Marathi Poems - Hi Mumbai Aahe, Ithe Asech Aste =)

[sattuism]

खरच अप्रतिम

[vikramsnest]

cute poem :) thx

[vasudevgadge]

very realistic poem.....

[danianjan]

What about the slums and all pervasive filth?

[manudear2003]

that will extinguish, it will take time, for people who criticise anything in india, i always ask what have you done for your country, than wondering what your country has done for you? as long as mumbai exists it will always be one of the most happening cities not just in india but in the world!lets look at the +ve's of mumbai sir!

[danianjan]

Agreed, but even today the word "Mumbai" reminds a lot of people of filth, so you should at least have mentioned that in your poem to paint an accurate picture of the ground reality in your fabulous city.

[manudear2003]

hey danianjan! thanks for agreeing to what i said...by the way i hv already said it in my profile and here it is just for ur info once again, i havent written the poems dear...i wish i did...and i am not from mumbai either! just sit back and enjoy the poems if you can...cheers! :)

[danianjan]

Yeah the poems appear to be good quality; just a little concerned whether they paint an accurate picture of the city.

[shantanukulkarni]

haha... this was good :)

[vj9422]

The Poem is no doubt the best.....pan kharokharach Mumbai madhe aalela/li parat jaat nahi ? i know somebody who did not stay back..LOL.....cheers

[koletso]

Excellent, A truly realistic poem on Mumbai.

[swap786]

Excellent!!! never heard such a good poem on Mumbai...