yes the modeling was great, and if thats you area of experties then i must say, wow. But animation was still a little rough.... of course who am i to say anything, im a noob.
Music is distracting and not a good match for your excellent Gumby animation. Choose something that matchs the pace and color depth of your animation. The model of the torture chamber is very dark and disturbing to me personally. I feel you have a lot of talent and you should headline with something else more positive for such a short piece.
You are a good environment modeler, but your organic modeling and animation need work. You need to show that you can create realistic characters and have a good sense of anatomy before you move on to cartoon characters. Lastly, nobody likes t-poses. Pose your characters and make them interesting.
I am growing the TickleMe Plant. It is the most animated plant in the world , It actaully MOVES when you Tickle It! Now you can easily grow it indoors year round!
Its more then just a craze! Just google TickleMe Plant
With what IS animated (like others say, you need more actually animated) you need more secondary animation. This is the build up to and let down from the actual animation. For example, your blue cube fellow moves, sure, but it'd be better if there was some sort of lead up to the movement, etc. Please pm if you need further explanation.
I am a senior in high school and a prospective Computer Animation student. I was just seeing if you were from a school i have heard of or not,so i could check it out and match a student work to it. However Germany is pretty far and would be expensive for me, plus my German is really bad.
there are many good schools out there. If u got the money and really want to grow big in 3d business i would prefer vancouver filmschool for example. good luck for it
You need to work some more on your animating. The last blue cube didn't quite look like it was jumping. You need to add an anticipation before each jump. Arching his body forward, hunching a bit maybe like humans do before jumping forward for instance. :)
The first shot really got me with the whole realism thing, which good realistic animation should
My opinion - the simple rectangular prism characters looked way better and more realistic than the more complex characters. I didnt like the mouse or fly/alien
I guess most these comments deserve to go on the actually videos themselves, but who doesn't love feedback?
Please check out my short films and web series, feedback would be nice. My new one is Ash the Depressant ,it has two episodes so far
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MercedesNoah 2 days ago
THUMBS UP IF U HAVE NO IDEA HOW U GOT HERE!!!
pinas45 1 week ago
0:53 look to the right... :S my god
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sarojbaniya 2 months ago
I like the plane
adriamil 6 months ago
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rakeshsethia1 6 months ago
ok
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Olixennon 7 months ago
real nice vid .. why so many bad comments??
someTillrautert 7 months ago
@someTillrautert Because some people just appreciate to demoralize others....
SemoxZombieCore 1 month ago
yes the modeling was great, and if thats you area of experties then i must say, wow. But animation was still a little rough.... of course who am i to say anything, im a noob.
Eross42 8 months ago
cool
COFYification 9 months ago
I am surprised there are so many dislikes. Overall, I think the modeling is excellent. I would like to see more motion in the demo reel.
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djbigrich24 11 months ago
Music is distracting and not a good match for your excellent Gumby animation. Choose something that matchs the pace and color depth of your animation. The model of the torture chamber is very dark and disturbing to me personally. I feel you have a lot of talent and you should headline with something else more positive for such a short piece.
NYFL2156 1 year ago
Music is distracting and not a good match for your excellent animation. Choose something that matchs the pace and color depth of your animations.
NYFL2156 1 year ago
You are a good environment modeler, but your organic modeling and animation need work. You need to show that you can create realistic characters and have a good sense of anatomy before you move on to cartoon characters. Lastly, nobody likes t-poses. Pose your characters and make them interesting.
koopakilla89 1 year ago
Great stuff!
Mixamo3DAnimation 1 year ago
Why are there so many dislikes??
ManservantPablo 1 year ago
I am growing the TickleMe Plant. It is the most animated plant in the world , It actaully MOVES when you Tickle It! Now you can easily grow it indoors year round!
Its more then just a craze! Just google TickleMe Plant
Martha344b 1 year ago
Nice solid models but if you are planning on going into animation you might want to work on your timing and get some lip sync and acting in there.
xXAceXx 1 year ago
With what IS animated (like others say, you need more actually animated) you need more secondary animation. This is the build up to and let down from the actual animation. For example, your blue cube fellow moves, sure, but it'd be better if there was some sort of lead up to the movement, etc. Please pm if you need further explanation.
Hewithlogic 1 year ago
Really bad animation and You didn't show good wireframes for your models.
Ikimono 1 year ago
theres nothing wrong with aiming for generalist for start! nice work :D
javarajavara 1 year ago
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that was the most stupidest thing i have ever seen in my life.......
jbvgold 2 years ago
commersial based reels have more influince than personal demo reels u will have better luck finding better jobs!
martok666 2 years ago
whats this meant to be?
LoneWhiteWolf13 2 years ago
What u mean?
KoRnflakes000 2 years ago
never mind forget it.
LoneWhiteWolf13 2 years ago
Nice work, but I think more acting animation is needed.
walkingpuppet 2 years ago
ure right im working on it ^^
KoRnflakes000 2 years ago
pretty cool... but i'm confused, is this a modeling reel or an animation reel? Let's see some wireframes on all those models.
a55a55inx 2 years ago
its more an all over reel ^^ next reel would be bigger with wires etc
KoRnflakes000 2 years ago
nice work
TakYamaguchi 2 years ago
you're a good animator man!......how about...
mak'n youre demo reel a bit COOL....
like putting some stories on it...
voicing on in.....
introduction and other things you're viewers would think its COOL :D
it's a suggestion my friend.!!!
GOOD job! :D
jayblueridgesumilhig 2 years ago
k thx for this advise ...will c if i hints maybe i can consider it for the 09 reel.
KoRnflakes000 2 years ago
what song waz that
jettwitty 2 years ago
made by a friend of me
KoRnflakes000 2 years ago
My opinion,
Do some short story lines, with voicing and such
TO show character feelings and emotion
Make a short film basically
There cooler than just Animation
Much cooler
:p
zacdamac87 2 years ago
I've made some shorts. just look in my gallery
KoRnflakes000 2 years ago
wha?
xrave778 2 years ago
hey guyz see this too
nice 3d library!! remove space and see
youtube . com / watch ? v = Y7Lkr5fjpiE
vikastoxik 2 years ago
that cube is a hungarian contrivance by Leslie RUBIK :D
greet from Hungary!
kaktusztuske 2 years ago
Sympa, mais peut-être un peu trop statique...
Popopse 2 years ago
you´re genius☺☺☺
zonissan 2 years ago
das sieht GENIAL aus,wue alt warst du als du mit Moddeling und Co angefangen hast?
DonPyroinflames 3 years ago
oh danke für die blumen. Ich war 23 oder besser gesagt ...es ist ca 2jahre her
KoRnflakes000 3 years ago
und wie alr warst du als du dich bei der VFS beworben hast?
Ich will da nämlich auch hin bin aber nur 15 :)
DonPyroinflames 3 years ago
na das war im rahmen des wettbewerbs letztes jahr. Leider ging das ganze wegn den behörden hier ja ordentlich schief so dass ich nicht zum vfs bin.
KoRnflakes000 3 years ago
ach stimmt hast du im video geschreiben aber ich hab leider nich verstanden was da genau war, naja mein english mit 15 is nich das beste :)
DonPyroinflames 3 years ago
das war letztes jahr im rahmen eines wettbewerbs. Wurde ja leider nix (u.a. wegn den deutsch behörden).
KoRnflakes000 3 years ago
real nice shading :)
rizzymcrisdon 3 years ago
what school did you attend?
lard444 3 years ago
MD.H Berlin but was more selflearning. Its not a CG-only school. Why u ask ?
KoRnflakes000 3 years ago
I am a senior in high school and a prospective Computer Animation student. I was just seeing if you were from a school i have heard of or not,so i could check it out and match a student work to it. However Germany is pretty far and would be expensive for me, plus my German is really bad.
lard444 3 years ago
there are many good schools out there. If u got the money and really want to grow big in 3d business i would prefer vancouver filmschool for example. good luck for it
KoRnflakes000 3 years ago
I'm actually looking into Ringling. It's actually rated #1 in North America by 3DWorldMag, where VFS is like, #3 or less.
Although VFS is really nice, and about the same price as Ringling, Ringling is closer to home and VFS dosen't give you a bachelors degree.
Ty Ty though, i need all the help i can get with the application/portfolio deadline around the corner.
lard444 3 years ago
Good modeling and texturing skills.
You need to work some more on your animating. The last blue cube didn't quite look like it was jumping. You need to add an anticipation before each jump. Arching his body forward, hunching a bit maybe like humans do before jumping forward for instance. :)
aengelius 3 years ago
:D greetings from DA ;)
o2DYl 3 years ago
How can that work be enhanced? That was great.
MegKM 3 years ago
Awesome!
dolekjole 3 years ago
The first shot really got me with the whole realism thing, which good realistic animation should
My opinion - the simple rectangular prism characters looked way better and more realistic than the more complex characters. I didnt like the mouse or fly/alien
I guess most these comments deserve to go on the actually videos themselves, but who doesn't love feedback?
Please check out my short films and web series, feedback would be nice. My new one is Ash the Depressant ,it has two episodes so far
ZexkStudios 3 years ago
Good, Really shows what you can do - University this anyday :).
Here are some things i thought.
The text bit at the start, with like your name and bit. I really liked that. The music was cool too.
The fly/alien thing - gravity seemed a bit off i thought.
Baby G-raf was cool tho.
And i pictured the mouse in the plane aha.
The rubics cube from the VFS entry was cool, especially the reflection in the white square.
ZexkStudios 3 years ago