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OMG I LOVE THIS! UR GREAT! XP
AlwaysInWonderLand1 10 months ago
@AlwaysInWonderLand1 Thank you!(:
HappierThanEver07 10 months ago
@HappierThanEver07
Your more than welcome! this is great keep it up its a beautiful thing u got there!
AlwaysInWonderLand1 10 months ago
great job!
hannahkuenzi 10 months ago
This is a beautiful song with a beautiful melody. Excellent. However, like your song scream, it is too long and it becomes boring in the last third of the song. We are all trained by the music industry to have a 3-4 minute attention span with music. Also the bridge needs more contrast to be effective. Try adding more words and make it denser in contrast to the long syllables and words in the rest of the song. A great book is "6 Steps to Songwriting Success" or check out SongU on the Internet.
Cali4yaDreaming 1 year ago
@Cali4yaDreaming
This is a worship song. Therefore, it's not made to be your typical "3-4 minute song". Thanks for the imput, though.
HappierThanEver07 1 year ago