I have to give you credit for a super great attempt. These were my observations. The lighting was wrong everywhere in the house. With good audio it would have been a lot better and the mom has to go. Everything she said did not sound natural at all, it sounded all fake. The blood on the shot on his back needed to look real. Oh and it needed some serious color correction. The directing and camera shots were great and creative! hope to see more movies from you!
to be frank, it was good. but to tell you something about the secrets of movie directing would be: avoid the manual zooming fromyour camera, if you want close up focus, be near them. excessive manual zoomin really disturbs the audiences. and also try to take the same shots with different angles as this will aware the audiences about the environment. i just wanted to give this tip. anyway nice work.
I have to give you credit for a super great attempt. These were my observations. The lighting was wrong everywhere in the house. With good audio it would have been a lot better and the mom has to go. Everything she said did not sound natural at all, it sounded all fake. The blood on the shot on his back needed to look real. Oh and it needed some serious color correction. The directing and camera shots were great and creative! hope to see more movies from you!
LRCProductionsUS 2 years ago
to be frank, it was good. but to tell you something about the secrets of movie directing would be: avoid the manual zooming fromyour camera, if you want close up focus, be near them. excessive manual zoomin really disturbs the audiences. and also try to take the same shots with different angles as this will aware the audiences about the environment. i just wanted to give this tip. anyway nice work.
abojung20 2 years ago
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FrankArmitage 2 years ago
VERY NICE.
THE LOOK WAS VERY NICE.
swainotv 3 years ago
I thought it was pretty good! :)
babyjaby 3 years ago