Yay, you made it longer! :D My advice is to make it even looonger (lawl), but also to put a spoiler warning somewhere in the description (since you dont want to change the video).
I also like the colored scenes, they make it a little more real. And I love the effects starting at 1:06
@TheSoSoHello Hehe. I am still woking on it. I told myself I'm not allowed to put anything else on youtube until I finish this one. Spoiler warning added. Thanks for commenting ^^
this is extremely well edited some of the colored scenes seem to be a little distracting though. also some scenes pan a little to quick but it does flow with the music, great job. other than that i suggest a spoiler warning and a to get rid of the film effect in the beginning so the viewer can read the text more legibly.
@nekokitkat2525hug Thank you! Which part of the colored scenes? Is it the ones around 1:15-1:25? Also, at the beginning, the film effect is on top of both the text and the picture. I think it might be more legible if I only put it on top of the picture. That way I could still keep the film effect. Sound good?
And again, thank you for the fave, and thank you for the comment. ^^
@TsubasaMoriElen hmm now that re-watched this several times over the color isnt as distracting as i initially thought. and yeah thats a great suggestion with the text. i cant wait to see the finished product ^_^. i shall subscribe now ^_^ and thank you for taking criticism. i myself enjoy constuctive criticism. it helps one improve and you my friend have great potential and you're editing is quite unique and enjoyable to watch even if this is a sad vid
@nekokitkat2525hug Eheheh. Thank you. I'm always looking to improve. Though, like I said in the description, I probably won't change anything for this particular vid >.>
Still, I like knowing so I can make the rest of the vid, and future vids, better ^^
Yay, you made it longer! :D My advice is to make it even looonger (lawl), but also to put a spoiler warning somewhere in the description (since you dont want to change the video).
I also like the colored scenes, they make it a little more real. And I love the effects starting at 1:06
TheSoSoHello 1 year ago
@TheSoSoHello Hehe. I am still woking on it. I told myself I'm not allowed to put anything else on youtube until I finish this one. Spoiler warning added. Thanks for commenting ^^
TsubasaMoriElen 1 year ago
this is extremely well edited some of the colored scenes seem to be a little distracting though. also some scenes pan a little to quick but it does flow with the music, great job. other than that i suggest a spoiler warning and a to get rid of the film effect in the beginning so the viewer can read the text more legibly.
again great job *favs*
nekokitkat2525hug 1 year ago
@nekokitkat2525hug Thank you! Which part of the colored scenes? Is it the ones around 1:15-1:25? Also, at the beginning, the film effect is on top of both the text and the picture. I think it might be more legible if I only put it on top of the picture. That way I could still keep the film effect. Sound good?
And again, thank you for the fave, and thank you for the comment. ^^
TsubasaMoriElen 1 year ago
@TsubasaMoriElen hmm now that re-watched this several times over the color isnt as distracting as i initially thought. and yeah thats a great suggestion with the text. i cant wait to see the finished product ^_^. i shall subscribe now ^_^ and thank you for taking criticism. i myself enjoy constuctive criticism. it helps one improve and you my friend have great potential and you're editing is quite unique and enjoyable to watch even if this is a sad vid
nekokitkat2525hug 1 year ago
@nekokitkat2525hug Eheheh. Thank you. I'm always looking to improve. Though, like I said in the description, I probably won't change anything for this particular vid >.>
Still, I like knowing so I can make the rest of the vid, and future vids, better ^^
TsubasaMoriElen 1 year ago
@TsubasaMoriElen yeah i understand and i cant wait to see the finished product and such ^_^
nekokitkat2525hug 1 year ago