This might just be me, but I feel like you enunciate too much sometimes, specifically with your "p" and "b" sounds. I love the melody that plays in the background, but I know you can come up with more to make the chorus different from the verses. The echoing "where'd you go" could have some more emotion behind it, or maybe even variety? Last note: I feel like you can let your instrumental talents come out more. I felt as though some parts could've dropped the echoes so we could just
@DaHoTtIeMuSlIm HAHA woahhh damn dude! before I go any further I just wanna say thank you so much man. Like your honest opinion really made me smile haha! As for the enunciation, iono to me, I feel like I bring out more emotion but maybe it is too much :\ But Yeshar man, you're awesome dude, I will definitely take your criticism in mind and apply them! Have a good one :D
@KazammTheMan <3 In that regard, I can understand the enunciation. Plus, what do I really know? I haven't been in a music class for almost 3 years now. =P
best so far man xD
izzyxyoung 10 months ago
is this the song you ditched me for ?! O:
DseniithedorkxD 10 months ago
Ahh, keep up the good work! (:
monkeysarecol 10 months ago
ilikethis! :)
WhaTthePiii 10 months ago
max xD
P.S how can you give a comment on this video with the performance: /watch?v=McpL-IaEKNI&feature=channel_video_title
1Break1 10 months ago
catchy :)
sanji4ever 10 months ago
piano sounds kinda like main riff of Cliffs of Dover
hohomaru123 10 months ago
@hohomaru123 wait shit you're right...LOLOLOL
KazammTheMan 10 months ago
you be killin' it...
Again!
taggerung2 10 months ago
your flow has improved so much, keep it up!
motomouthbbx 10 months ago
My man this one made me sub to you hahahaha hope you NOSE this was dope. LETS TAKE A DIP IN MY POOL!!
chan93ed 10 months ago
@chan93ed LOLOLOLOLOL SKINNY DIP MANG
KazammTheMan 10 months ago
This might just be me, but I feel like you enunciate too much sometimes, specifically with your "p" and "b" sounds. I love the melody that plays in the background, but I know you can come up with more to make the chorus different from the verses. The echoing "where'd you go" could have some more emotion behind it, or maybe even variety? Last note: I feel like you can let your instrumental talents come out more. I felt as though some parts could've dropped the echoes so we could just
DaHoTtIeMuSlIm 10 months ago
@DaHoTtIeMuSlIm (I had too much to say) hear the melody/beats.
Just my two cents.
P.S. I loved this. Favorite by far. :)
DaHoTtIeMuSlIm 10 months ago
@DaHoTtIeMuSlIm HAHA woahhh damn dude! before I go any further I just wanna say thank you so much man. Like your honest opinion really made me smile haha! As for the enunciation, iono to me, I feel like I bring out more emotion but maybe it is too much :\ But Yeshar man, you're awesome dude, I will definitely take your criticism in mind and apply them! Have a good one :D
KazammTheMan 10 months ago
@KazammTheMan <3 In that regard, I can understand the enunciation. Plus, what do I really know? I haven't been in a music class for almost 3 years now. =P
DaHoTtIeMuSlIm 10 months ago
when i saw the title, i thought u left lol
boogxian 10 months ago