I really liked this poem and want to hear more. Thank you it was beautiful. Please contact me if you have more. Irenerpizheva@ymail.com or Facebook :Irene R Millward-Pizheva. Keep writing.
I think that this is so beautiful, only so many people can write and not only claim to be amazing but to have be known by others. If you wrote this you are beautiful and i wish to hear more.
Thank you very much my friend. Yes I did write the poem. If you want to hear more I have a couple other videos of my poetry, just check my vids.
I appreciate all that you say, thank you again. Let me know what you think of the other poems. I will most likely be posting some new ones soon!!! Thanks for subscribing also... 8-)
I'm not going to praise you, since your ego is far too high for its own good, but it is an insightful poem. Of course, by today's standard, an insightful poem is anything that's not dripped with misguided romanticism of puppy love.
Anyhow, if I were to make a quick guess, I would have presumed that you were talking about how sad it is that so many dwells on the regrets and mistakes of the past, in this poem represented by dreams, that they sometimes realize it far too late.
They lived most their life with regret, unable to move on and enjoy it, until they realized their mistaken - then it is too late, it is already high noon in their life. Then they start to regret their inactions fears their day have ended. But in the end, it's of not importance and perhaps they can all start again in the morning.
This is taking a metaphorical view of the poem, of course. But I got that impression from it.
*grins big* What is that about my ego??? You are one to talk!!! Actually, you have just fed my ego, thank you!!!
You are the first person to figure out the main purpose of this song on their first guess without needing help. Kudos my friend!!! I rather like your rendition of this poem's meaning, it flows better than mine. Hahaha
I suggest just looking on my page, it doesn't have that many views so it would be hard to find otherwise. It is called "Five Realizations of Happiness with Music"
That is the second completed version, I posted the same thing earlier without the music, but I finally found out how to put it on.
I just want to warn you it is a little somber and depressing, but I like it!!!
Okay cool, I will be putting up a new poem this Friday night!!! I don't make videos that often because I have WMM and it always kicks me off if I am on too long...
The exact thing always happens to me and it always pisses me off. That is why I so rarely make videos. When I started making them I was using someone else's computer, then I when I got internet at my home, it wouldn't let me do it that often...
Hahaha, the same thing happens to me!!! I pirate wireless internet from a neighbor (with their consent), and quite often it just shuts itself off. I can't even watch videos on YT except in the late evening, or in the middle of the night!!!
You are lucky, I don't have a digital camera, but I might be getting a web cam soon. Somebody requested I film myself reciting a poem so they can judge my reaction and obtain the fully intended emotion meant to be conveyed to them...
I have a camera but is an old one that really, really sucks. I usually use the video recorders and cameras provided at my school, I am an official film crew member and photographer...
I am sorry to hear that your camera broke!!! That really sucks!!
Hey!! ^^ They gave me permission and I offered to pay them each month, but they wouldn't accept the money. They said so long as it doesn't affect their connection or bill, they don't care!!!
yeah well i don't have anger problems I'm just stubborn and like to do things my own way I also love disageeing.. I'm a very difficult person to get along with.
Either we are the perfect match, or you are saying that for my benefit. Because I am constantly told that it is very difficult to get along with me. People say I am belligerent, and a strew of other things.
Hehehe, me too!!! The only problem I have ever had is a heated debate that turned to blows. But we still remained friends, we just got a little carried away... ^^
I agree the fight has to be worth it, unfortunately the arguments were that important to us. But some friends broke it up before we did any real damage.... ^^
What did you get in a fight for???
Don't worry, you are a little to far for me to punch you, hehehe 8-)
this guy was being a prastt about animal rights he said they had none then we had a big debate he then hit me not too hard but still then i punched him in the place he needs most... then he whacked me against the wall and so on and so on...
Don't worry, those are just the ramblings of an inane, insecure man. He wants to express his lack of superiority by being seemingly better more important than the world's animals. In essence we wouldn't be alive without them, true, but they are not for our pleasures...
how depressing!!! i put a comment with all my heart and soul in that my computer temporarily disconnected. *sigh* i liked my answer, but what going to put isn't going to be the same again. anyways, here it goes:
it is with great regret when people do not seize the day in life. when there is a chance when in the start of the morning, there is renewed hope and opportunities in life. but sadly, people seem to hope too much and not act at all. with such night in their life, why couldn't we...
do as much as we can during the early morning, noon and even night?
what problems to much in our lives to see that there is light at the end of the tunnel. there is hope for a better day when we stop dwelling on our regrets, fears, an insecurities. the time is ticking and life is slowly slipping away and whether you want to let that "impromptu awaking of day" to have new insecurities in life, the rest of the day will follow. we hope at night will, you start by morning?
Excellent Job Jestin!!! I must admit the most thoroughly correct answer yet!!! There is only one small point everyone seems to miss, but that is nearly negligible compared with your interpretation of the poem!!! I love it Jester, you are 100% correct!!!
I'm sorry your computer cut you off, if your first answer was better, I would VERY much like to hear it, because I don't think I could have explained it better myself!!! 8-)
one small point? now i want to know. you got me curious...hmm...
one of the reasons it took me so long is that i wanted to take apart going period by period on that poem. that process usually takes me a long time. right a turn paper or give an inspirational speech on that. but i just gave a compact answer that kind of summarizes my opinion on it.
its just that it is really good and has much to talk about. i like doing expository teaching on things like this. but i lack the time cause of school
omgosh , that was really good =] i cant never do that, wow you got some serious skills , you should make a book with ur poems dude , like the one at java night, well keep on the great work !!! see you at school =]
Thanks a lot Erika!!! I actually am in the process of making a book. So far I have about fifty poems in it, but it isn't up to my standards yet, so I don't know if I am going to get it published yet. I am glad you liked the poem!!! 8-)
Yup!!! Hehehe ^^ I wrote this about two months ago. Right now I have a little bit of writer's block, so I haven't been able to write anything good lately. But I am glad you enjoyed it!!! Thanks so much, hehehe 8-)
I really love it all! The music and pictures and poem all together! 5 stars! And I agree about wasting time. I myself like to have the entire day to do things and sleep at night. And I also agree about actually doing things instead of just dreaming.
Thank you princesmagical!!! I was trying to keep it simple with less pictures, so as to further the symbolism of the poem. I'm glad you appreciated that, and I appreciate you comment, hehehe ^^
I'm happy that the poem had meaning to you, and I completely agree with you, hehehe 8-)
Hehe, very very nice poem you wrote, Trevor. ^^ It came out so well and you're definitely a fabulous writer! hehe. ^^ I told you that it was going to be great, the poem you were working on. ^^ Your writing abilities are so well done! I could never do such a thing like this! Keep up the fantastic work my friend! ^^ It's definitely a 5/5 for me! I enjoyed it very much. ^^
Thank you TS!!! I really appreciate it, hehehe ^^ I still think it could have used a little more work, but I am glad you liked it, after all you wanted me to put one up, hehehe!!! 8-)
Remember, this took me years of practice, I'm sure with a little practice you will one day be a better writer than myself!!! I have never seen your writing so for all I know, you may already be a better writer than me, hehehe !!! ^^
Wow! Feareous, that was really really great. ^^ A very meaningful and deep poem my friend. ^^ Didn't know you were a writer of such marvelous work. hehe. ^^ That is one of the best poems I've heard in a long while. ^^ Yes, I typically only comment on TLK stuff, but this was well worth the listen and I feel as though my life is a bit more meaningful from simply hearing this wonderful poem. ^^ Very nicely done my friend. 5/5! Keep up the outstanding work! :)
Aww...Thank you so much KM!!! 8-) You have no idea how much I appreciate that!!! I'm glad you liked the poem, and I'm am glad found some inner meaning!! ^^ That is the point of my poetry, to impair ideals I think important in life, hehehe!!! Thanks again KM!!!
this is really good... great job. it reminds me of something i wrote a couple of years ago(not as good as yours though, i have to admit that) as for what your poem meant to me, it's about wasted time.. about thnigs we would like to do but never dare to pursue.. people who are too afraid to live and face reality.. people who find their peace in dreams, because it is easier sometimes.. and then someday you realise that you have spend your life dreaming instead of actually living it..
I really liked this poem and want to hear more. Thank you it was beautiful. Please contact me if you have more. Irenerpizheva@ymail.com or Facebook :Irene R Millward-Pizheva. Keep writing.
Kind Regards
Rosa
rosapizheva 1 year ago
I think that this is so beautiful, only so many people can write and not only claim to be amazing but to have be known by others. If you wrote this you are beautiful and i wish to hear more.
xcdysk 3 years ago
Thank you very much my friend. Yes I did write the poem. If you want to hear more I have a couple other videos of my poetry, just check my vids.
I appreciate all that you say, thank you again. Let me know what you think of the other poems. I will most likely be posting some new ones soon!!! Thanks for subscribing also... 8-)
Feareous 3 years ago
I'm not going to praise you, since your ego is far too high for its own good, but it is an insightful poem. Of course, by today's standard, an insightful poem is anything that's not dripped with misguided romanticism of puppy love.
Anyhow, if I were to make a quick guess, I would have presumed that you were talking about how sad it is that so many dwells on the regrets and mistakes of the past, in this poem represented by dreams, that they sometimes realize it far too late.
Sylpharios 3 years ago
They lived most their life with regret, unable to move on and enjoy it, until they realized their mistaken - then it is too late, it is already high noon in their life. Then they start to regret their inactions fears their day have ended. But in the end, it's of not importance and perhaps they can all start again in the morning.
This is taking a metaphorical view of the poem, of course. But I got that impression from it.
Sylpharios 3 years ago
*grins big* What is that about my ego??? You are one to talk!!! Actually, you have just fed my ego, thank you!!!
You are the first person to figure out the main purpose of this song on their first guess without needing help. Kudos my friend!!! I rather like your rendition of this poem's meaning, it flows better than mine. Hahaha
Feareous 3 years ago
nice poem 5*
2814310 3 years ago
Thanks!!! I appreciate it immensely!!!
8-)
Feareous 3 years ago
wow ace
:)
soodleb 3 years ago
Thank you!!! I really appreciate it!!! If you can let me know what you think of the other poem I posted too, thanks again 8-)
Feareous 3 years ago
sure i will...
what's it called so i can find it.
soodleb 3 years ago
Thank you so much!!!
I suggest just looking on my page, it doesn't have that many views so it would be hard to find otherwise. It is called "Five Realizations of Happiness with Music"
That is the second completed version, I posted the same thing earlier without the music, but I finally found out how to put it on.
I just want to warn you it is a little somber and depressing, but I like it!!!
8-)
Feareous 3 years ago
you don't have to warn me of that ...i love depressing poems....I will look for it mate.
soodleb 3 years ago
Well, if that's the case then you should love the majority of my poetry...I am a somber writer of realism!!!
The other poem you are looking up is a free verse poem!!! I usually post a new poem on my page each week, if you are interest
Thanks buddy!!!
Feareous 3 years ago
thankyou and yes i am interested...
keep up the good work
soodleb 3 years ago
Okay cool, I will be putting up a new poem this Friday night!!! I don't make videos that often because I have WMM and it always kicks me off if I am on too long...
Thanks again!!! 8-)
Feareous 3 years ago
yeah my wmm always get's messed up and i loose vids the whole time...
:)
soodleb 3 years ago
The exact thing always happens to me and it always pisses me off. That is why I so rarely make videos. When I started making them I was using someone else's computer, then I when I got internet at my home, it wouldn't let me do it that often...
Feareous 3 years ago
yeah mate really annoying after all the effort we put in
arghhhh.
i usually just make vids of my pets on a camera then all i have to dom is put them on the computer and they're ready to upload.
although that doesn't always happen usually the web page expires before the vid has uploaded.
soodleb 3 years ago
Hahaha, the same thing happens to me!!! I pirate wireless internet from a neighbor (with their consent), and quite often it just shuts itself off. I can't even watch videos on YT except in the late evening, or in the middle of the night!!!
You are lucky, I don't have a digital camera, but I might be getting a web cam soon. Somebody requested I film myself reciting a poem so they can judge my reaction and obtain the fully intended emotion meant to be conveyed to them...
Feareous 3 years ago
that's a good idea mate....
yeah i don't have a camera at the mo , i borrow one froma mate, i love pohtography so you can imagine what a state i was in when my camera broke.
how bad of you oooooohhhhhhh "pirate" bloke
:) :) :)
soodleb 3 years ago
I know!!!
I have a camera but is an old one that really, really sucks. I usually use the video recorders and cameras provided at my school, I am an official film crew member and photographer...
I am sorry to hear that your camera broke!!! That really sucks!!
Hey!! ^^ They gave me permission and I offered to pay them each month, but they wouldn't accept the money. They said so long as it doesn't affect their connection or bill, they don't care!!!
8-)
Feareous 3 years ago
hahahah
i was only joking,
you are truley a saint I'm sure
hehe
:) :)
soodleb 3 years ago
Hahaha, I know!!! I just wanted to give you a hard time, hehehe ^^
Trust me I am not a saint, but I do have a strict set of moral guidelines!!!
You are probably, no you are more of a saint than me!!! 8-)
Feareous 3 years ago
oh the cheek of you I am so i am "saint Soodle"
hahaha only joing some say i haveno morals to controll myself but i do and they are to not controll myself hahahahahahaha
soodleb 3 years ago
LOL, if not to control yourself, then to control who, those around you??? ^^
Feareous 3 years ago
NO WAY i would never want to change anyone no matter how evil they are...
not controlling myself is controlling myself...
I would go mad if i had set rules.
soodleb 3 years ago
Too true, my friend too true...
I have a set of rules, but they are rarely followed... I try and control myself though, I have anger problems unfortunately...
Feareous 3 years ago
hehe
yeah well i don't have anger problems I'm just stubborn and like to do things my own way I also love disageeing.. I'm a very difficult person to get along with.
hehe
soodleb 3 years ago
Either we are the perfect match, or you are saying that for my benefit. Because I am constantly told that it is very difficult to get along with me. People say I am belligerent, and a strew of other things.
Hehehe, I, too, love to argue...
Feareous 3 years ago
nope not just sayin that but hey if we love to argue soooo much i can't see us getting along too well....
but hey so far we're fine
hehehehehehehehehehehehe
soodleb 3 years ago
Hehehehe 8-)
How do you know, an argument can keep our friendship going... ^^
But true we don't want to argue too much!!!
:P
Feareous 3 years ago
hehe yeah trie... I like to argue and don't always (in fact hardly ever) have to fall out with the person.
hehe
:)
soodleb 3 years ago
Hehehe, me too!!! The only problem I have ever had is a heated debate that turned to blows. But we still remained friends, we just got a little carried away... ^^
Feareous 3 years ago
I'm definatly no violent but I can beat people up alright, was in a fight the other day... but it has to be about something worth it.
hehe please don't punch me mate
heheheh
:) :) :)
soodleb 3 years ago
I agree the fight has to be worth it, unfortunately the arguments were that important to us. But some friends broke it up before we did any real damage.... ^^
What did you get in a fight for???
Don't worry, you are a little to far for me to punch you, hehehe 8-)
Feareous 3 years ago
this guy was being a prastt about animal rights he said they had none then we had a big debate he then hit me not too hard but still then i punched him in the place he needs most... then he whacked me against the wall and so on and so on...
I WON though
soodleb 3 years ago
Good for you!!! Fight the good fight!!! 8-)
I wonder why he would say that...
Feareous 3 years ago
yeah it has to be about something I'll care about befor i get out my fists....
he was just a pratt that's why he saud it... he went on about how animald were here for us too eat and wear and hunt... what a plank he was.
soodleb 3 years ago
Don't worry, those are just the ramblings of an inane, insecure man. He wants to express his lack of superiority by being seemingly better more important than the world's animals. In essence we wouldn't be alive without them, true, but they are not for our pleasures...
I'm sorry that guy was such an ass...
Feareous 3 years ago
never mind at least i won hehe
and he deserved the great wallop he got.
soodleb 3 years ago
I agree!!! Kudos!!! 8-)
Feareous 3 years ago
lol
soodleb 3 years ago
how depressing!!! i put a comment with all my heart and soul in that my computer temporarily disconnected. *sigh* i liked my answer, but what going to put isn't going to be the same again. anyways, here it goes:
it is with great regret when people do not seize the day in life. when there is a chance when in the start of the morning, there is renewed hope and opportunities in life. but sadly, people seem to hope too much and not act at all. with such night in their life, why couldn't we...
jesterimb 3 years ago
do as much as we can during the early morning, noon and even night?
what problems to much in our lives to see that there is light at the end of the tunnel. there is hope for a better day when we stop dwelling on our regrets, fears, an insecurities. the time is ticking and life is slowly slipping away and whether you want to let that "impromptu awaking of day" to have new insecurities in life, the rest of the day will follow. we hope at night will, you start by morning?
that's all i got trevor
jesterimb 3 years ago
Excellent Job Jestin!!! I must admit the most thoroughly correct answer yet!!! There is only one small point everyone seems to miss, but that is nearly negligible compared with your interpretation of the poem!!! I love it Jester, you are 100% correct!!!
I'm sorry your computer cut you off, if your first answer was better, I would VERY much like to hear it, because I don't think I could have explained it better myself!!! 8-)
Feareous 3 years ago
one small point? now i want to know. you got me curious...hmm...
one of the reasons it took me so long is that i wanted to take apart going period by period on that poem. that process usually takes me a long time. right a turn paper or give an inspirational speech on that. but i just gave a compact answer that kind of summarizes my opinion on it.
its just that it is really good and has much to talk about. i like doing expository teaching on things like this. but i lack the time cause of school
jesterimb 3 years ago
So wonderful! I luv your poems so much!
-Scarlett
OurStarChristineDaae 3 years ago
Why thank you Scarlett, I dearly appreciate it!!!
-Rhett
Feareous 3 years ago
omgosh , that was really good =] i cant never do that, wow you got some serious skills , you should make a book with ur poems dude , like the one at java night, well keep on the great work !!! see you at school =]
thegooniegirl13 3 years ago
Thanks a lot Erika!!! I actually am in the process of making a book. So far I have about fifty poems in it, but it isn't up to my standards yet, so I don't know if I am going to get it published yet. I am glad you liked the poem!!! 8-)
Feareous 3 years ago
So you wrote this huh? That's really good!
Kristanni20X6 3 years ago
Yup!!! Hehehe ^^ I wrote this about two months ago. Right now I have a little bit of writer's block, so I haven't been able to write anything good lately. But I am glad you enjoyed it!!! Thanks so much, hehehe 8-)
Feareous 3 years ago
I really love it all! The music and pictures and poem all together! 5 stars! And I agree about wasting time. I myself like to have the entire day to do things and sleep at night. And I also agree about actually doing things instead of just dreaming.
princessmagical 3 years ago
Thank you princesmagical!!! I was trying to keep it simple with less pictures, so as to further the symbolism of the poem. I'm glad you appreciated that, and I appreciate you comment, hehehe ^^
I'm happy that the poem had meaning to you, and I completely agree with you, hehehe 8-)
Feareous 3 years ago
Hehe, very very nice poem you wrote, Trevor. ^^ It came out so well and you're definitely a fabulous writer! hehe. ^^ I told you that it was going to be great, the poem you were working on. ^^ Your writing abilities are so well done! I could never do such a thing like this! Keep up the fantastic work my friend! ^^ It's definitely a 5/5 for me! I enjoyed it very much. ^^
TeenSimba 3 years ago
Thank you TS!!! I really appreciate it, hehehe ^^ I still think it could have used a little more work, but I am glad you liked it, after all you wanted me to put one up, hehehe!!! 8-)
Remember, this took me years of practice, I'm sure with a little practice you will one day be a better writer than myself!!! I have never seen your writing so for all I know, you may already be a better writer than me, hehehe !!! ^^
Thanks again!!!
Feareous 3 years ago
Wow! Feareous, that was really really great. ^^ A very meaningful and deep poem my friend. ^^ Didn't know you were a writer of such marvelous work. hehe. ^^ That is one of the best poems I've heard in a long while. ^^ Yes, I typically only comment on TLK stuff, but this was well worth the listen and I feel as though my life is a bit more meaningful from simply hearing this wonderful poem. ^^ Very nicely done my friend. 5/5! Keep up the outstanding work! :)
KiarasMate 3 years ago
Aww...Thank you so much KM!!! 8-) You have no idea how much I appreciate that!!! I'm glad you liked the poem, and I'm am glad found some inner meaning!! ^^ That is the point of my poetry, to impair ideals I think important in life, hehehe!!! Thanks again KM!!!
Feareous 3 years ago
this is really good... great job. it reminds me of something i wrote a couple of years ago(not as good as yours though, i have to admit that) as for what your poem meant to me, it's about wasted time.. about thnigs we would like to do but never dare to pursue.. people who are too afraid to live and face reality.. people who find their peace in dreams, because it is easier sometimes.. and then someday you realise that you have spend your life dreaming instead of actually living it..
blackfafa 3 years ago
Thank you blackfafa!!! I really appreciate it!!! ^^ I would sure like to hear the poem you wrote a couple of year ago 8-)
Great job on the symbolism!!! When I wrote this poem I intended two meanings, and you figured out the main one, hehehe congratulations!!! ^^
Feareous 3 years ago
Great poem feareous!!!
zachfannypack 3 years ago
Thank you so much zachfannypack!!! I am glad you enjoyed it ^^
Feareous 3 years ago