dude really good lyrics, you have good flow for the most part. your flow is not the problem, you just need to add a couple of words to each line when you get stuck on it and get choppy,
I absolutley love your song----sept for the Jesus Part! I think it is really nice I would illiminate the Jesus part thou! Just to make it universal truth for all kinds of people. Cause with the Jesus part it then discriminates against everyone who doesnt worship jesus. Then they wont listen to it. Just some feedback!
what are you a fucking retard?? i said son just because im trying to support him jackass...dont go on other peoples vids and leave random faggoty comments douchebag.
dude...what in the hell does my vocab have to do with thinking and in fact theres nothing to even think about...your comment was more than ignorant and if it was a joke then why even write anything at all? all im saying is dont go trying to make fun of someone when u know nothing about them because I WILL PUT U IN YOUR FUCKING PLACE!
look dude...just shut ur stupid ass up man u sound like a fucking queer and a little girl...seriously i mean where the fuck do u even live to not have heard that term?? grow up and start being a man u pussy.ur a joke!
Str8t but to SWEET
footballplayer7876 7 months ago
dope lyrics
respect the individual !
Word.
andrew007go 11 months ago
dude really good lyrics, you have good flow for the most part. your flow is not the problem, you just need to add a couple of words to each line when you get stuck on it and get choppy,
shanet9922 1 year ago
Very good!
Ramatulai1 1 year ago
I absolutley love your song----sept for the Jesus Part! I think it is really nice I would illiminate the Jesus part thou! Just to make it universal truth for all kinds of people. Cause with the Jesus part it then discriminates against everyone who doesnt worship jesus. Then they wont listen to it. Just some feedback!
sumayahrose 1 year ago
PLEASE STOP!!you are a sheep
djskizmarkey 1 year ago
Dope
64xD 2 years ago
well done, like your lyrics!
PrinzMyshkin1 2 years ago
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neutrium1 2 years ago
Nice job !!
cebayou 2 years ago
I love your lyrics man.
nogimmickssyth 2 years ago
Hi man..i like the script but hey you need some more vocal otherwise it all sound....
drstiore 2 years ago
HAHAHA DAMN NEVER MIND PROPS ON THE COD 4 SHOUT OUT!!! oh and mary jane of course =]
nytmar3 3 years ago
pretty coo...tight beat but u gotta recite from the dome son! none of this readin lines shit...
nytmar3 3 years ago
when you call somebody son!
do you feel like god?????
should we call you daddy or old man now???
runway1300 3 years ago
what are you a fucking retard?? i said son just because im trying to support him jackass...dont go on other peoples vids and leave random faggoty comments douchebag.
nytmar3 3 years ago
keep your filthy mouth under control!!
you should, think ,about the meaning of my words,
if that is possible for your disturbed vocabulary!!
runway1300 3 years ago
dude...what in the hell does my vocab have to do with thinking and in fact theres nothing to even think about...your comment was more than ignorant and if it was a joke then why even write anything at all? all im saying is dont go trying to make fun of someone when u know nothing about them because I WILL PUT U IN YOUR FUCKING PLACE!
nytmar3 3 years ago
you dont even know the relationship between words and thoughts,you must be a little boy who calls another boy: son! hilarious and pathetic!
runway1300 3 years ago
look dude...just shut ur stupid ass up man u sound like a fucking queer and a little girl...seriously i mean where the fuck do u even live to not have heard that term?? grow up and start being a man u pussy.ur a joke!
nytmar3 3 years ago
dismissed!
runway1300 3 years ago
cool
coopkabob 3 years ago