please send me a message when you finish your story and what the name is.. i would really want to buy the book, but please P L E A S E dont forget to tell me(:
Who would ever steal someone elses idea? I mean, Thats just wrong.-Dont worry, I didnt steal Your story idea, Although im creating a story about half animals too- Not called half bloods-Nothing like your story either -Mine follows the topic of genocide(Dont know what it means:Look in the dictionary)Also mine would be a manga not written book. anyways i cant believe people would copy you.
that was pretty awsome vid and story girl friend i do stories to but there manga not novles and there pretty good to my first one i'm working on is called D&A i'm still making extra characters but other than that my friends are my fans :D
your story is good for the most part, but you need a lot more detail. if you did that, what you wrote so far would become a good 9 paragraphs, no doubt about it. ive written alot, but if there is one thing about my stories that stays thee same & gets the judges attention is LOTS OF DETAIL. belive me, it helps alot more than you think. just dont overuse it by putting a way lot of detail in one sentence & then like none in the next. thats not how it works. just remember, consistency is key (: cya
:3 Yes, take note though, this was made three years ago. Shortly after making this video, i remade the first chapter; adding about seven more pages of detail instead of just this one. I haven't worked on this story in a little while, but i plan to soon. Thank you for the tip though.
OMEGOSH btw I just remeber... You see im in band and i play the flute do you know where I can flute so is there anyway you would kniw where I can find the sheet music?
it's a really good vid but i would make the suggestion of editing ur photos next time so that they look like who u want them 2, like having all the eyes be blue
"if ur reading this u cant go back there was a dad who got pissed couse he got layed off so he went home took a knife than went to his 13 year old daughter and slit her neck! if u r reading this and dont forward to 10 vids the 13 year old girl be sitting on the endge of the bed waiting for tha when u wake up who ever takes care of u will find u in the tube full of bloode with ur throat slit and than the 13 year old girl will come to who ever takes care of u so hurry dont be the that unlucky one
in 1820 a man named fredrick osloft one day he was working in his lab until a ghost came by and killed him the next morning fredrick was nowhere to be seen 100 years later two boys went in the lab as a dare the boys where never seen again where aparently murdered now that u have read this comment tonight when u go to sleep the two boys and fredrick will come and murder you but you can stop this by posting this comment on 5 other videos by midnight
No, sorry, but to me, that is uncreative to use someone's idea. I see it all the time with people re-writing the twilight books and i hate twilight enough as it is. PLEASE don't use my ideas!
I really like the idea but I am confused a little on what you mean by shaman wolf. Other than that, I love the pictures and long live wolfgirls and werewolves.
Love the idea. Like the pictures. I know a friend who is writing a story about a guy who looks like a wolf and is trying to live a normal life despite having a criminal past. It is an interesting story and he is currently drawing pictures for it. I hope you can check it out. His account is called fullmoonslayer.
not bad but i would have described the story more like this:
"this is my life 18 years on this would 4 years of pain and slavery, on my 13th birthday the king was assassinated and by my 14th the new ruler wanted half bloods to become slaves mainly the younger ones to serve longer, a half blood is me - half human half wolf,we were all locked up and collers placed around our necks to identify us as slaves and half bloods, although our tails gave that away....." ect. you'll be good when older
my brothe has this song on a CD but i dont know wat itz called. i'll let u know when i ask him tomorrow cause here in oak hill ohio right now itz 11:30!!!! sorry bout the song!!!
wow inuyasha has a half blood in with ears only he's a boy and he has silver hair but 4 you 2 create dat story wivout seeing them anime's is incredible its so kwl =3 howl
great vid. like the pics. but I cannot undestand a single word of the song -.-
1098dragon 8 months ago
you should try devintart for this kind of stuff
lockon1994 1 year ago
so hows the story going
are u going to make it a book ?
what is this about exactly ?
it's awesome
teamedward19963d 1 year ago
an interesting story..i hope to see more soon!
cllee88 1 year ago
ahh i cant wait for ur story to finish hopefully soon its really good so far
idk1413 1 year ago
wow i can't wait to read more of your story. keep it up!! you are doing great!!
143vampires 1 year ago
please send me a message when you finish your story and what the name is.. i would really want to buy the book, but please P L E A S E dont forget to tell me(:
ChibiPawszz 1 year ago
neat story
TheShapeshifter100 1 year ago
What's the name of the song! Someone PLEASE tell me!!
SiligeM 1 year ago
Who would ever steal someone elses idea? I mean, Thats just wrong.-Dont worry, I didnt steal Your story idea, Although im creating a story about half animals too- Not called half bloods-Nothing like your story either -Mine follows the topic of genocide(Dont know what it means:Look in the dictionary)Also mine would be a manga not written book. anyways i cant believe people would copy you.
blackfrost713 1 year ago
No. Not at all. This is a more medieval story.
silvermoon95 1 year ago
i love your story being an author myself i am very impressed great vid too
silverfox1896 2 years ago
:3 thank you.
silvermoon95 1 year ago
what is this from?
wolfcrazygirl2408 2 years ago
The pictures i just got from place off the internet- i think it was photobucket- but the storyline i came up with myself.
silvermoon95 1 year ago
thats so awesome
wolfcrazygirl2408 1 year ago
is there a anime ?? or just manga
Kikyo361 2 years ago
go on quizilla
NekkoChanRocksXD 2 years ago
hay.. just a quike question whats the song called??
666Muffin69 2 years ago 2
i love the story! its really cool and i love wolves!
whoowhodog 2 years ago
i ove it!!
xxxST8TERGIRLxxx 2 years ago
chi!! oh im twelve too! but it says im like 20-something! =^.^=
angel12holly 2 years ago
that was pretty awsome vid and story girl friend i do stories to but there manga not novles and there pretty good to my first one i'm working on is called D&A i'm still making extra characters but other than that my friends are my fans :D
ViviTheCat 2 years ago
your story is good for the most part, but you need a lot more detail. if you did that, what you wrote so far would become a good 9 paragraphs, no doubt about it. ive written alot, but if there is one thing about my stories that stays thee same & gets the judges attention is LOTS OF DETAIL. belive me, it helps alot more than you think. just dont overuse it by putting a way lot of detail in one sentence & then like none in the next. thats not how it works. just remember, consistency is key (: cya
mimiru95 2 years ago 4
:3 Yes, take note though, this was made three years ago. Shortly after making this video, i remade the first chapter; adding about seven more pages of detail instead of just this one. I haven't worked on this story in a little while, but i plan to soon. Thank you for the tip though.
silvermoon95 1 year ago
cool
donte198 2 years ago
I AM KITA
kita391 2 years ago
Kind of like an android, but they're called different things.
98animefan 2 years ago
what was the first pic from?
xXXXiaoXx 2 years ago
OMEGOSH btw I just remeber... You see im in band and i play the flute do you know where I can flute so is there anyway you would kniw where I can find the sheet music?
Aliniachan 2 years ago
not bad i liked it wut other videos are you gunna post stories/??
Aliniachan 2 years ago
omg i am 13..I love your story ia m writing some to but yours r great
Elisa12131415 2 years ago
O: Omfg, I'm 12 ^^ I love this kind of stories :D I'm writing fictional stories. i hope we can be friends, and write together ^^
Akainasworld 2 years ago
Wtf is Chi doing in there?!
98animefan 2 years ago
._. Chi???
silvermoon95 2 years ago
Oh nevermind.
98animefan 2 years ago
Yeah I noticed that too...I was like WDF?
xXXXiaoXx 2 years ago
the story is great i want to read more
Elisa12131415 2 years ago
hm... in a reasonnable way, i wish have the book of the story you writed... i wish much
mooglewee 2 years ago
when u finish the story could u send it 2 me, because id luv 2 read it!
demonkittyluvr999721 2 years ago
dude, those chicks have tailz.
you can't get laid with a tailz.
uitsnpdustin 2 years ago
what the fuck??? its just a anime, it isnt real ife boy, lay of th pills son :o get out from the PC and find some real animated girls....
matosdiogo12 2 years ago
hey, u should try posting ur story in a forum. I would really like to read it. it seems interesting. let me know which one so i can read it.
someguy95981 2 years ago
whats the name of this song i love it
cwswild 2 years ago
WOAH! WOLVE GALS! @_@ GIMME ONE!
JTheDarkTrainer 2 years ago
way cool i love the story and the vid is really cool too!!!!!
sexyanimegurl1 2 years ago
it's a really good vid but i would make the suggestion of editing ur photos next time so that they look like who u want them 2, like having all the eyes be blue
dragonheart103 2 years ago
Rayne: very amazing story!^^
Wolfspirit8 2 years ago
i already have a chara setting and a fixed storyline i just need help^^
kriz861 2 years ago
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"if ur reading this u cant go back there was a dad who got pissed couse he got layed off so he went home took a knife than went to his 13 year old daughter and slit her neck! if u r reading this and dont forward to 10 vids the 13 year old girl be sitting on the endge of the bed waiting for tha when u wake up who ever takes care of u will find u in the tube full of bloode with ur throat slit and than the 13 year old girl will come to who ever takes care of u so hurry dont be the that unlucky one
NoUnUbS 2 years ago
YAY! nice vid, wolves rule!! ^_^ im actually thinking about starting a story myself on a character i made!
thepyrowulf 2 years ago
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in 1820 a man named fredrick osloft one day he was working in his lab until a ghost came by and killed him the next morning fredrick was nowhere to be seen 100 years later two boys went in the lab as a dare the boys where never seen again where aparently murdered now that u have read this comment tonight when u go to sleep the two boys and fredrick will come and murder you but you can stop this by posting this comment on 5 other videos by midnight
shadowninja967 2 years ago
What for song is this?
portal1337 2 years ago
very good story but i dont recomend putting it on the internet being a writer my self
Dragonwing16 2 years ago
you ahevent reed it yet and neather have i so you shut up
leventhefox 2 years ago
=.= Hmph. i learned that the heard way. i already have at least one person stealing my idea.
silvermoon95 2 years ago
awsome vid, very cool story (I desire more! keep it up! fellow writer cheering for ya!) by the way, what song is this?
intellawolf 2 years ago
Great vid and story! I wanna read more!
KirikoDomos 2 years ago
my names kita im a wolf to ^_-
pokemonwolfds 2 years ago
wow u drew these this is so cool and the story is awesome I also wrote a story about a princess and prince and im 10but its not all that special
FoxSummoner 2 years ago
You're really good at writing. Awesome.
PolarisRiders1 2 years ago
This song is from Android Lust, it's called Falling to Fragments. Great story. I hope to see more.
vexxedout 2 years ago
its good
ur a good video makerx3
BlueWolfHunter 3 years ago
cute
ToshitheWolf 3 years ago
hey can my friand use the first chapter and then jus write the rest of the chapters her way?
xXxImAnEmoxXx 3 years ago
No, sorry, but to me, that is uncreative to use someone's idea. I see it all the time with people re-writing the twilight books and i hate twilight enough as it is. PLEASE don't use my ideas!
silvermoon95 2 years ago
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SlavetradeDIE 3 years ago
omg can u tel me wen tha story is finished PLZ???????????
littlevampiresis 3 years ago
wth your 12 and you write good stories?Well the good stories i believe O.o
mrkool500 3 years ago
im 13 now, and that is the basic version auctually..... the other one is WAY to long to type in a description page!
silvermoon95 3 years ago
I have a friend that has been writing since she was like five and she can turn in about 60-80 pages a day (she writes small and is fifteen)
Tonoa08 3 years ago
wow you serious cause i've never written anything in a while. like i only write like little smalll poems on my sk
mrkool500 3 years ago
Yeah seriously serious she will end up with over 1500 pages for a single book and it all has meaning and a plot
I write too but my last book only got up to 400 pages, so I am adding on to it
Tonoa08 3 years ago
wow i couldnt do that even if an idea hits me in the face lol
mrkool500 3 years ago
i agree who sings the song....
really great video...XXXXXDDDDDD
i wish i could draw real well...
happybunny09876 3 years ago
Yay!^_^
irakeswanee 3 years ago 2
hey great story :P
Soraheartlessnobody 3 years ago 4
Artie the white arctic fox: likes the flute music.could not understand the words of the music.
kobidobidog 3 years ago 3
i love your story so far its awesome (i hope theres romance i love romance novels mostly TWILIGHT!)!!!!!!!!!!!
WSSfan56 3 years ago 2
i am planning to write a vampire romance, but it isn't the same as twilight... at all
silvermoon95 3 years ago
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Wow u drew these this is so cool and the story is awesome i also wrote a story about a princess and prince im 10 but its not all that special
FoxSummoner 2 years ago
hey cool vid .... what's the name of the song?
thcu 3 years ago 2
u drew all this wow ur so good :P
bLuESkYE10 3 years ago
She didn't draw it. Silly. It's called lazy people who steal lots of pictures off the internet.
InsaneMichi 3 years ago
Why be so mean?She didn't say she drew them.Silly. Good job there,I adore the song,mind telling me who sings it? :D
lovelykirikiss 3 years ago
im not ....er... too... lazy lol :)im auctually drawing almost all the time, but i just dont have a scanner :(
silvermoon95 3 years ago
I love you're story i hope you finish it. it's very familiar. write more plz plz plz?
drizzt7034 3 years ago 2
:) i plan to! and im realy impatient to fininsh it, but its kinda hard whan you have four brothers, four sisters plus two 11 month twins lol
silvermoon95 3 years ago
wauw!! big family!(i have five siblings -_-') i draw to but i dont have a scanner either -_-' 100\5 ^^'
hvidsky 3 years ago
kita has good boobs :D
skateman69696 3 years ago
youve done well
drakenxithrevic 3 years ago
er... photobucket lol
silvermoon95 3 years ago
no lol, kita is the name of the gitl in the story i am writing!!! read the description on the side!! :)
silvermoon95 3 years ago
By the way, what is the song on this AMV?
nowhereelsetogo 3 years ago
Hey, can you send me the story?Oh!And have you ever heard of Quizilla?
nowhereelsetogo 3 years ago
i kind of had heard of quizilla..... not sure what it is though. ill think about sending you the story.
silvermoon95 3 years ago
Quizilla is (once you figure it out) is a place where people go to write or read.You can write/read poems,stories,songs,or make/take polls or quizes
nowhereelsetogo 3 years ago
is it free? i cant pay for it if it is, im not actually 26
silvermoon95 3 years ago
lol, yeah, totally free!It's pretty cool except the part of trying to figure out stuff.*-.-
nowhereelsetogo 3 years ago
okay! ill check is out!
silvermoon95 3 years ago
Nice!! Lol
im going to add this.. my name is Kyta its pronounced Kita.. so it threw me off guard when i came across this video! LOL
TeddyBearPhotoGraphy 3 years ago
lol sweet!
silvermoon95 3 years ago
I really like the idea but I am confused a little on what you mean by shaman wolf. Other than that, I love the pictures and long live wolfgirls and werewolves.
fullmoonslayer 3 years ago
the shaman wolf means she can shape-shift into just about anything, and her original form is a wolf! :)
silvermoon95 3 years ago
Love the idea. Like the pictures. I know a friend who is writing a story about a guy who looks like a wolf and is trying to live a normal life despite having a criminal past. It is an interesting story and he is currently drawing pictures for it. I hope you can check it out. His account is called fullmoonslayer.
mortrainey77 3 years ago
are you referring to me? lol
fullmoonslayer 3 years ago
hmm... sounds interesting! i'll check it out!
silvermoon95 3 years ago
not bad but i would have described the story more like this:
"this is my life 18 years on this would 4 years of pain and slavery, on my 13th birthday the king was assassinated and by my 14th the new ruler wanted half bloods to become slaves mainly the younger ones to serve longer, a half blood is me - half human half wolf,we were all locked up and collers placed around our necks to identify us as slaves and half bloods, although our tails gave that away....." ect. you'll be good when older
superman320 3 years ago
the newer edited version is waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay more detailed, i cant wait to finish it an get it published!
silvermoon95 3 years ago
interesting story. I can almost beleive that that was a real life occurance.
Raurie4 3 years ago
that is the awful version, i have redone it a zillion times now! lol
silvermoon95 3 years ago
That is one GOOD story1 ^_^
subject153 3 years ago
in the discription wat do u mean by 'let me finish then instead of going to now though'?
dakotaishot78 3 years ago
"instead of skipping to tis day, let me finish my past." would have been better sorry
silvermoon95 3 years ago
my brothe has this song on a CD but i dont know wat itz called. i'll let u know when i ask him tomorrow cause here in oak hill ohio right now itz 11:30!!!! sorry bout the song!!!
dakotaishot78 3 years ago
um, i dont know the name of the song, lol sorry
silvermoon95 3 years ago
hey whats the songg it's stuck in my head XD
Buglyo123 3 years ago
hmm..... im going to make a video about my wolf story..... with the prolouge and maybe part of the first chapter in the description box!!!!!!!1 :D
silvermoon95 3 years ago
lol i saw chii -^^- cute vid
HaruhiGirl223 3 years ago
love it much^^
sakuradarkangel14 3 years ago
thanks
silvermoon95 3 years ago
wow great story!! let me know when you upload more!!!!!!
WOLFIEGIRL3 3 years ago
ok thanks people!!!!!
silvermoon95 3 years ago
Theres no words. Story? What story? I'm confuzzled.
megantrauring 3 years ago
its up in the corner were it says (MORE INFO)
Animefreak193 3 years ago
love the story it rocks you have some real talent
IvyRoseLily 3 years ago
Wow that story made me get tears in my eyes. That dosent hapen normally. Good job!
WildWolf196 3 years ago
thanks! im auctually working on three different books right now with many more flowing through my head.
silvermoon95 3 years ago
Where did you get that 3rd picture in the video
Shadowdaahedgehog 3 years ago
i love this song good job on everything!! ♥
Animefreak193 3 years ago
thank you
silvermoon95 3 years ago
How far are you in this story? let me know if youve uploaded it onto some other site. I would love to read it!
kourelop 3 years ago
im not sure how far i am in the story, ive been working on one of my other ones. but no i dont have it on any other sites.
silvermoon95 3 years ago
Very good! I<3stories like yours!
xXxTobikumaxXx 3 years ago
It would be kinda cool if there really were animal/human hybrids like those...
Ramendia 3 years ago
Well their actually just used for fanservice.
But im writing something to change all that
DeathgGod 3 years ago
yeah because who wouldnt want to fuck a wolf girl
mizdierbeatz 3 years ago
watch your mouth!!!!!!! no cussing!!!
silvermoon95 3 years ago
Rofl, no cussing.
Yea, I <3 fanservice
Ramendia 3 years ago
i second that who does not wanna have sex with a wolf girl i would love to have sex with Liru the Werewolf
Shadowdaahedgehog 3 years ago
wats btw? n i didnt draw them lol
silvermoon95 3 years ago
btw= by the way
darkangel783 3 years ago
Great story you should put it on quizilla! :)
animebabes13 3 years ago
Where did you get the name Kita from? It's cool. Do you know what it means?
Fudgeemonkee 3 years ago
i dont know wer i came up with the name.... wat does it mean?
silvermoon95 3 years ago
She is awsome an guess what i named my gaia avitar that name cause it was so cool <3
brittvalwerock102 3 years ago
btw did u draw those?
darkangel783 3 years ago
hey in 12 to and im writing a book on winged wolfs!!!! and some other stuff
darkangel783 4 years ago
awsome!!! now ive started a wolf story n a love story only my boifriend has read it so far
silvermoon95 3 years ago
hm.... im thinking of changing kitas hair to gold, yall like that? i might also change her eyes to violet
silvermoon95 4 years ago
hm.... im thinking of changing kitas hair to gold, yall like that? i might also change her eyes to violet
silvermoon95 4 years ago
What's the song?
Gandora5 4 years ago
um... i dont remember.. sorry
silvermoon95 4 years ago
:) I love the concept and the story. Is this posted anywhere because I think you could really go somewhere with it. Great song choice for the video.
KayaDC 4 years ago
tx!
silvermoon95 4 years ago
ur story is based on inuyasha and shaman king am i wrong =3 howl
XNeelixX 4 years ago
u r wrong..... i never watch either of them...
silvermoon95 4 years ago
wow inuyasha has a half blood in with ears only he's a boy and he has silver hair but 4 you 2 create dat story wivout seeing them anime's is incredible its so kwl =3 howl
XNeelixX 4 years ago
inuyasha isn't a half blood. he's a half DEMON... Human mother, demon father. half brother... full demon lord sesshoumaru...
Demons2Angels 3 years ago
her books not about inuyasha
darkangel783 3 years ago
his brothers hotter than him tho... lol
silvermoon95 3 years ago
guess who? how do u make a video? ily!
Awesumness52 4 years ago
100 views and no comments.... :( waa and scuse me for the many many typos in the story
silvermoon95 4 years ago
wow that is sad
jlil0012 4 years ago
please read the story on the side! have fun COMMENT and share!!
silvermoon95 4 years ago