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  • DUDE?! SERIOUSLY? geez im gunna kill tht boy wat the heck is wrong with him it cant be a jemi story if he isnt going 2 cooperate. i wish he wud stop being stuborn and just admit tht he likes ashley. u kno u do shane! just tell her b4 its 2 l8!

  • SHANE!

  • @TheF4Lover4ever me too! SHANE! ugh!

  • how sad!!! shane is in love with ashley, but wont admit it!! :(

    love the series! :)♥♥♥♥

  • Shane really? He kisses her then she tells u she is falling in love wit Him. Then he tell her u like her as a sister?! thts screwed

  • I CAN'T BELIEVE SHANE!!! first he kisses her ans then he tells her he only sees her like a sister?

  • I CAN´T BELIVE!!!!! SHE TOLD HIM!!!!

  • omj shane screwed up big time!!!!!

  • grrr  Pooor Ashleey !!!

  • jerk???? yah....

  • omfg

  • Good job, you're making sit on the edge of our seat. Anways, I think it was REALLY bold of Ashley to say that straight out. Kudos to her. I was kinda stupid what Shane said. I mean, he's the one who leaned in for the kiss and the next day he says it didn't mean anything. Good job Ashley, make him chase you.

  • Poor ashley :(

    Love your stories girl♥

  • he shouldnt get soo jealous all the time if he only like her like a sister

  • aww i feel bad for ashley.. :(

  • grrr SHane

    :( feel bad for Ashley

  • ugh!! shaaaane!!

  • NO! omg its so sad bad joe TT^TT

    i was about to cry :(

  • mog sadddddddddddd

    hope it gets better U ARE SO AWSOME

    OF MAKING THESE STORIES

  • =( That made me cry! Theyre so cute together! I was so sure he would have said he likes her back! =(

    but great series =) =(

  • Shane when are you gonn alearn to talk to girls??

    "That kiss meant nothing" SERIOUSLY lol

  • U G H !

    He is so meann .

  • that was soooooooo sad

  • Ashley is such a sister that when Cody was dancing with her Shane gor jelous!

    She is such a sister that he kissed her on her doorstep!!!

    Shane needs to fess up and be a man for once.

    He still acts like a jerk but when hes with Ashley he acts kind almost normal..

    He should just tell her how he really feels and stop hiding!!

    By thay way i nearly cried at this episode it was such humiliation for Ashley!

    She must have been broken!

    Omg perfect song "We Are Broken" by Paramore!! :))

  • @jicole2014 what's "sister"? yeah that's right i added "quotation marks* and i'm doing air quotes! i'm a dork!

  • oh man i feel bad for ashley she was falling inlove with shane n shane said no!! man!!

  • Kissed her like a sister? and he was jealous when she danced with Cody, cause she's like a sister? lol!!! that's hilarious!!!

  • OMG GOD I WOULD HAVE CRIED RIGHT THERE

  • OMG I did cry!

  • poor poor demi/ ashley I hate joe/shane now BOO HISS to him! Plz plz cn u put them together and then...ooh! Jason cn hav a massiv crush on amber and shane and ashley tells them tht she thinks they're going out.....SWEET SWEET REVENGE :)

  • cry

  • ugh!!! why shane why?!?!

  • this ep almost made me cry , i luv this series. im soo mad i love joe y does shane hav to be such a jerk. y did he kiss her if he dosnt like her like that!!!!!

    it waz soo cute how ash said im fallin in luv w/ u buty did shane have to say i dont like u like that. y cant he admit he likes her wat is he waitin for. thats so conceited

  • oh poor demi

  • asshole....what a jerk lol

    who kisses his own sister pshh such a player

  • who kissed his sister???

  • he said 'your lke a sister to my ' and had kissed her lol

  • what a jerk...... PLEASE MAKE THEM GET TOGETHER

  • why cant he love her back:(

  • oh no !!! why can't he love her back :(

  • i cant believe shane!!!!!!!!!!! HE KNOW HE likes HER!!!!!!!!! HE LOVE HER BUT HES AFRAID TO PROVE IT!!! JERK,JERK,JER. THATS SAD! for all thsoe guys out there. if a grl says she likes you and u like her DO NOT CRUSH HER LIKE SHANE! ALL IM SAYING IS (MY MOTTO) "Boys are Jerks in love especially" AND THATS MY MOTTO. SO ALL THE LOSER GUYS UR JERKS!

  • what fonts did you ue for the main parts?

  • the song made it even sader

  • I love the series though! =D

  • JERK!! I bet he is in love with Demi !

  • what a jerk.... he just needs to admit that he's madly in love with her.... lol jk

  • aww, I thought they were finally gonna get together -tear-

    great eppi though

    (:

  • Main character has my name I'm awesome :P

  • haha main character hsa my name too :PP

  • well...his just act like his evil but his still like ashley!!

  • hahahahah i love the video for joe when demi says shes fallin in love with him its soo funny he looked so hott

  • stupid shane! hes sucha willy.

  • uggghhhhhh he needs to start liking her...she just shared her love for him and he says he only likes her as a friend....i dont like shane right ow...but i do think JOE JONAS IS AMAZINGLY CUTE:D HES MY FAVORITE JOBRO

  • its kinda a lil bit weird 2 kiss ur sister. i wuldnt kiss my brother!!! lolz i swear i wuldnt. bt hes mean!! and i hate chelseas character!!! she should get hit by a bus!!! that wuld b a gd story!!

  • well shane, you don't kiss your sisters :P

  • i feel bad for ashley :(

    shane is such a jerk in this series!

    UGHh!

    BUT I LOVE JOE JONAS!

  • OMJ!! I cant him!!! He is acting like a jerk! *Sarcstic*Sure he doesnt like her! What kind of guy kisses a girl if they dont lke them!? UGH! It makes me sooo mad! luv the series thoguh!!

  • What a friggin' jerk! He knows he likes her! He's the one that kissed HER he kissed HER she didn't kiss HIM! UGH! And if he didn't like her then why was he looking at her while they were dancing? And why did he want to walk her home? UGH! I repeat wha ta jerk!

  • yeah shane really is a major jerk, poor ashley *sniff sniff* hehe peace

  • i know!! :(

    but i watch a lot of those asian drama shows with subtitles and i actually like it when the guy acts like a jerk because they have obstacles to get through.. before being an item :)

  • what an asshole he knows he likes her man i feel bad for demi [teary eyed] wow im such a dork lol

  • I have watched this season for like hours and hours!

    Gawd!

    This is AWESOME!

    IM LIKE ADDITICTED!!!!!!!!!!!

  • me too :D

  • oMG POOR ASHLEY (DEMI) *EYES WATER* WOW IM A LOSER IVE BEEN WATCHING THEESE THING FOR ABOUT 4 OR 5 HRS !!!

  • aww hehe you watch my series for about 4 & 5 hours? that's really sweet of you..

  • There Like the jonas brothers there really addicting my sister asked me to get off and i said in a minute it ended up being a couple hours i watched the whole season :) to the the 2nd one :D

  • shame on joe!!!

  • Hey I Like this but it is kinda harsh I AM LIKE ASHLEY *hurt* BTW: What is the songs because my volume is being retarted and it went to this BZZZZ noise so i didn't get to here it! BUT TELL ME k? Bye! I LIKE IT!!!!!!!!

  • the last episode i was eating chips and they were salt and vinager so when i saw the kiss i enhled the vinager and like all most choked!!!! but this was just wrong how dare shane "Joe"

  • oh man I know how that feels the whole thing I don't think of you as more than a friend :p

  • improve your grammer but apart from that incredible series!

  • Thats messed poor ashley

  • THAT WAS AWESOME!!!

  • aww poor ashley!!!!!!!

  • NOOOOOO!!! i almost started to cry!

  • DUUUUUUUDE

    thats not OK

    i wish that they would just get together and stay together!

  • i cryed like crazy lolz y would he hurt her like that when hes falling for her to

  • omg i almost cried here

  • OMG FRICKEN SHANE!!! LOL!!!

  • omg did he just BLOW HER OFF... WHAT!?!?!?!?!

  • SCAM!

  • OMIGOSH!! BUILDABEAR96, I'M UR NO.1 FAN!! That was totally awesome yo! I've been dreaming about the next episode eversince! C'mon! UPLOAD THE NEXT ONE!!! AND UPLOAD THE NEXT ONE TOMORROW THEN THE NEXT DAY!!

    CHEERS!!!

    I LOVE JOE JONAS!!!

  • tomorrow the next episode will be out

    i can't wait

  • i loved it

  • osessive

  • OMG You have me soooo Hooked im obbessed

    Ur Vids are amasin

    ..... .

    Shane Has to love er bk Plz tell me he does ? Lol

    Plz upload more soon

    ((OR ILL DIE))

    No Pressure

    //..xxXxx..//

  • why diden't i get the video???

  • Aww poor Ashley! Shane needs to love her back! Make the next one!!! This series is AWESOME!

  • make the next one soon!<3

    this is was great!

    poor Ashley!

    Shane is lying, i hope!{:

  • OMJ!!! shane really neds to love her.. icant wait till the next.. keep on it.

  • ahhhh NO !

    SHANE, needs to LOVE her!

    im excited for the next one.

    DARN. aw well. i'll be excited.

    as usual :]

    keep making these series.

    they're the best ever ! :]

    hell YEAH

    they areee.

  • WHAT!?!?! shane doesnt feel the same!!?!?!?! man shane ruined everything.

    i hope they will soon still be together!

  • Alyssa!!! Why did you do that!!! I was so happy and now I'm now! Ashley is hurt now! PLEASE DO US ALL A FAVOR AND PUT JEMI NEXT EPISODE!

  • Hey Alyssa how do you not get copyright stuff?

  • WHAT?

    WHY?????????????

    Can't wait for the next episode.

    Your episodes rock!

  • hey i love ur series i cnt w8 for the next one omg u have to listen to this song it awesome its called Dreaming Of You by Selena

  • That was a awesome episode!! Make more!! Shane is so stupid sometimes uhh!! Poor ashley :(

  • I'm sooooooooo mad hoe could shane do that to Ashley ?? I hate him !!!! whyh did he tell her that ??? next episode !! please !!!

  • haha for some reasons

    i love when you made Shane

    a buttheaded one your series rock

    but make them together now were dying lol

  • i agree Shane is so stupid in this episode

    how could he!! urghh make more please

  • Awesome! I am debating whether to make a series and it would mean alot to me if you looked at mine! It is a Zashley, Lunessa, Conique, nelena,jemi,and kaylor story.

    ♥♥Debbie #15♥♥

  • STUPID AMBER STUPID AMBER ... stupid amber :( mean shane i feel bad for Ashley

  • *in tearsm and jumping up and down yelling* SHANE'S A LIARR!

    HE LOVES ASHLEY!

    AHHH!

    DANG CLIFFYS!

  • Lol i agree

  • another cliffhanger

  • ='''''( ** almost in tears over here!! Stop with all the hangers!!! AHHHH

  • awesome !

  • very nice ep!

  • i didnt think it was crappy

  • omg, it was amazing as it use to be .. lol .. what type font did you use when there stand Ashley Hudson, Shane Carter etc. ??

  • aww that was sad! love the ep anyways.. ;)

  • WTF Shane What in the hell are you doing!

  • i feel so bad for Ashley when Shane said tht i felt sad and he was really mean but awesome episode :)

  • well how can he not like her like that i mean he kissed her@!!!!! anywayz i think we all agree wen we say we cnt wait a week 4 a new episode cnt u like make 2 a week or sumthin 1 a week sux newayz gwd job i loved it but it was really short

    jaime xoxo

  • shane is a reatard 4 that dumb move

  • tsk tsk shane!!

  • shane wtf! can't wait for more tho.  :]

  • THAT STUPID BUTT-HEADED SHANE!!!! Next on plz!

  • grr...stupid shane!!haha i love it though hehe

  • Shane! YOU BIG....UHM..YOU EL STUPIDO!HOW CULD JOO BE SO ST00PID? TAKE HER!

  • omg shane is so stupid!!

  • :[,so sad,:[

    SHANE IS SO STUPID

  • ohhhh heck noooo!

    stupid shane:))))))

    great episode!

  • GOSH !! Shane why did you say that! lol.. Poor Ashley

  • didnt see that coming

  • ohh shane.. big mistake

  • SHANE YOU DUMMDUMM!!!!!!!!!!!!

    ugh. im depressed now. T_T.

    WAIT WE STILL DONT KNOW WHO JASON'S MYSTERY GIRL IS. CRAP!!!

  • I FEEL SO BAD!!

    I'm crying...

  • Shane! YOU BIG DOOFUS!WHY!?! SHANE WHY!?! POOR ASHLEY! :( MAKE THE NEXT ONE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!

  • omj poor ashley!

    i never expected that!

    but i cant wait till the next one!

    awesome job alyssa :)

    <3

  • omg the best ever !!!! <33

  • aaaaaaaa i`m falling too poor ashley bur why did he say that?

    please hurry and great epi

  • NO WAY!

    cant wait till next epi!

  • OMG! WHAT?!?!

  • Ah.

    makes me curious !!

    i dont think it was bad makes me want the next episode even more !

    love it. :)

  • omgsh!

    im gonna cry rite now!

    but good epp.xD

  • aww,

    i know exactly how that feels.

    poor Ashley.

    Shane will come around though :)

  • i feel soo bad for ashley

    i wonder if shane was just lying?

  • poor ashely got her hear broken by shane!!

    luved it

  • love (hearts)

  • i don't think it was that bad it was ok i guess

  • haha i luv its this is so the best episode ever lol:P

  • OMG!! Next one please, as soon as possible :]

    Your series is amazing. Seriously !!

    But I know Shane will come to his senses.

  • Aww poor Ash!hurry please.

  • aww why just a sister!

    ugh Amber dat bitch!

    i hope ashley ok.

  • Alyssa it's totally killing me i want them to be together now they have to Shane you should just said that you love her too

    this is a sad episode but love it

    Mitch

    xoxo

  • love it! [:

  • OMG...you are so killing me with this....i so love these!...keep making them!

  • What? noo!! poor ash. i love this one!

  • plz make more

    tina

  • amazing.

    really sad..

  • omg!! Awesome ep! Can't wait for da next one! you are really talented at this! :) Awesome job! i love your series!

  • omg!! i loved it plz hurry dont wait until friday to do the next one!!!! do it today!!

  • i think i know what happens in the next episode =]

  • NOOOO WHYYD HE SAYY THATT!

    ahhhhhhhhh!

    LOOVE IT!

  • i hate shane at the moment

    poor ashley

  • aww poor ashley make them back together

  • poor ash:[

  • =][=

  • love it sweetie!! BEST EPISODE EVA!! haha love ya babe

    ~Lyssa's Baby, Becky~

  • :) (:

  • awhhh i dont like shane right noww haha

    i cant wait for the next one<333

  • this was not crap! it was amazing! its so weird tho cuz the part @ the end w/ shane & ashley happened 2 me 2day! cnt wait till the next episode!

  • NOOO!!! Next one PLEASE!

  • make another!!!!!

  • omg i loved it!

    can you check out my videos?

  • Ugh! Shane is so stupid! I feel really bad for Ashley. Amazing series!

    :3

  • it is awesome..!!!!

    poor ashley... she is soo hurt...

    and shane must be a little confuseed...

    well please keep it going!!!

    i can't imagine my friday nights without these series!!

    thanks for posting them!!!

  • i love ur series hurry!!!! =]

  • i loveee thissss<3

  • I CAN'T WAIT A WHOLE FRIKIN WEEK FOR THE NEXT EPPIE! i love it, but Shane is just...ugh...

  • omg luv it

    awesome episode hun

    can't wait for the next one

  • NOT CRAP!!

    Please tell me what font you used please?

    Comment back asap!

  • aww Thanks and the font called "Yelly"

  • omg! abosluty exellent :]

    i congrat yhh babe :]!!