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  • Wondeber!!!!

  • so they say freddy has your mind, so ill have you day time, crime with passion, it class time and its time to for action .. i select slashin, tappin my feet to the beat of the liquid leak on the cold concrete, funnels a puddle in a huddle lets grab straws and make your blood bubble, just like chocolate milk, the dead flower will never wilt, beatuy and the beast, locked away for centuries waitin on past judgement to decrease, feast on the darkness like the kingdom heartless, regardless of creed..

  • right at the begining the piano reminds me of some 80's fantasy movie like Labyrinth or Never Ending Story.

  • Awesome beat

  • So good!

  • This is great! I just love it!

  • Nice!

  • is that fucking marmelade on the keys xD

    Good beat just the clap seems a little too soft

  • yo.. i love this joyn

    

  • piano makes everything better

  • man u aint got shit, u just actin like 3years old throwin a fit, now watch a real rappa spit, u hurt let me get my 1st aid kit, ouch u burned, hope the lesson u have learned, is dont act like u shit unless u know its true, to u and ur "homies" i say fuck u, dude, backoff, u so cool cough cough, go take a vacation to the beach, because u suckin up all the hate like a leech, yo its ok u spittin lava, i swim in tht shit ask yo mama, u be suckin like a leech but yo moms betta, she made me a sweata

  • @TheRebelliousproduct Dude u have go to write me something u da best

  • @SuperGlorianna haha thx ill try to write somethin up for u just tellme what kinda song

  • Now im gettin sick and tired/ of reading ppls rhymes you best retire/ cause its carrtuune comin at you with that fire/ and not the kind that gets you higher/ im talkin bout me spittin lava/ your rhymes are whack why even botha/ your minds I slaughta/ my fists is my weapon of choice/ I don't fuck around with stupid little boys/ I strike fear in the hearts of all who I encounter/ im way to ill in the mind leave you layin on the sea floor just like a flounder/

  • its time to step up to the plate,i have made many mistakes,now im going to grab this opportunity with both hands,now atleast i have plans,it aint easy trying to be a man,tryna fit in,in the outside i look good but only if u knew whats going on within,i grab the pen,grab the pad write a couple bars n do it agen n agen,i wanna go to heaven,after 9/11,i saw the truth,the government is corrupt,they wanna trap me in the aqueduct,but like a volcanoe i will erupt,u can never silence me.

  • @gayboyyyy Your name is "Gayboyyyy" shut the fuck up.

  • loveeee thisss

    

  • satan hear me now i aint ur slave god hear me now i aint going to heaven my girl is locked inside the flames im gunna get her n be with her forever if not id rather go somewhere else than heaven or hell ima find a way to make ur life a living hell fukin forced me to live and expect greatness respect and goodnesss fuk that man i wanna do my own thing b my own man an satan i wanna do my own things in life dnt tell me how to strike fear anymore fuck ur whores im done with u both im sliting throats

  • *how is this dark ? sounds more like a love beat

  • how is his a dark sounds more like a love beat

  •  PUT IT ON TRACK, YEA.. I MUST BEAT MY OWN STREAK/ MY WORDS SHIFT SHAPES AS I SPEAK/ SAVORING THIS TRACK WATCH ME GLEE/ COULD IT BE/ WOULD IT BE/ IF ONE SEEN/ REALITY ISINT WAT WE STRAIGHT FORWARD NEED/ THAT IS WHY I BELIEVE IN CONSPIRACY/ ILL MIND FUCK YOU.. PREPARE FOR THE RAPTURE AS OF TODAY COMING OUTTA ME/ CUT U SHORT ANATOMY/

  • I'm sicker than a friday 13th flick, i seduced a chick, deduced she was a bitch and ripped off her fuckin tits, slashed her stuffed her in the freezer celebrated with vodka shots an that was five years ago, she's still rottin in that icey coffin. i murdered krueger with a luger when he invaded my dreams, i was fourteen you shoulda heard that melted-face bitch scream, when i stood over him and counted to four, and whispered "freddy ain't comin back no more"

  • Hey, Hey, hey, Ripping off my shirt/ B***h i'm about to make you hurt/ slam you down in the ground, face in the dirt/ Stand back up and fight with all your might/ Thats the only thing thats right/ Left hook, calling me a crook/ Take a look at who i am, I'm the Man/ Your a piece of shit from the can/ Go moan and pout cause i'm stout/ i'll be knocking you out /with a shout from the crowd/getting loud in this bar/ F**k this joint i'm out to my car/ Show you i'm a star/ with this life i'm going far

  • @BIC0Gannick0Bic good rhyme yo

  • could be better

  • Make ME a Beat and ill make a song and send back to u

  • Love the beat but is that blood on the piano, or kool-aid? :3

  • thats a bad ass beat......i love reckin to it.

  • check my new beats while smoking your happy new year weed

  • 1 person can't play all those tracks of piano. I can't explain. It's too dificult to me, couse my english is poor. But this song makes me think about everything. I will vote up this !!!

  • MIUTO BOM

    

  • im recording with this at line records studio il give you a shoutout and release my cd

  • Blood in my eyes, money is the prize, i look deep inside, and let my soul rise, like a missile scud, ready 2 drop bombs, on ya fuckin head, make ya taste the the lead, where it like its dreads, wacthing for the feds, cuz these the breaks, walking a thin edge, more like a thin line, so dont get left behide, i let my wrist shine, andkeep a holstered nine, thats blowin out cha spine, if u taking mines, money on my mind, thats why im on da grind, and i aint got no time, for u 2 push rewind, NUBIAN.

  • too short but good beat

  • Your a fucking JOKE !!!! LAME ASS DUDE!!! you basicly just copied what i said and put it in your own terms!!! STUPID FOOL BE ORIGINAL!!!

  • Wack.

  • @kultone your wack i can already tell that you are a lame ass dude with no taste,talent or style!!!! go look up some lil wayne video you fagat ass groupie!!!

  • @intelect100 No faggot, i love Hiphop.. real hiphop and good beats. This is some bullshit weak beat and you like it. So i can tell your a big headed wanna be rapper who hasn't yet stuck his head out of the bounderies of youtube and discovered real hiphop. P.S. fuck you and little wayne bitch

  • @kultone how da hell u gonna be a hip hop fan n not love an original instrumental.. nigga u a poser !

  • @FistsofVengeance  you know it could also be downloaded threw a hack ...like what i just did a moment ago jacked !

  • 8 people missed the like button.

  • @heyyhaileyx3 get youtube converter mate.

  • @DaMiWORLD15 its people like u that ruin djs careers they make beats and sell them for a living and u gotta steal the beat?

  • @verbaltag im not stealing if its legal and it aint got no copyright.

  • @DaMiWORLD15 hes tryin to sell it for money so he can make a profit he even made a comment sayin selling via paypal

  • @verbaltag you basically repeated yourself, and it aint my problem if he hasnt got the embedded code copyrighted.

  • @DaMiWORLD15

    legally you aren't, but your still being an ass clown morally.

  • @russellstall smd?

  • damn i love this this is the shiznit

  • The tears are made of blood

    she crys and wants your hug

    but your cold and walk away

    how many times can a life be forgiven

    how many lies are worth living

    even when it was true

    i thought it was fake

    so i part away

    ripple the cosmos

    and im gone

  • AY nigga, this beat go HARD NIGGA no bullshit

  • check out my music /cazkit17 let me no what u think feel free to be a critic pleas subscribe

  • this is nice man! alotta reverb, needs to be toned down some. other than that, i like this alot. add reverb to your kicks and omg badass!

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  • That's Real Nice Man

    .....I am Now Amused....XD

  • yeah thats great

  • not bad.. i support

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  • thumbs up two all u phoney even the 1s that dont like it

  • addd sirenssssssssssssssssss

    in the biginnig reall goood ill take this to the heart

  • read my thoughts, borrowed n brought thru my souls dawn, the awaken of the man without connection to the worlds achining, the solider of the north star, unknown journey travel far, the vague distance for the sake of the source prince vision, fantasy livin only the root knows of the forsaken forgiveness, man so relentless even after the known hell visits, continued walk of the nonexistence ignore the angel remembrence of the horrific, long awaited answers until then i remain the hell earth dancer

  • so the sad song goes forever like rainy weather no clear skies only tears to my ears nd my head is down till i get my crown my title it might b vitle to just sit while sum1s out there in the world just rapin a girl or doin terror however i will nvr b one of them instead i will gunner them as in run over them nd shoot nd get all the loot in the world nd get my diamond girl then whell grow up to make our own pearls money in other the worlds speakin of the worlds im in another world

  • Life began as just a dream before long the tides of life came ashore and swept me off my feet pulling out into the vast ever sinking to the deep I hold my breathe lungs squeezed, the angel told me to b calm and just sleep i close my eyes soon ta find the warm breeze a mothers touch a lovers lust heavenly fulfilling got me wondering why waste the happy moments breaking through homez in the night killing leaving despair spread like disease of the common soul depression tha eccense god have mercy

  • amazing

  • mameladen fleck

  • check out my other beat... its a piano r&b track..shits hot

  • i been runnin on these streets since i was 8 years old and the world has grown so cold ask me how im doin, so-so knockin bitches out the park, samy sosa flow you already know tho we already blow dro tho, the finest of the do do do doesnt who wouldnt wanna fuck wit yo boi white on the mic,high for life and thats right whats left when im gone nothing but this bong nothin but this bomb,lyrically assembled set to faze out dismember and gumble ur thoughts, ur words, ur senses and to humble
  • Hey man,STOP copying the chords of "The Legend of Zelda" game,the only thing you did was to change the instruments

  • i like this track!

  • Where can I dowload this song, please?

  • very very original...gotta love the keys and hip hop!!!! this group "INRG" got a very similar style to this but more up beat....check em out

  • oh their he is whats up what happend to all the people to all the evil well god got deafeted. "really so ur telling me we won he took the deal and left us cause we werent wrong". yup thats what is was son my spawn, mr samson your a great one. "well thanx father no dont thank me thank ur mom for having u" if it wasnt for u then everything would still be the same but now only demons and faith run this earth. so praise urselve u diserve this go on go raise hell on earth its yours kid.

  • as i walk threw the cold and lonley road i start to think what would the world be like if their wasnt anything but me, no life, no partying, no money. whats right and whats wrong if their is no one to point and blame me for what i have done. hmm did god take em all nah that can be were all sinners that fall from heaven then land on earth. so i guess i have been giving a second chance but fuk it i dont like church its full of skanks were is lucifer my main man.

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  • this aint evil... no were NEAR evil

  • I can believe these thoughts are running like music, I can feel the breakdown deep inside i think i just might lose it, If i fall, ima take you all, and then continue to creep and crawl, When Im dead to you all. i look into the mirror, i know thats its over, so if ima die i wont die after rolling over.

  • engulfed in the shadows my former self follows/ the castle built on the highest of mountains/ the bats the wolfs and the blood packed fountains/ take a sip of the wine as i spy from behind/ this massive glass pane window/ the world outside is oblivious to what goes on/ yet inside is where we quench our thirst for blood/ the dracula bat/ who discovered that/ the dracula stories they told you was all fake/ cbf ..continue it later or u can

  • suck it!

  • @spookyyeah check my music out it (doingrealbizz)

  • As for the tune itself (I don't know the proper terminology like if the piano is the melody or whatever - I'll learn methinks) it's got something to it - certain beats just have that certain something eh. I think it needs to be longer with some further development - I like the dark mood to it.

  • Ha this beat is soo ill

    keep it up!!!!

  • I like, it´s nice!

  • the title could be Dark Velvet lol

  • y is it that everytime i spit hatas wana make me quit but all i have to say is u can hate i just use u as bait for my next big catch damn all u so weak like a chick tryna hatch yea and u the reason rappins so pleasin

  • BIEN..-

  • Another day, everyday; got more hay blaze away

    Another case, I must face; fo today I'll escape

    Fo my mind contemplate, let it jus disintegrate

    Is it fate, this misery; will ever, ever be appeased

    Everything, I conceived; can it be make-believed

    I jus want, want to breathe; easily, into dreams

    Self achieve, all I need; everything I neva had

    I'll jus grasp, really fast; jus perhaps I will last

    Help git back, I won't ask; never ever I'll go back

    V

  • I'm not a big fan of rap, it's probably one of my least favourite genres of music, but I thought your lyrics went well with this beat, probably better than most if not all the commercial garbage I've heard :)

    On reflection I probably just haven't heard the right tunes to get into the genre...

  • Yea... it's mainstream media and their distortion of reality that fuels the ignorance of good rap music. Personally, I like all types of good music regardless of genre. But when it comes to rap, I'm okay, but pratice makes better. Thanx fo da comment man.

  • nasssty beat! keep it up

  • This always kind of reminded me of the fairy music in Ocarina of Time.

  • where is thumbs up for this rap because this beat is the shit and you are crap

  • true

  • nice beat its peacfull and i think sad in a way

  • this is phat can i use it??

    ill credit you homie

  • that shits fucking clean

  • mental scars are all thts left of a soul that was battered and bruised bullys took there toll this young stuttering ginger boy alone who wud jus sit and cry at home scared to pick up the phone till one day he tried to fight back got pushed on his back ,strangled crushed his throat flat was threatened to be stabbed and bottled kicked in the stomach and throttled his mates beat up one by one picked off his car got scracthed his parents flciked off so from then on he raps and his soul lives on
  • crazy rhymes dude. well done.

  • a kto igraet pesnu

  • done* sorry it's early in the mornin =P

  • Without any sense of life, without any sense of the bright side, Its empty in my mind, but still

    Trying to control my life, but Its hard to control the mind.

    Alone in the dark, but still together with dark thoughts.

    Alone in the yards, alone with these shards, broken shards of my heart.

    Its hard to remind the way it was, Its hard to understand that it belongs to the past, Its hard to see through the dust.

    Starring at the compass, trying to find the way back, back how it was.

  • everybody is so funny when its talk lonly in the night but evrybody's joke no can take your face to grounds,when you're in hell you can sing from mikael jackson,because you're not alone,the only with the demons,and now,you ask me how are you?just haunting like ghost here and there post a ciment from a somwhere,pure demon from vampire's night i'm just a only romanian guy;)

  • evrybody want to be an MC but evrybody its like an E.T.,now i'm teatrical piano in the mood night,i want to be just a kid with a normal life,maybe when grows up with a wife,i repeatly for anyone how seet this,in my city if you're not normal dude,all the people its on you like shit fist..and then..you're like caribean guy..a dead man's cest... peace or maybe romanian piss..;)

  • well dont both of u =)

  • nice rap tune. love it. I sing it to this piano beat and it worked great!!

  • good beat man i could really make something of this...

  • this crazy life ain't no joke}

    i stick to drinking i don't smoke}

    cus i used to do anything for a toke}

    16 years old and forced to be grown}

    the pain i feel is shown}

    in every verse}

    living in sin getting closer to riding in that black hearse}

    my scars tell my life story}

    seen the streets for what hey are bloody and gory}

    this is my life put in a story}

  • forever lost in this life of sorrow and pain}

    i try doing good but my past can't change so tell me what do i gain}

    reminising about when i was younger}

    when my demon was in slumber}

    as soon as i saw how the streets can be so mean}

    my demon side awoke i was just a kid i was thirteen}

    im a man of my word and i say what i mean}

    im sixteen now and rapping is all i got}

    its my pashion i lyrically speak every thought}

    when rapping i forget about the street and the posobility of getting shot}

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