A semi story "Pressure" ep.5 [PG 13]

[JulietandValentine]

Awsome, stul loveing the story.

[crazy4NELENA]

Sorry i never commented D: like ur my new favorite semi writer i mean most just go "They fuck all night long 'then its done but urs r reallly good!

[heller102]

@crazy4NELENA thank you :)

[clplyballer]

good job

[ALittleBitLonger2010]

wow wen he said you'll never see me agian i was like "Demi do it agian so he'll go away"

[meshannaeng]

good i like it

[TIZ190]

poor demi.

[MELENAFASEMIFAN]

i hate her dad urggg

but still good work i lve it go to hell demis dad

[mandi4evr]

OMG SELENA HELP DEMI and her DADS a FUCKING douchebag. hmph. meanie. >:( hehe good eppy though :) thank you for making another one. and Toxic Valentine is REALLY good writing influence idk the songs just likE BOOM writing juice :) hehe writing juice :) haha

[otrachicadelmonton]

i love your series (:

[heller102]

thank you!!! ^^

[SemiAndDileyLoveStor]

amazing!!!

but her dad is an asshole!!!

i hope selena helps her....in watever way...

[xoselenaloverxo]

amazing!

her dad is an asshole!

[kate14w]

stupid father poor demi ;l

[demilenafan101]

I would bitch slap his dad if i were demi...!!! fight demi fight!!!!!!!

[MultiNoonespecial]

i agree with you and the comment below you sel needs to help in some way !!!

[fansp89]

OMG her dad is an asswhole... can wait for the next one.. sel needs to help in some way lol