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  • great vid. like the pics. but I cannot undestand a single word of the song -.-

  • you should try devintart for this kind of stuff

  • so hows the story going

    are u going to make it a book ?

    what is this about exactly ?

    it's awesome

  • an interesting story..i hope to see more soon!

  • ahh i cant wait for ur story to finish hopefully soon its really good so far 

  • wow i can't wait to read more of your story. keep it up!! you are doing great!!

  • please send me a message when you finish your story and what the name is.. i would really want to buy the book, but please P L E A S E dont forget to tell me(:

  • neat story

  • What's the name of the song! Someone PLEASE tell me!!

  • Who would ever steal someone elses idea? I mean, Thats just wrong.-Dont worry, I didnt steal Your story idea, Although im creating a story about half animals too- Not called half bloods-Nothing like your story either -Mine follows the topic of genocide(Dont know what it means:Look in the dictionary)Also mine would be a manga not written book. anyways i cant believe people would copy you.

  • No. Not at all. This is a more medieval story.

  • i love your story being an author myself i am very impressed great vid too

  • :3 thank you.

  • what is this from?

  • The pictures i just got from place off the internet- i think it was photobucket- but the storyline i came up with myself.

  • thats so awesome

  • is there a anime ?? or just manga

  • go on quizilla

  • hay.. just a quike question whats the song called??

  • i love the story! its really cool and i love wolves!

  • i ove it!!

  • chi!! oh im twelve too! but it says im like 20-something! =^.^=

  • that was pretty awsome vid and story girl friend i do stories to but there manga not novles and there pretty good to my first one i'm working on is called D&A i'm still making extra characters but other than that my friends are my fans :D

  • your story is good for the most part, but you need a lot more detail. if you did that, what you wrote so far would become a good 9 paragraphs, no doubt about it. ive written alot, but if there is one thing about my stories that stays thee same & gets the judges attention is LOTS OF DETAIL. belive me, it helps alot more than you think. just dont overuse it by putting a way lot of detail in one sentence & then like none in the next. thats not how it works. just remember, consistency is key (: cya

  • :3 Yes, take note though, this was made three years ago. Shortly after making this video, i remade the first chapter; adding about seven more pages of detail instead of just this one. I haven't worked on this story in a little while, but i plan to soon. Thank you for the tip though.

  • cool

  • I AM KITA

  • Kind of like an android, but they're called different things.

  • what was the first pic from?

  • OMEGOSH btw I just remeber... You see im in band and i play the flute do you know where I can flute so is there anyway you would kniw where I can find the sheet music?

  • not bad i liked it wut other videos are you gunna post stories/??

  • omg i am 13..I love your story ia m writing some to but yours r great

  • O: Omfg, I'm 12 ^^ I love this kind of stories :D I'm writing fictional stories. i hope we can be friends, and write together ^^

  • Wtf is Chi doing in there?!

  • ._. Chi???

  • Oh nevermind.

  • Yeah I noticed that too...I was like WDF?

  • the story is great i want to read more

  • hm... in a reasonnable way, i wish have the book of the story you writed... i wish much

  • when u finish the story could u send it 2 me, because id luv 2 read it!

  • dude, those chicks have tailz.

    you can't get laid with a tailz.

  • what the fuck??? its just a anime, it isnt real ife boy, lay of th pills son :o get out from the PC and find some real animated girls....

  • hey, u should try posting ur story in a forum. I would really like to read it. it seems interesting. let me know which one so i can read it.

  • whats the name of this song i love it

  • WOAH! WOLVE GALS! @_@ GIMME ONE!

  • way cool i love the story and the vid is really cool too!!!!!

  • it's a really good vid but i would make the suggestion of editing ur photos next time so that they look like who u want them 2, like having all the eyes be blue

  • Rayne: very amazing story!^^

  • i already have a chara setting and a fixed storyline i just need help^^

  • YAY! nice vid, wolves rule!! ^_^ im actually thinking about starting a story myself on a character i made!

  • What for song is this?

  • very good story but i dont recomend putting it on the internet being a writer my self

  • you ahevent reed it yet and neather have i so you shut up

  • =.= Hmph. i learned that the heard way. i already have at least one person stealing my idea.

  • awsome vid, very cool story (I desire more! keep it up! fellow writer cheering for ya!) by the way, what song is this?

  • Great vid and story! I wanna read more!

  • my names kita im a wolf to ^_-

  • wow u drew these this is so cool and the story is awesome I also wrote a story about a princess and prince and im 10but its not all that special

  • You're really good at writing. Awesome.

  • This song is from Android Lust, it's called Falling to Fragments. Great story. I hope to see more.

  • its good

    ur a good video makerx3

  • cute

  • hey can my friand use the first chapter and then jus write the rest of the chapters her way?

  • No, sorry, but to me, that is uncreative to use someone's idea. I see it all the time with people re-writing the twilight books and i hate twilight enough as it is. PLEASE don't use my ideas!

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  • omg can u tel me wen tha story is finished PLZ???????????

  • wth your 12 and you write good stories?Well the good stories i believe O.o

  • im 13 now, and that is the basic version auctually..... the other one is WAY to long to type in a description page!

  • I have a friend that has been writing since she was like five and she can turn in about 60-80 pages a day (she writes small and is fifteen)

  • wow you serious cause i've never written anything in a while. like i only write like little smalll poems on my sk

  • Yeah seriously serious she will end up with over 1500 pages for a single book and it all has meaning and a plot

    I write too but my last book only got up to 400 pages, so I am adding on to it

  • wow i couldnt do that even if an idea hits me in the face lol

  • i agree who sings the song....

    really great video...XXXXXDDDDDD

    i wish i could draw real well...

  • Yay!^_^

  • hey great story :P

  • Artie the white arctic fox: likes the flute music.could not understand the words of the music.

  • i love your story so far its awesome (i hope theres romance i love romance novels mostly TWILIGHT!)!!!!!!!!!!!

  • i am planning to write a vampire romance, but it isn't the same as twilight... at all

  • hey cool vid .... what's the name of the song?

  • u drew all this wow ur so good :P

  • She didn't draw it. Silly. It's called lazy people who steal lots of pictures off the internet.

  • Why be so mean?She didn't say she drew them.Silly. Good job there,I adore the song,mind telling me who sings it? :D

  • im not ....er... too... lazy lol :)im auctually drawing almost all the time, but i just dont have a scanner :(

  • I love you're story i hope you finish it. it's very familiar. write more plz plz plz?

  • :) i plan to! and im realy impatient to fininsh it, but its kinda hard whan you have four brothers, four sisters plus two 11 month twins lol

  • wauw!! big family!(i have five siblings -_-') i draw to but i dont have a scanner either -_-' 100\5 ^^'

  • kita has good boobs :D

  • youve done well

  • er... photobucket lol

  • no lol, kita is the name of the gitl in the story i am writing!!! read the description on the side!! :)

  • By the way, what is the song on this AMV?

  • Hey, can you send me the story?Oh!And have you ever heard of Quizilla?

  • i kind of had heard of quizilla..... not sure what it is though. ill think about sending you the story.

  • Quizilla is (once you figure it out) is a place where people go to write or read.You can write/read poems,stories,songs,or make/take polls or quizes

  • is it free? i cant pay for it if it is, im not actually 26

  • lol, yeah, totally free!It's pretty cool except the part of trying to figure out stuff.*-.-

  • okay! ill check is out!

  • Nice!! Lol

    im going to add this.. my name is Kyta its pronounced Kita.. so it threw me off guard when i came across this video! LOL

  • lol sweet!

  • I really like the idea but I am confused a little on what you mean by shaman wolf. Other than that, I love the pictures and long live wolfgirls and werewolves.

  • the shaman wolf means she can shape-shift into just about anything, and her original form is a wolf! :)

  • Love the idea. Like the pictures. I know a friend who is writing a story about a guy who looks like a wolf and is trying to live a normal life despite having a criminal past. It is an interesting story and he is currently drawing pictures for it. I hope you can check it out. His account is called fullmoonslayer.

  • are you referring to me? lol

  • hmm... sounds interesting! i'll check it out!

  • not bad but i would have described the story more like this:

    "this is my life 18 years on this would 4 years of pain and slavery, on my 13th birthday the king was assassinated and by my 14th the new ruler wanted half bloods to become slaves mainly the younger ones to serve longer, a half blood is me - half human half wolf,we were all locked up and collers placed around our necks to identify us as slaves and half bloods, although our tails gave that away....." ect. you'll be good when older

  • the newer edited version is waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay more detailed, i cant wait to finish it an get it published!

  • interesting story. I can almost beleive that that was a real life occurance.

  • that is the awful version, i have redone it a zillion times now! lol

  • That is one GOOD story1 ^_^

  • in the discription wat do u mean by 'let me finish then instead of going to now though'?

  • "instead of skipping to tis day, let me finish my past." would have been better sorry

  • my brothe has this song on a CD but i dont know wat itz called. i'll let u know when i ask him tomorrow cause here in oak hill ohio right now itz 11:30!!!! sorry bout the song!!!

  • um, i dont know the name of the song, lol sorry

  • hey whats the songg it's stuck in my head XD

  • hmm..... im going to make a video about my wolf story..... with the prolouge and maybe part of the first chapter in the description box!!!!!!!1 :D

  • lol i saw chii -^^- cute vid

  • love it much^^

  • thanks

  • wow great story!! let me know when you upload more!!!!!!

  • ok thanks people!!!!!

  • Theres no words. Story? What story? I'm confuzzled.

  • its up in the corner were it says (MORE INFO)

  • love the story it rocks you have some real talent

  • Wow that story made me get tears in my eyes. That dosent hapen normally. Good job!

  • thanks! im auctually working on three different books right now with many more flowing through my head.

  • Where did you get that 3rd picture in the video

  • i love this song good job on everything!! ♥

  • thank you

  • How far are you in this story? let me know if youve uploaded it onto some other site. I would love to read it!

  • im not sure how far i am in the story, ive been working on one of my other ones. but no i dont have it on any other sites.

  • Very good! I<3stories like yours!

  • It would be kinda cool if there really were animal/human hybrids like those...

  • Well their actually just used for fanservice.

    But im writing something to change all that

  • yeah because who wouldnt want to fuck a wolf girl

  • watch your mouth!!!!!!! no cussing!!!

  • Rofl, no cussing.

    Yea, I <3 fanservice

  • i second that who does not wanna have sex with a wolf girl i would love to have sex with Liru the Werewolf

  • wats btw? n i didnt draw them lol

  • btw= by the way

  • Great story you should put it on quizilla! :)

  • Where did you get the name Kita from? It's cool. Do you know what it means?

  • i dont know wer i came up with the name.... wat does it mean?

  • She is awsome an guess what i named my gaia avitar that name cause it was so cool <3

  • btw did u draw those?

  • hey in 12 to and im writing a book on winged wolfs!!!! and some other stuff

  • awsome!!! now ive started a wolf story n a love story only my boifriend has read it so far

  • hm.... im thinking of changing kitas hair to gold, yall like that? i might also change her eyes to violet

  • hm.... im thinking of changing kitas hair to gold, yall like that? i might also change her eyes to violet

  • What's the song?

  • um... i dont remember.. sorry

  • :) I love the concept and the story. Is this posted anywhere because I think you could really go somewhere with it. Great song choice for the video.

  • tx!

  • ur story is based on inuyasha and shaman king am i wrong =3 howl

  • u r wrong..... i never watch either of them...

  • wow inuyasha has a half blood in with ears only he's a boy and he has silver hair but 4 you 2 create dat story wivout seeing them anime's is incredible its so kwl =3 howl

  • inuyasha isn't a half blood. he's a half DEMON... Human mother, demon father. half brother... full demon lord sesshoumaru...

  • her books not about inuyasha

  • his brothers hotter than him tho... lol

  • guess who? how do u make a video? ily!

  • 100 views and no comments.... :( waa and scuse me for the many many typos in the story

  • wow that is sad

  • please read the story on the side! have fun COMMENT and share!!

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