Tabary rope

[zonachi]

I don't like so much the way you come out of the effect of travellng ends around 3:15. You could work on it because in the end it looks a little innatural!

[DObird]

That is hard Routine to memorize. I thought it was very well done. I am still on the first phase and I know how long it takes to make those moves flow naturally. Don't listen to those other comments, especially from those who do not even have anything uploaded of themselves doing magic tricks.

[magicianjosue]

I love your story jajaja it was so funny dude... I do that routine a little bit different but i like your routine aswell

[starkikr]

ZZzzzzzz...oh sorry...is it finished yet?  Dude...get some decent patter, and reduce it to 3 minutes!

[ciszu2]

where i can learn this??

[bryan500cc]

good show!

[benjaminja77]

it was awesome but it seemed like you were trying to remember what to do next...

practice it and get it down more solidly

[antdinham]

this probibly shouldent be on the internet...

but wait till ive ripped the tricks :P

notmyname

[LHSStuntman]

I've figured out a good portion of it as I play around but the part where you show it as one continuous loop is crazy.

[ionosphre]

So, I'd say, if you're going to do a story, do a good one with all the things that a good story needs (beginning, middle, end, conflict, climax, resolution, protagonist, antagonist, etc) And to do that you might need to rearrange/shorten/add stuff to the routine. Watch Michael Finney's rope routines. His comedy directly addresses the magic. Also he's able to tell jokes w/o the magic, and this may be the key to why he does it so well.

-ion

[FlurryOfDestiny]

it's a little kid's story, it's supposed to be cute i think. i like it alot but maybe i just miss the magicians that used to come to the park...

[ionosphre]

Thanks for posting this, it's personal food for thought when I might try this routine. The rope work is well done, and smooth. Unfortunately, imho the story kills the routine. But, I think accompaning magic with a story is a great idea. Where I think it may go wrong is it fails to really point out the particular effects and in itself is a somewhat pointless story. Tabary himself just narrates what the audience should be seeing.

[alescallon]

well the rotuine is well done, however the patter I just think is not good...

[eyesawthat]

you are right it needs work, Thanks for taking the 7 minutes to watch.

[amadrigalme]

Have you tried no patter and just telling the story with your expressions? I might recommend Jordan Wright for the use of expressions and to me it seems hes fashioned after Stan Laurel. Just a suggestion as another avenue, as it can add another element to your show. In all very nice job.

[jonathan687]

gd routine how do ya do it :)

[eyesawthat]

Magic.... Just kidding if you really want to know search out books with the title being similar to the routine.

[mouke123]

hello. I hope you understand criticism: your performace was a little boring. you should smile a little when the magic happens and get it faster but not too much :) the story was a very nice part of that trick. I liked it. Keep it up

[eyesawthat]

Thanks for your constructive criticism everyone needs it. Also very sound advice.

[albacadraba71384]

that was pretty bad performance it got worst at the end sorry

[eyesawthat]

You are right it was bad but things can only get better if you start off bad. most people don't start off perfect. Not any of the pros I know anyway.

[blad3ry]

really good one

[TheprestigeNC]

nice routine, well performed, work on the fluidity of the patter a little but otherwise great job.

[eyesawthat]

Thanks the patter was in the wee hours of its birth and I mainly put it up here for a friend to see which reminds me I need to tell him it is here. Thanks Roger