I agree with DMB- Its WAYYY obvious their reciting a script, people dont naturally speak that way- the girls is over emphasizing her lines & her facial expressions seem forced.
Maybe find an online vid with some monologue-have them watch it then have them watch theirs?
Another thing is Im sure there are PLENTY of online acting tips =)
Loved the video itself though~ Who ever shot it is super talented!
I agree with DMB- Its WAYYY obvious their reciting a script, people dont naturally speak that way- the girls is over emphasizing her lines & her facial expressions seem forced.
Maybe find an online vid with some monologue-have them watch it then have them watch theirs?
Another thing is Im sure there are PLENTY of online acting tips =)
Loved the video itself though~ Who ever shot it is super talented!
toogood4u97 2 years ago
needs a lot of audio work and your actors obviously aren't trained. Still very nice work...the helicopter is awesome and score is good
DMB1589 2 years ago