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From: Aushie14
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  • hahaa nice <3

  • 1. Joe, cuz u cn c wher this is going...

    2. when demi is heartbroken by Joe or Nick :'(

    3. So far, its gd. But try to improve yr vocabulary, yr using the wrong tense, and it just don't happen that fast-

    But its still good :)

  • umm ok??? thanks

  • RoseJemeljanova your such a English Teacher telling people to improve there vocabulary

  • i agree with u!!!!! lol

  • @baddestdiva906 ahaha lool thank you :P

  • wots da song#?

    btw luv ur beginning x

  • da song is Clumsy by fergie!!!

    thanks!!!=)

  • Sorry I just started reading this, and man I'm sad I just started!

    1. Hopefully Joe

    2. When Demi needs a real guy who doesn't like her just for her looks

    3. Yes!

    -xXxSneakerz12xXx-

  • it's ok.. and thanks!!!=)

  • nick

    long time from now

    oh yeah alot

  • thanks!!! i bet i will like ur story too when it comes out!!!!=)

  • I LUV IT! u got a new subber here

  • thanks!!!=)

  • 1.idk

    2.ep 4

    3.yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!

  • love the story it rocks

  • thanks!!! hope u like the rest of my series!!!=)

  • this is going to be AWESOME series :D

  • thanks!!!! hope u watch the other ep'z!!!

  • Great! Normally i dont like stories in Des. Boxes but it is good!

  • thanks!!

  • Awesome! Good job! (:

  • Thanks!!!

  • 1.JOE

    2.EP.4

    3.YES

    I LOVE IT

  • THANK YOU!!!=)

  • awesome!! loved it!

  • THANK YOU!!!=)

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