Every Other Weekend, Part Two [Ultimate Writer's Contest: Round 2]

[clubjobros]

that was so good no no gr8 yes gr8 it was so so gr8 I loved it you made it go so well with the song

[amandaloveslove]

That was heartbreaking. I've never felt this way about two people i don't know :P weird..i know. But with Nick and Miley it just seems so...right. lol.

But good job! IT was amazinggg as usual!

[caroolulu]

this was really deep! but the end... so sad:(

[MissNaleyy]

oh lordly, i knew it. sadness is a part of me now and im crying like shit. god, how much i'd miss this feeling. im pathetic i know, but wow , greatness is a pure and simply word to describe how much this chap was good. i just totally can understand why you're up for the round 3 even if i already knew it without reading it bcause you're the best. wow, Niley i love them, i love how you describe their love ; Falling for forever was a big mistake. = EPIC quote. sad but epic. i love you period.

[MissNaleyy]

im already crying and i just read the first paragraph.

[elleisforlovee]

I love you girl! ahaha

[OmGiHeArTyOuToo]

are you making more?? because you cant just end it like this. you just... cant.

<3

[nileyislovee]

freaking beautiful is what this chapter was! ugh, i want them together so badly.. but its too soon :( all of the rememberences back to when they were thirteen and falling love made how they're feeling now so much more real and emotional. i loved it! fabulous job girlie! :)

[MariaGaleaxo]

amazing!

[headfirstxfearless]

oh my god this was amazing.

:)

i miss your writing:(

[Mileysbiggestfans02]

That was amazing Elle! But so sad. I hate when Niley doesn't end up together but it was so beautifully written, I guess this one time is okay. :) So happy to see you posted again. I miss your writing! Keep up the great work!

[Mitchix33]

jeezzz elle. you like breaking hearts, don't you? cuz this was heartbreaking. blaah. they were supposed to kiss. maan. however beautiful (: I love your writing, and this is really deep and emotional. short: I love it (: <3

[Milez4eva]

i love this! but the ending was just... sadd :(

[JonasStory101]

Amazing :)

[millstown680]

WHAT?!?! IS SHE MENTAL!!!

THEY WERE SUPPOSED TO KISS!!

GAHHH!! STUPID SAD ENDINGS!!

>>okay, i'm somewhat composed now... even though i hate sad endings;; it was REALLY good.! & i'm still voting for youuuh! & ik there's a one in a million change for this to happen, but... series? two more parts where they get together? puh-llleassseeeee?!

haha.! Great Job, Elle!

[joggi7]

awesome :)

[harrypandmileycfan]

nooooooo!!!!! ugh why do things sometimes have to end not the happily ever after way? anyway, this was one of the most powerful pieces uve ever written :)

[elleisforlovee]

Ohmygod, thank you? I honestly had my doubts about this one, but that's so sweet!

[harrypandmileycfan]

u mustnt have doubt in any freaken way! its so beautiful! i meant what i said. with those cute little sotries u tell us that not anything ends 'happily ever after'..ya. thats reality for us.

[aPRelpEnDabiEx]

like i said, YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER, i wish i could be like you some daii, keep it up, aww, doesit have to end? oh well im telling all my friends about you! xoxo

[sofiaa6]

beautifull.. i lovedd it it was so differnet to any other niley stories (in a good way :)) im with Leahbabes307 you should make it into a series or just continue a bit.. i nooo it was amazing ending but it would be interecting to see where this story goess nd like ur an amazing writer and it would be soooo goood :)

[TheChapterzOfOurLife]

omg. such an amazing story.

i hate the sad ending.

but its okay.

ugghh.

why did she let go.

:(

lol..

:)

great job elle.

[UntouchableSS27]

I'm trying to refrain from commenting on these but I can't resist.. i loved it sooo much :)

[elleisforlovee]

Thanks babe! I miss yo face! We need to stop having these fleeting conversations on aim and such!

[sj23564]

Gosh! You had my eyes glued to the screen [I definitely don't care about my eyesight obviously lol]. Anyway, I loved this part too. Your writing still is as awesome as ever. Gotta say, you got my hopes up at the end. Like, I honestly jumped when Nick called out to her. Is my happy Niley ending coming? Nope. But, that's life. Not all stories have a happy ending as much as you want them to. I have no idea where those words came from though lol. My mood mellows while listening to Taylor Dayne :)

[littlepurplebow]

So beautiful written as usual. You are so good at writing these two no matter the situation. I always get drawn into your stories and feel for them. You're an incredible writer.

Ps, this song is amazing and makes me sad everytime. The feeling is only intensified by the fact the first time I heard it was in the music video with "Van and Cheyenne". Which made it that much sadder.

Anyways, amazing job as per usual. Good luck in the contest! =D

[elleisforlovee]

OMG YESSS!!! The music video makes it seem like they divorced and it makes sense because when the series ended they had a girl (the older of the two children in the car is a girl) and then went on to have a boy and then got divorced. Ahhh! So heartwrenching! I cried watching it for the first time! Those two have so much chemistry together!

[sofbalcrazy05]

That was really good! Really sad ending though =(

[MiCityLove]

So beautiful! ;]

especialy the embrace in the end!

great job!

[abcsoo]

I LOVEE IT!

its so powerful and detailed :)

is there gonna be a third part?

[elleisforlovee]

No, sorry babe!

[abcsoo]

oh well, sad ending :(

but i still liked it a lot :)

[Leahbabes307]

This is so good! You should make this into a series!