I wish Joe was about to propose to Camilla then he realized how much he loved demi more.JEMI IS PERFECT FOR EACH OTHER!WHY CAN'T THEY REALIZE THAT??Grr they better get together soon or..........THE DEMI LOVATO CD GETS IT!(points a machine gun at a Demi CD) so whats it gonna be Joe?Let the girl you Love die???MUAHAHAHA x]
OHHH- What are you going to do Joseph??? Blah... I hope Bryan and Camilla gets together and someone else comes to be with Demi so she dont suffer so much and then Joe could be jealous and realized how she feels about her!
5. um, i think he'll regret it because now that incident will forever be a part of her & she'll always remember him as her first, & if he doesnt return feelings, she's gonna hurt.
this was a really great job.
you should be confident because you're a good writer.
1. It's really well written.. I think it's great as it is.
2. Nop
3. Nopp
4. I agree with most of them, the beach part, well the shooting star part, was really cute and sweet.
5. I hope Demi not get pregnant. I think Joe is going to freak out (he's already freaking out) because Demi was still a virgin and Idk I think he's going to drift apart from her because of that... We can always trust Joe to screw up... lol
i knew it! and i love the maturity
renesmevato2 8 months ago
awesomed
twilightgodess13 1 year ago
luv the story its getting interesting xxx
123ruj123 2 years ago
1.)Yes
2.)NO
3.)DEFINATELY NO
4.)the makeout/cex moment x]
5.)Joe is gonna change his mind and go back to Camilla=[
xoPeaceLuvBffxo 2 years ago
I wish Joe was about to propose to Camilla then he realized how much he loved demi more.JEMI IS PERFECT FOR EACH OTHER!WHY CAN'T THEY REALIZE THAT??Grr they better get together soon or..........THE DEMI LOVATO CD GETS IT!(points a machine gun at a Demi CD) so whats it gonna be Joe?Let the girl you Love die???MUAHAHAHA x]
xoPeaceLuvBffxo 2 years ago
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MORE , MORE , MORE !
FannDemiLovato 2 years ago
WOW.
But I am so happy that it was Joe to take her virginity and not Brian or one of her past boyfriends xD
Can't wait for the next one!
PLz post soon xD
whatsupsunshine 2 years ago
Awesome!!!!!! :)
Love it!!!
mjonas1910 2 years ago
O-M-J : D
jemilov 2 years ago
omj!!! :D
Jemifan1000 2 years ago
i really like how u describe it...not too much perv..but kinda sweet...and make me laugh the end..hahaha , idk why...
thekrolinsign2 2 years ago
OHHH- What are you going to do Joseph??? Blah... I hope Bryan and Camilla gets together and someone else comes to be with Demi so she dont suffer so much and then Joe could be jealous and realized how she feels about her!
superfan15vane 2 years ago
woah intense
1. yeah
2. no
3. no
4. the shooting star
5. joe's gunna run away leaving demi heary broken...
kuhadiza 2 years ago
1.)yes
2.)your choice
3.)definitely no
4.)the shooting star / the wish
5.)Bryan will find out and breaks up with demi,demi's a little bit hurt,so joe comforts her and starts falling for her.....
kuteybear1734 2 years ago
great awesome story worth the wait
gioangel13 2 years ago
1. yeah sure.
2. nope!!!
3. no way!!!
4. jemi kiss!!!! :)
5. demi will get pregnant, and/or bryan will break up with demi. maybe joe will start falling for demi again...?
MAKE THE NEXT ONE SOON!!! LOVE IT!!!
denisegirl123 2 years ago
1. yes
2. no
3. no
4. i liked it all, i honestly cant pick. :)
5. um, i think he'll regret it because now that incident will forever be a part of her & she'll always remember him as her first, & if he doesnt return feelings, she's gonna hurt.
this was a really great job.
you should be confident because you're a good writer.
keep up the good work. :)
innernerd123 2 years ago
+ yes.
+ nope.
+ nope
+ the shooting star part:D
+ uhmm.he gets her pregnant?but i dont want that to happen.maybe they will have a big argument about it?
anywaysssss...............GREAT EPISODE!
oh and i saw the live chat:DJemi better kiss in CR2!haah.
aznpnaixx23 2 years ago
1. yup
2. nope
3. no
4. the wish =D
5. hmm i dont know but make the other one
x0mrssprouse0x 2 years ago
ahaha that was weridd i liked it tho cause they love each other ahaha !
1. yeahh i guess .
2. nahh
3. no wayyy !
4. the wish (: & kiss !
5. idk i hope they just like not talk for a couple days that would SUCK !
millyyx3 2 years ago
1. yupp
2. nahh
3. nopee
4. demi's wishhh :)
5. not sureee. but no 'demi getting pregnant' thing :\
more soon!?!
xoalexisNsamxo 2 years ago
1. yes
2. nope
3. nope
4. the shooting star part
5. wow....idk. joe's gonna feel like a douche.
Xilovejb00X 2 years ago
1. Don't care.
2. Don't care.
3. Don't care.
4. Jemi's kiss. (:
5. Bryan finds out, so he breaks up with her, and Joe really starts to fall for her.
kneykney11 2 years ago
1. it''s alright.
2. nope.
3. nope. keep it if it's JEMI only :)
4. when demi and joe were staring at each other because he was passing her, her cover up.
5. i hope she doesn't get pregnant. it always happens, and then she'll get mad at him, and we don't want that to happen, do we? =]
SelTwiDemJBMil244 2 years ago
+ Yeah its cool
+ no
+ noo
+ when he kissed demi and told him wishes do come true. and then how he freaked out at the end
+ idk
tonyygirl 2 years ago
1. it's fine :P
2. nop its just right
3. nop
4. my fav part is when demi tells joe that she wished for him to kiss her <3
5. joe will maybe regret it and demi is gonna be really pissed and mayb they have an argument and yeah :P
LOVED IT!
iSailorJupiter 2 years ago
i hope its a girl!!!!
haha
j/k...i doubt she'll get preggers.
lol. i dont want her too...
GREAT EPPIE!
jenn2220 2 years ago
1.) Love it ;)
2.) Keep it like it is :D
3.) Nope!
4.) The shooting star part. ;D
5.) I predict you post the next episode SOON,& when you do, Demi will not be pregnant, cuz that always ruins everything :(
haha, LOVED IT :D
xAshleyxAmyx 2 years ago
1. yep! :)
2. nope
3. no way
4. shooting star :D
5. you'll post another episode!
XhateX290 2 years ago
+ Yes :)
+ Nope ;D
+ NO
+ shooting star :)
+ theres a slight chance...unless they do "it" again later on in the story...because in the trailer, it says that Demi gets pregnant...so idk :P
iluvcookiies3x3 2 years ago
it's really sad that joe's using her
jonash12341 2 years ago
1.Loved it!
2.Nope
3.Nope
4.When Joe kissed Demi, It was cute.
5.I predict you posting another chapter .. SOON
(:
therealRatedRstory2 2 years ago
+ Yuppers.
+Naah, its fine (:
+ *shrugs*
+ With the shooting star (:
+ I really hope she isnt pregnant. That always ruins everything. (: it usually means the story's almost over. :(
iLoveTelena 2 years ago
I LOVED IT! Amazing!!!
1. It's really well written.. I think it's great as it is.
2. Nop
3. Nopp
4. I agree with most of them, the beach part, well the shooting star part, was really cute and sweet.
5. I hope Demi not get pregnant. I think Joe is going to freak out (he's already freaking out) because Demi was still a virgin and Idk I think he's going to drift apart from her because of that... We can always trust Joe to screw up... lol
This was really good! Can't wait for more!! :D
MartuXa16 2 years ago
Yupppp
Noooo
Noooo
When he kissed herr :D
They shall doo it again. :P
XxForev3rYourLovexX 2 years ago
Ahhhhh! amazing! im so happy he took her virginity away. baha, loved it make the next one.(:
peacelovejonas916 2 years ago
AWESOME!!1
Lildrummerdudet12 2 years ago
ahh-mazing. =)
1. yeah, it's fine.
2. nope.
3. nahh.
4. the shooting star
5. maybe she's pregnant..
nickjonasisminexx 2 years ago
I really liked that picture of demi loved this episode
jaystar29 2 years ago
preggo her eggo :]
audie89 2 years ago 2
omg!! this episode was..WOW!!!!!! :D
1.yeah..its ok!!
2 & 3. nooo!!
4. i loved everything!!the beach part was really cute!
5. idk..everything but demi pregnant!!i hope demis real wish become reality!! :o)
CAN'T WAIT for the next one!!!!! :D
ste1729 2 years ago
I love the episode esp. the beach part. Cute. I wished I know what Joe wished for. I think it's about Demi. :D
ellimac0901 2 years ago
This epi was perfectly fine and Demi better not be preggo
Monkfield91 2 years ago
OMG LOVED IT
more plehz. tehe - tsk tsk Joe
MidnightAngelxoxo 2 years ago
Amazing!!!!
My fave episode so far!
1.Yeah its fine!
2.Nope
3.Nopee
4.The beach..:)
5.Umm demi might be preggo? idk
jen17hilary 2 years ago
omg!
it would be great if demi got pregnant.
more drama!
ahaha
JemixShanie 2 years ago
amazing!!!!
bopchikawawa911 2 years ago
luvd it
MsJonasbrothersgirl 2 years ago
loved the episode ....
haha the live chat was awesome....hope demi and joe will kiss in cr2
oh and you can keep it like that ;)
SarahAlwaysKnows12 2 years ago
Wow demi maybe preggers cuz they didn't use protection!!!!!!!!!
KatelynJuanita2 2 years ago
AWE. so cute!
jonasbrotherxox 2 years ago
omg more more plz
jonasbrothers700 2 years ago
Awh :)
That is sweet!!
Jemi!!!
Vontavia09 2 years ago
I thought the Jemi scene on the beach was realllly cuttte :)
I liked this episode.
& YES! I did see the chat! I was like 'aaaahhh :D'
baabygalx 2 years ago
omg that was so amazing im totaly speechless....
favourite part: when they were at the fire just 2 of them
DorsyJB 2 years ago
amaaaazzing perfect more pwease lol
ITSLIFEprouductions 2 years ago
omg best eppie ever! :D
pinknarnian 2 years ago
Loved it! A lot! Awesome part!
inesvilafanha 2 years ago
+ yes
+never
+ no
+ when joe felt ssomething go pop it was hiliarous
+ hes probably going to say it was a mistake
loverboyz45 2 years ago
That was great!!!
Yes, the maturity level makes it a better story, keep it that way!
I liked the jemi parts, of course, duh. haha.
You have every right to feel confident, by the way, that was an amazing chapter. :D
Can't wait for more!
Post last night next? (:
kristygloria 2 years ago
live chat was hiliarious cant wait for cr2 a kiss drive me crazy i would be so happy
i wish i knew what demi wink meant
i wish its a yes
now im watch it and comment again
loverboyz45 2 years ago