You can NOT put Christopher Nolan's name on this. Thats just stupid! For doing so I dislike the video. Plus you need better actors. The actors do NOT look the part they are playing. I don't buy that they are married at all. The audio need work. When the music dies i hear way too much fizz. Work on your ADR stuff it's too loud or something. It's off. Just because your film was in black and white doesn't mean it's anything like Following. Work on your cinematography. You are no Christopher Nolan.
Nice short film. Good direction and screenplay, but the older brothers' acting wasn't so great. The ending was really good and the music was perfect. overall 7/10
I agree, Ur not a bad filmmaker, and u have great cinematography, but fake title? Ur going nowhere unless u get people to like you, lying doesn't get you anywhere.
The fake title is really annoying, and instantly turns anyone who watches this video against you. Just to let you know.
This is just a tip, but if you are going to use actors who look 13-14 years old, don't try and make their characters adults, it just doesn't work. Either create your film for the actors you will use, or use the correct actors for your film.
The camera work is pretty good most of the time though, and if you had better actors I guess the overall thing would be decent.
haha obviously u guys had time for more then one take .. the actors just blow terribly. i admire anyone who attempts to create a piece of art though .. no matter how bad it may be .. congrats dude I know you'll be making quality films one day.
Not bad. Are you in high school? I liked the script actually It's just too bad the dialogue was delivered so bad. But if you're in high school this is really good.
worst film i have ever seen,problem is not bad acting but poor story and bad screenplay or no screenplay.you could give some treatment to your film,black and white colour dint give any justice to the script it was useless and if i am not wrong you have turned the film into a black and white to avoid light jurkes because some parts of the film lights lack filling the frame,be honest and take comment as a man,reply to me with what went wrong,and we can discuss it,this is poor production,tak cr
tripod at 5:02!
photocide1 3 months ago
mate, there were wine bottles on the table, and you were drinking out if little glasses probably for scotch
s1052102 7 months ago
hmmmm!
nirvanaaent 7 months ago
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NevandOtis 8 months ago
You can NOT put Christopher Nolan's name on this. Thats just stupid! For doing so I dislike the video. Plus you need better actors. The actors do NOT look the part they are playing. I don't buy that they are married at all. The audio need work. When the music dies i hear way too much fizz. Work on your ADR stuff it's too loud or something. It's off. Just because your film was in black and white doesn't mean it's anything like Following. Work on your cinematography. You are no Christopher Nolan.
flameofgod77 9 months ago
i didnt know people had sex with their clothes on
cleanupbigfoot2 9 months ago
Nice short film. Good direction and screenplay, but the older brothers' acting wasn't so great. The ending was really good and the music was perfect. overall 7/10
chickenchoppers 9 months ago
you wouldnt be so disliked if you had an honest title. or if you changed it to inspired by...
nameless12345 10 months ago
This makes me miss MST3K...
FerHivore 10 months ago
I agree, Ur not a bad filmmaker, and u have great cinematography, but fake title? Ur going nowhere unless u get people to like you, lying doesn't get you anywhere.
lukebl18 10 months ago
The fake title is really annoying, and instantly turns anyone who watches this video against you. Just to let you know.
This is just a tip, but if you are going to use actors who look 13-14 years old, don't try and make their characters adults, it just doesn't work. Either create your film for the actors you will use, or use the correct actors for your film.
The camera work is pretty good most of the time though, and if you had better actors I guess the overall thing would be decent.
MrTimeControl 10 months ago 2
@HavardFandrem
i uploaded the vid mate, I should change the title but I don't remember the password to the account
that was a lame move i know but I just needed some comments asap.
And to this guy arshadzero, you wanna give me a more comprehensive comment...
smileather 10 months ago
What's the name of the composition at the end? Btw, awesome. For a amateur film, I mean. Good work. But I agree about the big bro... Aweful!
VdeReve 11 months ago
This has been flagged as spam show
I think everyone should report this as spam until this guy learns that using fake titles is bad for your health...
danonabouncycastle 11 months ago
I thing everyone should report this as spam until this guy learns that using fake titles is bad for your health...
danonabouncycastle 11 months ago
Too basic and not really story telling..but anyways try better next time
tylexable 11 months ago
haha obviously u guys had time for more then one take .. the actors just blow terribly. i admire anyone who attempts to create a piece of art though .. no matter how bad it may be .. congrats dude I know you'll be making quality films one day.
thefrigidness 11 months ago
Not bad. Are you in high school? I liked the script actually It's just too bad the dialogue was delivered so bad. But if you're in high school this is really good.
clonetriplesix 11 months ago
She walks out in the clothes they slept in. Yea that's real.
sqlmstr58 1 year ago
@magnum9er no they were all bad. especially the older one!
iallwayswin0100 1 year ago
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worst film i have ever seen,problem is not bad acting but poor story and bad screenplay or no screenplay.you could give some treatment to your film,black and white colour dint give any justice to the script it was useless and if i am not wrong you have turned the film into a black and white to avoid light jurkes because some parts of the film lights lack filling the frame,be honest and take comment as a man,reply to me with what went wrong,and we can discuss it,this is poor production,tak cr
vespilodegodfather 1 year ago
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vespilodegodfather 1 year ago
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vespilodegodfather 1 year ago
well fut u
pie5135 1 year ago