Untitled Longing... Chapter 214

[StarzzColiideeexD]

YAYAYAYAYYA!

YAYAYAYAYAYAY!

[luvjonas220]

i hate alex

i hope the police find summer and joy

[MrsJoeJonaas]

great chapter :)

[Summiewhoo123]

Yay! I hope dey goin home soon.

[brothersjonasluver2]

Ughhhh alex hate him, Jordin Sparks is amazing love this song by her, Great chapter once again lol :)

[berrysis3]

omg omg omg post the nxt 1 soon lol:))

[coeyjbfan93]

yay, she didn't get raped! Drew is starting to get on my good side. lol

[xoxojonaslovrxoxo]

Oh my gosh! You need to post more right this second!!!!!!!!!! This was an amazing chapter! xx

[chazzleFanFics]

Go Drew!! :D

I just want Summer and Joy to get back to Brooke and Nick. :(

Great chapter. xx

[DemiDuhh]

omg omg omg :O x

[SOphieROcksHArder]

aww... :(( sad times.. but omg alex is a dick..

i was so scared for her that alex raped her.. :(

but im happy he didnt, but still sad he beat up drew.

xx

[cutierose1234]

God, you HAD to make us believe she was raped up until the last moment, didn't you? haha

Still, I'm glad she wasn't. That would have given me MORE reason to hate Alex. He's such a...a--douche! I don't really say that word, for obvious reasons, but that's the only way to describe what he is lol

Drew is still a sweetheart. She took care of Joy and would rather take a beating then let Summer get hurt...aw! :D

I hope they catch Alex...bastard.

Loved it AS usual :)

Love you xxx

[Briiarnaa]

holy shit.

amazing, as usual (:

x

[jonaslovex2]

ahhhhhh love itttt! post like 1000000000000000 more chapters! lol

love itttttttttt!

[poly820]

FIND THEM

[kellyx2211]

awesome chapter!!!!!

[madison50364]

I was so worried that Alex did rape her. I'm so glad. Thank you, Drew! I'm glad he got there just in the nick of time! Horrifying if she had been raped.

I'm so glad that Drew is such a sweetheart. And poor little Joy being all scared and crying. Awe.

I love this story so much! Someone said it should be a movie. I most definitely agree. :D

Loved it, M&M. ♥

[luckiducki321]

i kno i shudnt b laffing when summer almost got raped but....

teehee she vomitted out lancelot. poor poor lancelot

bt seriously poor summer!!!! at least he didnt rape her thank godddd

[ngynjonaslover]

Post more!!!!! I need you to post more because this is getting really good!

[cecesingergrrl]

Poor Summer! I swear I am going to slowly murder Alex and then put his entire body into an acid bath.

Mucho love,

Sierra!

[misslyss96]

PLEASE POST MORE SOON!!!!!

[ajT15JoBros]

stupid alex!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

loved it!!!!!

[zefronbleu101]

omg this is SO good

this needs to be a movie or something. haha

[OMFGitscatherine13]

THANK YOU DREW:) if alex raped summer...he would have SERIOUS hell to pay. they have to find them soon! post asap pleasee :DD

[iheartKiing]

Brrrr Alex you Jackass!

I dont think I can name my child Alex after reading this haha

Keep posting! :D

[xJONASNESSx]

Oh thank goodness! Yay drew, I love him :)

Lancelot??

[CarysLOVESjonas]

Well Lancelot came back! wow i missed that pizza.

[jonasgirl201534]

i am about to flippin kill my stuffed bear if they dont get out of there soon!!!! ahhhhh cant wait to see what drew says to summer

[lazylaura94]

i sense everything is going uphill... very dramatic ending :) lol

[lydiaxo33]

they going to come summer i just know it

[rinthyilove]

oh-em-gee... at least she didn't get raped... i absolutely HATE Alex ugh... and Drew officially gained all of my respect back... he's a cool kid hehe :D

[charmedangel95]

I was freaking out! Thank god he didn't do anthing! I was ready to go on a twitter rant in all caps! lol And I love how in the most dramatic part I laughed at "Lancelot".

[xxDasweetiexx]

OHMYGOD I HATE ALEX. HE NEEDS TO DIE LIKE NOW!

I was about to die when I saw that she was throwing up. :O

Thank god for Drew.

Nick needs to come fine then now!

[MakeItLovely]

HOOOOO SHIT!

i'm so so so so glad she didn't get raped!

crap that would be so so bad!!

amazingg chapter.... I HOPE THEY GO BACK!! nick needs her! joy needs her mom! crudd...

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[xxlillianxx19]

AHHHHHHHH OKAY I LOVE UR STORY SO MUCH BUT THIS HAS TO STOP!!!!!! SUMMER NEEDS TO BE BACK WITH NICK! LIKE NOW!!!!! PLEASEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!! OH AN UH ALEX MUST DIE WE CAN DRENCH HM IN CAROSINE TIE HIM TO A WOODEN POLE SURROUNDED BY WOODEN STEAKS AND THEN LIGHT HIM ON FIRE LIKE HES A WITCH!!! :D sound good? lol awesomee chapter!! lovedd it :)

[krenke015]

LMFAOO. after i read that, i was dying of laughter. soo hard i was crying. omg thats hilarious. xD!!

[xxlillianxx19]

hehe thanksssss! :)

[NicholeJonas123]

lol, awesome idea :D

[xxlillianxx19]

whooo i know!!! :D

[iPodluvr287]

Oh my goodness!

[snowfoxangel1996]

pwease answe this question okk??? PLEASE!!!

they r going to get out of there soon right??

[Shay081793]

Eventually ;) That's the best i can do. :D

[kevinjonaslover123]

im so glad he didnt rape her!!! drew is an amazing friend!!

[iLynnerd16]

thank goodness! DREW YOU ARE HER HERO!

I was so surprised when I logged on and you posted a new one! I thought it would be a while until you posted because yesterday you posted! but nope you made my day the best friday everrr.

[xXMsLittleSunshineXx]

OH MY GOSHH. my heart was racing when she woke up and noticed she was err-naked, then she threww up! i was like OH NO HE DIDNT, then i was like JOY!! then like alwayss DREW saves the day!!! i was so reliefed, i seriously thought she was pregnet!! i really want nick back!! HE needs to save the day!!

AMAZING, BTW i saw when you tweeted then retweeted jordan sparks tweet!! that i addmitt was pretty cool

[musicismylife500]

:O I am sooo glad that Alex didn't get to her. That almost made me gag! yuck....

Drew is so sweet. And yeah he's right...everyone does know who they are with now. :)

[j3call]

ahhh! i think im going to die waiting for this. ahhh

[xxlilxxkweenxx]

I also love Jordin Sparks and Faith =)

Thank god he didnt rape her!

[EmmzyJonasFan]

Ooooo Nick has to find summer and joy! cant wait for the next chapter! Alex must die! Amazing chapter! (:

[jessicannamaria]

Gah, you had me worried at the top of the chapter! :O

AAHH! I would've kicked your viritual ass if you let thaqt happen (or what was it you said? ;p)

<3

[Shay081793]

Something along those lines ;)

[thecuteromanticone]

Phew, he didn't rape her. Ok I have a plan to kill him! Where is he NOW!!!!!!!!!

[Boycrazy7484]

WOOOOO :D i'm starting to be team drew! well i'm always team nick but i liked drew(: he's a pretty cool dude. alex on the other hand needs to die. and summer needs to go back to nick and joy needs to go to her mom and dad and brooke needs to tell joe what alex did so i can know cause it's killing me!!! post more :D