 year ago
que bello sonido, que legato y que musicalidad felicidades
migelzitro 1 year ago
I have to sing this song,but when I see your video,I just really want to learn it,much more than before. Thank you! :)
lucassoma 1 year ago
Amazing talent! Really plesant voice.
Have to sing it on Tuesday on my exam....:S But now I understood that male voice is so much better for that song... I'm going to libary now to change my piece. lol
Merineid 1 year ago
Amazing! i wanted to sing this song for my grandmoher, but i can't play the piano very well and it's hard to pick out the notes. :) great though!
japancooly14 1 year ago
wow i remember i had to sing this song in college.. lol.. wow.... i actually like it now. hated it then.. lol
Maestroboi08 1 year ago
@Maestroboi08 Wow, I'm honored! I'm glad you like it now.
dulcicantor 1 year ago
@dulcicantor LOL!!! you welcome man... YOU HAVE AN AWESOME VOICE TO>> LOL, i tell you, you sung it way better that I did.. LOL!!!!!
Maestroboi08 1 year ago
I like it, you sang it very well :)
Guilherme7530 1 year ago
you sound lovely. I would suggest trying to keep your hands at your side or one hand on the piano and using your face to express the emotion of the piece. Its just a little distracting.
Eestigirl85 1 year ago
me gusta mucho como cantas, FELICIDADES!
peeeke92 1 year ago
Good...but i think u r wrong lyric in 02:44...
Jackienguyendinh 1 year ago
@Jackienguyendinh There are many versions of this song; in my particular book, the lyrics there are sung as written.
Roses0421 1 year ago
Felicitaciones! me gusta el sonido y la naturalidad de tu canto. ¿qué edad tienes?
viniloswap 1 year ago
Is already good. But to be great, take care with excess nasal sounds. Especially in (A).
Need more support in general.
But you need to adjust are the nasal sounds.
Congratulations.
contatolirico 1 year ago
im singing this song for solo & ensemble, are there any tips you can give me as far as the pronunciation at "splende una face"? i have problems at "una" for some reason, i dont know how its supposed to fit into the rhythm.
you did an awesome job!
Wyocaster 1 year ago
your entry to notes in the upper register are very professional. you also have a great dynamic quality. how long hav you been singing?
maddawg180 2 years ago
oh my beautiful jesus in heaven your voice is beautiful and so flawless ugh beautiful work
Musicismyfirstlov3 2 years ago 12
Thanks!
dulcicantor 2 years ago
You're singing was fine. I have two other comments, though. First, try gesturing from the shoulder rather than from the elbow. Second, a few simple and fitting gestures used sparingly can be much more meaningful than filling a song with a, for lack of a better word, clichéd gesture. But again, very nice singing.
run4funner 2 years ago
ohh, i must sing this song too
Maaksy 2 years ago
Dude, This sounds absolutely amazing. I've been trying to find someone doing this song to help me practice for my recital, and I think I found a good one :D
rmmiller10 2 years ago
Dude you sound really good. I was looking up this video for a solo im doing for a competition. Very nice man, i dont sound anything like that lol
wolfspoiler94 2 years ago
Try making your lips go WEE and then OO, over and over, the tendon lifting the cheeks up into the smile is the zygomatic tendon. (Also brighten your vowels more so the base of the tongue stays completely uninvolved.) Doing this while relaxing the body (activating those muscles I mentioned earlier), will give you the lift you need to get into that "mask" area. Find a teacher that will put you in the mask. If you are going to Julliard, Robert White a great teacher if you can get him.
Webarton 2 years ago
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Webarton 2 years ago
You need to start using your facial muscles buddy. This is the reason why your voice gets tired so fast. You need to activate the lips,cheeks, including your zygomatics, occipitals and temporal muscles.
Webarton 2 years ago
si es bonita la cancion tambien cantada i el cantante es bueno
para ahhh
eneyon25 2 years ago
Congratulations! Excelent italian! Wonderful voice! Excelent job!
schubert39 2 years ago
beautiful voice - wonderful singing
dutchbaritone08 2 years ago
BRAVO!!!!!
fforganista 2 years ago
Very nice! Gorgeous voice especially for someone your age. Beautiful tone.
gbabusek 2 years ago
Beautiful!
mrclmind 2 years ago
Beautiful voice, please see my video sento nel core (acappella) by Scarlatti, my user is galfaclub37 and yours commentaries will be very appreciated.
Thanks.
galfaclub37 2 years ago