yeah your flows a bit better in this but i found as i was gettin into it your flow got a bit choppy. have u ever tried freestyle? i find this helps to develop flow because its more natural. try it an let me know how you get on and dont worry bout your lyrics or rhyming in this! its just help with your flow!
Really Good.Nice beat to it.Only slight issue with the rapping and slight awkward pauses breaking flow a bit.But overall good and definitely listenable,keep it up man!
this was definitely a step in the write direction. The flow when you're rapping it has improved but you can tell you're still writing the same way. it's like you have the concept but it's not coming through in the writing. You say something then take a long pause to make sure it hits on the next beat, which is okay if it's supposed to sound like that, but a lot of time on this one, that technique sounds forced. Just being real. I' always around to take a look at your music.
@N3OCwlkr Na man its definitely not taken as hating just constructive criticism i understand and i think that as i practice it ill get a lot better you feel me
good luck in future friend !! Thumbs up !
MrTrafikntu 4 months ago
Sick! Once again!
randommusicguys 5 months ago
dope bro we just keep training to become seasoned musicians tha love for hip hop iz all tha motivation we need peace!
soulreaver7100 6 months ago
buen tema
caweedman 6 months ago
haha niceeeee
gtimenee34 6 months ago
Great Work Mate
destiny01st 6 months ago
Great Work Mate
destiny01st 6 months ago
Keep up the good work man,youll make it big!
hoanaoaquen 7 months ago
this is amazing and i love your other videos
00GoodStuff00 7 months ago
youtube? has a new star
catanddogfriend 7 months ago
Great Work Mate
destiny01st 7 months ago
that was cool!
MaeCardoza908 7 months ago
this is amazing and i love your other videos
00GoodStuff00 7 months ago
WOah that video was BLooDy amazing I have subscribed and Im checking out your other videos!!!
99999999alan 7 months ago
lol that was... great ;D
HydroNify 7 months ago
great quality
anton23147 7 months ago
muahaha top sache! weiter so
TrollTest 7 months ago
INSANE!
strongheart1209 7 months ago
Great Work Mate
destiny01st 7 months ago
Hahaha.. nice!
Moddingcity 7 months ago
Sub, like, <3, favourited. I love your videos!
iCoNTRoLaTioNzi 7 months ago
looking forward for your new videos
DropShotzZ16 7 months ago
i could watch this a? hundred times!!!
kerrythi 7 months ago
Make more vidz yo! PLEASE... im beggin
Iguypro 7 months ago
Great Track !
SK3StripesOfficial 7 months ago
yeah your flows a bit better in this but i found as i was gettin into it your flow got a bit choppy. have u ever tried freestyle? i find this helps to develop flow because its more natural. try it an let me know how you get on and dont worry bout your lyrics or rhyming in this! its just help with your flow!
MagicMicTheStar 7 months ago
def original thumbs up
theskywalkas 7 months ago
Really Good.Nice beat to it.Only slight issue with the rapping and slight awkward pauses breaking flow a bit.But overall good and definitely listenable,keep it up man!
ringostingoful 7 months ago
this was definitely a step in the write direction. The flow when you're rapping it has improved but you can tell you're still writing the same way. it's like you have the concept but it's not coming through in the writing. You say something then take a long pause to make sure it hits on the next beat, which is okay if it's supposed to sound like that, but a lot of time on this one, that technique sounds forced. Just being real. I' always around to take a look at your music.
N3OCwlkr 7 months ago 2
@N3OCwlkr Na man its definitely not taken as hating just constructive criticism i understand and i think that as i practice it ill get a lot better you feel me
DictatorArtist 7 months ago 2
@DictatorArtist Yea it's deff going to come with practice, just keep it up.
N3OCwlkr 7 months ago
Good stuff, Homie!
danieltone 7 months ago
Nice! Really good, and catchy, track. Keep it up.
benefarrell 7 months ago
nice track bruv defo alot of potential great hook was singing it making a brew after I heard it! keep it up. The State
a909statedubstep 7 months ago
@a909statedubstep A LOT OF Respect you took time out to listen to my music, thanks !
DictatorArtist 7 months ago
ten track kurwa wymiata trzymaj się ziomek elo :D greetings from Polish!!!!
GieWu94 7 months ago
@GieWu94 są lepsze ale co ja tam wiem..
MsLowca 7 months ago
@MsLowca ;)
GieWu94 7 months ago
nice but yo u need to turn that beat down a bit ad say
dufsta187 7 months ago
gr8 job bro :D
elias1995ish 7 months ago
Great man!
TheSneakyBoys 7 months ago
Im really feeling this track. Nice.
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AngeloVanTerra 7 months ago
@AngeloVanTerra appreciated !
DictatorArtist 7 months ago
tunes big g more a dem bars to reflect on man dats wha i like to hear
dragonmanen3 7 months ago
@dragonmanen3 Safeeee g !
DictatorArtist 7 months ago
Nice one bro!
itsKidFrankie 7 months ago
Greetings from Polish!
Good job :)
TheFusek151 7 months ago
first to comment!! :D
nice vid!!
STCpker 7 months ago