Wow. Didn't think she'd be competent enough to come up with a literary device like changing the point of view. I'm impressed.
Well, I would be impressed if this fanfic had a plot. Or was cut in half by omitting the unnecessary wardrobe scenes. Or didn't include beating up characters "sexily".
according to encyclopedia dramatica, tara has autism or something, i dont know if this is true though because half the shit on that website is a downright lie. Also, if you go there to look for this, DONT go on the offended page, unless you enjoy being mind raped
I can understand bad grammar if maybe a person is writing in English having only just learned it, but that is...I don't even know....I kinda want to stab myself in the ears and eyes now...and ohhhhh Goth in a box....
Hey! Do you think this person might be "special" or just American?(cause you know, I'm not an American or anything O.O)
ive litterally never known what the hell is happening since the beginning of the story...but it just makes it even more unbelievably and randomly bad *facepalm*
I thought you were holding a plunger at firs O_o (hey it's 1 am I had one hour of sleep and I just hd a freak attack!) lol your sword fight was fantastic.
Well, that was fun. I can say that I'm definitely never playing any drinking game with cola, coffee, and beer again OuO I love the bell, and the random sword fight.
Thumbs up for Kesha!
16nwb1 1 month ago
Sexy hat man
Piratezpride 1 month ago
You look hot with the sunglasses on. XD I actually prefer the finger snapping; the ringing kind of bugs me for some reason. :/
PsychoticallyAngelic 1 month ago
MICHAEL JACKSON!! xDDD This fic just got better =)
YourCuriousAddiction 2 months ago in playlist My Immortal Mondays
What does Marty McFly have to do with Harry Potter?
MaXimumJ100 2 months ago
I was so inspired I had to use the "goffic" picture of the Trio as my desktop background. <3
lilj4818 2 months ago
I thought there was nothing else that could surprise after the last chapters. Then she pulled Marty in to this.
UngeniousIdea 2 months ago
why no more annotations?
LMTR14 3 months ago
snigger is an actual word, so what?
LMTR14 3 months ago
@LMTR14 Doesn't it mean something like laughing etc????
ViperBroadcasting 1 month ago
Marty Mcfly...? Why. Just why.
4Kiseki4 5 months ago
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TheHumbleOutsider 5 months ago
Now let me read a chapter from, MY NOVEL. . . DO NOT INTERRUPT ME WHILE I READ ABOUT THE HAIRY BUSH!
floodboy55 5 months ago
Okay, this is without doubt the worst fanfic ever, but Slutborn and Cornelia FUCK just made me burst out laughing XD
PlushieSurgeon 5 months ago
What the fuck is Marty McFly doing here? What the hell is this shit?
TheElectricDreamer93 6 months ago
Why does enoby or ebony have to go seduce voldemort why not just kill him s a child?
1RiveraG1 6 months ago
Ke$ha and Shakira!!! :)
HaYhAy324 6 months ago
SHE MAY NOT BUGGER WITH MARTY MCFLY OH HEEEEEEEEEEEELL NO!!!!!!!!
daugterofathena 6 months ago
Would it kill that woman to use spellcheck? She has got to be against such things.
brndurham 6 months ago
As a decent fanfic writer, I can say that Tara's fic is the absolute worst material i have ever seen in my life.
brndurham 6 months ago
Wow. Didn't think she'd be competent enough to come up with a literary device like changing the point of view. I'm impressed.
Well, I would be impressed if this fanfic had a plot. Or was cut in half by omitting the unnecessary wardrobe scenes. Or didn't include beating up characters "sexily".
MrNagatoni 6 months ago
Thank Gaia! She's ending it!
ImStupidInTheLove 7 months ago
Tara:"Cornelio Fuck!"
Me:"BWHAHAHAHAHA!"
lexchristina99 8 months ago 3
It just occured to me... Tara has invented her own language...
Dayntei 8 months ago 6
I tried this with soda and finished it halfway through the video, miserable.
Riggedmuffin 8 months ago
My new keyphrase for horrible things is going to be '"ORLY?", I ESKED'
so many things wrong with those three words.
Xemaredux 8 months ago 4
@Xemaredux I dunno, the "I" seems to be spelled fine. :P
Aliento 8 months ago 9
@Aliento The other two words make up for it, heh.
Xemaredux 8 months ago
Marty McFly...
TheBeastBandit 10 months ago
Apparently, she swears randomly a lot and cannot describe things for the life of her.
TokioDances 11 months ago
according to encyclopedia dramatica, tara has autism or something, i dont know if this is true though because half the shit on that website is a downright lie. Also, if you go there to look for this, DONT go on the offended page, unless you enjoy being mind raped
85879 11 months ago
@85879 no, she doesn't, that's just her trying to excuse her failure.
robokill387 11 months ago
I DRAW THE LINE AT MARTY MCFLY!! DD8<
impagain 1 year ago 25
Congress shoes, hand crafted from the tears of the american people since 1953!
Dudethatstrippin 1 year ago 8
Haha Socrates wtf XD and SNAP USED TO BE GOFFIK OMFG!!!11111111111111
TheMartini1234 1 year ago 21
She already has that 666 skirt ಠ_ಠ
KimmimaruSai 1 year ago
... Wit ech epidose i sem 2 b typng worose................. and uusing loooooooooooooooogn pawsus....
SeriesRed 1 year ago
Yes, lock someone up in Azkaban for having cancer...
TheBigFyzzz 1 year ago
@TheBigFyzzz A reasonable offense >:)
orochimaruluvrgrl95 9 months ago
Gotta love the random POV switch :D
emilygracey 1 year ago
and Socrates...xDD oh god
xhirumax 1 year ago
DING!
Dayntei 1 year ago
I can understand bad grammar if maybe a person is writing in English having only just learned it, but that is...I don't even know....I kinda want to stab myself in the ears and eyes now...and ohhhhh Goth in a box....
Hey! Do you think this person might be "special" or just American?(cause you know, I'm not an American or anything O.O)
TimeTravelingAcorns 1 year ago
My God...does this person NOT know how to research?!?
Also, is she purposely making sure that her grammar is horrendous?
FanFicCritic 1 year ago
Fangs to Aliento for da vid.
rockermac5 1 year ago
ive litterally never known what the hell is happening since the beginning of the story...but it just makes it even more unbelievably and randomly bad *facepalm*
MrAfroPanda 1 year ago
I thought you were holding a plunger at firs O_o (hey it's 1 am I had one hour of sleep and I just hd a freak attack!) lol your sword fight was fantastic.
WeaknessToAbuse 1 year ago
I nearly jizzed in my pants when I heard She Wolf playing in the background...and then I realized I wasn't wearing pants. :O
AzureClarity 1 year ago
Just when I thought this fanfic couldn't get any worst, Marty McFly appears.
...Marty Motherfucking McFly, for christ sake. What the hell was she smoking when she wrote this piece of shit?
Also, sword fight versus the air was EPIC.
WEFlako 1 year ago
Aliento used Michael Jackson music in the background.
Aliento gained 5000 love points.
Aliento gained 3 internets.
Aliento gained an Awesomeness level!
TiffanyDoll 1 year ago
what's going on.........
sapnyosentry 1 year ago
You have no idea how much I approve of the use of Tik Tok. Also, the sunglasses. And the sword at the beginning there.
MsStLiz 1 year ago
Well, that was fun. I can say that I'm definitely never playing any drinking game with cola, coffee, and beer again OuO I love the bell, and the random sword fight.
CandiFan1 1 year ago
Professor Slutborn... that makes me laugh so hard every time I hear it :]
coffinkid89 1 year ago
Did an emo paradox clone of Marty Mcfly just materialize, leave a "time machine" behind, and return to the void in a single paragraph?
RaemMorea 1 year ago
I loved the random sword fight.
animevalmont 1 year ago